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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2023 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2022 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 44

Great googly moogly what a roller coaster ride...

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

Nope still don't care for esme lol

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ok Alice redeemed herself but Esme....she is pisding me off. I know she cares 

But in her mind Bella is already gone. Jmo

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

Great story 

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good God girl....im hooked...

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 44

Awesome story. Enjoy it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 44

Awesome story. Enjoy it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) loved this 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2022 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 44

I love this story too. I am so glad you got over writers block and were able to come back to it.  Thanks for all the great stories you have given me and the rest of the fan fic community.  Looking forward to more....

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2022 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 43

Yeah!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2022 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 43

Whew, happy tears and another wedding to look forward to! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2022 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2022 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 42

Oh man, you've made me cry yet again with this chapter.  I sincerely hope they get good news, until next time and thank you for writing x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2022 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2022 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 42

Sweet new for Alice and Jasper.  Hope Bella has a good report.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2022 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 41

So many Kleenex needed for this chapter.  Their love is so beautiful. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2022 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 41

I am now a crying mess.  Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2022 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2022 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 40

Beautiful heart to heart with Jasper  and Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2022 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 40

Beautiful heart to heart with Jasper  and Edward 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 40

Maybe Edward is starting to realize he has some support too.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 40

You love leaving  cliffhangers,  get to writing  fast

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

I'm trying so hard to believe this will be a hea.

Fabulous writing; the last few chapters have been heart wrenching 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2022 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2022 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 39

Keep on writing faster 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 39

More tissues please, these two are breaking my heart.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2022 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

Please keep writing faster 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 37

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 37

Oh my gosh, you've made me cry with this chapter.  Thank you for update but please tell me there's going to be a happy ending.  Until next time x

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 37

Beautiful chapter. Pass the tissues. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 37

Oh my, this chapter  made me cry 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 36

I'm crying so much I can barely see the screen.   Grrr....   Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 36

I can't imagine how helpless Edward and the others feel watching Bella navigate through the treatment. 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm still following this story and still loving it, thank you for the update and the warning it was going to be difficult as this chapter almost made me cry, until next time x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 36

Thanks for the update. 

Great chapter, hard to read, but I'm sure it'll get harder ☹️😢

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2022 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 34

What a beautiful tribute.  I really enjoyed this chapter. 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2022 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

Absolutely loved it, please keep writing when you can, eagerly awaiting for the next chapter though x

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 34

Very nice

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter keep writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2022 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

Keep writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2022 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

Very fierce,  I loved this chapter.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2022 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love you and them lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2022 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2022 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 31

Keep on writing faster

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope your son feels better soon 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Prayers for your son!

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 31

I am sorry about your son.  I will keep thinking positive thoughts for you.  This story is so amazing.  I was so upset at the last chapter, but this made me feel better.  I think I have read all your stories. I even have some you removed from early on. I only joined the sites in 2011 so I may have missed some.  You are an amazing story teller and I hope this help you release some of your stress.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2022 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

Most amazing story

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2022 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my! I totally didn't expect that. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2022 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for the note. I did not know dementia  came from what Bella has. My Dad had Alzemers, sorry  can never spell that right. Keep on writing. 

 

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2022 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh crap! This is going to be a big test. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 29

love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

they kind of not nice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

Renee sucks but she can step up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 26

so good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

love love love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

so good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

So sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

WOW love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

love love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

hi

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

Keep on writing 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 29

I could feel the frustration and awkward between all parties in this chapter.   Bella and Edward both need a hug.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm. Glad they are finally attempting to support both Edward and Bella.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm. Glad they are finally attempting to support both Edward and Bella.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, what a cliffhanger.  Get to writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella and Esme talked a little more with Renee.    And Esme is going to give Renee the deets.

I love that Esme is going to move in with Carlisle leaving the house to Bella and Edward.

And rude family interrupt Bella and Edward's dinner.   ugh...

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my goodness.  The parents are definitely not modeled off of the Brady bunch. So much drama! I love it. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my goodness.  The parents are definitely not modeled off of the Brady bunch. So much drama! I love it. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2022 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

Sweet, happy and sad chapter....   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh happy tears for them. Beautiful chapter full of so much love. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh happy tears for them. Beautiful chapter full of so much love. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 25

Lol, love Alice and her ever knowing ways. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2022 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2022 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2022 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter....   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2022 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2022 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

Friends are great except when they are cock blockers.   LOL Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2022 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yesss Bella live enjoy it

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