[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
thank you so much for sharing these o/t withus on here ;) i really hope rl is going ok for you and you can come back and write some more ;D
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoyed gettin a peak into these two minds
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG I loved that show: I had been busy talking to Tanya, my now ex-best-friend about what happened the night before on Veronica Mars.
The bitch is crazy but I like it: I'm going to have to try a little harder. If I can't get Alice on my side, I'm going to have to push her out of Emmett's circle of friends. Now that I have Emmett, I'm not letting him go.
Ever.
Until nex time.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn Renee better watch her back even in prison lol. Damn big daddy c is a killer lol: "So, I'm not the only one who was imagining a million different ways to bump off Renee and hide the body today, I'm assuming." Carlisle's slightly bitter laugh fills the room.
"God, I wanted to pull my revolver and end her." I exclaim. I can't help it, Vitamin R is loosening my tongue.
"There's cleaner ways of doing it, Charlie. Ways less likely to tie back to you as well." He says calmly.
"Carlisle..." I say half in warning, half in wanting to know what he is thinking.
"Think about it, Charlie, something simple slipped into her food, something slipped into her water that doesn't show up on regular tox screens run during an autopsy. And who would demand further investigation?"
"No one." I almost whisper, the idea taking root in my mind.
Until next time.Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed this look into Victoria. It's nice to know that she wasn't totally using Bella, she wanted to be her sister someday. I also loved the Veronica Mars shout out. Who doesn't love them some Logan.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ya a little obsessed I would say I think a little scarry when her dream man does not turn out like she thinks thing should turn out.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
good to know she will always be safe from her now your on hitus until when that's a bummer really enjoy your stories
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
holy shit there plotting her murder go charlie and carlisle. update soon
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love their plan. Who would have though Dr Carlisle Cullen would be so resourceful? I always loved him.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Carlisle has a drug to kill her!! Bella needs to be safe from her. I'm glad Carlisle and Charlie are willing to do anything to keep her safe. I hope to see more when you get a chance.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Carlisle and Charlie are so deliciously evil.....I likey!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it she would get off to easy this way but at least she wount be coming after Bella.
i miss you hope you come back soon.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
que tiernos jajaja me encanto nunca me lo hubiera imaginado
Author's Response:
Lo siento mi español es malo. Gracias por la revisión sin embargo.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like seeing Charlies POV. It must kill him to know that Bella went through so much because of Renee.
I hope that you are doing good and am sorry that you had to go one haitus. You are a great writer and I hope that you are able to come back soon. Again this outtake was great and showed again what a great writer you are.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thanks for the support as well.