Date: 25 May 2023 2:46 PM Title: The Immortal Sin Awards Nomination
So was that Jake that Angela met at the end.
..hope they don't become a problem together
Date: 25 May 2023 2:46 PM Title: The Immortal Sin Awards Nomination
So was that Jake that Angela met at the end.
..hope they don't become a problem together
Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:40 AM Title: Luring
Oh I so hope that it is NOT James!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:54 PM Title: Watching
Is it wrong of me to hope that it is Mike missing?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:53 PM Title: Completing
thanks for the story i can't wait to read the sequel. is jake a werewolf. i do remember her saying her ex lived in LaPush so i guess that meant him.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 4:23 PM Title: Explaining
you got some explaining to do!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:50 PM Title: Preparing
good james down.. mike wow you are such a stud!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:41 PM Title: Convincing
here they come walk down the street..haha it's not the monkeys!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:36 PM Title: Arguing
they are going to think you are CRAZY!! DUH!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:32 PM Title: Confronting
you need to spill you are driving me nuts!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:15 PM Title: Introducing
no crap honey... dumb to go into the woods,,,duh
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:39 PM Title: Luring
it's james i am sure!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:36 PM Title: Discovering
ok we got that settled the crazy vampires want bell and jas... hummm as i said you need to spill come info i am highly confused on where this is going!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:26 PM Title: Believing
ok you need to spill on some of this crap i hate being in the dark!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:16 PM Title: Knowing
ok this is very mysterious i wonder what you are up to.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:11 PM Title: Dreaming
good i hope that means alice is coming for him because i really don't want him dead... i can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:06 PM Title: Meeting
okay this is going to get deep.. i have a feeling the lovely cullens are not "veggie" eaters!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:02 PM Title: Waiting
not good well jas and mike are still alive but for how long and now on the scene we have edward cullen!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:58 PM Title: Watching
well let's guess it is either jasper or mike... i hope it is mike i would hate for jasper to be dead because i kinda love him as much as ed....
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:52 PM Title: Missing
oh darn that mean we won't see much of jasper than after she turns or maybe alice will get ahold of him.. i am very intersted to see where this is going to go!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:54 PM Title: Dreaming
Hmm...this story is drawing me in and I have to read more right now!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:56 AM Title: Pursuing
I have to admit I really enjoyed your story, up until the last chapter and this one. I found everything to be great up until Jasper and Bella were changed. It seemed very anti-climatic and the whole tone of the story changed. Then you threw in the torture of Jessica (which I think was taking Bella's character way to ooc) and the return of Jacob and the story seemed to shift into something that was different and original, into something that is very typical of ff. I hope i am not coming across as harsh, I don't mean to be. I just wanted to let you know how your story came across to me. At this point I probably won't finish it.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:01 PM Title: Belonging
so bella does not care that they kill people? WTF?
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Belonging
Can understand his annoyance she never - as do most women - thinks much of herself.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:55 AM Title: Parting
maybe I can hide Jasper on something really tall…. hahahahahaha too funny!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:41 AM Title: Beginning
OOOOHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT"S LIKE A HORROR MOVIE!!!!! hence the shouty letters! hahaha
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:55 AM Title: Completing
Absolutly wonderful sao going on my favorites list.
Date: 28 May 2010 9:42 PM Title: Completing
Hello there ! I read that fiction in 2 days, it is a very good story. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 8:18 AM Title: Completing
You kept me up reading all night--It's now Friday 4:17 AM. I still have to go to work!
Thank you for entertaining me. Seriously.
Can't wait to read continuing series.
Author's Response:
haha, that has happened to me a couple of times. Hope you weren't too tired at work! lol
I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:48 AM Title: Waiting
Oh good, it wasn't Jasper...
This is really good! I like how Bella has more of a "calling you out on your crap" internal monologue :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:42 AM Title: Watching
It's either Mike or Jasper...
I guess I don't know what to look for to tell that it is someone's first fanfic...what I mean is, if you hadn't said so, I would never have believed it :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:16 AM Title: Missing
Well, I'm intrigued and have favorited this story :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Dreaming
Jasper's POV is awesome. Dreams, hallucinations, or hypnotism what is up?
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:56 AM Title: Missing
Nice work. I like human Jasper and it just makes me wonder what vampire Alice thinks of him ;P...
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:39 AM Title: Pursuing
I totally did not expect that. :0)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Starting
It was kind of funny being inside Jessica's mind. lol What are they planning on doing to her? I thought Bella was going to kill her now I'm just not sure. Going to keep reading to find out.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:48 AM Title: Belonging
Really enjoyed the chapter. I can't wait to see what the powers are going to be. :0)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Comprehending
I enjoyed seeing all the explanations. So Jasper is a vamp now. :0) I think it's so cool that Bella gets to go through all this with her best friend and plus she gets to spend eternity with Edward. Are we going to get to read about Edward changing Bella? I guess I'll just keep reading and find out. :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:16 PM Title: Enlightening
Well that was very interesting. :0) Love the story.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:25 PM Title: Accepting
Is she turnning Jasper??? :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Explaining
Well that worked out quite perfectly didn't it? The fire will burn all the evidence of what happened at the party. Edwards going to give Bella some answers? I'm so glad I can just keep reading.... :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:08 AM Title: Parting
Poor Ben but, the idea him witht he spray can and lighter buring everything that makes a noise makes me chuckle a bit. :0) I'm thinking Edward and Alice have caught up to them...
