Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
She'll get through it!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad she let Edward talk to her and explain things.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
I. Glad that the guys finally made it back home. I am really enjoying your story.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Who the heck is in Edward's shower?
Date: 19 Oct 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
Oh no Emmett gets Arrested? Can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad everyone is getting along. I got tickled at Charlie in this chapter for some reason.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I was just a little surprised that Bella did not let him kiss her. I know they need more time but she sure did want him too.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this chapter. I worry sometimes that Leah will get jealous of Anthony with Bella.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 part 2
Wow, Bella opened up to Edward. I just wonderwhen they will make the connection that Alice and Bella have been involved with the same James. Oh, I've been meaning to ask, what happened with Edward and Jane? Why is she not in Anthony's life?
Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
At 1st I thought James but nothing was said about her being nervous or scared. After I thought about it Jasper came to mind. Love how easy Edward and Bella and the kids are with each other.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, you did a repeat in Edward's POV instead of telling us who Bella saw at the school. That was mean. Lol. Ok, off to read the next chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
OOMGosh! Is it James? I Mean so glad I do not have to wait for an update. I am off to the next chapter right now to find out who it is.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is Bella's James the same as Alice's James? If so and Edward and Emmett find out they will kill him this time. Edward is such a good daddy.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I wonder why Leah is not afraid of Edward. Is it because he is Anthony's dad?
Date: 18 Oct 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh!!!!! Is she is side with Anthony at his house? What in the world happened to her for her to react like that and then not speak.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Who is Anthony's mom? So Emmett hS not talked about Bella and Leah moving there so that means that Leah talked to Anthony., right?
Date: 18 Oct 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 -
I am loving this story. Did Leah speak to Anthony or did he learn her from Emmett?
Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:43 AM Title: prologue
OMGosh!!!!!! Can't wait to start reading this.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Kind of sad..... I am glad that Edward asked Bella out though. Charlie teasing her was funny.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love it can not wait for next chapter update soon xx
Date: 29 Nov 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella and Leah!
Date: 29 Nov 2013 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Leah!
Date: 29 Nov 2013 9:01 AM Title: prologue
Loved it1 Will he be alright?
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad to be reading again!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
God I miss this story so much!!I'm glad that things is better now for now!! hope you can keep updating, this story is too good to be endless!!!
take care
xxx
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Uurgh! Hate when I start a fic and get caught up and have to wait for an update. :) can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
This story is so good! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Welcome back. I'm glad this has been updated.
I think he's going to tell her about Rose.
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to more
Date: 09 Aug 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update ...been missing this story. Glad things are better with you
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:45 PM Title: prologue
Please finish this story!!!!!!! I've been waiting a long time for an update. So please update. I need to see how this story ends up!!!!! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
10/22/12
I hope to see more of this story. It would be a shame to be left hanging.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
please, please, please continue this story. I LOVE IT!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
LOVE THE CHAPTER. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
I'm so sorry to hear about your hand. I'm glad things are starting to get better for you. I was so excited to see the update!! I can't wait for the next one. I'm dying to know what went down at the bar that has a strange woman in Edwards hotel room and Emmett arrested.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Ahhh i hope you update soon. I'm dying to find out what happened during their night out. Hopefully nothing to ruin the little bit of trust bella has with edward.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
edward you better make things right by bella
too bad rose didn't shoot royce
ahhhhhh he so deserves it
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Can't wait for more!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Sorry to hear about your hand. I am glad things are looking up for you now! Looks like Ed is going to have some explaining to do!!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
looking forwarde to more
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Missed you! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:50 PM Title: prologue
oooh nooooo have to read more to find out if he died i hope not :(
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 2
Good Chapter......
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:45 PM Title: prologue
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity! I especially love the added children and that this isnt' just a straight forward happily ever after. I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
loved it
i love the way everything is going. i love the way leah is around edward. there are one happy family.
love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
my heart is going out to rose. i sure hope she is okay and hiding and not in trouble with royce
i sure hope the guys find her
i love this story
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
Good Chapter....
Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
I can't wait for more!! I love seeing them be a family!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
loved it !
