Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:01 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet. Aswesome So well written. I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way. This one hit my funny bone. Thanks for writing.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 3:30 AM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
Oops baby.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:42 AM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
I LOVE EMMETT
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:23 AM Title: OT Bella's Interview
In the beginning she said she was a silent partner. Even with stealing they ususally stay in the background.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:11 AM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
hahahaha Charlie a porn and a nudist. EPIC
Date: 19 Apr 2018 1:04 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
Whew...
Date: 18 Apr 2018 11:05 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Humm, he has feelings for her and maybe she has feelings for him.
Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
So this has been in my list awhile. I don't read over here much, but I told myself i needed to work on my TBR list. Soooo. I love the fact she "made" him get his dick pierced. Good boy.
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:23 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Loved it!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Yeah Bella girl is all a mess poor thing. She didn't even give aftercare post punishment and we know that's a no no. Too bad her confidant is big mouth Rose. Hehe
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:59 PM Title: The Epilogue
wonderful
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Out takes PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: The Epilogue
This was a great story loved it the way through
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:11 PM Title: The Epilogue
Awesome story I read this when it was on ff.n I reviewed then also ;) BTW where are the o/t ? Thanks so much for posting it here ;D
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:20 AM Title: The Epilogue
this type of story isnt my thing as a rule but i really enjoyed this some of the others ive read on another site are borderline abuse and offensive but yours is gentler and different and i want to thank u for it
Date: 19 Apr 2012 1:08 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
I think I may have read this elsewhere, I think her father lives in a nudist colong and might have been a porn star, I guess I will wiat and see
Date: 18 Dec 2011 7:54 PM Title: The Epilogue
What do you mean when Bella says that she can't wait until may?
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:01 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
This is so much fun! :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:41 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
Oh I just bet that Bella will soon be thinking the same thing about Edward, if she isn't already. :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:13 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
I feel the tables are about to turn here, sooner than later. :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 8:51 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
I really like your story, it's a lot of fun to read! :)
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:40 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
This is so much fun, but I keep waiting for Edward's smart ass mouth to get him into more trouble with Mistress Bella. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:22 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
I get the feeling that Edward is going to be getting his ass spanked, a lot. ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:49 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I like it so far. ;)
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:04 PM Title: The Epilogue
Perfect ending :)
Loved this story - thank you !!!!
Date: 31 May 2011 12:46 AM Title: The Epilogue
oh who better to have to ask to fix the sink then emmie! and then to tell him what really happened! too fucking funny!!!
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Author's Response:
Date: 31 May 2011 12:39 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
aww this eddie is so fucking sweet! no wonder he is always fighting to get his man card back from em! she finally said yes! it just took a cute little ally in eddie's corner.
Date: 30 May 2011 11:49 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
they had sex in the grotto! would have been way better if she wasn't 30 weeks but hey gotta get it in where you can! first time i had sex in a car was the night before my son was born! backseat of a sunbird is seriously not very big!! heehee
Date: 30 May 2011 11:31 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
i do love your em! he is dreamy and childlike and sexy and yummy!
things are moving forward but she still hasn't said yes! i wonder how the meeting of the families will go? i sure hope eddie's mom and dad never watched a little of charlie's work over the years....
Date: 30 May 2011 11:05 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
i love that eddie is constantly badgering her about getting married! one day she is gonna shock the shit outta him by saying yes...
Date: 30 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
well everything was going so well untill the end... what is up with bella?
Date: 30 May 2011 10:28 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
ok who saw that coming? everyone but bella and eddie? yup that's what i thought. eddie better man the fuck up and start saying how happy he is so bella doesn't feel bad about this! i mean come on... it's a baby! YAY!!!!!
Date: 30 May 2011 7:21 PM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night
Em's idea for the costumes was awesome! Wonder what's wrong with bella?
Date: 30 May 2011 4:39 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
Wonder how long till she is awake and he pops the question? Heehee
Date: 30 May 2011 3:14 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
Definately the wierdest meet the parents! And emmie is neked!!! Yummy!
Date: 30 May 2011 12:32 PM Title: OT Bella's Interview
nice to see a little more into bella's head
Date: 30 May 2011 12:22 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
well the big words are out there. bella knows hef and her daddy is a porn star!!! now it is off to meet the parents! is it wierd that they will be neked? heehee
Date: 30 May 2011 11:44 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
that was almost 'normal' minus the skiny dipping and sex tape. who will say the three little words first?
Date: 30 May 2011 5:46 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
woo hoo eddie! on the piano, in the gay pride pool and now moving into the bedroom! sounds like a fucking fantastic night.
Date: 30 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
well at least eddie and bella made some beautiful memories at the happiest place on earth before being banned! heehee!
Date: 30 May 2011 4:43 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
she really does sound like the perfect woman. i'd fuck her. lol!
Date: 30 May 2011 3:55 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
miss bella does not seem too happy to be feeling a draw to eddie
Date: 29 May 2011 11:52 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
so bella is effected by eddie in more ways than just in the playroom....
