Date: 16 Sep 2018 7:20 PM Title: Futuretake
OMG amazing story, just read the whole story in one night. Please tell me you will post the sequel. Please please please post it!!!
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I'm about to be in between stories, so I'm going to try working on the sequel.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great story
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Thanks so much!
Date: 22 Dec 2017 11:37 PM Title: Futuretake
Looking forward to the sequel :)
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Thank you!
Date: 31 Jul 2017 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved it wow what a ride this was a great read thank you
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Thank you for reading!
Date: 16 May 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
good
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 May 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
good she has e. disappointed with a few family members
Author's Response:
I agree!
Date: 16 May 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
good
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Thank you
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
good. seems he got off to easy. wondering about who helped him
Author's Response:
That's true
Date: 16 May 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
wondering what happened to her
Author's Response:
It’ll be over quickly.
Date: 16 May 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
good
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Thank you
Date: 16 May 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
yikes, hope nothing happens to get tip mike off
Author's Response:
He's a sneaky one.
Date: 15 May 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
good
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Thank you
Date: 15 May 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
hope b can convince her
Author's Response:
Yes, they need her very much.
Date: 15 May 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
good
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Thank you
Date: 14 May 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
good
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Thank you
Date: 14 May 2017 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
good
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Thank you
Date: 14 May 2017 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
good
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Thank you
Date: 14 May 2017 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
good
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Thank you
Date: 14 May 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
ugh
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
good
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Thank you
Date: 13 May 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
This story was amazing, thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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I appreciate that very much!
Date: 04 May 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved the story
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Thank you so much!
Date: 01 May 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good story
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Thank you!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
Once again you bring us a fresh take on twific. This was a strong smart ass kickingBella. Thank you so much for your wonderful stories.
Author's Response:
I really, really appreciate that. Thank you!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
Excellent story.ðŸ‘
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for this excellent story.
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Thanks, I appreciate that!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
:) loved this story
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Thank you so much!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what u come up with next. Perfect ending to an amazing story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm looking forward to more of yours!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
Squeals of happiness!
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That's great! Thank you!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
Lovely!
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Thank you!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
AWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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All kinds of sweet!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the updates and a wonderful story
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading along and reviewing!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love the elevator fuck amazing. I can't believe just two more chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was pretty nervous writing it.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
So, so awesome!
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Thank you so much! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 28
Completely utterly EEEVIL!
Author's Response:
Muahahahaha!
Date: 05 Apr 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
Agh! So not fair to stop there....
Author's Response:
Sorry not sorry! Lol
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yes!
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Thank you!
Date: 05 Apr 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am still mad at Emmett but is is the right step.
Author's Response:
That's about all he can expect!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
That's some nice closure.
Author's Response:
We're getting closer to the end. Definitely needed them to find closure.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, as always!
Date: 22 Mar 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE
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Thank you!
Date: 22 Mar 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
How completely agonizing. My heart breaks for them.
Author's Response:
Yes. They're going to work on it.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
Super angry at Jacob,, he should have been fired. Charlie is not helping anything, I am really pissed at Emmett. I am in love with Edward so amazing. Being there for Bella like that. I feel like he is the only one that is. Where the heck is everyone? Hoping for answers in next chapter lol.
Author's Response:
She shut them all out. The rest scurried, while Edward stood his ground.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
They all stink.... NOT Edward ... but the rest of them suck completely. Booooooooo man-children!!! LOL Love this story!!
Author's Response:
I thought it was funny that Charlie went on a rampage. Lol
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well put yourself in Emmett shoes. He sees him one way and Bella knows him on a personal level. The other thing is NEWTON is to blame and anyone who saw the signs and did not act. Great story
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well put yourself in Emmett shoes. He sees him one way and Bella knows him on a personal level. The other thing is NEWTON is to blame and anyone who saw the signs and did not act. Great story
Author's Response:
That's really the truth. Emmett has to figure out his anger and who to place it on.
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
Emmett needs a kick up the ass!!!!
Author's Response:
He sure as hell does!
Date: 15 Mar 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh, Edward is so loving. I love him lol. Poor Bella, he brother the dick. I hope it’s a good amazing thing he does or it’s not worthy of any redemption lol. Amazing chapter as always.
Date: 15 Mar 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh, Edward is so loving. I love him lol. Poor Bella, he brother the dick. I hope it’s a good amazing thing he does or it’s not worthy of any redemption lol. Amazing chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you. He needs his come to Jesus talk.
