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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

The perfect place to end this story, Bella and Edward tangled in love, grateful to have each other for all time. What more could they ask for, a beautiful child, a loving family and each other forever?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 32

Vengeful Bella, a sight I can't wait to see, in BD part 1. Jacob never did know when to keep his mouth shut. See, your sins really do come back to haunt you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31

This part always makes me laugh. Jacob is in so much trouble when Bella finds out what happened while she changed.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

Amazing Bella, as if Edward didn't already love her beyond reason, here's more to admire about his wife. Hunting seems to be more than just an exercise in nutrition, at least for vampires.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Edward is having trouble keeping his mind on easing Bella into her new existence. He drifts off into thinking how much he wants her and loses focus. Can't say I blame him, he's wanted her since he decided not to kill her! After all, he is seventeen, hormones and all, and madly in love.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28

Let the fun begin! I always feel bad for Jasper, seeing how well Bella accepts her new life, as if she has no newborn problems. Makes him feel like he should have better control. Apples and oranges, as far as I can see. Everybody is a little different.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

I guess Edward can breathe easier now that Bella has made it through to the other side. It's cute how all the family members are thinking in terms of their outlook on this vampire life. Jasper ought to be extra glad that everyone is so happy, it makes life way easier for him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 26

Hold on Edward, the end is near! This is may not be what he wanted for his Bella, but both mother and daughter seem to be safe now. All the wrinkles can be worked out, provided he has his girls safe.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

Most of us know what Edward was feeling during this changing time, but hardly anyone tells us how it affects Jasper! Great point of view!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

Edward is following Carlisle's procedure for transformation, including the prayers for success. That pretty much is all you can do, your very best and hope it works.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

Okay, so the snowball is rolling down the hill and gaining speed. You can kind of feel events speeding up, the goal is getting closer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

Being able to watch from outside the story, you can see all sides and perhaps understand the characters more. Everyone is woven tightly together and all now are focused on the coming child. The emotions couldn't get too much higher right now. All we need is a match on the gasoline.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Jake, lost his one ally in hatred for what was hurting Bella. No wonder he had a melt down and had to get out of there. Edward, however, is thrilled to be able to hear his child, loving it's mother as much as he does!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 20

I have always wondered why this solution didn't occur to anyone  before Jacob thought of it. All those vampires and nobody thought to give the baby blood? At least this gives some hope, which was absent before.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

Edward's on a mission now, he's going to save his Bella, come Hell or high water. Jacob wants to save Bella, too, but can't do the job  like Edward can. First, get the child delivered and rush to change Bella, and then take a leaf out of Carlisle's book, and pray.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

Something to do and a little hope, this is what Edward has needed. Jacob tried his best, but had no luck changing Bella's mind. Then again, he never had much hope she would listen to him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 17

Always did think that was a crazy idea. You can sure tell Edward is desperately grasping at straws. Jake is nearly as bad off to be considering such a harebrained idea. Bella should kick them both.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

Now Jake is getting a hint of the agony Edward is feeling. It seems to a sobering effect on him. It's kind of weirdly funny that the two that love her are starting to bond, just a bit.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

Jacob has one more reason to hate Edward, and this is the big one. Seeing the girl he loves, huge with the offspring of the creature he considers a monster, has to be his worst nightmare.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

Nothing quite like that helpless feeling you get, when someone you love is gravely ill, and you can't do anything about it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yes indeed, still a seventeen year old, full of fear, love and hormones!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward must feel likeGod doesn't love him, for sure. The one love of his long life could be carrying what may kill her, and he put it there. He's drowning in guilt and afraid he may lose Bella. It has to be like walking through Hell.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

I always thought it was a minor miracle that Rose could find love and enjoy it, after what happened to her. My only quibble with her was the way she treated Edward, acting as if he was going to hurt Bella. With Rosalie, it was the baby first, last and always, and to hell with anyone else or their feelings.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was bittersweet, running into the pregnant woman in the airport. Bitter for Edward, berating himself for endangering Bella, sweet for her to share some baby stuff with another soon-to-be-mom. The scene  at Sea-Tac was a total shock to Edward, he so didn't see that coming.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

Kaure has done a good job of scaring hell out of Edward. He's convinced all's lost and  they're doomed, poor baby. Little does he know, things will work out okay!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well, Edward's world is about to explode, and Bella will have her hands full with him and the baby. We all know how he freaks at first, thinking he's put a demon inside her. Silly vampire!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I feel a little for Kaure, wanting to say something, but fearing Edward. It is kind of sweet that she wants to protect Bella from the big, bad vampire. Little does she know, Bella likes big, bad vampires! At least the one that loves her, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

A much happier way to start the day!MaybeEdward can relax a bit now and just be man in love with his bride, on a tropical island and no one to bother them! Sounds pretty good to me!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

There's nothing in the world better than sex between two people who love each other, hence the description, lovemaking! Edward has to be glad Bella pushed him towards this .

