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Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Format on this is showing up a total mess. I am going to download and attempt to convert the file so I can read this. Just a heads up.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:52 AM Title: Epilogue

Sweet! :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:02 PM Title: Epilogue Part Two

Awww... they got to have one more baby but it was a surprise!! I am really sad that this story ended now.



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you enjoyed the story.  I loved writing these two characters.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Epilogue Part Two

I really enjoyed all the ups and downs of this story.  Good work

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading th story andI'm glad you enjoyed it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 10:35 PM Title: Epilogue Part Two

I like having this last chapter. It is nice having the closure about the children. Thank you for this wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  It's hard to let the characters go, but everythign has an ending.  Perhaps down the road there will be another B/C story, but right now I've got nothing!  Thanks again for the kind words.

-Lisa 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:50 AM Title: Epilogue Part Two

Loved the story start to finish. cried a little reading the last chapter but they were happy tears.  thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading the story!  It was a fun story to write.  I was a little sad to let the characters go, but everythign ahs to end sometime.  Right now I"m working on a Bella/Edward/Jacob story called Things Least Expected.  There are seven chapters posted all ready. It's a little weird because I wrote Carlisle as Bella's father and after finishing this story, it was just strange!

Anyway, thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 10:00 AM Title: Epilogue Part Two

AWESOME STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Epilogue Part Two

i am going to miss them, love them



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm going to mis them too.  they were fun to write.  Maybe down the road I'll have another idea to write another story with the two of them.  We'll see!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue Part Two

well im happy they got their happy ending! so sad to see these 2 go!



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank yo so much for reading my story adn leaving all of the wonderful comments.  I'm so happy to have written a story that people have enjoyed.  I was also sad to see these two go, however, at least they are living happi;y in teh distant future!  Hope you are enjoying my new story!

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow I didn't think that Carlisle would have done that again but I guess that I was wrong. I am sad that this story is over I really enjoyed it !



Author's Response:

Hello again,

 

Thank you for reading the story.  I am just about to post the very last chapter of the story.  I hope yo uenjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 49

It was very sweet of their family to watch the kids so that they could have time to themselves.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 48

How perfect was that! I am surprised that they kept it from Alice and Edward. I am happy that Alice was happy and not upset or anything because that would have ruined the night.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 47

What is Bella up to?? And how sweet is Edward and Bree?? It is good that he finally found someone that he can share his life with.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 46

It is amazing how far all of them have come in a year. They for the most part have gotten closer with the exception of Bella and Alice which is sad because they use to be so close. I hope that they will get their relationship back. I wonder what Carlisle has been thinking about?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 45

I really hope that Victoria goes and gets the help that she needs because I don't think that she can go her whole life without at least seeing Rose.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 44

Well I guess that Mike isn't going to be a problem anymore is he? I am glad for that because that just means that chapter in her life can be closed.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 43

I have to say that Carlisle and Bella work and they love each other and reguardless if they get 50 years together or 10 he needs to stop questioning Bella's love for him because he should know by now that she isn't going to do anything that she doesn't want to do.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 42

How cute is it that Edward is crushing on Bella's doctor? I hope that it works out for him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 41

It is great that they all are doing so great!!! I love the name too.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 40

It is great that she is going to be ok and will probally be able to have more children if that is what is in store for them. And Carlisle is awake!! I started crying when I read that last sentence in the story.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 39

I can't believe that Victoria came to the hospital. Is she still on drugs thinking that she is going to come in there after something like that. I really hope that they are both going to be ok because they both seem to be doing not that great right now. Oh and how cute was it that Bella's dr. was flirting with Edward??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh. Carlisle is going to miss the birth of Pea! And I really hate when nurses are rude. I have had to deal with that a couple of times but I will have to say that there are alot more nice ones than mean ones out there.



Author's Response:

Well hello mrsroatz (nice name btw :))

mrsrpatz (nice name by the way),

Thank you so much for all of your reviews!  I'm glad you are enjoying the story and hope you will keep reading it.  The story was completed, however, I am writing part two of the epi (as well as another story. I am finding it is hard to write two stories at once!) Anyway, the part two of the epi I am kind of taking my time with so it's not silly or too much or anythign like that.  It should be done later this week.

Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

PS- You made a comment about abortions a few chapters back and I totally feel the same way you do.  I have thought about the whole situation from two angles.  My cousin, whom I am very close with, was adopted and her mother had considered an adoption.  If that would have happened the world would have been one amazing woman short.  On the  other hand, my sister (whom I'm not that close and I have disassoated myself with  long ago) had several as a form of birth control.  Really, I am kind of repluzed about the whole thing.  It makes me sad that there could be a child in my family that would have grown up and lived, however she took that away from those children more than one time.  So going through this in my family, I couldn't bring myself to make even a fictional character in my land of make beleive to have one.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

Well at least Alice and Bella are talking! I really hope that they continue to do that because they need each other.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 36

This is terrible!! How ironic is it that Victoria was the one to hit Carlisile?? I really hope that he is going to be ok.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

Aww. How sweet is it that even though they haven't talked about it but he wants to marry Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

It is really sad that Alice dumped all of this on Bella right now. I think that deep down Alice knows that you can't control who you fall in love with and who is she to tell Bella that she is wrong.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 33

I am cracking up over the whole SUV fight. I wonder who is going to win that one?? I am thinking that Carlisle is going to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awwww... Alice is getting married!! That is exciting. Edward is so sweet to Rose their relationship is so sweet because he is like her knight in shining armor.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

It is good that they talked to each other about what is botheing them.  They need that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

It is good that Bella got some closure in her life.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no that is terrible that Victoria is dead now Rose is going to think that she is the reason that he mommy isn't coming back.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

I am happy  that she is keeping her baby. I have a cousin that had an abortion because of a pregnancy that was the result of a rape and while I know that I could never go through with it I wouldn't condone someone for having it done. The only thing that upsets me is if you have one just because you aparently don't know how a baby is made then I think that you are just being irresponsible.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 27

It is amazing how if you love a little kid so much they start to feel like your own. I have to say that I don't think that I could go through something like Bella and Carlisle are going through. I am a parent and I would stop at nothing if someone hurt my son.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

And she saves him yet again. If that doesn't show anyone that had any doubt that she loves him I think that they need their head examined. I can't believe that Victioria did this to Rose that is terrible and something that she is always going to remember.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 25

That had to take alot out of Charlie to admit that he was wrong. I am glad that he called and said those things to Bella though because she needed to hear that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

Now the nighmares that Rose has been having make sense. I really hope that they can do something about it and that Victoria doesn't know anything about this either.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well that is crazy that in one sentence Charlie tells Bella that everything will be ok and that they will take things as they go and then tells her that if she stays with Carlisle he doesn't have a daughter. Oh and then basically fires her!! Man I am in real dislike with Charlie right now,

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

That is so sad that she now has to think about all of this. It is like Mike is still haunting her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 21

I am glad that they finally talked about what Bella saw and about their past.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh no!!! Please tell me that she isn't pregnagnt with Mike's child! I think that she would have a problem with that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

That was sweet that Edward went with Bella so that she could say goodbye to Jessica.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

It is good that she is back with her family again. I hope that they nail Mike for not only what he did to Bella but what he did to Jessica too.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh man it's Mike isn't it?? I really hope that I am wrong.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

That is so sad.  Bells tried to call Jessica because she didn't know that she was missing and that Mike had taken her. I really hope that Bella gets out of this mess alive.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

I suck that I haven't been reviewing. I left this story and came back only to leave it again. I am back now and am in it for the duration of it. I can't believe that Mike is kidnapping Bella I really hope that he doesn't hurt her more than he has in the past she doesn't need it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:10 PM Title: Epilogue

good story. thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  I am working on a part two of the epi.  it'll be posted in the not so distant future!

-Lisa

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:10 AM Title: Epilogue

I am so sad to see this story end.  You did a great job with it and I have enjoyed each chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words.  I am glad you have enjoyed the story.  I am working on part two of the epi.  I don't know when it'll be posted, but it will shortly.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: LolaWorld Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Even in "human form (via Vampire)" Carlisle is truly perfect.............

