Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I totally loved Jasper's tire iron in this story. He, the tire iron that is, popped up at the most random times in the heat of battle...making me laugh so hard I cried. Additionally, I really liked your character development in the story...even though some where quite OCC you made it work. This is a heavy topic and a lot of times writers can horrible mess up (making it seem false or making it to funny) but you manage to balance it well. Kudos!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
"go all Scooby gang" haha love the reference. They do kinda match up like scooby & the gang. The Fred & Daphne are Em & Rose, Velma is Alice, Jasper for Shaggy that leaves Edward as Scooby (we know the real life RP can have some pretty goofy looks) and Bella is the victim?
Ok, maybe I'm reading to much into it, still...
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hello. I had this story in my favorites forever but never read it. I just finished reading the entire thing and I loved it. I think you did a great job developing the characters and you represented Bella and her complex feelings and fears so well. Great job. I am now going to make sure I read everything else you have written. Thank you for sharing your talent and ideas. I envy your abilities.
Vicki from Wisconsin.
Date: 26 May 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 36
You know........I read this story straight through from start to finish when you posted this last chapter. I absolutely LOVED IT !!!! I also loved the 3 outtakes that I've read. This was a really good story. Thank you so much for writing it ;-)
Date: 24 May 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 36
This was a great ending for this chapter of Bella's life. I loved that you decided to do sequel about the college years. I can't wait. It should be happier and Bella should just blossom with the new freedom and her love Edward.
Date: 23 May 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
"Noel, out of the box, baby," Alice pleaded with my fur baby, who just wagged her little behind and gave Alice a look of 'this is my box, deal with it'.
"Alice, it's ok. I'll just put that box out later." I laugh as the two have a stare off.
"Silly spoiled dog."
"Pot kettle, Ali," Edward taunts, coming into my room He picks up Noel who proceeds to give her Daddy lots of puppy kisses.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am happy that the kids got a peek at their future. I wish that Jasper could join the boys. It is hard being the only muskateer left at home. Maybe he can take the girls over to Seattle on the weekends, so they can all be together more often. I am glad that Bella found a way to be intellectually stimulated for her next two years of school. If she wasn't so emotionally imature, I would say graduate early, but she isn't ready for that yet. I hope Edward realizes that he will have to make a big effort to see her a lot. She needs to hear from him. I hope they at least Skype everyday, so she doesn't feel abandon. He helps her feel strong.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm a late joiner to the story. I am also familiar with abusive behaviors. Everything you've shared is very realistic. You are an execellent writer and I have truly enjoyed reading it. I hope you do a sequel. Great job with the characters.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this story. It's so sad that the abuse was based on real events but it's amazing that you have risen about it and can now write about your experiences. You are such a strong person and an unbelievable writer. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of this story.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
I can't help it, and I feel kinda silly about it… I miss my dog. Noel couldn't come to Seattle with us so she stayed with Billy and Jacob Black out on the Reservation. Jacob assured me that he speaks dog, so Noel will be happy and safe with him. Dad reassured me that Billy had dogs in years past and knows what to do. Edward being Edward made sure they had our Vet's number in case of an emergency.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love it! I am glad they will all be living together when they are at college. Ashley seemed real sweet. I wonder if she will end up being a great friend and maybe even living with them. I can't believe it is almost over. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 34
I think Charlie just confused Bella more about sex. Charlies should have just talked to Esme about talking to Bella. Some things are easier female to female. I am glad the prom was event free. They didn't need anymore drama.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm reading... I know I only found this story recently, but I for one love reading a story all at once. Its hard to keep 25 differnt stories alive in your head and have to wait a couple of weeks inbetween updates. So like I said I found this last week and have enjoyed all of your 34 chapters at once and have loved every bit of it. Thank you.
PS Read your OFT also and laughed and loved!
Date: 14 Jan 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
What Emmett did was priceless!!!!!!!!! Loved it. I am so glad that things seems to be going so good for all of them. All the teens have really been through a lot. They all deserve to have a GREAT prom. Can't wait for your next update. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is a fantastic story!! My apologies for not reviewing all along. I'll go back and review every chapter.
I'm usually not into "Bella/Edward teenage" stories much but I have thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Renee's family is one fucked up in the head family. Geez!!
I feel for poor Charlie. He can't catch a fucking break!! Poor guy!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
I was so excited to get this update!!!!!! I love love love this chapter. I love seeing Bella so relaxed around everyone. She is really becoming a part of the whole gang. I love how Rose started her conversation with Emmett. I am glad that Emmet called Edward for some help. Also glad that Emmet was there for Jasper. You are doing an amazing job with this story. I am so glad to have this update. Can not wait for your next one. Thank you for sharing this amazinjgn story with us.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love how much Bella has grown. It is because of all the support she has. Rose has come a long way too. I can't wait to see what "romantical" thing Emmett and Edward come up with. This is going to be great for Rose. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 May 2011 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
Excellent chapter with (finally) very good explanations for Bella's behaviour. This dissociation thing is really scary ! I hope she will get better. The boys were amazing litlle heroes ! Lol A very good chapter... Pray the next one will come soon.