Date: 18 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
Hot hot hot. Is this the end of the story??????
Date: 18 Jun 2021 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
Hot hot hot
Date: 15 Jun 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Crossing Lines
I am glad that Edward did not let Bella punish him. They were not in a scene. She was definitely crossing the line.
Date: 15 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Pussy Whipped
Oh my, outside sex on the balcony!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2021 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Lesson Learnt
Wow, 2 weeks without sex. That is cruel.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 12 - A Little Insight
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward being so late. Domme or girlfriend, I would be pissed. He should have called her.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Family
Love how easy Bella is handling Esme.
Date: 12 Jun 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Insatiable
Hot hot hot chapter!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2021 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Devil In Disguise
Love what Bella did!!!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2021 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Suck Like You Mean It
Oh my!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The End?
Ok, I have a question. In one of the chapters you wrote that Edward and Rose were brother and sister but did not share the same blood. What did you mean by that?
Date: 06 Jun 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Going Old School
Oh wow. Bella is having feelings for Edward and it is scaring her. That is my theory.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:39 AM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:38 AM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella also wants a regular relationship with Edward.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol!!!!!! Oh my gosh!!!!!! Poor Edward.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
Love your long chapters. That was intense.
Date: 30 May 2021 11:09 PM Title: With Flying Colors
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 30 May 2021 11:08 PM Title: With Flying Colors
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2018 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
W/ as many errors.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 - A Little Insight
love doesn't make you soft
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Family
did you get there
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
yes just a little
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
I've had your story on my favorite list for a while now to hold my place, but I've just gotten a chance to read it. It was sexy, funny, and sentimental. Another home run from you.
Thank you for always being a sure bet! (Yes, my husband is playing the horses today because American Pharoah is in the Travers Stakes - and guess who is being left to her own devices?) Haha. See you next time.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
i loved this story!!!!! ;) please can you add some more D/s time ;x btw in chapter 1 the e-mail from bella to edward said his name was masen? and can you put them at a play party? as you can tell i really hope you can add to this story although you've pressed complete ;D
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
This was a quick fun read. Thanks!
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
She is going to keep him happy for years and years lol. I think Edward is going to have nightmares about his parents for years lol. I want more of these two when are they getting married and kids.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Crossing Lines
They needed to get that out of the way to find the love that is truly there.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Pussy Whipped
To go from tied up having sex on the balcony to getting a puppy and moving in wild crazy lol.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Lesson Learnt
He will be a good boy from now on lol
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 - A Little Insight
Now the family knows but Esme.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Family
That was a great first meeting lol.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Insatiable
Its love Its love
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Devil In Disguise
Love it Angela just thought she was going to have him take her back love Bella
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Suck Like You Mean It
Happy times making up for lost time may kill him lol.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The End?
So glad he didnt let her get away and so glad she told him how she was feeling about him
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Going Old School
She has just confused the shit out of him poor guy.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:01 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
i love this story and cant wait to read more
Date: 07 May 2013 10:08 AM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
Hope he really can trust rose:) pls do continue love your story:)
Date: 07 May 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think he knew her a long time ago. She was the girl near the truck
Date: 07 May 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh god poor Edward. But this Dom is easy going if she doesn't cintrol his orgasms during the week. So he should be able to hold out just for the weekend
Date: 07 May 2013 4:25 AM Title: With Flying Colors
Yes it was fun:)
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
I think you left us hanging. Damn. But Izzy and Mistress Isabella are the same person.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
I think its hilarious that Edward's family were riding him on not getting laid and now they are riding him ON getting laid!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
This story is amazing!!!! I can't wait for that little light bulb when he figures out who Izzy is!! I love me a dominant Bella, the mousy one from the movie grates on my nerves..... Can't wait for more!!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:09 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
WELL, WELL, WELL, IMAGINE HOW EDWARD IS PURE ECSTASY a submissive, LOLLLLL.
ALWAYS FOUND IN THE BOOKS THAT MS BELLA WAS A WOMAN TOO STRONG AND DETERMINED.
CONGRATULATIONS FOR IDEAS, CONTEXT, WRITTEN.
AM I enjoyed myself.
