Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
The perfect place to end this story, Bella and Edward tangled in love, grateful to have each other for all time. What more could they ask for, a beautiful child, a loving family and each other forever?
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 32
Vengeful Bella, a sight I can't wait to see, in BD part 1. Jacob never did know when to keep his mouth shut. See, your sins really do come back to haunt you.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
This part always makes me laugh. Jacob is in so much trouble when Bella finds out what happened while she changed.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
Amazing Bella, as if Edward didn't already love her beyond reason, here's more to admire about his wife. Hunting seems to be more than just an exercise in nutrition, at least for vampires.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
Edward is having trouble keeping his mind on easing Bella into her new existence. He drifts off into thinking how much he wants her and loses focus. Can't say I blame him, he's wanted her since he decided not to kill her! After all, he is seventeen, hormones and all, and madly in love.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Let the fun begin! I always feel bad for Jasper, seeing how well Bella accepts her new life, as if she has no newborn problems. Makes him feel like he should have better control. Apples and oranges, as far as I can see. Everybody is a little different.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
I guess Edward can breathe easier now that Bella has made it through to the other side. It's cute how all the family members are thinking in terms of their outlook on this vampire life. Jasper ought to be extra glad that everyone is so happy, it makes life way easier for him.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hold on Edward, the end is near! This is may not be what he wanted for his Bella, but both mother and daughter seem to be safe now. All the wrinkles can be worked out, provided he has his girls safe.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
Most of us know what Edward was feeling during this changing time, but hardly anyone tells us how it affects Jasper! Great point of view!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Edward is following Carlisle's procedure for transformation, including the prayers for success. That pretty much is all you can do, your very best and hope it works.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Okay, so the snowball is rolling down the hill and gaining speed. You can kind of feel events speeding up, the goal is getting closer.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Being able to watch from outside the story, you can see all sides and perhaps understand the characters more. Everyone is woven tightly together and all now are focused on the coming child. The emotions couldn't get too much higher right now. All we need is a match on the gasoline.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Jake, lost his one ally in hatred for what was hurting Bella. No wonder he had a melt down and had to get out of there. Edward, however, is thrilled to be able to hear his child, loving it's mother as much as he does!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have always wondered why this solution didn't occur to anyone before Jacob thought of it. All those vampires and nobody thought to give the baby blood? At least this gives some hope, which was absent before.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward's on a mission now, he's going to save his Bella, come Hell or high water. Jacob wants to save Bella, too, but can't do the job like Edward can. First, get the child delivered and rush to change Bella, and then take a leaf out of Carlisle's book, and pray.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Something to do and a little hope, this is what Edward has needed. Jacob tried his best, but had no luck changing Bella's mind. Then again, he never had much hope she would listen to him.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Always did think that was a crazy idea. You can sure tell Edward is desperately grasping at straws. Jake is nearly as bad off to be considering such a harebrained idea. Bella should kick them both.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Now Jake is getting a hint of the agony Edward is feeling. It seems to a sobering effect on him. It's kind of weirdly funny that the two that love her are starting to bond, just a bit.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jacob has one more reason to hate Edward, and this is the big one. Seeing the girl he loves, huge with the offspring of the creature he considers a monster, has to be his worst nightmare.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nothing quite like that helpless feeling you get, when someone you love is gravely ill, and you can't do anything about it.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yes indeed, still a seventeen year old, full of fear, love and hormones!
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward must feel likeGod doesn't love him, for sure. The one love of his long life could be carrying what may kill her, and he put it there. He's drowning in guilt and afraid he may lose Bella. It has to be like walking through Hell.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
I always thought it was a minor miracle that Rose could find love and enjoy it, after what happened to her. My only quibble with her was the way she treated Edward, acting as if he was going to hurt Bella. With Rosalie, it was the baby first, last and always, and to hell with anyone else or their feelings.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was bittersweet, running into the pregnant woman in the airport. Bitter for Edward, berating himself for endangering Bella, sweet for her to share some baby stuff with another soon-to-be-mom. The scene at Sea-Tac was a total shock to Edward, he so didn't see that coming.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Kaure has done a good job of scaring hell out of Edward. He's convinced all's lost and they're doomed, poor baby. Little does he know, things will work out okay!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, Edward's world is about to explode, and Bella will have her hands full with him and the baby. We all know how he freaks at first, thinking he's put a demon inside her. Silly vampire!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I feel a little for Kaure, wanting to say something, but fearing Edward. It is kind of sweet that she wants to protect Bella from the big, bad vampire. Little does she know, Bella likes big, bad vampires! At least the one that loves her, too.
