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Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

Its it Sam the cook?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah she was taking that need some space thing too far. Not so much angst as annoying. Now on to the good ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love gay bestie Jacob. He shouldn't be written any other way. Prudish Bella really needs fuckawesome Edward. I love the "fucking" Cullen's. And who the heck is following Bella?

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 4:28 PM Title: Epilogue

I would love a new story to see what everyone has been up to. Loved the story!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:22 AM Title: Epilogue

cool little story ;)thanks for posting it ;D

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:32 PM Title: Epilogue

Enjoyed!! Cockyward rocks!!!
:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:54 AM Title: Epilogue

Great ending just so sad it's over thanks

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 5:06 PM Title: Epilogue

I going to miss this story.  Thank you for putting it up on mobi, this way I can re-read this story anytime, anywhere.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Really enjoyed reading this story, sad it's over. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for sticking through to the end of this story.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:03 AM Title: Epilogue

That was amazing :)

Reviewer: Donut_Magnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 3:58 AM Title: Epilogue

Thanks for the great ending, love to see Bella & Seth with a HEA.

Reviewer: elliej Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:33 AM Title: Epilogue

Yay!  I'm so glad you were able to finish this story.  I've enjoyed it from when I first read it a long time ago.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:07 AM Title: Epilogue

great ending !

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it Sam aka Lonnie w was a scary guy so happy Alice was watching .  Bella was so cute when she told him she loved him. So sad it is almost over.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see who her attacker was and to see if there will be a lemon in the next chapter, or the epi!

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

welcome back "jumping and claping"

there are few stories that havent been update in a long time that I wish the authors would have the time, the writers mind and their RL letd them finish their stories.

This is one of them

Thank you thank you and will be waiting for the next update, doesnt matter if is in 

5 days or 5 months I'll wait 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 17

What was she thinking that they would let her or Seth go anywhere but none with them. Faith is so cute.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loo moreking forward to

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

someone is going to die when they get ahold of him

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it and cannot wait to learn more about what happened!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 16

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Omg, great to have you back!!! Who attacked Bella ? Hope we don't have to wait long for the next update. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMFG What happened to her all the good stuff going on something had to go wrong I cant wait for more and I loved your teaser :)  keep it coming

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update!  can't wait to see what happens!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

OH WOW, that was amazing :D  I really loved it SO much!  My parents still tell us Santa comes (and my brother and I are 18 and 22, respectively).  My dad claims that Santa visited his house until he moved out and married my mother when he was 24!  Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, how could you leave us hanging like that? Smh lol

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love this story :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

She is so proud of Seth what a great kid.  I love Edward and his dirty mouth.  I hope Bella and Faith work it out soon.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

SO amazing :)  I really cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved the chapter looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

I have forgotten about this story, I ahd to go back and re read over it/ Glad to see your going to finish it. IDC how long it takes. Keep up the good work, doll.

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Please continue ... I forgot how much I loved this story until I reread it..... Thank you

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love this new chapter. Glad this story is back missed it alot. Cant wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Turanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hey. Welcome back.

Reviewer: Sophi517 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

YOUR BACK!!! Can't wait for the next update...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

I was so excited to hear that you where still here Thanks so much for completing this I have miss you I enjoy your storys very much.  Faith has to warm up to Bella

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

SO amazing :D  I really loved it!  I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: susanreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

It would be great if you could post a reminder paragraph if t is going to be along time between updates for those of us with sieves for memories.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

im glad there is another chapter, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: tylersprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

awesome chapter. cant wait for more. any idea when u will update this?

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter..  I loved the whole getting ready for the date with jake and bella too funny. And the Edward and diaper woo's jus tlove reading about him 'being all foul mouth daddy duty stuff.  Sooo glad they went out and talked everything out put that behind them and can focus on each other now.  Ugh Jake should have taken Seth to his apartment so Bella & Edward could have came back to a empty apartment. oh well I guess I can't have sexy Cullen in every chapter. lol.

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Fanfuckingtastic chapter

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

best date ever! yay! the rose and tanya thing - awesome!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

you will wear the dress jake got you for the dinner at the compound! silly girl. so glad they are back on. seth is a smart kid. i think he will be having a great christmas this year....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

uhoh momma e wants to do tea1 what does that mean? is eddie a big emo crying baby waiting for his bella to call and momma e needs bella to do something? or is she there to talk bella through all of this?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

tanya is fucked! and her family needs tolet her know that kinda shit ain't cool!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

aha! i was right faith is baby cullen! heehee. and eddie said bella was his girlfriend and shit, how sweet is that?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh my goodness! em at a nudist cult gathering!!! too fucking funny!

ok i still say faith is eddie's kid it was mentioned she was the only person he would stay away for....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

so is faith eddie's long lost baby girl? one eddie didn't know about until after she got sick? and what is wrong with momma e?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

well they just couldn't help themselves, yummy! sleepover time for the swans this should be fun! and bella take the chance and join eddie you know you wanna!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

so rose and em and the rest of the family know a little something about loseing parents and raising siblings. i wonder if the cullens knew charlie and sue? dinner is gona be fun

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

aww eddie is too cute and something tells me the racing ho's don't get all of this. love seth and all of his holy shit hero worship that is going on.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow sounds like bella is ready for someone to take care of her for a little while, any ideas of who might be up for the job eddie?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh seth is gonna be stoked! what happened to charlie and sue? obviously they have past but what happened?