Date: 26 Sep 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
okay i think it is the same james you didn't clear that up...again i love ed... can't wait for more!!!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
sweet edward is so sweet i love him... he is way too perfect for words. Come bella don[t let that pass you by!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
sound good!!!!is too cute to see Edward call Bella in phone!!!I loved it!!
xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
Wow, what are the odds that the same James attacked both Alice and Bella? They need to band together and destroy these evil men [James and Royce] and live HEA with their good men [Jazz, Em, and Edward]. At least that is what I hope happens, so can't wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 part 1
A very drunk Edward without anyone to tuck him into bed?? How can that be?? I volunteer!! Anyway- got kinda sidetracked there----- I knew it was the same James!!!! I just hope you don't allow Bella to close herself off from Edward because he lied to her about this trip!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
aww leah at two is adorable and Ant at six months is so cute! most authors would have dived in with the kiss and i like that you didn't. cant wait for a new chapter.
10/10!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you agree with my decision to wait for them to kiss. Your teaser will be sent through PM. Enjoy :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love that things are moving along and how devoted Edward is!! I loved Edward and anthonys talk! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, there are very cute :-) Your teaser will be send through PM. I hope you enjoy it :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad you didn't have her jump right into his arms-- though that had to be a tough decision to make!! lol The road trip will be great, and hopefully Rose will be able to help Edward fit into Bella's life a little better. One thing--- is Bella's James the same as Alice's James??????? Can't get that one out of my head!
Author's Response:
Everyone keeps asking me about James but I don't want to tell anything, sorry :-) Don't hate me! I'm happy you that I didn't just thow them together. Your teaser will be sent through Pm. Enjoy :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
i love this story and it keeps getting better. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
thank you :-) Teaser will be sent through PM, enjoy.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thank you, your teaser will be sent through PM , enjoy.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
cute chatper looking foward to the next one
Author's Response:
thank you.
Your teaser will be sent through PM. enjoy
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
I've missed these guys and hope you are feeling much better, now!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :-) Your teaser will be sent through PM, enjoy.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
thanks for the update. i love this story!!! yeah bella has lots to go through first. ed is like crazy!! kinda obessed! but he is so sweet and such a good dad!! having a new baby is always so scary!!! can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward is a little nuts lol.
Thank you
Teaser will be sent through PM, enjoy :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
good chapter. glad you are not rushing bella and Edward. So ... Rosalie is Jasper's sister - I wonder ---
Author's Response:
Thank you... Rose... maybe :-)
teaser is in your PM.
enjoy
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
love the pictures.i think slow is good for bella and edward. seems they both have issues and need to go slow. but they are getting to know each other. edward just needs to give bella time and it will be worth it. looking forward to these guys learning to trust each other and grow. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you and your spot on with the characters. :-)
Teaser will be in PM. enjoy
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was perfect. I'm glad she is making him go slow with the relationship. I'm Anthony is talking to E abut Leah talking. She needs help the sweet child. I love the pictures of both kids. They are truly adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm happy to enjoy these characters. ;-)
Teaser will be sent in PM, enjoy
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Mmm...Daddyward... :)
I love this story, and I am dying to know who Bella saw at the high school...
Author's Response:
thank you, i'm happy you like it:-) bb
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, let's just say that when Edward gets hold of James this time, it won't be just bones that are broken...
Author's Response:
lol ;-) bb
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Edward, honey...5 year olds pick up on WAY more than any of us realize...
Ah, Edward's daddy instincts help him to know how to interact with Leah...that is kind of hot :)
Bella's reaction was perfectly normal, although if it had been my daughter, I probably would have gotten in a punch or two...
Author's Response:
lol, I totally agree bb
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aaaahhh! I am SO glad I do not have to wait for an update from this cliffhanger :)
Author's Response:
:-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like the little tie-ins you do with all the characters (like Edward working for Chief Swan). It makes me think about what will probably happen in the future and I get all fan-girly :)
Author's Response:
lol, I hope you like the future I have in store foe them :-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 -
I just really like how this story is unfolding. It feels like I am watching this on a screen in my head :)
Author's Response:
aww, thank you, i love that I can create such a picture for you :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
when you asked for a name for Bella because you had Daddyward i started thinking and one name came to me- Momella?
Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
thank you, I like that name :-)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: prologue
Oh my word...
I am definitely favoriting this one!
You have definitely captured my interest!
Author's Response:
thank you :-)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
What??? What??? No, not cool!!! Can u please update this??? Also, if u have ever been on fanfiction, there is a story alert option! Is there one on twcs? Thanks!
Rockstr27
Author's Response:
I will try to update soon, yeah there is an alert here, it's in you account info. If you add this story to your favourites and go into your account, there should be a box you tick that allows alert to go to your email when the next chapter is posted. If you still have problems send me an email and I'll give you a step by step plan. Let me know bb
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
WOW, a lot going on in this chapter. Sweet Edward, kiss her already!
Author's Response:
LOL, Thank you for reviewing
Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm... Bella´s dream, let´s hope all the good aspects of it come true. How funny was that when Edward pouted because Bella wasn´t going to let Leah see him for two days. I hope that Bella isn´t too hard on him for taking some initiative as far as Leah is concerned at school. I know he could have told her, but his heart was in the right place. Little Leah sure is a firecracker when she doesn´t get her way. She´s too cute! Can´t wait to see if Eddieboy gets his kiss. You were so mean to leave us there! Great chaptrer!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm happy to enjoyed this chapter and I love your review, very insightful, thank you :-) bb
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 part 2
That was intense. I´m glad that Anthony wanted to stay with Bella. I really hope that we´ve seen the last of James and we don´t find out that he did something bad to Leah. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you, bb
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 part 2
heartbreaking
i love them all. i am sending them all hugs except james. yuck i spit on him. trust edward bella.
love it
Author's Response:
I would be spit on him and the rest all send them back :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
well we have come along way. man oh man can leah through a fit. i loved ehr stomping her little foot. i had a great laugh, love it. i am so thrilled that edward called his sister and got her to make alot of accomadations for leah. he loves her and is just looking after her. it is so sweet. i think bella sees it she just isn't used to someone doing that for them. anthony is adorable as well. i loved him waking up with bella and telling her he wasn't ready to get up. love the story
Author's Response:
Anthony and Bella together on this chapter is my fave scene, I just think there so cute. Edward's heart was in the right place, but was he right and not even mentioning it to Bella? Thank you bb
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Let me guess: in walks Leah. Update soon! Love it!
Author's Response:
lol, you'll just have to wait and see :-)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
if Bella says no, I'm ready
Author's Response:
lol, me 2.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved Edward and Leah and them as a famil can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thank you :-) bb
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
okay ed is being just a tad pushy.. i would be alittle pissed to if he seemed to just take over my daughter. i feel alittle bad for bella because leah seems to favor ed over her. that has to make her feel soo bad. i know i would be hurt. thanks for the update i can't wait for more this is soooo good!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, your right on all your points. Hopefully it can be something that both Bella and Leah can repair. bb
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
im glad that edward is trying to look after her ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
thank you bb
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow so goood!!!!I want a kiss to me!!!!! here in Brazil we call mom of mama with a sound like italian!! you know??? mamabella here are mombeauty!!! is an idea
xoxo
Author's Response:
I really like mamabella makes me think of mama bear which is great for Bella, thank you bb
Date: 04 Jul 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 part 2
tooty ta is the best song ever my kids sang it all the time.
love the story my heart goes out to bell and leah.... can't wait for more. i really really love your edward!!
Author's Response:
thank you, I kinda love this edward too :-)
Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
as i said before they are so good together
Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
they fit so good together....
Author's Response:
they do thank you
Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay james is the the one that hurt alice and i am sure james is the one in the beginng of the story... interesting... i really like your ed!!!!
Author's Response:
Hmmm....
Thank you
Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh ed you are a magic worker!!! bella i know you were upset but that was really mean. i am with ed you got some explaining to do!!!
Author's Response:
lol, yeah she does
Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
ooh boy what happened to her are you going to spill it?
Author's Response:
just wait and see :-)
Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
hum how did ed get ants... i mean i know how but i wonder what happened at 6months no less... can't wait for more