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:52 AM Title: Epilogue

so great they are having another baby, i hate to see it come to and end/



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I am working on part two of the epi.  I don't know when it'll be posted but keep an eye out for that!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue

loved the ending! i think you should do some into the future chapters if you fee you dont want to let these 2 characters go!  but men are dumb and stupid! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  I have decided to write part two of the epi.  it isn't close to being finished yet, but it'll be posted in the future,  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: LolaWorld Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

SOoo sweet and romantic.........loved this part...

 

I just have to do this,” he said as he walked close to her.  He swept her stray hair by her eyes away from her face and tucked it behind her ear.  He bent down to kiss her.  The kiss was very soft, tender and sweet.  When it ended their lips still touched as they both slowly opened their eyes.

Reviewer: annagardner11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue

Can do u another epiloge with all them grown up please



Author's Response:

Hi,

I actually started to draft part two which is way, way in the future.  I don't know when it'll be done.  It'll be up soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: LolaWorld Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is so sweet. Love it! :)

Reviewer: grace1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 49

A really great chapter, I am so sad that this story is coming to the epi but it was fantastic.  Great lemony chapter lol It was great Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!  I'm glad you have liked this story.  the epi will be up tonight.  I hope no one is disapointed with it.

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 49

sweet chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  the epi will be up tonight!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 49

Love it! :) So good. More soon please?



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter should be up tonight some time1

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 49

They are so romantic together, you wrote their sex scenes very well.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!  Also, thanks for commenting about the sex scene.  I always get nervious because I'm afraid some might read that it's border line porn and I deffinatly don't want that. 

Thank yod reading and reviewing!  Hope you like the epi!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 49

its was a nice quiet evening at home with the love of his life and it couldnt get anybetter that that! cant wait till the next chatper of their lifes! 



Author's Response:

Helllo, I;m glad you liked the chapter.  the epi should be posted soon.  I'm so sad this story however, there is a new one that I might be posting tonight (not B/C).

Thank so much for taking the time to read and comment!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it. Cannot wait for more! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm about to update the last regular chapter now.  Glad you enjoyed the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 48

very nice.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it it.  Hopefully the next one will be up soon.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 47

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 48

well im happy that they got hitched! im glad they are finally getting their happy ending! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I have one more regular chapter that i am going to try and post this morning, we'll see though.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 48

that was so sweet, their vows were great, they made me tear up. her and edward close like that is really nice, so sweet. I love edward and bella but carlisle and bella are my number 2. you write them fantastically. I hope you write another for them after you complete this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments and the kind words!  I had of fun writing this story.  Right now I have no plans to write another C/B story.  I am working on something else though.  I'm finishing up the last regular chapter and I am going to try and post it before I leave for work this morning, we'll see how that goes!

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 47

must update soonl, i know they are getting married. please



Author's Response:

Wedding? Who said anything about a wedding?  Sometimes people are engaged for years before they ever get married :)  I'm going to try and update tomorrow night and you can find out then what is going to happen!  Thanks for reading.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 47

i have a feeling that they are getting married and decided to keep it quiet! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 ! 



Author's Response:

Their getting married?  I don't know...maybe, maybe not...just read the next chapter!  I'm going to try adn post it tonight but it might not be up until tomorrow night.  Thansk for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 46

i think she will want a quick wedding on new years eve??  Maybe.  :) I guess only you know.  look forward to more.  I guess it is kind of hard to find alice's place in bella's life. they weren't best friends growing up and she isn't going to be her "stepmother" in the true sense of the word and its not like they built a great friendship when she first returned. As much as i would like to say alice is being such a bad friend by treating bella the way she is she really isn't.  Maybe a bit rude in her lack of thoughtfulness but that is the worst i can pin on her at the moment.  good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I'm not telling what's coming next, you'll just have to keep reading!  thanks for reviewing!

