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Reviewer: AllTheOtherNamesAreUsed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

I loved this story!  The conversation at the end between Carlisle and Holmes was fabulous, and it's nice feel the relief Carlisle has in divulging his secret to at least one human being.  Well done...I look forward to reading more of these stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews (on both sites!)  I really appreciate the time it took to do that.  You're the best!

Reviewer: AllTheOtherNamesAreUsed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Holmes doesn't miss a thing, and Carlisle is already realizing that it might be too little, too late to fool him completely.  It's very entertaining to see these two match wits while Watson stands obliviously by...  Well done!

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really would have liked to get to know more about Holmes' investigation for the case but I see that the story is not about the "Case of the Missing Widow" but about Holmes finding out about Charlise. And I really liked his reaction and I really loved this story. You should have so much more reviews!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews, and your kind words.  Since I kept the story limited to Carlisle and Watson's POVs, I couldn't include as much of Holmes' investigative processes as I would have liked.  I have a couple more Holmes/Carlisle centric stories posted at fan fiction dot net that are a bit more investigative.  I'm thinking of posting them here as well, but first I have this plot idea for a Christmas story...

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like the insight in Charlise's head and behaviour. Thanks.



Author's Response:

You're more than welcome.  I like writing Carlisle's POV.

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Holmes suspects something already, doesn't he. The nuts, the church...



Author's Response:

Oh yes, as you've discovered, Holmes is attuned to anything out of the ordinary, and Carlisle definitely fits in that category.

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it, can't wait that the two great minds meet.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I couldn't imagine two more evenly matched (intellect-wise) companions than Holmes and Carlisle.  

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

I loved this story!  The dialog between Carlisle and Holmes on the bridge was very well done.  You did a wonderful job in both resolving the mystery of the missing widow and explaining how Holmes figured out that Carlisle was not human.

Edward's brief appearance at the end was fun to read too!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Edward's inclusion at the end was a lot of fun to write.  

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter!  I enjoyed the search of the apartment by Holmes and Watson and look forward to knowing what caught Holmes' attention at the window.  So, while Holmes and Watson are at the woman's apartment, some unknown bad guy makes an appearance at Carlisle's flat!  Intriguing! 



Author's Response:

You'll find out what Holmes saw soon, I promise.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

I loved the much anticipated meeting between Holmes and Carlisle.  Carlisle is right to be a bit nervous about the famed detective's powers of observation. 

I look forward to reading the next chapter!  Not only for more Holmes/Carlisle interatction, but also to learn about the mysterious disappearance.

Great job!



Author's Response:

Yes, Holmes' powers of observation are awesome indeed, so Carlisle is right to be wary.  Good thing Holmes is one of the good guys!

Reviewer: veggie_chick08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can not even begin to explain how impressed I am with this story. I have read the majority of all Arthur Conan Doyle's stories so I would like to believe I am slightly familiar with how a Sherlock Holmes story is written. This is fantastic. You do such a wonderful job of writing Dr. Watson, I am completely floored. Not only is your writing style wonderful and your ability to recapture such a famous character brilliantly done. But the actual manner in which you are linking Carlisle with Sherlock is riveting. This case of a missing woman and Carlisle's reasoning to keep it discreet is so believable. I am so excited for you to continue on with this. The introduction of Mr. Holmes himself and his interaction with Carlisle is what I am most looking forward too.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  I love writing from Watson's POV - he's so much easier than trying to do Holmes!  He and Carlisle will be meeting each other soon.  I'll be posting the next chapter as quickly as I can.

 

Reviewer: tristar3149 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

awsome start to a good story, which I love Sherlock Holms books read them all.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  There's nothing like a good Sherlock Holmes book on a rainy day.  Conan Doyle was an amazing author.

Reviewer: AllTheOtherNamesAreUsed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a delightful beginning!  I have to admit that the idea of combining Carlisle's powers of observation to Holmes' powers of deduction promises a heady mix!  I can't wait to see where this leads.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The adventure is just beginning.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a wonderful and original idea for a story! I can hardly wait for the meeting between Carlisle and Holmes. I love the way you've captured the "tone" and language of a Conan-Doyle story. I know this must have taken a lot of work and study on your part. Excellent!

Author's Response:

Thanks, and you're too kind.  The research isn't too bad, not when it pays off in reviews like yours.  I just wish I had artistic talent like you do!

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