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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

AWESOME!!! story ;) in your a/n at the top you mentioned that there's an epilogue to come? i REALLY hope you manage to come back and post it asap PLEASE ;D

Reviewer: KdanielleB Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it, please hurrrrrrry lol

Reviewer: Czar on Lyfe Conflicts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

This was a really great story!!!

Reviewer: Czar on Lyfe Conflicts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

She should have listened to Emmett

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

I hope this isn't the end?

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

Excellent story!!
I LOVE CIA & Mafia stories & this was no exception!!! It had so many elements of a great story...romance, friendship, humor, mystery, suspense, drama, CIA, Mobsters, danger & so much more!!! :)
U really should write more!!

P.S. I hope RL for you has improved over the years! I hate u had to go thru such a tough divorce & custody battle.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

First, I want to tell u what an awesome story this is!!! I can't put it down it's so good!!!
Second, u created a James that was actually likable & made a James & Bella couple with an intense, passionate, & loving relationship...at least in the beginning. :)
Thirdly, I abt fell over when u referenced Ridgeway, SC!!! I grew up in Lexington, SC before moving to NC in 1994. My husband & 2 kids moved back to Blythewood, SC in 2005 for his job for 2 yrs before he was transferred back to NC. In fact, we still own our home in Blythewood!!!
What a small world!!!
I would love to hear your connection to Ridgeway as it is a small town that few know of. :)

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

i didn't think you'd actually let bella leave with them. that was a twist. i know there are only a few chapters left, but i hate the thought of bella going anywhere with those psychos and leaving edward behind.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

for some reason, until now i didn't connect marcus/james with marcus volturi. this james is so very evil, and he really is crazy about bella (emphasis on crazy). poor edward must be going crazy because we all know bella would sacrifice herself to save the ones she loves.

Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

I just wanted to say, after reading your authors note in the beginning, you have a duty to yourself first and foremost when painting "your" vision. I'm appalled that some of your readers would actually send you hate mail, as if in order to sway you to write or not write the way they wanted. It's crass and dispicable. Take what you can from the haters if anything, and ignore the rest. Don't ever sell yourself short or change for anyone but you. I'm behind you 100%

Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

I have to admit I'm not an Edward/Bella paired fan. I'm more of a Jasper/Bella fan. Mostly because most Edwards in fics I've read and in the movie are emo and broody. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Rob bigtime. Anyway, I think your version of Edward is the best written that I've read so far. I really like him in this fic. You really are an amazing writer and after this I look forward to more of your stories:)



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Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

This chapter had me in tears. I have 3 boys of my own and can't have anymore. And even though I'm grateful for them, I still yearn for another. With that and this exceptionally well written chapter I needed half a box of Kleenex. Good job!

Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

Those were some great jokes! 

What does James think or feel about Edward's Affection towards Bella?

Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I really enjoyed this first chapter. When Bella spoke of the loss of her parents and the greif and sorrow her and Emmett share, I actually sobbed. It was pretty powerful. 

Great GREAT job on the beginning of what I'm sure I will find to be a wonderful fic.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

What a powerful plot and great writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that... Its taken me forever to finish it but now we only have the epi left...

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved it. Couldn't help liking James in the beginning though. Not enough chapters with her and Edward being together but I really enjoyed this story.

Author's Response:

I loved James throughout this story... even when he was an evil SOB... but he had to end... I am writing another story that is B/James, with a little bit of E/B in between... but I love me some James and think it's time for him to be a good guy for a change. Keep watch for my stories.

Reviewer: aliciaw68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

I really loved this story, thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my story and leaving a review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

wow... so I just found this and have been reading! WOW... This was an amazing story! I am happy that she finally got to kill him.  Can't wait to read the epi to see where everyone's future ends up! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. And thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

love it



Author's Response:

Thank ya

 

Reviewer: cts90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

so good ...



Author's Response: tee hee thanks

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 30

wow. so i read all 30 chapters today. I love it so far. Great story

Author's Response:

Wow... good job... those are pretty long chapters lol... Glad you liked it though.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

oh my goodness..................that was amazing........i cant believe james...hate him!!!! i love it amazing writing!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you.... Glad you loved it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 30

Welcome back & thank you.  Very well written!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved the ending! 



Author's Response:

Glad you loved it. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

Glad that it was Bella that got to take out James. Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response: I've had that planned since the beginning.. It always had to be her.