Alice aand Bella had a close relationship growing up, but like a lot of childhod and adolecent friendships, they kind of fell out of their relationship.  They care for each other a lot, but they aren't close like they once were.  It was always Edward and Bella.  Edward felt like he had to be Bella's  big brother/protector.  I wanted to try and show that even though Alice and Edward are twins, they aren't as close as Edward and Bella.

I don't think that ALice is a bad friend.  She is alos excited about events that are happening  in her own life.  She is excited about her own wedding to Jasper and such.  She was being a little thoughtless, however, it was do to excitment and not because she didn't like Bella.

Hope this cleared up a few things!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 46

Don't leave it there, I hope he wants to elope, maybe get married for New Years.



Author's Response:

Good thoughts, but I'm not telling.  Hope you enjoy the next chapters!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 46

argh i hate cliffie chapters! cant wait till the next one ! keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!  I'm glad you liked it.  Next chapter will be posted soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 45

Wow, cant wait to see what happens next. I dont want it to end. I hope that you write another Bella/Carlisle story. They are great.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment (and readign too!).  As of now I don't have any places to do another B/C story, but we'll see what happens.

I'm literally almost done with the story.  I'm editing the second to last chapter now, that just leaves the epilouge.  I'm sad to say good by to this story, but it's time.  Thanks again for reading!  The next chapter hsould be posted tonight.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 45

well im glad that she got some things off her chest ! im also glad that they talked and victoria finally realized that shes an idiot and what she did to that little girl even if she didnt do it her self! i cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for reading and commenting!  Bella had to put VIctoria in her place and she did.

The enxt chapter will hopefully be posted later tonight.

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 45

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  The next chapter will be up soon.  I'm hoping for tonight.

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Next chapter is rady to be posted.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

well finally something happened that was better than ever! hope the next chapter brings much more good news to the happy family! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you lied this chapter.  The enxt one is ready to be posted. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 44

FINALLY, things are starting to look up for them. Love the friendship between Edward and Bella. Alice I think is still have issues with the relationship. I just think that Carlisle and Bella are good together. I love to read fanfiction written about them, wish there werer more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  It's been fun writing Bella and Edward's relationship.  Alice I think is in her own world.  She unitentionally tends to be abit selfish.  I've had a lot of fun writing this fic.  I agree there isn't too much out there in the way of Bella and Carlisle FF.  The enxt chapter will be up soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 43

i love them, i'm glad they talked it through.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!  This is the last serious chapter of the story!  only a few more before the end.  Thank you fro taking the time to read adn review!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 43

well carlisle over thinks way too much! cant wait to see what happens next with these 2! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a comment and reading!  This is the last super serious chapter.  There are only a few more left ot the story!  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 42

:)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  The next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 42

So glad they are home.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  The next chapter should be posted later tonight.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 42

well finally a happy up beat chapter! finally everyone is home for good and that includes edward! cant wait to see whats up in the next chapter keep them comming 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  The next one will be posted soon.

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 42

loved this chapter, i'm glad they are home. can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: cheermom13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 42

looks like everything is going well. hope it stays that way



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 41

No offence intended, but that is one heck of a mouth full to tag a little girl with. I consider the 'back door' test (how's it gonna sound when it's being screamed from the back door). Doesn't seem to have a flow to it, more like calling to a list of people. Again, only my opinion.



Author's Response:

No offence taken about the name.  I wanted her to have both names because I wanted to show that:

A-Carlisle was serious about being her fatherand he wanted to help raise the baby, even though she wasn't his biologically

and

B-I also wanted to show that  he respected Bella when she made the decision to keep her name too once they are married.

 

Despite the name, I hope that you enjoyed the last chapter.  The next chapter will be posted tonight and it will intale their home coming.

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 41

i love the name, finally the family is moving forward.



Author's Response:

I really liked the name too.  I spent more time than I thought I was going to.  That poor fictional baby has had several names!  The next chapter should be up later tonight and it'll be about their homecoming.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 41

great reunions for all.