Date: 12 Mar 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor bella. Emmett needs to chill bella has enough stress in her life. Edward comes up with the sweetest things to say to her.
Author's Response:
I did think Edward was incredibly sweet. <3 Emmett needs some time.
Date: 12 Mar 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love that she was snappy with him.
Author's Response:
I'm always trying to make it realistic.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am highly disappointed in Emmett but Edward is amazing. Excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Yeah, Emmett is going to be that way for a few chapters.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 02 Mar 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Keep writing
Author's Response:
Always 😊
Date: 02 Mar 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh poor Bella and Edward. The journey is going to be long but worth it. Amazing job
Author's Response:
Exactly, it's going to be hard work for them both.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 25 Feb 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor guy vomitting. Emmett is going to tease him i bet!
Author's Response:
Emmett is going to be interesting, that's for sure.
Date: 23 Feb 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
That's funny, you already reviewed this chapter?
Date: 22 Feb 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Emmett needs to give him a break! Who wouldn't throw up at the thought, at the sight, of what he must have done to her, or could have done to her. I'm almost sorry they shot him. I wish he woud have had to suffer like he made her, and his other victims, suffer. I am glad she's safe. I also think she will recover with the help of Edward and her father. Thank god her ordeal wasn't longer. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your thoughts. They line up with mine, lol!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, dear!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am very much speachless. I am so sad I have to wait a week lol
Author's Response:
It'll go fast! I hope it will, at least.
Date: 22 Feb 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh thank you for getting her out of this. Hoping they all can cope with the potential PTSD. Our poor Bella and Edward.
Author's Response:
It's going to be bumpy, that's for sure.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so worried about how bad this is going to get for bella.
Author's Response:
I can't blame you for that. I've got her, though.
Date: 15 Feb 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
They had better find her quickly. I don't think Mike plans on letting her go, alive! What good is a guard detail that is so quickly overcome? I hope Jacob isn't in on it. Maybe now Carlisle will that this seriously, ya think? Thanks for all your wonderfully entertaining stories!
Author's Response:
And wait until you hear why Jacob was overtaken so easily. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh Bella, where the hell did your common sense go?
Author's Response:
I bet she'll ask herself the same question.
Date: 15 Feb 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Omg poor Bella and Edward. I can't wait for next week.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I can't either, it's getting exciting!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Go get'em Edward!
Author's Response:
Yaya! Team Edward!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok so my input here... Mike is way to sloppy to have gotten away with everything he has done so far. So my real question is, does he simply have this GOD complex now or is he just so flustered he has forgetten to cover his tracks?
Date: 15 Feb 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok so my input here... Mike is way to sloppy to have gotten away with everything he has done so far. So my real question is, does he simply have this GOD complex now or is he just so flustered he has forgetten to cover his tracks?
Author's Response:
I would say it's a little bit of both. He simply thinks he can't be touched.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Renee will deliver the best revenge!!
Author's Response:
She certainly wants to!
Date: 10 Feb 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Omg ! Love all your stories can wait on the next chapter of this one ! Love it , I hope the boys kick ass or Edward kicks Some ass. Can't wait ,great stories again thank you for writing them for us.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, that's very nice of you!
Date: 09 Feb 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no
Author's Response:
Hugs and deep breaths!
Date: 08 Feb 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope they find her soon. Edward is going to blame himself
Author's Response:
You bet he is!
Date: 08 Feb 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Bella. This chapter was intense and I wish it was longer lol. Cant wait for next Wednesday to get here.
Author's Response:
The intensity is going to stick around, too.
Date: 08 Feb 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMFG!!!! I'm gonna cry...... Edward is gonna go BALLISTIC!
Author's Response:
Even I feel bad for him!
Date: 08 Feb 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Our poor girl. Edward is going to lose his mind when he finds out.
Author's Response:
We're going to get his POV, too.
Date: 03 Feb 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I have to wait for updates now!!! Aaaaaaagghhh! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 02 Feb 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I have to wait for updates now!!! Aaaaaaagghhh! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry! Lol I'm glad you enjoy it!
Date: 02 Feb 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope edward doesn't get hurt.
Author's Response:
I love him too much for that.
Date: 01 Feb 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
:)
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Thank you for your review!
Date: 01 Feb 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
*reaches for kevlar vest, glock, taser, and knife* Okay, I'm ready, bring it.
Author's Response:
Lol, you might want all those things.