[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2020 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! Would be great if there was an epilogue or something. Great job!
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story with an interesting plot... But the ending seems a little bit "in a hurry". We want more !!!
Date: 17 Apr 2018 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
aww for the 
at the end.
Thx for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Did Bella not recognize Tanya? hmmm. interesting.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Barricade indeed........
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG you love the agnst. Thank goodness next chapter is waiting for me.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm lemme guess....the slut is the sister of Skankya?
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow you keep dropping all these leading hints....got me rethinking who dun it.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad P and J talked things out and that B stayed over with him.
LOL Us 'merican's don't say jumper......
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yea more and more I think Maria is involved.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm maybe Maria and Eddie working together....hmmm
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmm sounds like her "ex" is going to be behind it all. Poor kid dying.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
ugh we get the walk of shame but not the good stuff. ack.. Cute pic tease though.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad the next chapter is already there for me to read. Otherwise would have been an evil tease. Yummy teasing so far though.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow her ex sounds like a real piece of work.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Go Kick Ass Bella. Sounds like Jasper is in for a little bit of hurtin'
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesing start. Like seeing a strong Bella right off the bat.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW!!!! Hella ending!!! It sounds as if things are going to work out and be okay!!! I'm glad they finally got to tell each other I love you!!! Awesome story!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
She's alive and I hope she's not to badly injured although she bad off as I write this note.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a horror!!!!! I was in a gas explosion when I was fifteen and I've been terrified of fire ever since then!!!
I hope she makes it!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, My Lord what a nightmare!!!!! I hope Bella survives!!!! I'm nearly in tears.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, Bella certainly can't seem to catch a break, today!!! I don't know how she's functioning after the emotional blows she' received!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
So, whose been killed now????
When Em's serious, it's never good!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
This chapter was a treat to read!!!! You've nailed Charlie!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Things are beginning to shape up and while I knew Jasper and Peter had suffered great tragedy, I never thought it was going to be as bad as it is!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Plot thickens and I no more innocents are hurt or killed and it includes the firemen and cops!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
WOW!!!! Hella morning!!!!
I'm glad they made it out alive. I'm sad about the young boy!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
It's not!!!!
Fun chapter!!! Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, My, My, My what a rush and it's so very, hot!!!!!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Steaming doesn't even begin to cover it!!!!
I'm so happy E. Cullen is a jerk in this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hell of an introduction for Jasper!!!!
I really enjoyed and can't wait to see what happens with Emmett!!!1
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start to this story!!! It was frightening and scary with all the risks and injuries. You really made it come alive!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome last chapter, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome chapter 14, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter 13, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome chapter 12, I loved it
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter 11, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awesome chapter 10, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome chapter 9, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter 8, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter 7, I loved it.
DabD
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter 6, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter 5, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story, loved it!
XoxoxoX
Alia
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter 4, I loved it.
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter 3, I loved it. Question when you call them a candidate do you really mean cadet?
Dani
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome chapter 2, I loved it.
Dabi
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2018 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how you consider car wrecks with death, fluffy. LOL. But the story is great so far. I love their team work.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome first chapter, I loved it.
Dani