[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2015 9:32 PM Title: Epilogue
great little story ;) thanks for sharing it on this site ;D
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:59 AM Title: Epilogue
that was good i liked it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:23 PM Title: Epilogue
Great little story. It's been on my favorites list for a while and I just now got around to reading it. I'm going to check your profile page to see if you have anything else. I like your writing style and I love your E&B. I love stories where they always end up together and happy. E;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you got a chance to read and I'm so happy that you liked it!!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 12:10 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story. Have you thought about doing out takes of the pregnacy announcement and one of the births?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! Honestly I haven't really had time to revisit this story. It is something I may do in the future, but it's a long way off right now!
Date: 11 May 2010 11:05 AM Title: Epilogue
can't believe she freaked like that over not getting a ring. too funny. glad that everything worked out in the end and they all got their happily ever after.
thank you for writting.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story!
Date: 11 May 2010 5:00 AM Title: Life Anew
i would have prefered to stay home for sexy-times and snuggling. but i don't have a rose and aliice to make me go. lol
Date: 11 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Forever
well the bracelette was a nice new kick on the promise ring. love the idea.
Date: 11 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Playful Existence
oohh... what's he gonna do?!?
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: Unstoppable
yay they have finnaly made it to eachother completely
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave so many reviews! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: New Beginnings
so sweet to do all of that...
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: Calm
they have been waiting a long time for 'next week'glad to see they are moving forward.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:21 PM Title: Wrath
well jude is gone now and looks like these two are gonna be able to move forwrd now. i am pretty sure the storm will be scary and bella is gonna wanna snuggle close to edward for comfort and protection....
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:57 AM Title: Instinct
wow looks like eddie is finnaly making his move. i wonder what the storm will bring?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave all these reviews!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 6:20 AM Title: Possession
what are you gonna do bella? time to take a step back and think long and hard
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:57 AM Title: Uninvited
wouldn't you just know it? eddie is now free but bella is not.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: More Revelations
well poor eddie is gonna need a shoulder to cry on and something to take his mind off of everything at home. hmmm, i wonder who he will turn to? bella do you have any ideas?
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:58 AM Title: New Digs, New Day
well it looks like bella is trying to stay nuetral and realizes that wanting edward is wrong. she is trying to fight it, eddie not so much. or maybe not at all...
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Second Chances
remember eddie, can't have your cake and eat it too...
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:26 AM Title: Realization
being the best 'guy' friend is not always what it is cracked up to be is it edward? not when you dress her how you want her and then have to send her to the arms of another man. at least bella is still trying to be a good friend to both edward and jordan and not really thinking in terms of hrself.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:05 AM Title: Revelations
and it begins...
bella is so screwed it is not even funny. the right thing to do would be tomove out NOW, but hey where's the fun in that right? and if jordan is stupid enough to throw eddie away she deserves it. and poor eddie needs someone to mend his broken heart *wink wink*
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:42 AM Title: Just Below the Surface
well looks like bella could use some building up and eddie boy seems like just the man to do it.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:07 AM Title: So Happy
well looks like these two are gonna be fast friends. and at least bells knows she is on a very slippery slope.
Author's Response:
She is on a VERY slippery slope!! Glad you're liking it so far!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:29 AM Title: Blast from the Past
well this is gonna be a sneaky one isn't it?
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:30 PM Title: Life Anew
Like the chapter, the end is coming :(
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Forever
I thought for sure he was gonna ask her to marry him at Christmas
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:06 PM Title: New Beginnings
I love this story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad you're enjoying it!!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Epilogue
great story! i really enjoyed it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading this story thanks for sharing it with me and all of us that read the stories here!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:55 PM Title: Epilogue
lovely story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Very sweet ending, "The Beach of Our Lives." I enjoyed reading this story with new characters and residence location, other than WA, NY, IL, CA...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:15 AM Title: Epilogue
Been reading this story since yesterday and i love it! it was so sweet and nice written. i love this bella and Edward, they're too adorable together!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:08 PM Title: Epilogue
OH i loved it perfect ending to a perfect story.......and let me just say right now i really loved the fact that u and only u wrote a story that was really just Edward and Bella i mean yes u had the "gang" (Emmett , Rose, Jasper and Alice) but they weren't really in it..........and i actually enjoyed that........i've read stories a lot of stories where it's always them and the gang and I really liked the fact that you just focused on them not Hyper active pixie interfering with her powers to know the future (yes even in human stories)......Emmett the joke of the gang always hungry and acting like a idiot...... and so on ........... please let me know if you will be writing anymore this was a great story and I loved the ending it was truly perfect................
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I really do try to focus on Bella and Edward in my writing because really having to write about everyone else is a bit taxing! LOL! In this story it was mostly Bella and Edward centric.
