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Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

well I guess the sex plan has had a change of course ...don't rin girl stay and fight for your man or kick his dumb ass al the way home

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: Big Brother Rights of Passage

I am realy enjoying reading this ....just like my old high school days ...but htus is seriously funny ....cant wait to see how he reacts myself

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

this is my favorite type of story a neew baby and our E has not  a clue i love his reactions when he finally finds out

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Great story. I hope you will beagle to continue this story. Like to read what happens in their lives.

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Are you going to complete this story?  I cant wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Good story.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

This story is awesome! 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

That was the best first time I have read and the funniest, I'm still laughing.

Like your recs absolutly adore 50...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

God I did not think the chapter would end like this...skank does it every time.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Wow! emotional stuff...

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Time to change.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:58 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Hard decision. Not fair to give him a chance.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: Confessions of a Not so Teenaged... Not so Dramaīd Queen

This story is cracking me up.  The whole Carlisle catching Edward at the breakfast table and what he said had me rolling.

This story has an upbeat attitude and dealing with the "theme" of it I do hope it stays that way, for the most part.

I hope you believe in HEAs b/c I know it's not all going to be fun times.

I haven't gotten to the last updated chapter. yet, but I did notice it's been almost two months since you updated this story.  Not to put you on a guilt trip but I do hope you update soon.  I know real life gets in the way and that has to come first but it's soo hard to wait sometimes, ya know?

Anyway, I'm sure I will be reviewing more and on the last updated chapter.  Hope you are having a great day.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Hot Diggity Dog!!!! You rocked it.   This was hilarious - "Okay lover boy, here's the deal. You gotta brush, floss, rinse(at least three times), and exfoliate before you can kiss me and earn your surprise.” There I said it." Man I would have loved to have seen Rose and Alice whippin up on Tanya!!!! Great Story!!!!

Yes, all of your recommendations are Right on! A couple more just if your interested is Edwards Clan by Greenway  Violent as Shit, but wickedly good Edward.. I mean Monestery Wicked Edward, but the inner dialog of His Monster is really quite humorous after you get further into the story.  Your Cooch dialog is pretty cute too!!!

I can't wait for more updates on this and your other Stories!!! 

Yes, I must admit Icy is one of my favorite authors, she really gives us a wonderful Fifty... Love, Love Fifty!!! 

Keep on writing and using your wonderfully creative mind!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

I alway love the texting in a story, some pretty funny stuff.  Great Story!!!  Poor Bella sorry no other way around it  giving up the V-card (as you say) hurts!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Okay prompt the sniffles and tears!!  OMGosh!  this is gonna be good, but fear sad.. You're really talented and Love " FTLOD"  that's just as spectaular..  I just found this one, so thought I would get started...

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

I wanna read this as soon as i get some time I have a list of stories to get through!!!

Reviewer: aricullen1134 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

Loved it Krazi! The last text Bella sent was awesome! So Bella and Edward goin do the nasty LOL love the story sweetie!

xoxoxo

Ari

Reviewer: aricullen1134 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:11 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Awesome chapter Krazi! Why didn't Bella tell Edward? Is it that she thought he would give up school? Or she was scared he would leave her? Oh I love reading things that make me think...why? why would she do this? Great 1st chapter loved it!

 

XOXOXOX Ari

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

oh that was good.  I especially loved them fucking while she was on the phone with Em update soon please



Author's Response:

Haha!!!! glad you enjoyed it... sorry about the wait... but I kinda wanted the chapter to pop... and I hope I did´t disappoint.... I´m working on the next chapter... so hopefully I won´t keep you waiting too much longer.. I´m also in the process of moving back to America so I gotta get my shiznick together.. yeah.. I thought I stick it to old Em... it´s just something about the illusion of being caught that heightens the momment!!! that´s for taking the time to review... see ya soon...Laterzzzzz!!!