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
A much happier way to start the day!MaybeEdward can relax a bit now and just be man in love with his bride, on a tropical island and no one to bother them! Sounds pretty good to me!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
There's nothing in the world better than sex between two people who love each other, hence the description, lovemaking! Edward has to be glad Bella pushed him towards this .
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
You can kind of tell, Edward is fighting a losing battle , with his hormones as well as with his love for Bella. He can't keep denying them both what they want so much, it will only make them miserable.
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Pretty much canon Edward, so far, beating himself up over Bella's bruises, and trying to convince himself celibacy is the only answer!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sneaky, teenaged, horny Edward! Who knew? It's fun to see him realizing how wonderful it is to be with his beautiful young bride. Honeymoons are great just for this very reason!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
So, Edward is stronger than he thought he was, to have resisted the pull of Bella's blood.
Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow amazing i love it
Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is so edward i love it is amazing
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
I have been reading through the story - it is awesome
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 33
woo hoo. yumminess in the forest
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
awwww poor seth
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love the insight of Carlisle trying to get her to drink formula.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
stink herbivores. lol
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
always love that line when she threw the shoes back in.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 28
lol big bro jazz is cool. alice is so silly
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
lol jazz the taskmaster
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
lol for rose and jake.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it so sad it over thanks for sharing this with us.......
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Seth always gets the hard stuff Loved it very much.....
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
loved it I so wished she had kicked Jacobs ass in the book thanks for sharing this.....
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it very much and can't wait for more....
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ya Ya Eddie she is all that and more lets get on with the hunting.....
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yaaaaa I like this part..........
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
HOT ASS KISS that all that needs to be said.....
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it wow you were busy I hope I get them all read today.....
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the Jasper POV - I always felt BD - should have explored the birth from Bella's POV as well as Edward and the other Cullens. I always thought Jakers POV was wrong AND yucky. Imprinting on a baby is yucky.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it very much and i am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....
Date: 06 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
liked the Jazz pov
Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
That was a very nice chapter. I liked hearing Jasper's POV.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well, luckily we know what really happens!! :-P Still, poor Jazz - I never thought about how overwhelming it must feel to read other's emotions before - AND be forced to feel them constantly - every day - with no way to stop.... Poor guy!! :-(
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
Aw!! Poor Eddie!! He thought he'd lost it all but, no, lucky for him, he was in time!! :-P Good update!! :-D
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am so happy you liked it:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
That part in the book was intence I loved EPOV you did a great job thank you and I am so excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment. I am updating as we speak.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved hearing EDward's POV
Author's Response:
Thanks, I always felt it should have been in the novel.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Interesting to see this scene since we didnt hear it in the book perse.
Author's Response:
I really tried to fill in the blanks. Thanks !
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love how you wrote Edward's first expierience hearing the baby.
Author's Response:
I really wanted everyone to see how special it was for him, even if he was terrified of losing Bella.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
UGH!! Poor Jake - I liked how Steph did this in Jake's POV, T.B.H, 'cause I'm pretty sure we didn't have missed out on anything - even with him putting his wolfy stamp on things!! This EPOV angle is interesting though!! A-.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I just tried to round it out a bit.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
I always wanted to smack Rose in the book over these scenes.
Author's Response:
she did deserve it in some cases, didn't she?
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
I enjoyed reading Carlisle's POV. He is definately one of my favorite vamps!
Author's Response:
I thought it would be nice to see it from his analytical side.Thanks for reviewing
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
poor sad eddie.
Author's Response:
Doesn't he just break your heart?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really hated Rose at this point in the story only because she was always in the way of Edward spending any time with Bella.
Author's Response:
She did always seem to be in the way. As much as it irritated me, I loved the back and forth between her and Jacob.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
I feel so bad for everything this is putting him through. But I like that he is starting to think about how to save Bella. I think it is good that he is focusing on something positive. I also love the explaination of why he used a metal syringe for the venom.
Author's Response:
I tried to answer the questions that I had when I read breaking dawn. I am so glad you feel as if it is filling in the blanks.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is delicious and hot! ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Soooooo goood!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Eddie is hurting so much
Author's Response:
yes, his pain is soo intense.
Date: 01 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ouch poor Edward. What agony and humiliation. I never understood why he would allow Jacob to be with Bella. Hello sperm bank.
Author's Response:
It is funny how that idea never came up
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Edward. He is killing himself with guilt and now he is torturing himself with the images that Jacob has running like a porno through his mind.
Author's Response:
I myself would hate to be a mind reader, you would see so many things that you would wish you never knew...Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
It was hard enough to read Edward's pain through Jacob's eyes in BD, but to be inside his head throughout this is ten times worse.