I have another story that I'm going to start posting over here probably later tonight or tomorrow. So keep your eye out-it's called Fire of my Soul. It's AH and AU.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:56 PM Title: Life Anew
God hot again...........and just great......I am soo happy i found this story so good....... and I just love these two and again I am so happy everything is working out for them finally.........great chapter and it sounds to me like someone might have proposal on his mind...........and Bella tired again.....this time if it's a baby I don't care............ can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:44 PM Title: Forever
Awwwwwwww again what a sweet chapter and i love how everyone came to help and the thoughts of the future.......just a perfect chapter......these two deserve this happiness in their lives finally........and I'm so glad No Jordan making problems and no Jude coming around and it sounds to me like NO baby from Jude so that is good......
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:29 PM Title: Playful Existence
OMFG all i can say is HOT>......... controlling dominating Edward sex is fucking HOT.............SO good........... need more............loved it.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:09 PM Title: Unstoppable
well thank you lord....lol.........finally got to get some..........and it was perfect.the dinner the dancing , the tub the sex.......loved it and it was perfect.... just perfect..........loved it.........can't wait now to hear the words I love you between them............. great chapter.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:58 PM Title: New Beginnings
Awwwwww what a sweet romantic guy he is.........and come on she screwed Jude the first night.......ya she was drunk but still it's time for some Edward and Bella loving.........
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:36 PM Title: Calm
OH GOD please don't have her be pregnant......i mean with Jude baby....that would totally suck ........ but she is tired and hungry all the time........well more hungry then tired but............ finally they can be together and that would suck for her to be pregnant with that idiots baby........... I can't even comment anymore to sick at the thought of it............. just glad they will be together soon...........( i hope).
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Wrath
Ok i keep forgetting to comment on this........I love how
"Bella hates Babe from Jude well actually hates that but doesn't seem to mind when Edward calls her baby......hmmmm. So i guess Edward was right again (and so was i this Jude had Red flags everywhere and Bella is damn lucky she didn't send Edward home for the night or Jude would have finished beating and raping her. now let's stop this shit and get these two together for real
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:09 PM Title: Instinct
well i'm glad she decided not to go away with Jude didn't have a good feeling and Emmett was right about the bad storm so it makes sense not to go... Jude is creepy..... I am so glad Edward let her know his intentions once he gets his divorce final..he is going to fight for Bella i love it......but i got a feeling Jude isn't going to take this laying down...... Something tells me all hell is about to break loose....
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:36 PM Title: Possession
hello repeat Red Flags...... i mean yes it's obvious Edward likes Bella more then a friend so Jude has a right to have a problem with Edward but the way he handles it and the things he does and says makes it a bit more threatening then just being pissed over Edward and her closeness so ya he scares me and I agree with Edward he may end up hurting her physically. This really sucks Jordan is gone but Edward and Bella aren't together.....I am glad everyone including Rose took his side even though Rose continued to stay friends with Jordan.......
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:49 AM Title: Uninvited
OK Bella Red Flags should be flying here with Jude........not cool....... don't go...and Jordon skank........... i can't even believe Edward wanted to work anything out with her what the hell was he thinking........and then for Jordon to actually get pissed thinking something was going on with those two what the hell why would she even care any ways...........she is screwing her boss.. oh well I have a bad feeling about this date......
Author's Response:
OMG! Thank you so much for all of your reviews!! I'm glad you're not liking Jude or Jordan! They aren't really likeable characters!! I hope you keep reading and enjoy the story!! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:32 AM Title: More Revelations
OMG what a tramp........fucking her boss on his desk.(Now if Edward was the boss)>hmmm.. but i knew she was cheating I knew it i knew it........ dirty tramp and there's poor Edward with a surprise lunch for her and to walk in and see that.........ugh .......slut.......whore........Now lets have some Bella and Edward time..........Yes .
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:19 AM Title: New Digs, New Day
Jesus can Bella go anywhere without thinking a guy is gorgeous and can she go anywhere without guys hitting on her...........and what the hell is up with Edward he is acting really weird all the sudden about Bella doing anything..but that was sad.please just stay and watch a movie with me......then when she was in the limo she wished she had stayed home with him........ i want something to happen soon ........too much Jordan and Edward not enough Edward and Bella.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:00 AM Title: Second Chances
Oh lord.......ok so she didn't like the dinner not surprised....and Jordon opened up to Bella abit about how she feels about Edward........god what a bitch..i mean i know everyone is not perfect but god he is like close to it......and he likes Bella so much but i understand why she is like that Edward is married. he can't keep flirting with her then acting like a friend then flirting again he is married to her friend and something has got to change
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:43 AM Title: Realization
why do i have a feeling Jordon will either not show up or the dinner will be a huge disappointment......i don't think Jordon wants to work on this marriage and I almost have to wonder why she wanted Bella to live with her and Edward..maybe she was hoping something would happen between them so she wouldn't feel so guilty when she leaves him for her "boss"...... i don't know but oh the whole thing at the beach and then he wouldn't talk to her didn't Bella realize he is falling for her big time.........
