[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 40
So she is sol tough but she always gets kidnapped and hurt and but up hahaha doesn't make sense at all
my rating is for the complete story
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 40
You have RACKED MY LAST DAMN NERVE with this story !!!!!!
But I have loved every minute of it !!!!!!
I am EAGERLY AWAITING the next sequel .... they have both been
FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks muches for sharing another wonderful story with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 40
awesome sequel yet again;) btw why is she going by swan and not mason? and eleazer and carmen not at the wedding? ;D
Date: 25 May 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
btw edward is agent mason/masen? not cullen thats carlisle ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 40
Great story. I loved it.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ok, I hope I won't get burned for saying this. I read Here we go Again and I liked the storyline very much, the pace was good, the chapters well written, building just enough tension to keep you reading but not too much too make you just close the browser and never be bothered with it again. All in all a great story with great possibility to envolve into more as you showed with Flightless bird. The one thing that bothered me however, and the only thing that makes me stop reading, is the relationship between Bella, Carlisle and Esme. I understand the way you bonded those three but I don't think the level in which the 'love' each other is healthy and to tell you the truth, the whole time I was reading the story I was ignoring that small but still very important aspect of the characters. In Here we go again Edward, even though he had his moments, was pushed entirely into the background and besides the few dates, he and Bella had no time to build their relationship and help it grow into what is from one to into the other a strong love. Carlisle was always there to do what Edward should be doing for her. I understand it to a point, since they've been through so much together. But I started reading this story as a romance between Edward and Bella, not Bella and everyone else. This chapter, Bella and Edward's wedding, was just too much. Bella's dance with Carlisle, though I'm not saying they shouldn't dance together, was too much.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the honest review. I know Bella's relationship with both Carlisle and Esme is different, but it's how I saw it when writing this series. I do appreciate your honesty.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:29 PM Title: Prologue
Holy Crap.. what a beginning. YIKES..
Date: 04 Nov 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
I am glad that Bella is back or should I say Agent Swan.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 39
well in the end all that counts is them selfs! cant wait to see what the next chapter hold for them!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
I am so glad that Bella is finally ready for the new beginning. She is ready to let go of the past and just live.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 38
i have really enjoyed ur writing... good luck in the contests... thx for sharing... im off to start another of ur stories while i wait on the update for this one...
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 38
this is once again a great story and if I could have voted for you I would have but I was to late, but I still think you are awesome author and I hope you do writ a sequel to this story.
Author's Response: Thank you:) I appreciate it:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
Edward is such a romantic. Bella is so lucky.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 38
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 38
i think thats what she needed to smile again! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
Certainly have enjoyed reading this series.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 37
love the chapter to bad that she left the FBI though! good story!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 37
well i hope that shes making the right decision! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 37
I hope Bella finds happiness at the police acedemy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
love it she really shouldn't quit though!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
I hope Bella really thinks about his offer. Bella doesn't have to rush into anything. She needs to heal and find her new passion.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hmmmm. Quitting? I wish Esme would help her see that it's more like "a need to change jobs and environment". Quitting is giving up and sitting at home; changing jobs is just that - doing what she does best, but in a different way and different environment. The affects of her torture would impact her ability to perform in the field, and everyone should understand and respect that. The other characters should reflect that if THEY had been receiving the torture, would THEY have just been able to return to the job and carry on as if nothing happened??? Nope. They shouldn't expect that of Bella, either. Hopefully one of the characters will have enough common sense to point that out to the other meatheads when they start giving her a hard time about leaving the team.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
great chapter....
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 36
well even though it happened to the team it only physicaly happened to her! i dont think i could handle it anymore ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
wow can't believe she quit,
Post soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
I liked the chapter. I'm not really sure about B just quitting like that but your the author so I'll leave it to you. But I've got a petition to make I would really love to read the reactions of everyone and maybe for them to feel a little guilty about how they treated B, but that's just me.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
She has to do what is right for her! Not what everyone else wants. And any person who tells you they understand what a rape/torture victim has gone through by reading the reports is kidding themselves. It's like the male GYN doctor who says the speculum doesn't hurt, ask him if he'd like to have it shoved up his you know what and watch him change his tune.
Teaching folks to think outside the box seems to be the ticket.
Author's Response: lovely analogy!! I like that:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 35
i agree she shouldnt go back! cant wait to see what happens next keep up the chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
I understand how she feels. She wants to make a difference. To do so she has to affect more than one person. If she can teach officers how to do a better job then those officers in the field will make quicker arrests, thus stopping the violence.
I know this is just fiction, but this goes on in real life. Leaving the bureau is hard for her but yet I think she wants a change as well. If she ever wants children she can not be in harms way. Edward needs to think AHEAD of his next orgasim.
He could have lost her forever. Part of her now is lost. He hasn't figured that out yet.
GOOD JOB..
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
I must say that Bella quitting FBI in first minute seems to be way out of character for her. I know - big trauma and situations like she was put through can do it to you, but I thought she was stranger than that. More stubborn. More ambitious and driven. More determinate.
But
then I thought abut Her love ones - Edward, Carlisle, even Esme. I don’t think she has any more to give in this job in this moment and in her current state of mind. Maybe she just needs some perspective, some time out. My bet is - three months without a gun but with husband and best friend running around with guns and she will be coming back to FBI quicker then you an say “sequel”:)
Author's Response:
Hmm, interesting theory:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
I don't know why she thinks it will be easier at the police academy. She should at least work at the FBI academy. She won't loose all of her tenure.
