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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

okay Looking for Hunger for your Touch.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Fine Mess

Way too funny.



Author's Response:

Glad I made you laugh. xo j

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 19: Electric Horse

I gotta say I hate to read stories without double spacing.  lol



Author's Response:

I write them double-spaced. When they're uploaded, they change spacing all on their own. I much prefer double spacing, too. :D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

See like I said, I don't like Jacob.  Say he got Bella to pick him. Two years and a down the road they have a kid. Then out of the blue he imprints on some gal that came into the garage to get her car fixed and Bella is history. Oh the kid stays with him because it is Tribal law.. See so much hurt and damage.. No he was not a good choice.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: Witnesses

Honestly. I gotta say you could loose Jacob and I would be so thankful. I never read the stories of Bella and Jacob. I just don't like the character.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: It Started with the Shoes

very cute..



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 5: Make Someone Happy

You must know dance or somewhere on this lovely internet there is instructions on Ballroom.  My daughter used to teach it. When she was a teenager she taught Cotillion classes with her own teacher.  Big classes take two instructors.



Author's Response:

LOL Let's just say I spent years in ballet as a kid and our family liked to dance so I learned to foxtrot, etc. And now, I've spent hours and hours researching ballroom, jive, jitterbugging, tap and salsa for this series. Your daughter's lucky to know dance. I'd have loved to have lessons. Hubbs has promised me that someday we'll take some ballroom. I'd love that. :) I'm past being able to ever do aerials, though. Would have loved to be able to do that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Zaura Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

Like it very much.



Author's Response:

I missed getting notifications for reviews so please forgive me for not responding. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

I love the playfulness between Bella and Edward with the kiss.



Author's Response:

I just found a pile of reviews for which I never received notifications. Please forgive me for not responding. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

Didn't know this was a six part story when I started. Went back to the beginning.



Author's Response:

It has more than that now, because there are companion fics. I wish I could keep up with posting here. On ff net, I have 19 stories, and approx 16 are this canon. Try me there if you finish these, won't you? :)

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Fine Mess

Two great minds.



Author's Response:

Awk! I didn't get notified about any of your reviews for this story, Jan. Notifications seem fine now, at least! Thanks for all your reviews here. xoox j

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Eye to Eye

No he needs to drive Alice crazy.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 15: Carpenter's Lady

Rose and Emmett are a lot of fun.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 14b: Speaking American

Don't think I got it that time either.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: Comfort Zone, Part 2

I don't get the slang either. I'm much older than Charlie.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13: Comfort Zone, Part 1

He certainly couldn't condemn Edward and Bella now.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Reclaiming the House

Edward would definately need bleach.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: Mercy

Jacob got off easy. Still not my favorite person.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

Much better version. Sorry Stephenie.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 7: Witnesses

Love that song too.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 6: It Started with the Shoes

Go Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 5: Make Someone Happy

Like to see him do some dirty dancing.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4: Blushing Bride

Great John Denver song. I made up a great playlist that I thought would be great for the reception. Great love songs and 50's music. Could really invision them singing to eachother.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner, with Roast, Is Served

Would have loved to see them with the computerized baby. Those things can be really annoying.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: Husband and Wife

Waited too long as it is.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

Beautiful and meaniful ceremony. Better than the book.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :) High praise indeed.  I thought a lot of people who haven't been to a Christian wedding might enjoy it. xo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

Great story but I wanted an extended version of their honeymoon



Author's Response:

that's the next book, hon'.  "I Hunger for Your Touch".  First 17 chaps are posted here, but the 44 I've written are on ff net. Hope you'll come over to read, as I just can't post here for a while. xo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

one of the most romantic weddings I have been to, worth the wait



Author's Response:

How kind of you to say so. I'm glad you had a nice time :)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

I hope more chapter's are on the horizon for this story.  I enjoyed al 21 chapters I read these past to evenings :-)  Keep them comin' (no pun intended ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, sorry I'm behind at responding :}  RL is interfering with posting, but you'll find a lot more under my same pen name on ff net.  xoox

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 19: Electric Horse

This Ch. is VERY poorly edited - I'm sorry but it's true!! :-(

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

Fantastic & totally fun story. Thanks JMolly :)  Can't wait to read more of ur work. Go TeamEdward!



Author's Response:

Oh, you're so welcome.  Keep reading, and keep in touch:)

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 15: Carpenter's Lady

This is all so sexy. OMG! 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 

Vamps are so naughty.

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: Comfort Zone, Part 2

Yay! Yay! Yay!!! Awesome. Luv it. Alright! Yes, all is right in the world. Good going JMolly! 



Author's Response:

Thanks again *bows*.

 

I'm glad you enjoy my Charlie and Sue:)

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 13: Comfort Zone, Part 1

Billy Burke is sooo Charlie and sexy. I luv when Charlie's character is fleshed out. Such potential. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love Charlie.  We're going to have to keep him around awhile.

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

Insightful. Interesting rendition. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I just couldn't see things falling out the way they did in BD (I loved BD though, honest).

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6: It Started with the Shoes

Yay! Go teamEdward! Melt, melt, melting...



Author's Response:

Yeah, i'm awfully fond of a man who can dance.  Bella just couldn't get him upstairs fast enough.  Or was that Edward, getting her upstairs... Hmm.  No matter.  They got there!!!

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner, with Roast, Is Served

This is the best wedding I ever attended. *smile*



Author's Response:

Just for that, Alice (who is laughing) is playing Edward's voicemail for you:

 

[Edward's voice] You have reached the voicemail of Edward and Bella Cullen. We're not available right now as we're on our honeymoon. (Bella! Stop that. I'm trying to do something, here. Bella, please. Okay, okay. Ssh!) Alice, if this is you, stop looking! Please leave a message and we'll get back to you. Someday. When we're less, uh... busy.[beep]

 

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2: Husband and Wife

Gets better and better. Just wonderful!



Author's Response:

Oh, I am glad you're enjoying it:)

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!



Author's Response:

*curtsies*

Reviewer: katees Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

A very sweet ceromony. Just perfect for them  :)



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks so much.  For some reason, I didn't get notice of your review, so please excuse the delay in my reply.

 

Hope you'll keep reading.  I'm starting to post the next book, "I Hunger for your Touch" today.  I'm still writing it, so it's incomplete, but I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

BEAUTIFUL!!! I felt like a guest at the wedding. You created a very moving and emotional chapter, and you did not detract from the ceremony by belabouring physical details, so you allowed my imagination to fill in those blanks. VERY WELL DONE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)  I've just finished posting, so please keep reading.  I'll be uploading the current book in the series, "I Hunger for Your Touch", within the next week.  This book is complete, but IH is still in progress.  Hope you enjoy this. 

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