Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:02 PM Title: Like a virgin
glad to read they contected on a personal level. But INCOMPLETE here. so not cool. Sort of wasted my time. Kudos for writing - but not so much for the abandonment.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:00 PM Title: Reasons
Yep some strong dom Carlisle is - pussy.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:55 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
Well that was painful to read. Statistic bitch
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:49 PM Title: The meeting
I held on to this fic for a long time.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2017 2:30 AM Title: Like a virgin
Oh come on?! Why have you stopped updating? I would absolutely love to see how things would develope between Edward and Bella!
Date: 21 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Like a virgin
Oh so good 😁 can't wait to read more
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:04 AM Title: Like a virgin
are you going to update this story ??
Date: 16 Jan 2017 5:45 AM Title: Sushi
Please please finish this story! I love it!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:23 PM Title: Soap cleans all
I love this story. Your grammar and spelling are immaculate!!! I don't know if there are so many BDSM stories or what but of all of them yours is by far superior. I can't wait to read more so I better scoot and read but I couldn't leave this chapter without telling you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you took the time to review the story. I whish I could publish more chapters in this fanfic right now, but I haven't had the time neccesary for long. However, I'm working on a one-shot fanfic in another fandom, not sure if it will fit in this library :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:17 PM Title: Like a virgin
OMG!!!! PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!! ;D i have some ideas if your interested in using them ? how about having edward get a weeping pheonix rising from his foot up his calf to cover the branding from tanya to show that he has healed? (get it heeled/healed) ha ha and have edward make bella his pa so she is his equal at work? ;D
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:22 PM Title: Like a virgin
Bad Tanya! Awww Edward and Bella..... Please update....... Oh and can we still be spanked just because?
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:21 AM Title: Initiation
its sad that you didnt continue this it was actually intoxicating
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:03 AM Title: Like a virgin
I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter! Well done!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Like a virgin
So good to receive an update on this story. I love it. I'm glad it's getting past the hurt and anxiety for Edward and hope all goes well for him. I have a feeling that Bella will make damn sure it does. Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:43 PM Title: Initiation
So glad that this story got updated!! Love it and keep it coming soon!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 11:33 PM Title: Like a virgin
Freaking love it! I have to say your story is by and large one of my faves especially with BDSM. Can't wait to watch Subward and Domella play!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:29 PM Title: Like a virgin
So glad that this story has come back to life. I love this version of Edward and Bella!! Thank you xxx Sara
Date: 20 Jul 2013 6:10 PM Title: Like a virgin
soooooo glad you are back!!! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Spank you very much!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 11:14 AM Title: Soap cleans all
Loved it!
Author's Response:
:-*
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:53 AM Title: New games at the club
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:38 AM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:28 AM Title: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: The business card
Loved it!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:55 AM Title: Young Bella moving to town
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Sushi
when are u going to finish this?
i like the story
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 8:49 PM Title: Sushi
I am SO excited I found you on here!!! I was reading on the other site, but now I will stick with this one!!!
I love this story. Very hard to read the scene that got them to this point, but the story has been great!!! Can't wait to see what you do with these characters!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:42 AM Title: Mistress Tanya
Okay okay okay. Dont be pissed most people just jump to the next chapter so eager to get pleased by another chapter as good as the last.
BTY daaaammmmnnn.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 9:38 PM Title: New games at the club
Daaaaaammmmnn. Girl where have u been all my life?
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:23 AM Title: Sushi
Please tell me you are still continuing this I love it!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:13 AM Title: Initiation
I reallly like this story. Do you plan on finishing it or leave us hanging????
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: New games at the club
well written and refreshingly different, enjoying every word of it.
thanks :)
Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
i like EPOV =)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Initiation
I'm just finding this little fic now. Nice first chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have in store. =)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:10 AM Title: Sushi
I just love your writing and story, and I hope you will continue with this one.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Sushi
Some one needs to beat Tanya with that cat!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:20 AM Title: Sushi
What a great story - just found it today and read all the way through. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops from here!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:21 AM Title: Sushi
i just found ur story recently and have been trying to catch up quickly. i love this story and hope you update soon....i dont know how long its been since i just found it, but hope i dont have to wait long...cant wait for the scenes with these two!!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:33 PM Title: Sushi
Love the story so far can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:04 PM Title: Sushi
Since I gather your near hatred of readers that fail to review, I thought I should do my part to alleviate that. I just stumbled upon this story yesterday and love it so far. Tanya is a grade A bitch and sincerely hope that you take her sorry ass to the head of The Family for disposition. Anyway, I look forward to the rest of this story and plan to check out the blog later.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:11 AM Title: Sushi
Delicious lemon, and still sweet and soothing time between them. I'm enjoying it while it lasts! PS, i hate tanya...