Date: 29 May 2011 9:03 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
well shit! looks like eddie is gonna have to wait a little longer to get some relief.
Date: 29 May 2011 6:41 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
i like that bella seems a lot more easy going about the normal rules. eddie may just get himself laid or get himself and good spanking!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: The Epilogue
Loved the entire story! I can see why Em got nominated!
Can't wait for the outtakes you have planned as I really hate to say good bye to this wonderful gang!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 7:24 PM Title: The Epilogue
so loved this story...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all the great reviews!!! I loved writing this story!!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:47 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
oh there meeting is going to be Epic... lol
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:34 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
he is so cute.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:18 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
HUH...
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
OH HELL YEAH....
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:45 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
lol poor Em
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:21 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
I love Em
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:59 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
OMG a nudist Colony... Holy hell..lol
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:42 PM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
awww....
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:09 PM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
awww... I love them together..
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:16 PM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
so loved it.... I feel sorry for there future kids though... They will have to travel to FLorida now to see mickey..lol
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:13 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
oh no...
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:50 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
i feel sorry for edwards dick lol
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:36 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
so hot...
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
lol... loved it
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:25 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
HOLY SHIT.... LOVING IT
Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:22 AM Title: The Epilogue
love it!!!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:21 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
mmmmmm.....Edward pierced.....drool....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I don't usually read Subward and Domella fics, but your's caught my eye. So far, my curiosity is piqued =)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:19 AM Title: The Epilogue
Amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it=) You are an amazing writer also.
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: The Epilogue
that was good i liked it
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: The Epilogue
I loved it!!! I love that Ben said the same words that Bella said to him all that time ago.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:02 PM Title: The Epilogue
A wonderful ending to the story.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:26 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
that was so hot.I bet he now wishes he kept his mouth closed lol love this story
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:03 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
I loved it him getting his dick pierced was the best ever and mistress cock tease is the best name ever for Bella lol
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:14 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
This looks so good can't wait to read it .
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: The Epilogue
wow .. just finished reading ur fic .. absolutely brilliant ... loved the snarky humour, the storyline and how u made each character come to life .. the nudist colony and edward's 'thoughts' were hilarious not to take away from the relationship edward and emmett share
cant wait to read another of ur fics
thanx for sharing
xoxo ety
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:51 AM Title: The Epilogue
Loved it amazing
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:29 AM Title: The Epilogue
thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: The Epilogue
lol. Ripping the sink off the wall. Lame sick if ya ask me.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:14 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
loved it amazing so sweet
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
I absolutely ADORED the proposal!! What a fabulous touch. Sweet, romantic and just PERFECT.
And the notion Edward should have two rings, well that created a pretty awesome image too.
Thank you for creating this superb gem. I shall miss visiting these two.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:01 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
What a wonderful ending!!
I do feel for Bella & her labor though!!! WOW - what 14 hrs or so... poor girl :(
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story & can't wait for more from you soon!!!
Thanks for the story.
Have a great Christmas & New Year with your family...
T2M x
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
The proposal was perfect. It was so sweet...I loved it.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:00 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:49 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
So great. loved it.
E/k
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:48 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
Really great story! Thanks so much for sharing it!!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:08 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
Great chapter hun. Glad Ben is there safe and sound.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:40 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
Loved this chapter - just brilliant & very funny :)
Thanks for the update...
T2M x
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:10 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
I love the baby shower and I love the fact that Edward is so put out by his parents becoming nudist... fucking funny.
Cant wait for the next update.
Fiorella
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:23 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
That was a great story to come across. So glad I found it here. It made me laugh and cry and laugh somemore.. Can't wait for the update.
E/k
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading!!! so happy to hear I made you laugh!! I giggle a lot writing it
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:23 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
Loved it awsome can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
great chapter
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:06 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
OMG poor Edward I cant imagine seeing my parents in a nudist colony POOR BOY
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:44 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
That was too much fun though I would have loved to see Carlisle and Esme's reaction to the playboy mansion. The name is cute too.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:43 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
LOL funny chapter esp when Carlisle whispered about Charlie being recognizable.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:29 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
Lol! This was a great chapter! Esme and Carlisle finding out about Charlie and Bella was priceless! Great chapter!
FYI! I voted for Play With Me for the Avant Garde awards; good luck!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
great just doesn't say enough,....
Author's Response:
Thanks so so much!!!!
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
wtf is a goat?
Author's Response:
If you've never seen the movie Waiting with Ryan Reynolds DO IT, The Goat was introduced to me by that movie. Basically, The Goat is when a guy tucks his dick and balls between his legs and bedns over, showing you the goods from behind. This can only be done if the guy is above average in the size department. I have seen The Goat in real life, it's not pretty. Thanks so much for reading <3
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:18 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
well that's a committment...good start
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:46 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
Emmett is too damn funny! Digging ditches and erecting skyscrapers? That is classic!
I love that Edward keeps proposing to Bella, but I'm bummed that playroom time was averted by Bella's shoe issues.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:42 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
he's right putting a needle in your dick is a really big deal!