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Oh my god that was so worth the wait and the build up iam so glad that bella let him explain to her about the skank attack and they more than worked it out lol i loved it and just wow that was great i just am sad to know that they will part soon and i hate knowing that they will both suffer because of it .but i know you wont keep them apart forever (right???) till next time great job



Author's Response:

Thanks... sorry it took so long... I´m glad I didn´t disappoint by making you wait a little longer... I´m trying to beat away at chapter 8 now... Yeah it even hurts me to seperate them... but in the end I promise it will all work out and be better than before!!! See soon.... as always... thanks for taking the time to review.... Laterzzzzz

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

Ok...I am sure Tanya kissed Edward.  I would have kicked Tanya's ass!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: Big Brother Rights of Passage

The guys all crack me up!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

well i cant wait till the next chapter ! keep them comming! ducheward is such an ass ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.. i promise not to leave you for to long.. let´s see if doucheward can redeem himself!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

holy shit,omfg,i can't believe that happened,you can't leave us hanging us on,more please,please,please,any way cool so far



Author's Response:

thanks for the review... I´m working on it.. done wanna leave you hanging on to long!!! 

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 6: What the.... Didnīt See that Coming

What a bitch tanya is i would have kicked her ass then left but i understand why bella left and felt so hurt .I just hope edward gets to her in time to make things right with her iam not very happy that  that hoe kissed him i hope he can make it up to bella.I loved it and thanks for the shout out you are the best 10 isn't even a high enough rating foe this but it will have to do untill next time



Author's Response:

Thanks girlie... I know right Tanya is a mega bitch.. I was mad and I was the one who wrote it... but hopefully happy times are ahead.. I´ve been talking with Bella and I think she at least wants to give him a chance to explain.. see ya soon ... always Thanks for the rocking reviews... love ya!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5: Big Brother Rights of Passage

I swear to god that was fo freaking funny edward and the guy's kill me every time and alice and rose i want them as my friends there would never be a dull moment with them around lol i loved it i can't wait till the main event i think it will be epic to say the least .And thanks you for the shout out i love this story and the best thing i can do is to always give you a review you are awersome

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 5: Big Brother Rights of Passage

Love that they were listening to Cherry Bomb by the Runaways - great way to end the chapter.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4: Confessions of a Not so Teenaged... Not so Dramaīd Queen

That was a very hot flashback loved it can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

As always thanks for the kind words glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 5 is up... let me know what you think when you get a minute.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4: Confessions of a Not so Teenaged... Not so Dramaīd Queen

I love girl talk and Bella remembering the first time.  I love it all!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support and kind reviews... if you love girl talk... chapter 5 is up and there´s a bit of guy and girl talk... Let me know what you think!!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: Wet Day Dreaming

I love Carlisle giving Edward crap.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I really enjoyed writing this chapter...Hope you´ll stick with me to see how this all plays out!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 3: Wet Day Dreaming

That was so freaking funny  poor edward to get caught by daddy c like that loved it can't wait to read the next update



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.I really enjoyed writing it..I thought it was pretty funny too...

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

I love Mamma Esme!  She is the best.  Always there for all her kids, but keeping them in line at the same time. 

Loved the converstaion between the girls.  I really love this story so far!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Isn´t she like the da bomb Mom!! I effnnn love her to pieces..Thanks for the kind wordl... stick with me and let´s see how this plays out.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

Nice & Lemony!



Author's Response:

Thanks... just posted Chapter 3.. there´s enuff lemons there for a good batch of lemonade..haha!!! enjoy and thanks for the review!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:10 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Awesome..but why keep secrets from Edward?



Author's Response:

Bear with me a little while and we´ll find out soon why he doesn´t know...not to give anyting away, but I assure you he was not kept out of the loop to hurt him...

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

liking the story so far looking foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.. it means alot to me that you like it..I actually started the story on Fanfiction.net, but I´m in the process of changing things hopefully for the better.... With luck I can have the next chapter revamped by tonight.. thanks for reading!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

That was very funny can't wait to read more i guess bella didn't tell edward about the baby because they are young and going off to school? i really like this story great job so far i am hooked



Author's Response:

Wow.. I´m humbled....glad you like the story..and I promise not to keep you on pins and needles for much longer!! Thanks for reading!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

looks realy good but why would she not want edward with her ? i guess it will come in time lol can't wait to see where this goes



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.... bear with me... we´ll get to the reason behind the madness.... just stick around and we´ll all find out together. The positive feedback is appreciated..

 

krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:37 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

I love the story!  I can't wait to see what happens.  It's sad they have to be a part and that Edward doesn't know he has a daughter.  I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

thanx!!!! yeah it made me sad that they had to be apart too. I´m a diehard Bellward fan..but I promise it will eventually be worth it.  stick with me a little longer.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lbterral Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Great start!  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

thanx.. glad you enjoyed it.. I promise not to make you wait to much longer for more....

 

Krazi

xoxo

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