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Reviewer: Shaza52 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

CREDITS TO YOU. A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN , MOVING STORY ,WRITTEN IN AN INCREDIBLE STYLE. THIS SHORT STORY SHOWS REAL WRITING TALENT.  GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR FUTURE.  SHAZA

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I had to read this again. It is beautiful and so forward for the time in which it was written. I love your stories.

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was fantastic!!  I didn't realize the PPSS hosted a contest of this nature! I'm sorry I missed the voting, but I thoroughly enjoyed this piece!!  Great job!

Reviewer: MuffinsRoxSox Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is amazing. <3 I love how you words just flow together and the personalities of the characters. It's just amaxing. You did a grat job. :)

<3

~M~

Reviewer: jtaylor1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am sure I am not alone when I tell you this short story touched my heart.  I enjoyed your art of words within this story and found myself full of goosebumps and felt the desire and love within your characters.

I have grandparents from this era and it made me wonder how they loved one another and how they communicated this love within their relationships privately... not in a sick pervy way... but, as you have indicated this WAS a very different time and people were "suppose" to act a certain way; and when you didn't you were labled with a big giant scarlet letter of sorts. 

Thank you for a wonderful story full of such emotion.  I look foward to reading more of your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your thoughtful review and your kind words. I really wanted to demonstrate the way that lovers then communicated with so much repression and yet simmering passion. I have always found that interesting. I am happy that you felt I captured that well. Thanks again so much. I really enjoyed your review.

Reviewer: exhaleblue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

beautiful just absolutely beautiful thank you



Author's Response:

Why thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing it. Thanks for your review.

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