Date: 14 Nov 2023 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed every chapters of it apart from where Maggie and Mr Buckley were involved lol.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Johnny did not have a good role model
Date: 03 Jul 2019 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great epilogue! Poor Johnny!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Poor Bella and Edward!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
The wedding was really sweet and romantic!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Amazing!
Date: 02 Jul 2019 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Terrific!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
I know! I know!!! It's been just under 2 months since you completed this sweet little gem but I couldn't let it go. I couldn't read this last chapter because then it would be over. You did great and Yes!!! you did it justice. THANK YOU!!!
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 11 Jun 2018 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the futuretakes.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can always count on you both for an interesting twist in your stories and you never disappoint. This epi was the perfect example of that extra added twist. Thank you again. Hugs. Later...
Date: 11 Jun 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
That’s an exciting way to enter the world. That little Kassie is a hoot.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow this is the first time Forks was written as some sort of utopia. I understand Bella’s fear. My family had a similar accident except the driver that hit us on he bridge was in a semi and fell asleep not a crazy chick that can’t take a hint. Getting back in the game takes time.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay Mike! Edward’s right he does need a nice girl (not vapid Jessica ). And justice needs to be served to Maggie, her Dad and Angela. And what’s the final word on Buckley. I hope they have a boy.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like Jakes ritual in the ceremony and what they said to the kids so sweet.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
These 6year olds are awfully precocious. Planning a wedding wow. And we know what Maggie and Buckley are playing at although Maggie’s is misguided because Edward will never want her. But Charlotte is after what?
Date: 10 Jun 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I’m glad Mike is a good guy but I am not surprised about this Charlotte person. I can’t imagine a court taking those girls. An aunt doesn’t have the same rights as parents and it’s her word only her druggie brother gave her the girls. The drama is good though and it got them to engagement and ‘I love you’s’
Date: 10 Jun 2018 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay arrogant enemies so far are...Maggie, Mr. Buckley and mysterious Charlotte. Also I’m still not sure about Mike thinking the girls remind him of someone he knew or the fact that someone was looking into the girls file according to Tia the social worker. If Mr. Buckley is single and wealthy Maggie should go after him and they can be cray, cray together. JS
Date: 10 Jun 2018 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
What is Maggie using this Charlotte for I wonder? What’s she plotting? Mr. Buckley is in government ? So he’s going to get revenge? Aren’t the Cullen’s crazy powerful in his story. Let’s start doling out some Justice Cullen Style! Hehe I’m glad we are approaching the end of the friends with bene phase. No good comes from that at all.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
So Mike and Maggie know to move on. We’ll see *smirk* Also I hope Mike isn’t the bio dad or knew the Bio mom but it sounds like you’re leading us that way based on his comments. Is it?
Date: 10 Jun 2018 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay this arrangement isn’t good for Co-parenting. But at least they fought and worked it out towards resolution. And Rosalie is annoying on a regular but she bugged me here.I dont know why. And why do these adults need a 6 year old to protect them from cray cray Maggie and gross Mike. Hehe! I agree with the 6 year old you need to tell them NO I’M NOT INTERESTED! Why are Edward and Bella playing nice with these two?
Date: 09 Jun 2018 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
This bet of flirting should be interesting. I hope it doesn’t lead to this fight they seem to be anticipating. Girls are plotting which is cute and Maggie is still stalking which is creeptacular! She is an odd duck that one.
Date: 08 Jun 2018 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Maggie is surely cray cray. That entire dialogue at the party was odd. She’s got stalker written all over her. The comfy day was sweet.
Date: 08 Jun 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Are you sure Cordie is only 6 1/2? ;-D
Date: 08 Jun 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great Edward mellowed because hea is more fun when he’s on board. I love the nick name Teddy for Edward.
Date: 07 Jun 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Kassie is a handful. And Jessica is a Skankica for sure. Was she saying all of that in front of the kids? Now Edward should want her fired!
Date: 07 Jun 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
That Kassie is a little Emmett! Hehe It’s to bad Edward jumps to conclusions and Bella has the level head. But it’s always enjoyable to watch it unfold. Slimy Mike! I’m with Kassie. She can do better.
Date: 07 Jun 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I am so happy you ladies have finished this story. I didn’t want to read it as an WIP because I love your shit so much I always power through fast and joyfully. Anyway, very good start and I’m all in. Side note I love that your subsequently de-fanged and de-clawed Tanya and Jacob respectively. Hehe. Kudos!
Date: 06 Jun 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love love love the ending to this awesome story. Thank you for sharing it with us .
Date: 04 Jun 2018 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Freaking Perfect honestly would love to see these guys more!
Date: 03 Jun 2018 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the ending! Would have liked an Edward and Bella POV, but great ending nonetheless
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for another awesome story.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jun 2018 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was great thanks so much for another amazing story. I will be looking forward for what you do next.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
:) loved this story
Date: 31 May 2018 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this chapter. Your ending for these two lovely, but oh so different, girls was just perfect. Kassie was always the "tomboy" kind of girl, so it makes sense that she is more physical and loves to play sports. I also love the twist about Johnny/Matt and how that turned out in the end. Cordie's much different destiny also was a very sweet one. You two wrote a wonderfully romantic and relevant to today story. I enjoyed everything about it. Can't wait to see what comes next from your talented pairing.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed the glimse into the future. Buckley hopefully got arrest and beat up in jail. mwahaha
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2018 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome end. Love seeing Matt getting to a better place. Awesome kids who are awesome adults.
