Loved it 

Loved it 

Loved it 

thanks for the story i really ejoyed it!! i have thirteen on my alerts on ff and just waiting for you to finish.. i have soo many on the hook i can't read anymore!!!  thanks it was a great story!!!!!

awhh you are redeeming Ed.  how sweet!!!

okay girl you twisted it way way way!!! didn't see that coming!!

okay jasper don't go too wild!!!

this is getting scary!!1

that was close!!  james.... you are looking bad!!

wtf!!!! bella is going to go ballistic! i can't wait!!

okay must be bells that is pregers......

well jasper you don't have to be so mean... damn just piss on her!!!  at least you kina made up for it and gave her a O!!! 

crap!!  take him down jasper!!

oh crap it's going to hit the fan!!!

wow bells was a v?  edward you are sooo dumb!  jas is soo f-ing HOT!!

duh it's rose come on you aren't fooling any one!!  and here em is getting all the sex he wants and his cockblocking his sister!!

ed is evil and they stupid to think that ed is going to back down and she is stupid not to tell them of the threat.  and i still think he is behind everthing!!

ed you are a fool.. this is not going to end well

THis is an amzing story full of romance and mystery all rolled together with all of our twilight characters

OMG!!!  Please don't kill him!

not fair!

I hope it all works out with minimal damage.  I like that Edward is being slightly less dickish than he was earlier.  And Alice needs to be committed with a nice straight jacket.

Update soon please!

Fantastic chapter.  I love Edward in this chapter. lol.

You scared me at the beginning of this chapter. I actually went back and reread the last one trying to figure out when Jasper died. Not nice!  I'm glad he's alive and yeah, Bella's pregnant!

Poor Jasper!  I gotta say Rose was a little much, but I love how you opened the chapter.

Holy cow!  The answer better be a hell yes or something along the lines of.  Love what you are doing with this fic!

You updated - and made my whole week!!!!  Love you to bits!!  Great chapter - the playful and the drama.  As always, you are the best.  James is just too creepy there at the end, and something tells me Bella won't forget his "attack" soon or be able to deal with it well!  Brilliant touch there!  The mark of Bella and Jasper's true connection is in the fact that although it makes him ill to do it, he can still come out and ask Bella if James raped her immediately.  He's the support and the army all in one.  Knowing what Jasper knows now, I wouldn't want to be James!!!  The woman?  Gotta go with Alice on this one.  She wants something from Jasper...and Bella is in her way.  Bravo on another  outstanding "thinking" piece. 

Yes it was short, but I understand writer's block and stuff so I commend you on getting the chapter done given the hectic way your life has been.

I did enjoy the chapter and hope you'll update soon.

Great Chapter, nice lemonade. Can't wait for the showdown with James. I'm really looking forward to hearing that bucket of crazy.

Cheers, Balti K

uh-oh.  that doesn't sound good.  This chapter tasted of lemon-y goodness.  Amazing writing.  update soon please.

Yikes, I assume that he was not Jasper, and instead was Stefan? Where are Paul and Jared? The boys better come running.

Cheers, Balti K

Amazing chapter!  Your details make your work breathe.  Like the name of the lingerie shop..."The Knicker -Box".  Perfection and more than a lot clever!  I have a nasty feeling deep in my gut that Alice is going to get what she's after.  Creepy, but true!  I can't wait to find out.  Your work is always worth ANY wait!!

I am rather glad you didn't hurt him to badly.  I almost started laughing out loud when jasper's mom confessed her issues.  I caught myself in time to not wake up kids from their naps luckily.  I so knew there was more behind it then what she was letting on.  That thing with James is to creepy.  I am interested in reading what his office is like and what he has done that is so shocking.  For being a nerdy little thing Bella sure does attract alot of attention doesn't she.  Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading more.

Personally, I'm glad you didn't hurt Jasper too badly.  After all, what good is a dead Jasper?

Great chapter.  Loved the dream sequence.  Should have guessed something like that with Maria. Clever.

Can't wait to see what's in James' office!

Cheers, Balti K

You have so many possible suspects it's hard to figure out who is after them... or her... or him...