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

You can kind of tell, Edward is fighting a losing battle , with his hormones as well as with his love for Bella. He can't keep denying them both what they want so much, it will only make them miserable.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Pretty much canon Edward, so far, beating himself up over Bella's bruises, and trying to convince himself celibacy is the only answer!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sneaky, teenaged, horny Edward! Who knew? It's fun to see him realizing how wonderful it is to be with his beautiful young bride. Honeymoons are great just for this very reason!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

So, Edward is stronger than he thought he was, to have resisted the pull of Bella's blood.

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow amazing i love it

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is so edward i love it is amazing

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

I have been reading through the story - it is awesome

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

woo hoo.   yumminess in the forest

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32

awwww poor seth

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love the insight of Carlisle trying to get her to drink formula.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

stink herbivores.  lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

always love that line when she threw the shoes back in.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 28

lol  big bro jazz is cool.  alice is so silly

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

lol   jazz the taskmaster

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 26

lol for rose and jake.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it so sad it over thanks for sharing this with us.......

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 32

Poor Seth always gets the hard stuff Loved it very much.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it I so wished she had kicked Jacobs ass in the book thanks for sharing this.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it very much and can't wait for more....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

Ya Ya Eddie she is all that and more lets get on with the hunting.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 28

Yaaaaa I like this part..........

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27

HOT ASS KISS that all that needs to be said.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it wow you were busy I hope I get them all read today.....

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

I loved the Jasper POV - I always felt BD - should have explored the birth from Bella's POV as well as Edward and the other Cullens.  I always thought Jakers POV was wrong AND yucky.  Imprinting on a baby is yucky.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it very much and i am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

liked the Jazz pov

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

That was a very nice chapter.  I liked hearing Jasper's POV.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well, luckily we know what really happens!! :-P Still, poor Jazz - I never thought about how overwhelming it must feel to read other's emotions before - AND be forced to feel them constantly - every day - with no way to stop.... Poor guy!! :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

Aw!! Poor Eddie!! He thought he'd lost it all but, no, lucky for him, he was in time!! :-P Good update!! :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am so happy you liked it:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24

That part in the book was intence I loved EPOV you did a great job thank you and I am so excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing and update when you can.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment.  I am updating as we speak.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

poor eddie

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

I loved hearing EDward's POV



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always felt it should have been in the novel.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

Interesting to see this scene since we didnt hear it in the book perse.



Author's Response:

I really tried to fill in the blanks.  Thanks !

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love how you wrote Edward's first expierience hearing the baby.



Author's Response:

I really wanted everyone to see how special it was for him, even if he was terrified of losing Bella.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

UGH!! Poor Jake - I liked how Steph did this in Jake's POV, T.B.H, 'cause I'm pretty sure we didn't have missed out on anything - even with him putting his wolfy stamp on things!! This EPOV angle is interesting though!! A-.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I just tried to round it out a bit.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

I always wanted to smack Rose in the book over these scenes.



Author's Response:

she did deserve it in some cases, didn't she?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

I enjoyed reading Carlisle's POV.  He is definately one of my favorite vamps!



Author's Response:

I thought it would be nice to see it from his analytical side.Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

poor sad eddie.



Author's Response:

Doesn't he just break your heart?

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

I really hated Rose at this point in the story only because she was always in the way of Edward spending any time with Bella.



Author's Response:

She did always seem to be in the way.  As much as it irritated me, I loved the back and forth between her and Jacob.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

I feel so bad for everything this is putting him through.  But I like that he is starting to think about how to save Bella.  I think it is good that he is focusing on something positive.  I also love the explaination of why he used a metal syringe for the venom.



Author's Response:

I tried to answer the questions that I had when I read breaking dawn.  I am so glad you feel as if it is filling in the blanks.

Reviewer: samteadee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

this is delicious and hot! ;)

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

Soooooo goood!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Eddie is hurting so much



Author's Response:

yes, his pain is soo intense.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ouch poor Edward.  What agony and humiliation.  I never understood why he would allow Jacob to be with Bella.  Hello sperm bank.



Author's Response:

It is funny how that idea never came up

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Edward.  He is killing himself with guilt and now he is torturing himself with the images that Jacob has running like a porno through his mind.



Author's Response:

I myself would hate to be a mind reader, you would see so many things that you would wish you never knew...Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

It was hard enough to read Edward's pain through Jacob's eyes in BD, but to be inside his head throughout this is ten times worse.