TY for writing and sharing ladies!!!
That attendance thing I totally disagree with....just encourages parents to send their kids to school while sick. But I digress.
Date: 08 May 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
The babies took over the show to cute. They are an amazing family. This has been a great story thanks so much.
Date: 03 May 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
This family is so cute. They need some fun and happy times without danger and fear.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2018 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
An exciting chapter.
Sherry
Date: 25 Apr 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Freaking amazing story I love it so much.
Date: 24 Apr 2018 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
It’s so great to see the girls becoming individuals independent of each other with their own styles. I loved Edward and Kassie at the stock exchange! She’s gonna be a force to be reckoned with when she’s older! Of course, Bella and Cordie at the theater was great too. That was so scary when Bella faded out. I’m so glad the boys are here and everything is okay with them. I can’t wait to hear how everyone adjusts to having two babies in the house. I’m a mother of 5 children with my middle daughter sing only 14 months older than my twins making it more like triplets a lot of the time. It was extremely busy and difficult at times to juggle, but we all survived and my twins will be 18 in June. Can’t wait to see what life is like for all 6 of them. I hope you’re able to give us multiple time periods in the Epilogue to see how crazy life is for them all. It’s sad that this story is ending, but I’m sure there will more great stories to come!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so glad the boys got here ok. Also glad that Bella is ok. I can imagine how scared Edward was.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
It was kind that the cast gave Cordie new tickets. She was so grown up and helpful when Bella went into labor.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update...well done...Kassie on stock exchange..to funny, girl knows her stuff...Cordi getting tickets to see play again and all her signatures, I'm happy for her. Thank god Edward made it on time for the babies!!!well done...until you post again
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wowsers. Great chapter. You had be scared with the passing out. Was thinking she'd not be able to have any more kids.
Date: 23 Apr 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Whew! That was a close call! Maggie had to cause just one more problem for them, didn't she? I hope that's all and am happy she didn't get to go to a mental hospital. It seems like this story came to an end very quickly and I will miss reading it when it is over. You guys have written another loveable, angsty, happy story. Thanks for all that you give your readers. I, for one, always enjoy them. One more to go, then it's over. Thanks again...
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Keep on writing
Date: 16 Apr 2018 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope they have twin boys that look like Edward. Charlie is a a fine name, but not Renee. I think they need civil charges also.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
ALL CAUGHT UP AGAIN AND BOY THAT WAS SOME CHAPTER!!! THE NEXT CHAPTER CAN'T COME FAST ENOUGH!
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 07 Apr 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the trip back to Forks and how everyone loved Bella and Kassie. I'm glad Maggie pleaded guilty and they did not have to go through a trail. Loved the reactions of Kassie and Cordie to the babies.
Date: 05 Apr 2018 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
I’m glad they didn’t have to go through a trial but I hope Maggie gets jail time.
Date: 30 Mar 2018 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the town and people they care so much for Bella and Kassie. I love it the girls each get one lol.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2018 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this entire chapter so worth the wait :)
Date: 28 Mar 2018 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
I didn’t see twins coming. That’s awesome. One for each of them. I have twins and it was nice to have babies to share. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the trip back home. Glad she got a chance to say goodbye. Figures about the trial. I got stuck on jury duty a bit back and were almost to day 3 and they changed their plea. Ugh so annoying.
Driving lessons are an awesome idea. Cant wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2018 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for this new chapter. It left me wondering just exactly what happened with Maggie that she pled guilty. I know what you wrote, but there seems to be more underneath. At least it feels that way to me. Maybe I am imagining it...Time seemed to zoom by in this chapter. I know you are heading to wrap up the story in just a few chapters, so I guess that's why. I'm with Edward in thinking that Maggie certainly did not get a big enough sentence if there is still a possibility she can get a little psych time and then be free again. I was hoping she would get harsher sentencing. We shall see. Thanks for writing this lovely story. There has been some angst, as there is in life, so I'm good with that on a realistic level. I can't imagine anything else coming back to bite them in the ass. They have endured enough. Until next time...I hope you two are well and thriving.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Surprised about the guilty plea. I can't help but wonder if Maggie will escape the facility.
Sherry
Date: 28 Mar 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sooooo, July 20th is not too early fortwins is it? Just a guess.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story, but it's been almost a month between updates☹️. I remember when a week was hard enough to wait.
Date: 23 Mar 2018 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love how close this whole family is?
Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
awww the kids singing was really sweet. The driving lessons sound like a really good idea.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2018 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think this is one of the best chapters.
Sherry
Date: 26 Feb 2018 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love the kids singing for her that was the sweetest thing ever. love this story so much
Date: 26 Feb 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's so nice to get a chapter of this story. I love it a lot and miss it when the chapters are so far apart. No criticism...I know you guys are doing the best you can and I always appreciate your efforts. I like that your Michael Newton is a nice guy. Too many stories make him not so nice. He needs some love too, sometimes! It hurts to see Bella healing so slowly and being in a lot of pain. Everyone is doing their best to take care of her. She's one lucky woman! I hope you guys are doing well. See you next time!