Excellent!  Sorryu to be so long reviewing but we were away in Washington,D.C.  Excellent chapter - you manage to get everything you need in there and more!  I so did not see that ending coming!  It was obscenely perfect!

OMG!!! Was Paul still in the car??? Not Paul! If J's mom hated B before, then I can't imagine her after this!

Author's Response:

No no, Paul was not in the car, but Jasper was NEAR the car.

i didn't see that coming. i want more right now

Uh oh. I can't wait for more and see how bell reacts to both the news and how jasper reacted and what he's been keeping from her. Lol

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

While I think what Jasper did was more than wrong, I think it's more than understandable!  Let's see - the man is in love with Bella, she has already been attacked more than once, there have been several death threats,Edward and all he brings with him, his own mother and Alice abused her in her own home and he's still chasing down the psycotic that started this all.  Add to that the holiday season?  Good God, I'm shocked the man didn't snap ages ago!  He needs to make it right quickly though.  One thing that caught my attention, how exactly does alice know Bella might have trouble conceiving?  That makes me more than suspicious!  Stunning chapter!  You never let us down.  Your chapters are always full of action, mystery, and emotional impact.  I swear they're almost juicy!  Outstanding stuff!

I cannot get over Jasper's mother.  What a bitch!  And the plot thickens with James in the old picture.

Bash the mother in law! I'm jumping up and down like Rockie! Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee! lol! Look forward to the next chapter!

Ah, Thanksgiving!!  You really nailed the familial tension.  Maria is more than a little interesting AND irritating...perfect character you created there.  And bringing in Alice!!!!  The lady needs to be handled.  Bella's smart.  I say she needs to find a way to put Maria in her place and teach her to stop walking all over her.  By the way, Am I losing it?  Probably, but have a heart and remind me what was in the box at the end of the driveway.  The scene with Edward?  Perfect.  He was just irritating enough, yet seemed sincere in his epiphany of Bella's ordeal and his handling of it.  Once again, you deliver for your readers and deliver big time!  Sorry I took so long to review, but family vacation called.

Ya know i would kill that woman if she did that to me.  I mean my in-laws are not the best and we have a few tense moments but they are respectfull for hte most part.  I think I really dislike Jaspers Mom at this point.  i hope Bella doesn't straggle her with her napkin or anything.  Thanks so much for theupdate and as always I look so forward to reading more of this never boring story.

Oh my god.. what a fucking bitch!! Shit, that has happened to me once when my ex girlfriend brought me home to meet the family, and the mother decided i wasn't the girl for her daughter, and invited someone that worked part time in her office.. my ex damn near slapped her mother accross the table.. the other girl looked so confused.. it was the best. Haha. Stupid bitch. :]

I loved this chapter!! Hurry back with more.

<3

Well at least we know why Jasper's mother hates Bella.  Bitch!  This is going to be interesting

priceless ending!!

I could never be mad you let them make up and have hot smexy time almost twice.  Bella not being pregnant is probably a blessing with all of hte crap she has been haveing to go through.  The kid would have came out with a nervous condition right from the get go.  As far as Edward, ug, who knows with that boy, I think he wines to much anyway.  He needs a life.  He is  probably all bitchy about Bella wacking Tonya.  I still think she should have hit her harder.  I can't fault Bella for being suspision.  I personally spied on my husband when we first got married.  I got pregnant right away and he worked with so fine skinny girls.  I was so worried he was going to cheat on me I almost wrecked my own marrage.  Thank good I got over that.  Thanks so much for updateing and continuing to share your wonderful roller coaster.

Nice red herring!!  Is wear I thought that both rose and Bella were pregnant!  Great choice though.  If anything is going to add to Emmett's conviction it will be his and Rose's child!  Let's see, Edward?  I think he's bound to be pissed, but maybe just maybe he'll finally have had a revelation waiting in that basement and decide to help find the guy who's after Bella.  Just a thought....  Mayber he CAN grow as a person as my daughter likes to say. 

I'm so very glad Bella isn't pregnant.  That would just suck.  And it's adorable how matter of fact J is about carrying around a pee stick for days.  Maybe this visit with Edward could be good?  A joining of forces?  Of course, how the hell did Rose let him in, is she nuts?

Can't wait for the next one.

Cheers, Balti K