Date: 04 Aug 2016 2:26 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Love this one!!!!! So Bella and Edward ended up with 3 children.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:54 PM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
Well at least she tried to do something nice for Jack in the end.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:08 PM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Enjoyed reading Edward's POV. Thanks
Date: 03 Aug 2016 2:53 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Poor Jack. He has been through so much
Date: 03 Aug 2016 1:38 PM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Thanks for doing Emmett's POV.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 12:20 PM Title: This Is Halloween
Love reading these outtakes
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:38 AM Title: Save Me San Francisco
Glad they had are good vacation
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:24 AM Title: The Letter : EPOV
Bless Edward's heart.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 2:34 AM Title: Everything
Love love love it
Date: 03 Aug 2016 12:40 AM Title: In My Life
Love his Mother's day breakfasts.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 11:48 PM Title: Best Friend
I had to come check out your outakes. I enjoyed reading the main story.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 12:38 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
AMAZING!!! o/t, f/t ;) you haven't pressed complete but it has been a while since you posted so i'm hoping you come back with more one day ;D
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:54 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
I love that song by Martina, and I loved Charlie's chapter, he's just the best daddy and grandpa! Taking care of all three kids was just darling, bless his heart!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:41 AM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
I'm never going to be a fan of Victoria, but I understand her a little more after reading this. Just like everyone else, even she isn't all bad, she tried to help Bella escape, after all. Still, now she can't hurt Jack any more!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:59 AM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Pretty damn scary stuff, and awfully close to being the end of everything! Edward and Bella came within an inch of losing each other!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:48 AM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Poor Jack, he must have had a premonition that he was going to see that evil witch that birthed him! Thank God Bella and Edward were there for him, and good riddance, Victoria died!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Broken : EmPOV
You did super with Emmett, and with how much Rosalie loves him, and how much he loves Edward and Jack. Good chapter!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: This Is Halloween
Halloween through the years was really fun to read. The costume choices were really imaginative!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:22 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
What a wonderful road trip and vacation for mother and son!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:14 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
My heart aches for Edward. He got such a rotten deal when he married Victoria, and then she lost their son, to boot! It's a miracle Edward is able to function at all, let alone build a business.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:05 PM Title: Everything
I'm so glad you wrote this chapter for Alice and Jasper's wedding! From the traditional vows to Bella's recitation of Browning's beautiful poem, to the reception, it was just lovely, and so touching!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:46 PM Title: In My Life
The two Mother's Days were so sweet, it was impossible to choose which one I loved more!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:36 PM Title: Best Friend
Shopping for that car was probably a lot of fun, and who says you have to be practical? The connection between Bella and Charlie has a lot to do with the connection between her and her son. Just sayin'!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 4:55 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Awww poor sappy Charlie. I love getting a little glimpse inside Charlie's thoughts and emotions. It was also nice to see how the kids were growing up.
Date: 13 May 2011 1:33 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
I loved it!!! :D Thanks for this beautiful outtake!!!
xo
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 11:48 PM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
awww sweet chapter.
Date: 12 May 2011 8:55 PM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Awwwww
Date: 12 May 2011 3:52 PM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Sweet! I love the "shotgun in the car" dialogue. Can't get over that one. It's hilarious. :-)
Date: 12 May 2011 3:49 PM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
;)
Date: 12 May 2011 12:04 PM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Another look at Jack's world.....13 and "almost a man" - LOL. Loved this story and how you wrote it. Thank you for sharing this outtake.
Date: 12 May 2011 9:02 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
so pretty and fluffy and ugh I just loved it
Date: 12 May 2011 7:39 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Loved it. How sweet is Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 7:03 AM Title: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
loved it!!! great job. i'm still sad the story is over though lol
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:14 PM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
This is interesting having Victoria's POV. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 12:19 PM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
She did so many things wrong in her life until the end. Saving Bella so that her son could have "the mother he deserved," says it all. RIP Victoria.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:52 AM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
Oh that was a grand POV. I truly loved it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:11 AM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
Cant wait to see htem all. think I donate to them all
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
Awesome that you're writing for so many fandom fundraisers. I'll have to look into the Autism Speaks one. It's very close to me i've got a 5 year old son with aspergers.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: In The End : VictoriaPOV
well i hope that she realizes in the end what she did was wrong
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:27 AM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
thanks for the alternating POV
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:23 AM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Thanks for Edward's POV. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:12 AM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
awesome!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:51 PM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Oh Edward.....just marry the girl!!
Great as always....I always love EPOV! James was so lost inside himself...I feel sorry that he had no clue but then....he never did!!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:41 PM Title: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:18 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
jACK REALLY WENT THROUGH IT WITH VICTORIA POOR BOY.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:27 AM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
such memories had been terrible nightmares for a child like Jack. i can't really blame the boy for hating his real mother for all the hurt he'h experienced with her. you've been very vivid with those horibble memories Shel. you don't leave a stone unturned with every chap you come up. keep on sweetie!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
:)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:01 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Great chapter! :)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Victoria is evil!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:34 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
What a horrible woman to do such things to a sweet little boy. She never deserved him, but we all knew that. Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:51 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Great outtake! Gotta say, when I read the teaser a while back, I was so scared that Victoria and Renee managed to get to Jack and take him away. That would kill Edward and Bella not to mention irreparably harm Jackson!