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be posted today sometime.  Thanks for reading,



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be posted today sometime.  Thanks for reading,

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 41

well im happy they finally have some happiness in their life and  i hope when they  finally get back home they can have more with being back with rose! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  Stay tuned, their homecoming is next!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 40

Darn, that was a teary ending. Poor Carlisle. Poor Bella. Seems a shame that the doctors won't let them be together. I understand they have different needs requiring different floors and such, but come on...



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks fro leaving a comment!  The end of the chapter was the begining of the light at the end of the tunnel.  Things will start to turn for them.  I hope you like the rest of the story.  the next chapter should be posted tonight or tomorrow.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

yah, they are both awake. Now time to get them all better and back to rose. update soon.



Author's Response:

Helllo!

Thanks for the comment.  They will be gong home to Rose soon.

The next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow sometime.

-Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 40

YAY!!  It will get better.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!  There is more to come, I promise!  The enxt chapter should be up either tonight or tomorrow.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 40

well im glad that i was still up! glad that they both made it! cant wait till the next chapter to see what happens next to these 2 ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving your comment.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  The next one shoudl be posted either tonight or tomorrow night!

-Lisa

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 40

Great chapter.  I actually cried at the end.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter!  I never expected tears! 

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

PS- The next chapter should be posted tonight or tomorrow sometime.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 39

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment.  I'm going to try and get the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 39

I know this is a story and all.  But just for the sake of asking, was there a reason they couldn't attempt to prolong her pregnancy, did they try and it didn't work?  It is not common practice to walk a premature rupture of membranes at 32 wks.  Maybe I'm just wrong with the gestational age. 



Author's Response:

Sunshine,

Thanks for the comment.  When I had orginally written this story, it was a little different (and not a fan fic). In that orginal story the woman who gives birth did go full term and simply I got some of the facts of pregnancy wrong when writting this version. You are totally right.  However, for the case of this story I am going to continue to go down teh path that i have written.  Thanks for catching it.  I actaully looked up some information this evening and basicly i am totally wrong!  Oh well, this is a work of fiction after all!

 

In way, I hope you will still stick with the story and hope you will enjoy the rest of it.

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 39

ohh come on!!!!! cant anything go right for her or carlisle !!!!! i hope you dont keep us waiting !!!! argh 



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thanks for the comment!  There will be some kind of resolution in the next chapter.  Can't wait to see what  you think!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

Suspense is mean! Please hurry.



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank you for leaving a comment.  I'm going to try and post the next chapter in a little bit.  Please let me know what you think!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 39

update soon, all three of them have to be ok.



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thanks for commenting!  There will be some kind of resolution in the next chapter.  Hope you like it.

-Lisa

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

AHHHH  Please update soon.  This story has me on the edge of my seat!!!!!  I love it so much!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad that you are liking the story.  There will be some answers in the next chapter, which I ma hoping to post in a bit.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 38

I know she is pregnant and very emotional over Carlisle's injuries, but a couple times I have wanted to scream at her to remember that she is a doctor. We all handle stress differently, I know. Just sharing my thoughts, not really criticising here.



Author's Response:

Hello-

Thanks for reading and commenting!  Orginally I had written the last few chapters in another way, but I didn't like it, so I rewrote it and this emotional Bella is what I came up with.  I totally appreciate the feedback and hope you will still keep reading.

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 38

well im upset that they cant catch a break at all ! i cant wait till the next chapter and i hope that the baby will be ok and carlisle will make it i dont think bella will come back from this if she dosent ! keep the chapters comming and fast i dont think i can wait ! 



Author's Response:

Hello-

Thanks for the comments!  Things will turn for Bella soon.  I'm trying to edit and post the next chapter before Glee comes on in a half hour!  If it isn't posted before then, it'll be posted before the end of the night. 

Thanks again for reading!!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

I have to think that all will be well in the end they have gone through too much for it not to be.



Author's Response:

Things are going to change and have a resolution....promise!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 37

well i hope that she starts to take it easy. im glad that alice and her made up i think she missed her alot and i hope tbat carlisle makes it i dont think that bella will make it with out her! cant wait to see when victoria wakes and know the truth about the accident! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

As always, thank you for rewviewing! 

-Lisa

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