Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
I adore Emmett, always have.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
I love that Alice has left messages for them, it will make moving on easier to accept and it seems like a ver "Alice" thing to do.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 10:49 AM Title: Outtake 7: Marcus' Last Day of Exile
The story was beautifully written. I enjoyed it so very much. Thank you for your artistry.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I've met my deadline with my publisher for my next original fiction piece, I plan on editing the last few outtakes of this story and getting them up for my readers.
Date: 03 May 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 17: A Trip to Paris
This is SO moving! Excellently written and the developing emotions are believable. Really well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 26: When Three Become One
Ooooo...love it, very sexy
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 25: Infinity Times Three
Wow....amazing
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 24: Holiday Bindings
........."panting"
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 23: One Last Message
Wow, very lovely
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Union of Bears and Flowers
Woohoo emmet finally gets some
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 21: Jasper and Edward out in the woods K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
Lol..loved the end
Date: 21 Mar 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 20: Fallen Petals
Wow wow wow
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 19: Cherry Blossom
Oh boy
Date: 21 Mar 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 18: Moonwalk on the Stars
Oh, so happy for Emmet
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 17: A Trip to Paris
Lol
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
Beautiful
Date: 21 Mar 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Nice!
Date: 21 Mar 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
Haha, poor Emmet!
Date: 20 Mar 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blood On Snow
........amazing
Date: 20 Mar 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
Wow! Lost for words! Amazing
Date: 20 Mar 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9: Afternoon Wood in the Woods
Wow...emmet left me speechless and Jasper is so sweet. Alice's letters are breaking my heart.
Date: 20 Mar 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Moments
Wow wow wow
Date: 20 Mar 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Reunion
Glad she found them! Can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Mar 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Lol...very cute!
Date: 20 Mar 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
Lol... Loved the playful Bella
Date: 20 Mar 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
Poor Jasper
Date: 20 Mar 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Wow!
Date: 23 Apr 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
I feel as if Bella is cheating and going behind Edwards back with the "game" with Jasper. I believe if this relationship is going to work out she should be honest instead of keeping things a secret,I feel like it will hurt Edward more this way. I do believe they should not be doing anyting physical until talking with Edward about everything.
Sidenote: Does anyone else thinks it is kind of weird that Bella keeps calling Em "big brother" even though she is attracted to him. I hope that changes soon!
Date: 23 Apr 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
So sad...
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:40 AM Title: Outtake 7: Edward's POV of Chapter 8
oh i could just about kiss you - i had read this story a while ago on ffn.net and was looking for it again for about a week, i practically gave up till a couple days ago i remembered your pen name then i saw it was taken down but posted here instead- talk about happy dance of the centry - this is one of top favorite stories thanks for posting it
Date: 12 Apr 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
how sad you are going to make me cry!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
hum... why was marcus laughing hum i really can't see bell and em.. but hey what do i know?
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
is ed really going to share bella after everything... i really can't see him doing that.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
wow not good not good at all..
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Union of Bears and Flowers
This is my second time reading this story and I love it. I only just remembered it a couple weeks ago and hunted fanfiction.net to find it but couldn't. I had to beg other authors to remind me of the name of the story and you the author to find it. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 26: When Three Become One
Holy shit! Even if you didn't add in the extras, this still would have been an excellent ending! This is so fucking hot I can hardly stand it!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 25: Infinity Times Three
Fantastic! Loved the whole thing.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 24: Holiday Bindings
Oh my! That was too good for words! Please Miss, may I have another?