Reviewer: sheri2311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

bella's kinda dumb. any girl who puts up with that is.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm so sorry for the crap year you had...remember, HE never gives you anything he doesn't think you can't handle....it will just make you stronger!
Great chapter....I'm so glad you didn't drag it out. It has been a while (understandably) so a brief refresher was in order.
Honestly, I think whatever you write will be anticlimactic. Maybe a few chapters to wrap it up....is James dead? What happened in tuscany? Maybe a wrap and then if you feel like it, maybe a sequel like Love and Redemption or something like that..
Stay strong & best of luck to you!

J

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yeah!! A wedding, can't wait.

Reviewer: AJDG Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

Sorry to hear about everything you've been going through, glad it worked out for you in the wnd!

 

Love this story I need to go back and reread it from the beginning now that is back!

So glad that bella is safe and with little Emma again. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

Can't wait to get more of EPOV!

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

Ahwww!  So Sweet.

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm falling in love with James?  How is thus possible?

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

You're an amzing storyteller.  Throughly enjoying your writing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 29

It had been so long I went back and read the whole thing over again. It was just as good the 2nd time as it was a year ago. I Really look forward to the next chapter. Is it curtain time for James? Will the voturi leave Bella alone? Will Bella feel the need to disappear? That girl never thinks ahead and is too in the moment. Can't wait!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 29

glad that your back and im excited for the next chapter 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 29

love it so much

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

omg i love it!!! amazing!!

Reviewer: Caroline11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

This is amazing!!

Reviewer: msnathalie23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

I like Ryan too. He sound really cute.

Reviewer: TheRocker09 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 28

I have been reading your story from FF.net but saw that you are also posting it here. The reason why I signed up for this site was to read a fic that was moved here. Anyway, I hope you update very soon. I usally forget about what's going on in a story if it hasn't been updated in a while but it's hard to forget this one.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

I noticed that there has not been an update since July on this story.  I really hope you will continue to update.  Especially since it has been left on sort of a cliff hanger.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh no!  This should never have happened, with Phil being ex-CIA, they still have the resources and knowledge on tracking and rescuing. Where were their guns and weapons.  They never even had a chance to fight James and his thugs off.

Please have Bella and Emma make a speedy return to their family safely.

I'd like to see Aro punish James/Marcus severely for his degenerate and violent behavior with Bella.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

That just made my heart melt when Emma called Edward Daddy -- so adorable.  They finally get to be a happy family like they should have been all along.

Edward deserves happiness, for always being there for Emma and Bella and being such a gentleman and so very patient.  He makes my heart melt.  He will make a wonderful father.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

Greatg ending to the chapter -- very cleaver.  I'm so happy that they told Bella right away about not naming James as the father in any way, so he wouldn't have any rights.

I hope Bella gets payback for everything James did to her.   

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Not good -- James has now moved on to stalking.  I'm worried for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm completely shocked that James didn't go off about Bella going with both him and Edward to Prom.  Could he have been sincere about not being angry and jealous with Bella anymore?  Highly doubtful, but then he was fine with Edward rubbing Bella's feet while they lay by the fire.

I sure hope James doesn't know about the $450,000 of insurance money that Bella was left

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Damn!  I feel sorry for James.  Being a child of abuse really messed him up for life, unless he gets therapy, he will become abusive.  And, unfortunately, abuse always escalates and he's already shown signs of being mildly abusive with Bella.

Emmett is going to be so pissed off when he finds out.   He has quite a temper himself, this could get really bad.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

This is a really different James (in a way), he seems to really love Bella, but has future abuser written all over him.  I'm curious about what happened to him in his past.  I hope Bella puts a stop to this abusive, obsessive/posessive behavior quickly.

I have a feeling things are going to escalate when the Tequila comes into play.  It sure isn't going to make it better.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like the interesting twist.  Does Edward have a girlfriend also, or is he crushing on Bella? 

Reviewer: msnathalie23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

Is Edward and Bella ever gon be together in this story.

Reviewer: helese Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

I think this is one of the best creepy James. I'm so sad there's only one more chapter left for now. L&O has become one of my top favorites and I can't wait for more!

Thanks again for taking the time to share your story with the fandom.

Reviewer: helese Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Sorry I haven't reviewed until the 26th chapter... I just read your a/n at the beginning of chapter 27 and thought I'd leave you a review. I'm glad you didn't let those emails stop you from writing. This is a pretty long story and you've obviously dedicated a ton of time and effort to it, don't let the opinions of a few stop you from doing what you love! 