Author's Response:

It was hard to write it, since his pain was so intense.  But I think seeing it from his pov helped you see why he behaved the way that he did in the book.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love Rose's mental threats towards Jacob.  And why does everyone feel they can claim what is Edward's.  First Rose wants the baby and Jacob keeps referring to Bella as his.  I don't know how he doesn't completely lose it.



Author's Response:

He is really trying not to, I think he is accepting it as his penance for putting Bella's life at risk.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think it was kida selfish of Bella to want to call Charlie when she was planning on 'dying' anyways.  Actually, I think Bella is very selfish in this part of the story.  Can't she see the pain she is causing Edward?  All because SHE wants the baby.  Don't take this the wrong way because as a mom, I agree with her.  But Edward was thrown under the bus for making decisions without Bella's input, how is what she is doing any better?



Author's Response:

It should have been a joint choice, I agree.  but I think she got defensive since Edward approached it the wrong way.  As A mom also I agree with you.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Edward, he can't do anything without feeling guilty about it.



Author's Response:

he's guilty if he's sad, and guilty if he's happy..he needs a good kick in the pants.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

So the battle lines have been drawn.



Author's Response:

they have been drawn in concrete..lol

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Rose.  She can be a real bitch but it is almost impossible not to feel something for her when you remember what she has been though and what she has lost.  I wonder if part of the reason she chose Emmett is because he is so big and strong that she knew that he would always protect her even though as a Vampire, she wouldn't really need it?



Author's Response:

I agree...i think Rose is a complex woman, who is much deeper than she seems.  sometimes people find it easier to act the way others expect then to.  i think she loves Emmett ecause even though he loves her beauty, he knows there is so much more to her, and he doesn't take her nasty side seriously/

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved the add in of the interaction with Christine.  I also enjoyed the voluntary kidnapping of Bella and how Edward and Carlisle were stunned into inaction.



Author's Response:

I thought it might be nice to allow Bella a more human moment before the supernatural set in.  thanks

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

The conversation between Kaure and Edward was great.  I loved how you used SM's story and filled in the blanks.



Author's Response:

I had such a hard time, trying to stay to true to the books, it made it so time consuming, almost every spoken word from the characters was right from the book, I had to work carefully with what she had written.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love how you interpreted this part of the story from EPOV.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

Very hot sex and very sweet goodnights, loved it!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

I think Bella has created a sexual monster. ;)



Author's Response:

Hey she opened up a hundred yearold sexually frustrated boy...can't say I blame him

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

That was incredible!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward can be so frustrating some times.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

It is hard to read Edward's reaction that first morning.



Author's Response:

I was hard to write it, but I just tried to imagine how i would feel if I hurt someone I loved like that, even if it was an accident.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

LOL, Edward has a kinky side, doesn't he?  Having his way with Bella while she slept was hot.



Author's Response:

You can thank my husband for that, he tells me that I act out in my sleep, so I thought I would help him get Bella to act out too.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent begining.  I loved reading Edward's POV for this part of the story.



Author's Response:

I tried to fill in what was missing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

lol  jake is so funny



Author's Response:

I had lots of fun doing Jake's inner voice, we didn't get to hear what Edward could, so I thought we needed more.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: julesana8818 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was awesome, I need a cool shower......where is my husband???????



Author's Response:

lol,  I am glad you liked it...and I hope you find him fast.

Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good so far. Each time a different character speaks though it should be a new paragraph.

Author's Response:

your the first person to tell me that.  sorry if it doesn't get fixed, as this story is already completed, but I will try to remember that for any other stories I write.!

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wish BD had been more like this - sorry the JAkers POV was soooooo inappropriate



Author's Response:

I never really understood why it was done from Jake's pov.  I mean, don't get me wrong...I love Jacob...but this should have ben about Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm with Bella----I don't think I could have terminated the pregnancy even if my life was in danger of it continuing.  I think she want's to give her Edward the one thing he thought he could never have, a child, even if it ment she would loose her life.



Author's Response:

I agree, Bella is selfless like that.  I also think she knew that she would never have another chance at this miracle with him.  I would have kept the baby also.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

I just read all 11 chapters so far.  Like your version of their story very much.  Keep the chapters coming ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much  I am off to get the next capter ready !

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I give this story 10 out of 10!  xxxLisa.



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it so much!

I have mad esome amazing friends through this story.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi my dear...I thought I'd drop you your a review to get you started.  As you know, I'm such a fan of this story and I know that you will get a huge response to Isle Esme...well written!  Btw lilquackers is one of my faithful reviewers on Meadow, so she must like our style! hehe....

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