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 23: One Last Message
Very sad, but very, very good. You wrote Alice perfectly!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Union of Bears and Flowers
Loved it! The whole thing was very sweet and I love the gift you gave Sakura; very creative.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21: Jasper and Edward out in the woods K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
LOL! I can not believe she blocked them! That was getting very hot. I can't wait till the wedding...or more so, AFTER the wedding. ;)
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 20: Fallen Petals
Well I am glad she is not the bitch Bella thought she was going to be.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Cherry Blossom
I love that last line.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:05 AM Title: Outtake 7: Edward's POV of Chapter 8
poor conflicted man
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your reviews
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:58 AM Title: Outtake 7: Marcus' Last Day of Exile
hes lucky the boys didnt rip his head off
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:57 AM Title: Outtake 6: Esme
got to love esme
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:56 AM Title: Outtake 5: Alternate Lake of Stars
hmmm
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:55 AM Title: Outtake 4: Lake of Stars
he is sweet
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:54 AM Title: Outtake 3: Jasper's Rio
hmmm bondage may be interesting
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:53 AM Title: Outtake 2: Plane Trip to Rio
lol for em
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:52 AM Title: Outtake 1: Marcus POV of chapter 1
silly man
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:51 AM Title: Alice's Epilogue
james huh. intresring
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:50 AM Title: Alice POV 6: Battle-Cat
poor ali
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:49 AM Title: Alice POV 5: Movie Stars Must Prepare
jazz miust have been going nuts from her
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:48 AM Title: Alice POV 4: More chaps, Please
ridem cowgirl
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:46 AM Title: Alice POV 3: I want to see Jasper in chaps
poor alice having to see her own death and all
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:43 AM Title: Alice POV 2: Visions of Falling
hmmm jazz and ed on the bike....yum
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:40 AM Title: Alice POV 1: When Dreams Shatter Your Heart
poor alice
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 26: When Three Become One
yumminess abounds
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 25: Infinity Times Three
very nice
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 24: Holiday Bindings
yummy double teaming
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 23: One Last Message
happy and sad. gotta love alice
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Union of Bears and Flowers
ROFL for Hello Kitty
Loved the wedding.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 21: Jasper and Edward out in the woods K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
omg, she is right, she had to wait for all that is heavenly Edward so jasper shoudl have to wait as well.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 21: Jasper and Edward out in the woods K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
Wow, Ren, growing up. Spunky little thing, and she will need to be, with all of the bossy, overbearing vamps and were's. Glad to see that Edward is holding on to his "morals" as they were with Jasper, much to Jaspers chagrin. The promise rings part is sweet.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 20: Fallen Petals
this chapter, by far, was the most intense in this story. Sakura is a great addition. Bella can be a bitch, like seeing that too, and that she really DOES love Em in a way. Just not like Edward and Jazz. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. :-)
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 19: Cherry Blossom
Awesome, you simply are amazing. Poor Emmett, Bella, Jaz and Edward, this won't be easy.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 18: Moonwalk on the Stars
Really didn't mind the jump ahead in time like I thought I would. Great job catching us up, in snipits.
LOVE the piano part, yummy........gotta love that the stick is gone...
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 17: A Trip to Paris
Gotta love some Emmett,
Date: 13 Jan 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 21: Jasper and Edward out in the woods K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
yummy they are finally starting to get together. Poor deprived Em.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 20: Fallen Petals
wow feeel sorry for bella. jazz and em really doing a number on her.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 19: Cherry Blossom
poor em hope he'll be ok. Go Jazz and B
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: Moonwalk on the Stars
wow 5 years is a long time. didnt realize that much time had past on the first read through of this story ages ago. he needs to get a move on so the triad can really be together.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 17: A Trip to Paris
paris....cool. want to visit there someday
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
wow scrumscious motorcycle and shower scene and a "partner" proposal. Yummy
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: Let the Game Commence
hmmm wonder what punishments Esme might come up with for them. Poor sad B. Em will be ok darlin.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 18: Moonwalk on the Stars
Emmett is so cute in his excitement. But more than anything, I loved Edward and Bella time together. I have missed it just being the two of them.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 17: A Trip to Paris
Only ten days? I figured Emmett would be gone at least a month or so before Bella would join him.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
Gotta love that Alice, making sure that things are as smooth as they can be for the ones she left behind.
