Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this beginning.
Date: 28 Dec 2019 1:46 AM Title: Epilogue
Sweet story!!!! Thanks for your time and dedication to bringing us a "time-out" from our real lives!
Date: 22 Mar 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella is being bitchy. She needs to use her anger against Jacob, not her team.
Date: 21 Mar 2018 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Awesome ending. Think Carlisle got off easy. Glad E helped Esme in the end. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Feb 2018 5:13 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story thanks so much. To be inside your head must be a wild place to be lol. Great ending to there new begining
Date: 26 Feb 2018 3:43 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 26 Feb 2018 12:52 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome story!!!!!!!! I have really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 25 Feb 2018 11:24 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful finish! These guys totally deserved the happiness they got there at the end of the story after all they went through. I don't blame Edward one bit for Esme's fate. She deserved it. At least she got to live and had one of her children in her life. Thanks for always finishing the stories you write. This is VERY important to me as just a small percentage of you actually do this. It is those of you that do finish that I choose to keep reading.
Date: 25 Feb 2018 7:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Noooooo. I don’t want it to end, it is such a good story
Date: 24 Feb 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
So glad Edward got to talk to his father. Bless Rose's heart. I know Emmett will be patience with her. They both need time to heal. I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Can't wait as always for the last and final chapter. I'm kind of sad for it too.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Rose. Hope she and Em can get closer on the island. Neat thing at the end with his dad.
Date: 20 Feb 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 34
I have loved this story and will be sorry when you mark it compleat but that just means you get to work on something else new :)
Date: 19 Feb 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter, keep writing
Date: 19 Feb 2018 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
I hate that it’s coming to an end. But I am anxious to see how their lives are going. How awesome that Edward’s father came to them and was able to spend some time with them and share their history.
Date: 18 Feb 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thanks for always following through and finishing your stories. You're one of the few who do. As a reader, I very much appreciate your dedication to this. This is a nice touch here, having Edward's father reincarnated as a homeless boy and finding them. I wish you all the best. I know a teacher's life can be difficult at times as your lot is very underappreciated and underpaid. Your words ease my day. Thanks is a pale representation of what I feel about you, and other fan fiction writers and what you all give to us.
Date: 14 Feb 2018 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
nice update...
Date: 14 Feb 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
reconection is a good thing now they can continue on with what else they have to do.
Date: 13 Feb 2018 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter, keep writing
Date: 12 Feb 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome reconnection.
Date: 12 Feb 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great story and excellent chapter ! Love your work !
Date: 12 Feb 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great story and excellent chapter ! Love your work !
Date: 12 Feb 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great story and excellent chapter ! Love your work !
Date: 12 Feb 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great story and excellent chapter ! Love your work !
Date: 11 Feb 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
Their healing was so sweet and tender. I'm glad the others left them alone.
Date: 11 Feb 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
Their healing was so sweet and tender. I'm glad the others left them alone.
Date: 11 Feb 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 33
Their healing was so sweet and tender. I'm glad the others left them alone.
Date: 11 Feb 2018 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 33
How good it was to read about Edward's recovery in his POV. I enjoyed that very much. Thank you for all you give to your readers.
Date: 05 Feb 2018 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank goodness he wasn't a human.
Date: 05 Feb 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 32
A lot happening in this chapter.
Date: 05 Feb 2018 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
why didnt Carmen tell her that before? So glad he is awake
Date: 04 Feb 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 32
They won! The battle is finally over, but not without deep casualties. I'm glad they were able to save Edward. I couldn't stand it if you killed him off. Thanks for not doing that!
Date: 04 Feb 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sounds like Esme might be redeemable. Carlisle can rot in jail. Yey for them healing and rose for being somewhat ok
Date: 31 Jan 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
Woo Hoo Go Team Fire & Ice. Wish Bella could deal the death blow to Jacob though.
Date: 31 Jan 2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my that was so good.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Still here ! Love this stiry! Go Edward
Date: 29 Jan 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
Please make Jacobs death painful. Poor Rose
Date: 29 Jan 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
I hate that Marcus is dead. I don't wa t Edward to get hurt. I was kind of hoping that Bella would be the one hurting and killing Jacob. I would love for Jacob to beg for mercy from Bella.
Date: 29 Jan 2018 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm surprised evil Jacob is the last to go down (hopefully) Were Carlisle and Esme there to die?
Date: 29 Jan 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
The darkness is receding! I’m sad about Marcus. I hope Rose is able to overcome what Jacob did to her and regain her powers. How will Emmett handle the attack on Rose? Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Jan 2018 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 31
Very good,but you are so mean to leave off where you did
Date: 28 Jan 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
What is with the clifffe?
Date: 28 Jan 2018 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
What a gruesome battle, though it hardly seems like a battle as it seems the good guys had an easy time of it. Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter ! Keep up the outstanding work!
Date: 23 Jan 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my I can hardly wait.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
Poor Rose. Jacob does need to be neutered. Peter really needs to work on his timing with announcements.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Jeez, Elezar is very calm at his pronouncement
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am so excited for them to kick Aro and his crew out of this world.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
Elezar and some of the others just can't help themselves when it comes to keeping important information from Bella and Edward. sigh..............
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Very good,can’t wait for the battle
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Very good,can’t wait for the battle
Date: 21 Jan 2018 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
now the battle begins. i hope nobody good gets hurt. thanks for the chapter.
Date: 21 Jan 2018 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 30
Let the battle beginning!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
Shit is getting real NOW Evil is going down
Date: 15 Jan 2018 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 29
I see the battle is soon coming. I know that good will triumph over evil, but will there be casualties? We shall see. Enjoy your holiday!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 29
Let the battle begin!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love how they heal each other. I can't wait until Jacob, Aro and any other gross dickheads are dead.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
Evil cliffy you know. Hope Rose and all will be ok.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Can't wait for Aro, Carlisle, Esme, and the rest of the evil crew be taken out.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
OMG they will not get away with it thank goodness they are chipped
Date: 11 Jan 2018 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG Jacob is going to be more of a creeper than before . I hope Bella will be the one to kill Jacob I think she needs it
Date: 11 Jan 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Evil is out of control.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
That was as cool ceramony
Date: 10 Jan 2018 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
So much excitement :)
Date: 10 Jan 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
So happy they had a great time. Poor Edward lol.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
HOLY BATMAN :O :O
Date: 08 Jan 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hopefully those chips work and they can find them.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
I hope they can find them
Date: 07 Jan 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
I wish I had your imagination
Date: 07 Jan 2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh no. Will Rose die? I hate it when major characters die...I hope you don't kill her.