Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love this smart feisty Bella. She is good for Edward.
Date: 04 Jul 2017 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward really pissed him off OMG
Date: 04 Jul 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
James is going to die when Edward gets away from Charlie. Bella will stick up for Edward?
Date: 04 Jul 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think James is messing with her because Edward likes her.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't think your lemon writing is bad. It's def. very kinky! Which is never a bad thing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
He really is a softy for love!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm shocked that their lovers got to live.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Emmett and his bets. That was hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
She really is a vixon!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I had to read the shower line three times because i kept thinking he did not say that outloud!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think james did the slashing.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter can't wait for more!
Date: 11 Jun 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Boy I am a little hot and bothered now!!! I'm just a little confused. Bella is living with Edward now and oh my it's a little erotic. I just dont understand if we know who slashed her tires or was that a long time ago or did I miss something. I love your writing and your grammar is perfect. I'm looking forward to reading ,more chapters already here and in updates to come.
Date: 11 Jun 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Boy I am a little hot and bothered now!!! I'm just a little confused. Bella is living with Edward now and oh my it's a little erotic. I just dont understand if we know who slashed her tires or was that a long time ago or did I miss something. I love your writing and your grammar is perfect. I'm looking forward to reading ,more chapters already here and in updates to come.
Author's Response:
Hi, yea I'm going back and forth between the past and present. It hasn't been said yet who slashed her tires but it will come out. Thank you for your review :).
Date: 31 May 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
That outfit was hot Edward needs to be more dirty it's so hot when he's nasty and dirty and Bella feeds off it
Author's Response:
I know it. Edward will be dirtier in other chapters I promise.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG ! Love your story can't wait to read more,great writing. I love stories like this where Bella isn't a weak women.Can not wait!lol
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like it. Yes, I love it when Bella is a strong woman.
Date: 30 May 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH LOL!!!! I like this one ALOT
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like it.
Date: 30 May 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! Keep going ! For your first mob story u are definitely keeping me interested!
Author's Response:
Yay, thank you. Happy you like it, stick around cause a lot is going to be happening.
Date: 30 May 2017 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I ❤️ a good Mob story. Especially one that has a bit of everything in it😏😉. I really hope you continue to write this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love mobward stories. I will be finishing this.
Date: 30 May 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think James slashed Bella's tires. Also, seems as though Edward wants to die before what he was picturing in the shower becomes a reality 😁😁
Author's Response:
lol Right? Who tells a girls father that?
Date: 30 May 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was awesome such a cocky basterd LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Isn't he? lol.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh loving this! Can't wait for more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Awesome, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love Mobward stories!! His ringtone for emmett is very funny!
Author's Response:
I do to. Thank you, I thought it would be a ringtone he would have for Emmett.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love a good mobward story. Good start.
Author's Response:
So do I and thank you.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I def. want you to keep writng this!! I'm guessing j is james the scumbag. Did He possibly slit her tires? Did Edward come to the diner knowing the police chief's daughter worked there?
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will be keeping this one going till I finish it. Not sure yet how many chapter it will have.