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:55 AM Title: Under the canopy
Thank goodness, a Carlisle/Tanya showdown. Grr, I really hate that woman. Regardless of what has happened to her it has perverted her basic humanity. Can you tell she is a sore subject? Now Bella's massage of Edward was lovely, you can really sense her care for him through her actions. I know it won't always be this way, but this is what this chapter called for. I have no doubt that Bella will rise to the occasion, if Edwards dreams are any example.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:44 AM Title: Awakening
Ah yes, that makes me feel better. Bella had the exact response to that horrific scene that I thought a sane person should. I guess as a reader I am reacting far more strongly than someone in the club would have, without the prior knowledge of Edward's hard limits and tendency to trust his Dom not to push him to safe word. It's difficult to read all of Edward's pain and panic, and it was gut wrenching. Very good writing though!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:26 AM Title: Crush
Ooh goody, just what I was hoping for! It fits perfectly that Madam Bella would be the one to give him aftercare. Now please tell me Carlisle kicks that f**cking sadist out of the club!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:20 AM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
Argh, yes I HATE Tanya, but that's what you were going for right? She is the epitome of a bad Dom, exploiting the trust that a Sub puts in the Dom to have their SAFETY in mind at all times! And for all her steeliness, she really is a coward for just not backing out of the relationship with Edward.
Phew, there, I feel better. Now on to delicious sexting betweenst Madam Bella and her pet, yum!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:17 AM Title: Sushi
This was my favorite chapter at all !!!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:03 AM Title: Sushi
Thank you for the update! It was well worth the wait. Well written, thought out, and perfectly planned. I love that Edward and Bella are finally together.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:08 AM Title: Sushi
Nice, update. Both comforting and erotic.
I feel for Edward and hope that he don't let what Tayna did to him hurt him too badly emotionally. I hope he realized that he did not really love her and should not have allowed her to brutalised him like that in order to get her favour. I also don't think that he should enter into another submissive relationship in the near future, notwithstanding, how much he might want to do so and Bella should not push him in that direction with her actions. He needs a friend, even one with benefits and he needs to understand that safewording is not a weakness or a failure on his part. Update soon.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:39 PM Title: Sushi
Well! That was satisfying. Worth the wait. I sincerely hope the next chapter will be up faster since you are not on vacation any more. I have about 20 stories I am following right now and you are at the top of my list so hopefully I will have something to read at least twice a month.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:20 PM Title: Sushi
Wow! Whilst it's nice to see them forming a relationship and already having a wonderful start to their sex life, why does Edward always have to have an unfeasibly large cock? It's sure to make any of the (mythical) male readers feel inadequate and it makes me jealous that my beloved has a rather average sized dick. Please let Edward have a fault, even if it's a tendency to not floss daily or have smelly feet. LOL
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:32 PM Title: Sushi
He sounds just about impossible to resist, Geeez!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:47 PM Title: Sushi
yay! i love this story and need you to write more, more, more! fantastic highly recommended
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:09 PM Title: Sushi
Outstanding, great chapter. Please update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:01 PM Title: Sushi
I missed you!!!! So glad your back and Domella is here to kiss it and make it all better...can´t wait for more...and trust me no matter how long in between updates...I will most definitely be here...Thanks for a great story!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:27 PM Title: Sushi
The chapter was worth the wait. I really liked the chemestry between Bella and Edward.
I was glad that they didn´t start a BDSM relationship when they didn´t talk about their limits in this chapter. I think it´s really important that Edward can learn how to trust again.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:28 AM Title: Sushi
Hello,
I think that's the first time I review your story.
I love it. Thank you for all those good reading moments.
(and please excuse me if I made some mistakes in English which is not my language)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:32 AM Title: Sushi
That is one hell of a way to get to know each other I am so happy that they both talked about when they first meet.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:31 AM Title: Sushi
OMG i so loved that chapter. edward is no fool. he knew tanya wanted to get rid of him and yes she did. he is better off without her. i am hoping karma is a bitch and it rears its ugly head. watch out tanya. bella is so good for edward. it seems they feed off of each other so well. the electricity. bella craves and lives to be a dom and she is a good one. tanya is a poor excuse for one. i wonder what excuse carlisle will give bella for what tanya did and maybe why there are no repurcusions. hmmm i so love this chapter hot and hotter. i want me an edward with a huge cock he knows how to use. love it
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:52 AM Title: Reasons
Carlisle is a coward. He should stand up to Tayna. His reasons are not good enough for allowing her to do what she did to Edward.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:36 AM Title: Under the canopy
I think that Edward, after what Tayna did to him needed to thank Bella for her care and leave that life for a while to think and heal. He should not be with another domme after what that bitch Tayna did.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: Under the canopy
Okay, I'm sure you meant "utmost" not "outmost". Very good move on Bella's part. She knows her stuff. Anxious to see how this relationship develops.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:38 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
WOW! Poor Edward! Pride goeth before a fall, I believe. You've got some imagination!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:22 AM Title: Under the canopy
OK so I just got caught up on this story today, internet have been hard to come by for the past six weeks :-)
I love it, I really like that she offers to take care of him, and let him decide if he wants to go, and that she is so gentle with him, I am sure that is what he needs right now.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:43 AM Title: Under the canopy
cant wait to read chapter 20
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:03 AM Title: The meeting
so far, so good.