Really good outtake. I feel so sorry for him to feel he can't be a "normal" kid and has to be uber good because of the trauma his birth mother put him through. Glad he's in therapy to help him overcome or manage his fears. I hope one day he's able to tell Bella his fears so she can reassure him that she's not going anywhere. He may not be bone of her bone nor flesh of her flesh but she is his and he is hers as if it were!
Again, fantastic!!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 6:05 PM Title: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
nice job hun
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:38 PM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Loved Em's POV.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:07 PM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Wow I think this is probably my favorite Emmet so far, what a sweetheart!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:22 PM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Great outtake! Keep'em comin. :)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:35 AM Title: Broken : EmPOV
I love this Emmett. We should all be so fortunate to have someone like him as a brother or cousin or uncle.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:03 AM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Emmett have a wild ride. :-)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:43 AM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Great job! :)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Broken : EmPOV
Great job....I love Emmett. Thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:15 PM Title: Broken : EmPOV
LOVED IT!! Going back to reread the meet & greet again! I had forgotten Edwards interest!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 3:44 AM Title: This Is Halloween
Great chapter & I loved the pics but you preemie outtake has me worried. Are poor excuses for egg donors psycho moms Vic & Renee going to kidnap Jack? I'm getting stressed & it was just a tease!! Oh no!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:07 AM Title: This Is Halloween
Thanks for the outtake.... that was pretty funny... especially the Robin costume... gotta Love Jack!!!!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:00 PM Title: This Is Halloween
Great outtake!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:57 PM Title: This Is Halloween
That was cute. I feel like I say it all the time but I just think that Jack is adorable.
Elli :)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:38 PM Title: This Is Halloween
Sweet Halloween story.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: This Is Halloween
Totally cute! Happy Halloween.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 1:09 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
Bella and Edward are going to have their hands full when Jack hits puberty. He's already a hand full and adorable as hell. I can just imagine it only getting worse ;) Bella and Jack are just too sweet together. *sigh* I'm just a little more in love with Jack now.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:59 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
That broke my heart. Poor Edward. I can't begin to tell you the relief I felt when I saw that Edward forced her to relinquish her parental rights. I was so worried about Victoria coming back and causing major problems. I'm sure she would still try. Of course after the end of chapter 17 I'm afraid her father is up to something. I loved EPOV anc can't wait for more of that. I'm dying to know what all is going through his head in regards to Bella.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:51 PM Title: Everything
LOL! OMG I like how Sue dodged the sex talk for Bella. That was greatness. They have such a sweet little family unit there in Washington. I wonder how all of this will play out to benefit everyone when it is all said and done. So many people in both parts of the country love that little boy and the people in Chicago are starting to love Bella too.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:40 PM Title: In My Life
I swear little Jack has the power to bring me to tears quicker than anyone else in this story. He is so sweet. I died laughing when Garrett called Bella a Milf. That was total greatness.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:30 PM Title: Best Friend
I love seeing these missing moments between Jack and Bella. Things like this are why I think the Cullens would never take Jack away from Bella.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:54 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
Loved this outtake. I think the relationship between Bella and Jack is cute.
Elli :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:02 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
Love those two.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:47 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
hmmm the ominous black hair. muhahahaha
Date: 22 Sep 2010 1:52 PM Title: Save Me San Francisco
great out take cant waittill the next one
Date: 22 Sep 2010 11:01 AM Title: Save Me San Francisco
:)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
poor edward!!! victoria is such a bitch!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: The Letter : EPOV
Poor Edward. I really do feel bad for him. Victoria did not deserve him or Jack. I'm definitely loving your story and all the outtakes. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 5:16 AM Title: Everything
I loved this. I think it was so nice of Jasper to have Jack as his best man or the best boy. LoL. Alice and Jasper really are some great friends to Bella.
Elli :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: In My Life
Great chapter. Jack really is the cutest.
Elli :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:55 AM Title: Best Friend
Great chapter. Loved it.
Elli :)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:51 AM Title: The Letter : EPOV
victoria is a bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
Edward went throug so much! Victoria never deserved him or the wonderful little boy she was given. Great job...thanks!!1
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:22 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
poor edward i feel for him victoria is an evil bitch can't wait to hear more from him
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
I'm glad you did this outtake, but I'd really like an outtake from EPOV for chapter 12 or Parachute.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:05 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
Poor Eddie.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: The Letter : EPOV
Wow! Lets hope he didn't use James again.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:05 AM Title: Everything
So cute and wonderfully done. Love the personalities and relationships of your characters.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:00 PM Title: Everything
what a beautiful wedding!!!! bella and jack's speech was vey cute!! angela's twin brothers were also cute asking bella to dance!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:55 PM Title: Everything
awww that was sweet making him the best man, er boy
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: Everything
i loved loved loved it...but i get a regular update to right?
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:55 AM Title: In My Life
Really love the original story and now there are outtakes Yay. Cant wait to read more.