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

:D Loved this :) the part with the dress made me burst out in laughter so funny :D can't wait for the next chapter when you can get it to us :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

Twilight wins all!!!!  Great show MTV awards.  So happy to get update and hope your fingers are better.  Your story is great and just cause you didnt win doesnt mean other storys are better I think it was because of updates I voted for you and I lie in wait for update but some do not.  I think once you got this story done and then reposted it you would win any contest there is because this story has it all.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

well im glad that he cleared it all up! 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

love it so much

Reviewer: Sophi517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love this fic...keep it coming...

Reviewer: elliej Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

LMAO!!!  The idea of Bella doing the Carlton makes me very happy.  :-)

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Just imagining tough guy motocross star Edward changing a poopie diaper just makes me LMAO!  Glad these two talked and things seem to be back on track again. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I loved that date!  I wish I could have one like that ;)  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: ougirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Update Soon!!! Love this story!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well thank god Bella finally gave in & spoke to him. I am so glad for that. Seth who'd have thought he'd be the voice of reason Good for him to listen to what she said and brought up some really good points. Like the whole thing with Jake.. I didn't even think about that.  Okay I'm behind so onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ahhhh!   so cute!!

Great beginning.   I can't wait to read next chapter.   Hey, I don't have to wait.  You've got this up to 11 chapters!  Yeah, me happy!  

Thank you.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

Make up sex rules hawt chapter and the girl bonding was awesome too

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

 Thank you thank you I didnt think you were coming back and I am so glad you did I have been dying for them to make up.  Got to love Seth he is one smart boy and it is a good thing he knows his sister and it helped alot that Esme and Alice showed up.  I hope Edward knows how much people want him to get it right.???

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter.  Please update soon!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very funny stuff !

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hot! :-)

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow Edward is SEXY !!!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

I Love Jatina!! I LOL

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love it! More please!!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have been enjoying your story thank you ...

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love love love this story :D I love your Edward and Bella and how they interact :D Can't wait for the next chapter and for Homecoming :D x

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

I laughed so hard , i cried!

It is simply perfect. I wish

we had Em's pov. I would

make a great out-take! :)

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love the term "batshit crazy"...I just LMAO everytime I hear it and that alone explained Tanya perfectly.  I loved how Esme and Alice were able to "inform" Bella without making it seem like a lecture or a "talk".  And how adorable is Seth?  I want my son to grow up to be just like him! ;)  Having Edward show up at Bella's rather than call was perfect-to some the "exchange;)" may have seemed wrong (like they should've talked), but for these two kids it was just right.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  So happy theyre back together.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

YAY!  Go Bella and Edward ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Okay yes I agree he should have told her but come on this is silly how long does she need? The thing with Tanya should be long since forgetten..that wasnt' really anything the baby yes he should have told her but maybe he wanted to make sure they were going to last and work out before he introduced her to his daughter. I know if i as a simple parent i wouldn't just blurt out my life story right away or show my child to someone i may or may not be with in a couple of weeks. Anyways hopefully Esme can talk some sense into Bella and she starts talking to Edward again.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) The seperation won't be long it's over in the next chapter though there is more reason to it than what she is claiming, yea he fucked up but your right it could have been much worse and they haven't been together long. Here is your chapter 11 teaser...

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

LOVES THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Glad you are loving the story, here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

OK!! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read!! I love this story to!!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

Good chapter not enough edward

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) I promise next chapter has a lot more Edward, I miss his cocky ass to much to keep him away for long. For now here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Please update soon.  You're killing me with these long waits.  But I loved the chapter.  I can't wait to see what Esme has to say.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Sorry about the waits, it's just real life drama and writer's block that cause them. I wish I was able to update everyday like some writers sadly I can't. To tide you over here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: the twilight girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! I love Jatina!!!!!! ;D Update soon please? 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) It always warms my heart when people give Jatina love. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

Go Esme get them back on track.  Bella is just being stuborn yes Seth is her priority but she needs to take care of herself also.  i cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) I agree Bella is stubborn, but I think Edward might have her beat in that department lol. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: Supernova8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update.  Missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Sorry the wait was so long, here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Well, if Momma Esme is getting involved that must mean that Edward still wants to be with Bella.  Can't wait to read about the "tea."Ü 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) LOL yep Momma Esme is stepping in. And here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for the next update ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) So glad you liked it hun. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it.



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Thanks so much for the review :0) here is your chapter 11 teaser!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update. Great chapter.



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Thanks so much for the review :0) glad you liked it.  Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Reviewer: ArielleKrystene Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

I can't remember if you mentioned it in an earlier chapter but how old is Faith? 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Faith is 7 months old, I only mentioned it once lol I actually had to go to my notes and look to verify the age.

Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

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