THANK YOU
DIANA
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
i like it, cant wait for more :-)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:57 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
love it
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:40 AM Title: With Flying Colors
interesting
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
I love it. You go Rose. I like this Rose, she is a whip.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:30 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
Can't wait to see what Edward does! Loving the story!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:34 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
I think that was pretty funny his mother ready to set him up with an easy piece of ass so he doesnt have to pay for it LOL Rose is priceless I wonder what she is going to do????
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:28 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
i love it.... I can´t wait to see what Ms. Rosie conjures up...this aught to be good!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:08 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
can not wait to see what Rose comes up with!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
ok-no ideas........but that was hot!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:49 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
Oh, I wonder what Rose has in mind??? Can she be trusted to keep Edward's secret or will she spill to Emmett?
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
hot!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Damn that was hot, need more! LOL
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
It was unexpected, surprising, steamy and hot. But we need to find out, why. Bella doesn't seem to want to talk about it, at least for now. He was supposed to be punished, and the shower, didn't seem like punishment.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward needed a change in his life. He chose a big change, apartment, lifestyle. The later one takes time to learn and adjust to it. He enjoys it at times, but not now...
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
Edward is happy with this arrangement. He wants to give it all the time and energy he can. So he has to speed up work and move it around in order to be on time.
Bella pushed him, she is pushing him plenty and fast. He is enjoying it, a lot.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:23 AM Title: With Flying Colors
A dominating Bella is an interesting choice. Edward so sure about wanting to give control to a woman, is also interesting.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
ouch that had to hurt!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 2:54 AM Title: With Flying Colors
love this side of Edward!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
That was very hot.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is a demon! I love the way she is handeling edward! Love the story!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward so confused but satisfied LOL cant wait for more
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
I need a man like a Edward to dominate over :)...sigh.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
MORE! MORE! MORE!
FANTASTIC!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy hell! Bella is evil, but I like her!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Got to feel for Edward - go Bella.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol what a wicked a mind we have...I love it!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holly shit talk about blue balls he will be lucky if they dont fall off LOL
Date: 27 Aug 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
Nice I really like when Edward takes the sub role.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
This story has a different twist. Interesting.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
We got to see a little bit more of Edward's day to day life, which seems pretty hectic.
The scene was very sexy and I can't wait for them to get to know each other more.
See you soon!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
wow that was HOT! and I love it. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Aug 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
That was fuck hot I mean to have a man do what I wanted for as long as I wanted what a dream LOL
Date: 21 Aug 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
That is tooo funny with his aim being that high and taking them both off guard! I liked it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
you´ve got me hooked...I really hope you continue!!!! I love Domella and Subward!!!! HOTTTTTT!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
That was very, very intense. But I liked it. ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:33 PM Title: With Flying Colors
She made him pass out that was hot
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:55 AM Title: With Flying Colors
Yeah it was fun. And it was something new, not the old same stories like bella sub and ed dom!
Hopefully you will write again!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 7:02 AM Title: With Flying Colors
Damn, that was fun to read too!!! Holy shit, that was hot! I can only imagine where you could take this with a start like that. Unbelievable!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:24 AM Title: With Flying Colors
Hmm... this story (or chapter, if you decide to continue it) was entertaining, I like Edward being submissive with Bella. If I could "complain" about something is that it was too short, I would have loved for Bella to really, really get into a scene with him, because she barely tested his restraint in this part of the story. Even so, it was pretty sexy, so I can't really complain about anything. ^_^
I think what you wrote can be the beginning of a very interesting story, I would love to read more about this characters, their backgrounds, family/friends, their goals and why they want a dom/sub relationship; for example, it would be interesting to read Bella's impressions about Edward, and how long she has been a Domme; likewise, I would love to see the contrast about the 'everyday-working' Edward in opposition to submissive Edward, he mentioned having too much control in his life, so what exactly was he referring to?... So many interesting possibilities in this story, that if you decide to continue it after you finish Shadow of the Day, I'm up for it!
Good one-shot/first chapter! (hopefully not the last)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:45 PM Title: With Flying Colors
that was really good you so need to make this into a full story maybe after your other one is done