Author's Response:
It was hard to write it, since his pain was so intense. But I think seeing it from his pov helped you see why he behaved the way that he did in the book.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love Rose's mental threats towards Jacob. And why does everyone feel they can claim what is Edward's. First Rose wants the baby and Jacob keeps referring to Bella as his. I don't know how he doesn't completely lose it.
Author's Response:
He is really trying not to, I think he is accepting it as his penance for putting Bella's life at risk.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it was kida selfish of Bella to want to call Charlie when she was planning on 'dying' anyways. Actually, I think Bella is very selfish in this part of the story. Can't she see the pain she is causing Edward? All because SHE wants the baby. Don't take this the wrong way because as a mom, I agree with her. But Edward was thrown under the bus for making decisions without Bella's input, how is what she is doing any better?
Author's Response:
It should have been a joint choice, I agree. but I think she got defensive since Edward approached it the wrong way. As A mom also I agree with you.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Edward, he can't do anything without feeling guilty about it.
Author's Response:
he's guilty if he's sad, and guilty if he's happy..he needs a good kick in the pants.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
So the battle lines have been drawn.
Author's Response:
they have been drawn in concrete..lol
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Rose. She can be a real bitch but it is almost impossible not to feel something for her when you remember what she has been though and what she has lost. I wonder if part of the reason she chose Emmett is because he is so big and strong that she knew that he would always protect her even though as a Vampire, she wouldn't really need it?
Author's Response:
I agree...i think Rose is a complex woman, who is much deeper than she seems. sometimes people find it easier to act the way others expect then to. i think she loves Emmett ecause even though he loves her beauty, he knows there is so much more to her, and he doesn't take her nasty side seriously/
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved the add in of the interaction with Christine. I also enjoyed the voluntary kidnapping of Bella and how Edward and Carlisle were stunned into inaction.
Author's Response:
I thought it might be nice to allow Bella a more human moment before the supernatural set in. thanks
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
The conversation between Kaure and Edward was great. I loved how you used SM's story and filled in the blanks.
Author's Response:
I had such a hard time, trying to stay to true to the books, it made it so time consuming, almost every spoken word from the characters was right from the book, I had to work carefully with what she had written.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love how you interpreted this part of the story from EPOV.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very hot sex and very sweet goodnights, loved it!!!
Date: 31 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella has created a sexual monster. ;)
Author's Response:
Hey she opened up a hundred yearold sexually frustrated boy...can't say I blame him
Date: 31 May 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was incredible!!!
Date: 31 May 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward can be so frustrating some times.
Date: 31 May 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
It is hard to read Edward's reaction that first morning.
Author's Response:
I was hard to write it, but I just tried to imagine how i would feel if I hurt someone I loved like that, even if it was an accident.
Date: 31 May 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL, Edward has a kinky side, doesn't he? Having his way with Bella while she slept was hot.
Author's Response:
You can thank my husband for that, he tells me that I act out in my sleep, so I thought I would help him get Bella to act out too.
Date: 31 May 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent begining. I loved reading Edward's POV for this part of the story.
Author's Response:
I tried to fill in what was missing.
Date: 30 May 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
lol jake is so funny
Author's Response:
I had lots of fun doing Jake's inner voice, we didn't get to hear what Edward could, so I thought we needed more.
Date: 29 May 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Date: 29 May 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was awesome, I need a cool shower......where is my husband???????
Author's Response:
lol, I am glad you liked it...and I hope you find him fast.
Date: 18 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good so far. Each time a different character speaks though it should be a new paragraph.
Author's Response:
your the first person to tell me that. sorry if it doesn't get fixed, as this story is already completed, but I will try to remember that for any other stories I write.!
Date: 17 May 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wish BD had been more like this - sorry the JAkers POV was soooooo inappropriate
Author's Response:
I never really understood why it was done from Jake's pov. I mean, don't get me wrong...I love Jacob...but this should have ben about Bella and Edward.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm with Bella----I don't think I could have terminated the pregnancy even if my life was in danger of it continuing. I think she want's to give her Edward the one thing he thought he could never have, a child, even if it ment she would loose her life.
Author's Response:
I agree, Bella is selfless like that. I also think she knew that she would never have another chance at this miracle with him. I would have kept the baby also.
Date: 14 May 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just read all 11 chapters so far. Like your version of their story very much. Keep the chapters coming ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I am off to get the next capter ready !
Date: 11 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I give this story 10 out of 10! xxxLisa.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so much!
I have mad esome amazing friends through this story.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi my dear...I thought I'd drop you your a review to get you started. As you know, I'm such a fan of this story and I know that you will get a huge response to Isle Esme...well written! Btw lilquackers is one of my faithful reviewers on Meadow, so she must like our style! hehe....