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:23 AM Title: Revelations
Ha i knew he knew about Jordon having a affair or god it could be affairs who the heck knows........ and pole dancing oh i so what to learn how to do that.....and he was watching her......so sexy and the lap dance......... and the kiss.......I do not like cheaters at all but with these two it just fits........and i so know she is cheating on him..........he just needs to divorce Jordan....i loved the part about what if you're my soul mate ...........
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:00 AM Title: Just Below the Surface
Ok Jordon is SOOOO cheating on Edward and here they are going to plan a romantic dinner for him.......I think Edward knows she is cheating but he either doesn't want to admit it or doesn't want to tell Bella and look like he is bashing on her friends....now earlier it said the "friends have picked sides" who is on Edwards side.....??? Anyways that was almost sad with the whole couch thing he was all cuddling on Bella and then said Jordans name....... I think the only thing I don't like is Bella cries a lot......not sure why......but i want to thank you so much for not having this moving guy be Jacob god i am so sick of Edward, Bella and the mutt stories........nice to have a 'new person" but i'm sure he will be No good cuz Bella is met to be with Edward.........always.....
Author's Response:
Bella is a tad bit overemotional! You'll find out more about Jordan in the upcoming chapters. This story is a Jacob free zone! LOL!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: So Happy
Omg he is just ............perfect............i love him........ what is wrong with Jordan.....oh well her loss is Bella's gain........I love how he can flirt but it seems almost innocent......and yes he can make buying beds sexy.......that was too funny with the sales lady.....can't wait to read more.......
Author's Response:
LOL! Buying beds with Edward.....ahhhh...wouldn't it be a blast?!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: Blast from the Past
Just found this story i see that it is alright complete so no waiting for me..
sounds like good story so far.......i am not really happy about him being married to someone else....I am a totally Edward and Bella girl but it looks to me like he isn't really happy with Jordan so......maybe divorce isn't far off.... plus i have to wonder was that flirty all a act or was he finding himself attracted to Bella right away too.......Also i noticed he told Bella they had three bedrooms and only use two ..........So i assume they sleep in separate rooms?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you're liking the story so far! I'd give you the answers to all of your assumptions, but then I'd give the story away! LOL! I hope you enjoy it!! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:18 AM Title: Blast from the Past
good story, i really liked it.
not your typical names, or setting either.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:21 PM Title: Just Below the Surface
:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:14 PM Title: Epilogue
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Playful Existence
Holy eff.
I clicked this on the first chapter just about 4 hours ago and could NOT. STOP. READING.
Yeah, this is pretty much amazing.
I fkng LOVE it. I can't WAIT for the next chapter.
erin
Author's Response:
YAY! I'm so glad you're liking it! I'm going to try to get the rest of it posted today!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Playful Existence
I love the Barbie and the Rockers reference!! I think my parents may still have the big touring van in their basement somewhere :)
Author's Response:
LOL! I still have it too!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: New Beginnings
I love this story!!! Jude was a total sleeze. I knew Edward would save her though :) I can't wait to read about this bath Edward mentioned!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm hoping to have the next few chapters up tonight!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:52 AM Title: New Beginnings
Squee!! Yay! Things are moving along nicely. Looking forward to the next step in their relationship ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:46 AM Title: New Beginnings
loved it very good
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:11 AM Title: Blast from the Past
well holy cow, about time someone represented va beach!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know...right? One of my favorite places!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:10 AM Title: Instinct
Great chapter. Glad she's not going with Jude. I love how she stands her ground.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! Yeah...I don't think I could have let her go with Jude no matter what! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Calm
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Wrath
loved this chapter very good.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Possession
I kind of have a bad feeling about Jude too. And I just want to slap Jordan.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! Jude is something else, but we shall find out more about him soon! :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: Possession
oooh, Jude is up to no good, I think. Great chapter, looking forward to the next :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:50 PM Title: Uninvited
Great story! Totally hooked!! Is it just me, or does Jude resemble a certain Souther Vamp. Mysteries character? lol, I can't believe Jordan! Ugh, she's such an idiot to cheat on a man like Edward.
You are a great writer, thanks for a fantastic read!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:14 PM Title: New Digs, New Day
Ok, I can't wait to see what happens here.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I plan to have the next few chapters up later tonight hopefully!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:11 AM Title: Revelations
This is great! can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:43 PM Title: So Happy
LOL, mattress shopping can be fun! Hm...I"m in need of a new mattress...where's Edward when you need him?
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:38 PM Title: Blast from the Past
Very interesting...I'm liking the way this story started out! I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you are liking it so far. This story is actually complete so the chapters will be coming quickly!!