This is by far my favorite chapter so far! It's very suspenseful and I never saw your Aro character coming. 

Thank you so much for sharing your story with the fandom!

Reviewer: babygirlfrst Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 28

i am loving this story when are you going to update again?

Reviewer: SmergTheDinosaur Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 28

Ohmygoodness, I love this story, I just started reading it 2 days ago and I'm already done. You need to update it (please). Sorry if other people have given you bad reviews, but I love it. I think you are a great writer! Keep up the good work =)

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

i love it! i think alec and laurent are gonna help bella i love it! i hope james will get killed

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

bella..............she should do something to him in that room like look for something sharp

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

i love it i cannot believe them i wanna kill them!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

omg..............i love it someone help her!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

omg...........

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I LOVE IT! the wedding sounds beautiful even though its simple

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 22

awwwwwww i love it!!! emma is soo cute!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21

aw they should get married tomorrow then later when everything is safe have a real wedding i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

omg..............i hope she says yes i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

omg i love it!!!! they will now no! james better not do anything to emma

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

awwwwwwwwwww i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

awwwwww i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

i knew it was gonna happen sometime i love it!!!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

shes gonna get him back in jail!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

i love it! im happy they are over but i was hoping she would have ended it earlier

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

he should have said i love it!!!!!!!1 GRRRRRRR JAMES! i cannot believe bella didnt see it. she is blinded by love.......

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

i love it amazing!!!!! i listened to jimmy soul lol!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

the truck is james.....

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

i love it. bella might get pregnant! 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

i wonder what he did i love the prom!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

i love it!!!!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

omg bella ur in danger!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

i love it! i dont like james why cant bella see hes bad news?

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

i love it what bella said is touching!

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

i dont like james i love it though!

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

omg............i love it!!!!!

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

i love it!!!

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love it so far great chapter! i wonder what james did

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

great story!!! I can't wait for the next chap!! I am hooked!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

HOLY SHIT THIS CHAP WAS INTENSE!!! THIS STORY KINDA REMINDS ME OF THE MOVIE FEAR! I LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

loved the song. gonna have to downlosd it for my mp3, thanks.

it is nice to see that miss bella seems to have a few allies in the world of crazy she is stuck in right now. and the family knows were she is and are working to get her home.

i am all caught up now so please... update soon.

hope rl is treating you better! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 27

poor bella looks like in this one eddie is gonna have to save her from italy, but at least baby emma is safe at home.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

well holy shit! em and ed are gonna be so pissed at bella. i only hope that aro is honest in wanting to keep bella and emma safe and not just playing it up....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

just goes to show that you can know how to fight, shoot, and handle a knife but when fear gets you sometimes it means nothing...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

see i told ya jameswas just gonna get more pissed and things would escalate.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

Haha mine was just up from the courthouse wedding, I got married in my livingroom! Lol! Wow they are moving fast! But again I don't think james is gonna care about a wedding. I think this will just piss him off more!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 22

well now everyone knows and all they have to do is find a way to deal with james. i wonder what jasper is gonna say about james' past?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

oh boy looks like james doesn't really want baby emma. he seems to believe that edward is the baby daddy.

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

well something tells me that marrying eddie and saying he's the daddy is not gonna be enough to make james go away...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

well i must say miss bella is a lot like me, well minus the crazy staulker ex-boyfriend, and i had 2 kids, and some other storyland things. i remeber being a teen mom, going to prego school, realizing after high school that i needed to be home with my babies, and even waiting till my baby was in grade 1 before i got a part time job. being home with my kidlettes was awsome and i highly recomend it to all moms or dads!

i wonder how em is gonna take the truth?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yay baby emma is here! I remember having the babies, 10hours of hard labour with the girl and not even 25 minutes with the boy.

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

They are too cute with how they are together and em!? She's pregers it is not like she is untouched!
On a side note I remember prego school but we had more than a classroom, we had almost 200 students!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

well i am glad that james never got the chance to rape her. i figured that was how baby was gonna happen.

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

well that was a close one! about damn time she called to turn his ass in.

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

well it all seemed a little fishy, and now we know why. well bella now has someone to talk to about all of this crap. i sure hope when things get really bad bella will let ryan help her out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

ok i get the rough make up sex but seriously this girl needed to see something was wrong with that picture?!?!?!?! and the death threat against ryan? red flag, red flag hunny! poor eddie does he know it's james or is he thinking ryan too? and what about the fallout when james hears what the girls think happened?

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