i am going to keep on reading, cant wait for them to interact.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 9:25 AM Title: Reasons
Umm....Sorry, but as far as I'm concered, Carlisle is more then just a Wuss, he doesn't even deserve respect, and doesn't deserve Esme for how he feels towards Tanya after Tanya effectively blackmailed Esme into giving her all that money, losing her home and continues to blackmail. I can't believe he's secretly in love and lust with Tanya after damaging the woman he supposedly loves. He'a a total wasteoid and creep! If it was just the fear of her hurting Esme that keeps his mouth shut then hey I could have somehow forgiven him, but this other bit? No way!! I hope you don't write about this total loser again.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 8:50 AM Title: Crush
About time! God that Tanya is a piece of work, I was so hoping Edward would safeword before she got to that point, although it probably would have to get to that point for him to safeword. Why would she be so prideful and not just let him go without this scene? She went against most of his hard limits for Godsake! I'm still trying to understand why he loved her though..who could love someone so fricken cold?
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Under the canopy
Thank you for the update! Love your story and submissive Edward.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:01 AM Title: Under the canopy
more,more,more!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Under the canopy
I just starting reading this story and had t read till I got to the end... Tanya, well once a bitch aways a bitch. I so hope Bela figures out the litte deal going on between Carlise, Esme and Tanya because that is just not right....Massaging Edward, YUM! I am sure Bela will be the strong woman Edward needs, heehee
Date: 31 Jul 2010 10:20 AM Title: Under the canopy
I just found this story and may i say fanfuckingtastic i totally love Dommella and subward. I am actually writing a Domme/sub story of my own called Plain Jane by day Domme by night.
Kepp up the excellent work can't wait to read their first scene i get the feeling it is going to be explosive.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Under the canopy
i'm enjoying this story. i would really like to see an outtake of Edward and Aro's training..
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:14 PM Title: Under the canopy
Awww. So glad she took care of him properly. Personally, I was hoping she would bath him before the massage, as that is what he always does for her in every bdsm fic and he certainly could use the pampering since Tanya never gave him any love. Oh well, maybe in the morning?? Can't wait til they talk...
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:10 PM Title: Under the canopy
Great chapter!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:39 PM Title: Under the canopy
Oh how sweet is Bella !!! I'm looking forward kinki things and bad Bella !! :-)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Master Aro
FYI.. I would like an out-take of Aro + Edwards trainings and punishments..... Just an idea. I like your story just as it is.
Oh, and at the end of paragraph 7ish there is a note from your Beta to you in parenthesis that didnt get removed....just fyi
Author's Response:
I was actually thinking about the very same thing last night, an outtake with Aro and Edward, so maybe it will happen, who knows?
Thanks for pointing out the error, I'll get to it right away!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: New games at the club
Trying to comment at leat every other chapter....sorry. I just keep saying "I love it".
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
Love it! You write the cocky bastard well. LoL
Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Flashbacks
Wow.... very different from other D/s fics I've read... Keep em coming! (literally).
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:05 PM Title: Initiation
I like Carlisle as a Master....yummy. I look forward to seeing new chapters post.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:34 AM Title: Under the canopy
they got to have their lovey dovey time and it would seem that thankfully tanya has not completely broken eddie's trust for others in a dominant role.,
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:24 AM Title: Under the canopy
great introduction between the teo
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:20 AM Title: Awakening
am i allowed to review more than once? how smutty can you get? i think these 2 really need to have some lovin'even if their kind of lovin'is a bit more than most would want.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:03 AM Title: Reasons
poor carlisle! i mean it is kinda fucked up that he thinks his kinda step daughter once removed(?) is sexy and gets hard looking at her but still tanya is a bitch and is holding carlisle and esme hostage with her blackmail. maybe esme needs to know what she is trying to pull, maybe that would help her tell the bitch to back the fuck off. i mean carlisle and esme by default are allowing people to be placedd in danger simply so the kids don't find out their daddy was a dick head, two timing mother fucker who beat their mother and fathered a sick, sadistic, twisted bitch?!?! come on the kids will get over it and they deserve to know what kind of a bastard their father really was and that they should watch out for tanya.
ok i think my rant and rave session is over... yup pretty sure it's done now.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:37 PM Title: Crush
#1 - i am sorry for your loss and pray that peace finds you and your loved ones in you time of sadness.
ok well like you said in your reply to my review way back when... kinda like i had it but not. my meeting was happy and sexy yours was scary and painful. but their eyes met and the recognition was there and now they can move forward in all senses of the word and find happiness together in the playroom and in real life.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:24 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
well eddie tried to be brave and to stay 'in the game' too bad tanya broke all of the rules and forced him to this point. at least he will have miss bella to help heal him mentally, physically and emotionally. shit like this could turn someone away from what they want and need in thier life purely out of fear and pain. there are better, less insane ways to end a relationship!
tanya is a BITCH! sorry again just had to throw that in there.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:11 PM Title: On the floor
I think the bj thing was done rather well. Especially with edward's realization it is not about gender but about dominance and submission.
Tanya is a bitch! Just had to throw that in.