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:47 AM Title: Killing
I'm not sure I have words for this. lol I kind of want to say poor Mike but, I can't because I was hoping that Edward would kill him. Edward really enjoyed that didn't he? lol Wonder what will happen when they catch up to Bella and Jasper.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Beginning
I have a feeling Edward's in the house with Mikey. To bad Bella's not a vamp so she could be there and say "how do you like this Babe" lol reading on....
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Preparing
Mike's a vamp killer. lol At least James is gone and we don't have to worry about him any more. :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Convincing
How exciting... they ended up having to show up at the party after all and now they can't leave. Can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Arguing
Oh I know what their reaction will be. They'll think they're crazy. :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Confronting
Love the story. Looks like what ever they want with Bella and Jasper will be happening soon. :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:31 AM Title: Introducing
Love Jasper! I'm glad the other vamps showed up so James couldn't hurt Bella and Jasper. I think he really would have.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Luring
"I finally know why people are disappearing, if I could only have seen the look on Karen Mallory’s face when I told her…." I think it's funny that this was her last thought. lol
Bella, Bella, Bella not a good idea to go into the woods that night. I'm guessing it's James.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:28 AM Title: Discovering
Love the story!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Discovering
Love the story. Can't wait to see what Edward and Alice have planned for Bella and Jasper and how will they all act the next time they see each other.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:44 AM Title: Pacing
I love Bella and Jasper as best friends. I'm curious to see what Bella learns about Edward at the library. Great story!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Believing
Love the night visit. Wonder what's going to happen soon that Edward won't have to worry about hurting her anymore. Are they going to change her??? :0) Love the story!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:00 PM Title: Knowing
Pretty cool seeing an evil Alice. I've never read a fic where they were all human killing vamps. Loving this story.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:59 PM Title: Dreaming
Jasper's dream was pretty interesting. Is he going to meet Alice. How did she make him dream of her? Really liking this story so far. :0)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:55 PM Title: Meeting
Something about him being dangerous made that kissing so hawt! Is he going to take care of Mike? No I'm not caring for Mike too much. lol
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:51 PM Title: Waiting
Yay, Jasper's ok! This is so exciting..... :0) Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:49 PM Title: Watching
Please not Jasper, Please not Jasper. lol I think it would crush Bella if anything happened to him. I think it would crush me too. lol
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:43 PM Title: Missing
Really enjoyed this first chapter. I'm so glad it's a completed fic so I can just keep reading.... :0)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Parting
I hope you let Ben abd ang live. Love mikes end lol
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Preparing
Love the fire. We used to do that to kill roaches in the dorm. They were big roaches. Love mike kills James too f'n funny. Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:32 PM Title: Confronting
Oh em. Silly boy. Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:01 PM Title: Luring
Crap James. So good love your plot. Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:26 PM Title: Believing
I so do not like James being there. Edward needs to mark her or something to keep James away. Or just rip his head off. That would be my choice.
Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Meeting
Hum that was unexpected, will Jazz end up with Alice? Will Bella wise up and DUMP mike? I hope so for both. Looks like Edward decided not to eat last night. Great start. Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:55 PM Title: Waiting
Humm. Interesting start. Are the Cullens evil or just more like normal vamps?
Enjoying your story. Meg
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Completing
Nice story, but who was with Angela??
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:53 AM Title: Beginning
"I knew he loved his hair but..." Best line in the entire chapter. It was a close run thanks to the guy wanting his taquitos (Yum, btw), but this one definately won out. Another great laugh-fest.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:45 AM Title: Preparing
ROFLOL! Mike is such an idiot! I love that he can come along and make me feel like a freakin' genius. What a dork. His thoughts were hysterical. You did a really great job taking a horrifying incident and making me laugh out loud at it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Missing
Interesting start... Will have to read... to see how you changed it.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:33 PM Title: Confronting
Good chapter, I thought James was going to get killed.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: Pursuing
I really don't like Jessica and I can't say I'm soryy you made her a raving lunatic. But I really hate Jake always have, always will. I hope the Cullens end up making him road kill!
No I didn't see it coming yes I remembered the reference to him in chapter 8 bt he is really such a meglomaniac!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Belonging
This story is brilliant, and even though the Cullens arn't vege vampires they are still so Cullen with a twist and a new depth to their characters!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:41 PM Title: Missing
really good so far liked it
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Beginning
This is one serious kick ass story, hell I usually don't like drak Cullens but this has really grabbed my interest!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:35 PM Title: Dreaming
I just started reading this story last nightand have not stopped to review each chapter because this story is so damn good it has captured my imagination and I can;t stop reading it.
The plot is so unique and is so obviously not a regurgitation of the SM story. I love it so far and it seems to border on erotic and terrifying, definitely very electric the characters have a real sense of self and power!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:44 PM Title: Preparing
Mike is a stupid jerk but at least he remembered something