Date: 20 May 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love this story!! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Riley and Rose!! Also if Jasper is able to let go of his hatred for Edwards mistake before they have to recycle him. I hope you are able to update soon. Thank you
Date: 06 May 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Her first day back to work went pretty well. I'm glad Edward helped her with grading. My daughter tells me grading can be a real pain! and time consuming. I wonder what is urgent that Carlisle has to say to him. Thanks for the update!
Date: 01 May 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
What may be slow progress to some is the normal comfort zone for others. Bella's reacting to Edward's physical response as though she is a virgin. And in some respects that is a true statement. She was never in a position to give consent. This new form of touching is similar to first time exploration. Bella has emotional duress to overcome though and that presents an additional hurdle.
Will Emmett be the guard that is sent to oversee Rose?
Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm still seeking to read you here, despite still not getting any notifications from STARS. I hope they fix it soon.
This is a lovely chapter. Edward is a patient saint, er..angel, with her. I love that. Farewell to Jasper. I hope they can do something for Rosalie, but no matter, really. As long as Bella stays safe. Barbed penises?? OMG! See ya next time...
Date: 22 Apr 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for giving us Carlisle's take on everything. He's cute with trying to remember all the modern things, like Gaggle...LOL! Seriously, I think Bella is getting stronger in her belief in herself, thanks to everyone shoring her up. She is beginning to see the importance of being strong in her goodness. Too bad Jasper is so hung up on his hate. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 16 Apr 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love it when you ask us questions at the end of a chapter. I take it to mean that those are the issues you will address in the upcoming chapters. It's good to see Carlisle in this story. The jokes about Carlisle's Angels are cute and clever. Thanks for another chapter of this gripping story.
Date: 23 Mar 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward has an unusual advantage over Bella, yet she doesn't seem to mind that he listens to her thoughts. He may play off her memories but he never takes advantage of her.
His gifts were so sweetly given.
When will Bella's power manifest βitself?
Date: 05 Mar 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Will Jasper ever come around?
Maybe Bella is the key to mending the relationship between he and Edward?
A much needed respite for both wounded bodies and souls.
Alice is very aware of how critical this bonding time is to the fragile mind and heart of Edward's mate. And Edward for that matter.
Date: 04 Mar 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
A nice, loving, drama-free chapter. I love that he's able to share what he is with Bella. I wonder how he can protect her when Satan, disguised as Riley, can cause him so much damage. Thanks for all your lovely words...
Date: 26 Feb 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
The key point, for me, in this chapter is that Alice told her about the possibility of her turning to the dark side because of all her abuse. With that knowledge in mind, and with Edward and Alice's help, perhaps she can stay strong long enough to ward off evil. I'm hoping so. Thanks for the chapter!