Date: 08 Jan 2022 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see this expanded......what happens to james...charlie...more please
Date: 04 Oct 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad E got her out of there. Charlie needs to be hanging next to James. Hope you extend this one day
Date: 25 May 2019 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great one shot and foundation for a future amazing story.
I’ll try to be patient as I can!
Date: 27 Jun 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am looking so forward to you continuing this!!
Date: 10 May 2018 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! I hope you expand it!
Date: 28 Apr 2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent one shot!
Just an incredible link between Edward's normal life and his mafia's life with Jame's torture room in Edward's home basement... It should be elsewhere. Also how can Bella feel safe in the same place as her husband ? She should become a widow.
Date: 25 Apr 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
would have liked a longer version
Date: 17 Apr 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
love this story
please expand it
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was short and sweet. Thank you
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww I want more please make in to a full length story please
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, please continue this.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh WOW!! This was so good. Will there be more chapters? I hope so. Thank you so much!
Date: 17 Apr 2018 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. So much in one little chapter. TY for sharing.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yours was so much better than the others!