Date: 21 Jan 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is confusing me. One minute she is saying she can't stay with Edward because she barely knows him and then she crawls into the chair with him and cuddles after he brushes her hair. Those are mixed signals to me.
Date: 21 Jan 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Skanks abound, everywhere! I've met my fair share...
Did Edward just move her healing along a bit there at the end of the chapter? It usually takes something out of him to heal someone else and I noticed his sweatiness that you described. I love how he treats her. I hope she can get on board more and trust him to take care of her. I think she will need him more and more, and soon! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is Riley being possessed by demons loyal to the devil a recent development; or has he been evil and powerful since she met him?
Will Alice make another appearance? Possibly stick around to assist Edward in this unearthly battle that will ensue over Bella?
Date: 08 Jan 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well shyt!!!! That's just a bunch of fuckery haha... And my fi gets are crossed Riley didn't mess with Edward glorious wings. Will he have to tell B what he is, can she help heal his wings... Alice has some splaining to do lol
Date: 07 Jan 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh no! Riley is more powerful than Edward? yikes! And what is Rose's problem? Edward is the fallen angel in this story, but he seems to be one of the good guys compared to others. Thanks for updating so regularly and often!
Date: 01 Jan 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Holy crap. Where do u go from here, so much damage and so little trust to be able to get help, and even the help that's been offered is taken with an expectation of it being retracted or reneged sooner rather than later. Keep up the great work, looking forward to seeing what u come up with next
Date: 31 Dec 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Riley is not who he seems? He seems to be an abusive ex who is still out to get Bella. Bella seems to think she's bad, tainted. Why? What else happened to her? Ugh. This is so difficult to read. It plays into every steretypical thing thought about the whore/madonna complex foisted on women...please change that.
Date: 26 Dec 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG Talk about the boo-boo of all boo-boo's. eww Alice awww Felix. I agree about coffee. Love the smell, taste not. Give me black tea or hot chocolate.
ooh I like seeing his thoughts on first notice. Can't blame him for being cautious though. Right place, right time. Glad he was there to help.
Date: 26 Dec 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh no! where did Edward go? will he be able to save her from whoever this nightmare person is? It's interesting that he works both construction and as a teacher. You don't see that too often! Thanks for posting a chapter on Christmas. I hope you had a pleasant holiday...
Date: 22 Dec 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh, I don't know why might have not been getting a notice about updates. So glad I saw something on FB about a new update. I am going to have to check my alerts. Thanks for sharing Edward's past with us. Glad he was there to help Bella.