Can't wait for the next updates, this is hands down one of my favorite stories so far!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 15: Let the Game Commence
Those boys are really bad, no fair ganging up on Em. And really, poor Bella, so stuck in the middle, trying to make sure that they are all happy.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Mouths of Babes
A really great chapter, lots of great insight and information in here. Ren just slays me, out of the mouths of babes.....and loved the tat's.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
Amazing! I loved Jasper's 'proposal' (for lack of a better word). And mtorcycle sex is fucking awesome!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15: Let the Game Commence
I'm gonna miss fun time with Emmett, but I can't wait to see our trifecta-mates get it on. The CD swap was pretty fucking funny too. ;)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
This story has changed, at the beginning, everyone, Alice and even Bella said that Edward would always be first and he'd never lose her to anyone else, the love she had for Edward would always be stronger then for anyone else. I have no idea where you are going with this, but again, I feel that you are doing to Edward what SM did, pull it away from him. Make him second, lessen his part in the story and in the love affair. So I ask you, what is your beef with Edward? You must have one, he's being shoved to the side after you stated he'd always be number 1 in Bella's heart..that is not so, now he shares equal status with Jasper and frankly over the last few chapters, he's definately second fiddle to Jasper.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Love the vampire tattoos! Very creative!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 16: Vampires Don't Eat Popcorn
wow, those past 2 chapters were alot of emotion, laughter and pain. Ren is a smart little girl, and puts things in perspctive nicely. Emmett got off easy abotu his blow up doll thou i think.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Mouths of Babes
thank you for still going on this i love this story can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Blow up doll and werewolf tattoos have got to be some of the funniest stuff you have written to date.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Thank you so much for reposting this!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
Emmett, Emmett, ohh you are in trouble. loved it thanks!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
Hmmm Em Bella Bears and blood....oh My..... Sounds like Emmy Bears in trouble.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
Ahhh, I am going to miss Emmett when he goes hunting for his singer. If he is able to seal the deal after the boys get finished with him.
Bear hunting with Emmett was fucking hot, but when are we going to get to a lilttle E&J action or E&J&B action???
Author's Response:
It will come in time, I promise. There are ~26 chapters to the main storyline, and over 40 with all the outtakes.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
Still having a problem with trying to figure out all those Alice letters, Marcus' comments and things that Bella told Edward, doesn't sound like she really loves him at all. I thought she'd always put him first, now I'm sincerely doubting it.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Just started your story. Sad beginning losing the pixie and Rose, but i like what I´ve read so far! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 13: Shhh! We're Hunting Bears
wow, so Emmett is going to seach for his singer, that threw me but a very good plot twist, too funny, under his bed.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! Now that the household is finally getting over this upper respiratory virus, I can get back to regular postings.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blood On Snow
That was ana mazing chapter. The scene here at the end was absolutely beautiful!!! I also love the explaination you gave for the bond between Edward, Bella and Jasper. It works.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blood On Snow
so much happening in that chapter its hard to know what to mention. Love the Triad thing and the Carlisle visit was funny. Glad Eddie is "growing up"
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blood On Snow
hmmmm, ok so whjen Bella and Edward are together alone their eyes don't go white and Jasper doesn't join them in spirit, like Edward did when JAsper and bella were together? why not? I thought Carlise said they were a triad . Getting used to the idea of the 3 of them together.
Author's Response:
It happens the first time. Bella, Edward, and Jasper's eyes all went white that first time, because for a few moments, it was the three of them together. If Edward had not been psychically a part of the lovemaking, the bond would not have occured yet. Edward felt as if he was there and both Jasper and Bella had felt him there with them. The white eyes effect does not occur again. It is a one-time thing that happened to flash again a final time when the three physically touched as the bond reaffirmed itself.
Thanks for reviewing. I hope that answered your question.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
nxt plz
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
know the feeling hun..... This always was one of my favorite chapter. I think J and Em need to give Eddie boy a few lessons indeed. Yummy