Author's Response:
True but the FBI academy is in Virginia and they would not leave Seattle after everything they have been through.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
With as many stitches as she has in her, I can't figure out how she is able to get around let alone able to wear any shirts. Not to mention being carried anywhere. I am so looking forward to happier chapters.
Author's Response:
It would be hard. They coverd the stitches with guase to keep them from getting infected. With everything she had been through, going through that little bit of pain would be worth it to her to be with Edward:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 34
I am happy for Rose and Emmett. They will be great parents. Bella and Edward will heal with time. I think Bella realized this time that her actions have consiquences that are far reaching. She needs to think of more than herself and the case. She has to think of her family.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 34
great chapter.....
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
well im happy that they are slowly getting back to some what normal lives cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella can't take on the whole world. Her family needs to realize that they put too much pressure on her. Bella needs to talk to Esme and Edward and get away for awhile and heal.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
great chapter.....
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
brought tears to my eyes...post soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Working on the next chapter right now:)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Bella. I can understand Emmett's and Jasper's issues, but really I think Bella has had a lot more to deal with and that they need to get their heads out of their asses.
Edward continued support is beautiful, but I wonder if Bella can ever be truely fine after everything she has experienced.
Very emotive writing, it definitely draws you in to their world.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. No, Bella will never be 100% but then again, she never was after the first story. I guess I'll have to see what Bella has to tell me:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
well i cant wait to see what the parents ahve to say about all of this ! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
I don't Bella will be the same. She needs some serious therapy. I also think she needs a new career. She can help people other ways.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
well im happy they finally found her but i dont see her comming back from this abuse! cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
I can't believe they are yelling and blaming Edward. He can marry Bella if he wants to marry her. They are adults.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
happy that they are trying to find bella! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Haha I did not see this update and skip it so I had to come back.
So we see just how bad Demetri is treating Bella. He made a comment that threw me off did he know they were undercover FBI agents when they were doing the scene underground or he just brought it up to see if he could get a reaction out of her...
Author's Response:
He brought it up just to get a reaction from her. THank you:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
That was fast on updating. thank you. Keep on writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
well i hope that they find bella before they kill her or do other things to her cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella!!! Hoping that Edward finds her soon!!!, and gets to whips Demitri's ass hard! I hate him!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
This man is so evil. They better kill him since he can't go to jail.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
well that was a hard chapter cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
I hope the team is on the way to safe Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh Bellas so strong, hopefully Edward will get to her soon. Post again soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Cut off their testicles and penis and stuff them in their mouths. Pour hot tar on what is left of their groins so they don't bleed to death and drop them off in front of the bar.
Author's Response:
Wow, nice idea.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
well i hope that shes going to be able to handel everything they put on her ! in the last one she broke down i hope shes strong willed! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter......
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
I understand the need for Diplomatic Immunity logically. However, I thoroughly believe some need to have their teeth kicked in. If there is enough evidence the offender can be 'asked' to leave our country. Here is where a couple of very big goons with masks would come in handy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella should have driven to Esme and gotten help, but instead she has to act tough. She causes more trouble because of her pride and being so stubborn.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
So mr big made contact with Edward now he knows B is missing. Wonder how bad it will get for him before he finds her.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wonder how long it will be before anyone realizes she is missing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
What did you mean by ;...they both ripped her body? Did they actually rip her as they rapped her?
Author's Response:
I mean that as they raped her, they wwere very rough with her.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Once again Bella thinking she know it all gets her in trouble. Bella has a godcomplex. It is very sad. She has all these people who love her, but she won't let them all the way in. Bella was way out of line.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
She finally lost it and said so much crap to Carlisle that once she has some time to cool down I'm sure shell regret it.
Looks like we are almost at the prologue. Cant wait to see how long it takes them to notice she was taken.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
well leave it to her to quit and then get taken in the same night! cant wait to see the outcome of this story! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
How could parents just let that happen? It is like they like the lifestyle more than their child. I hope they rot in jail.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Intense ending. Can't wait to see if get any more info on the parents actions and motivations.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
owww leaving me hanging...not nice. post soon pleaes
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
well, dont take so long to update. Now i have to go back and reread to find out who this is. Nathan who.. Sean.. who..
Please once a week. helps!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I do update once a week.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wait what I thought Heidi was demetri sub but she lives with Sean I'm so confused lol. Can't wait to see what is up with them..
Author's Response:
You're right. I messed up. I went back to check while writing this chapter but missed it. I'm fixing it now:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, man. this is getting good!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
This is a really good story. I wish you would post weekly. I had to reread several chapters to get back into it. I am with Swan BDSM is sick.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I try to post weekly but this story has been difficult to write.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Well I am glad that Bella is safe, but I still think she should have told someone where she was going in case it was a trap. I am so glad it wasn't.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
ohhh who could it be....post soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella better not be stupid. She better let them know about this. I know she probably won't because they won't let her go alone. She needs to go with servalence.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad they reconnected with each other again. I really hope Bella at least lets someone know that shes going somewhere.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow bella is really having a hard time with everything and it seems like she holds Edward a bit responsible for what happened underground. I hope she talk to Bella soon cause it seems like she losing it and quick too.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella thinks she always has to be in charge. She needs to let go and let Edward in or it will kill them. Edward did nothing wrong. He did not want that assignment. Bella wanted him to do it. She needs to remember that.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
good chapter wonder whats next?!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Please tell me you're not fucking with us... they seriously need to go home.
Author's Response:
I am not fucking with you but I'm not saying that this will be smooth going either!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)