Date: 24 Oct 2016 2:13 AM Title: Nine Days in Dune
Really really good, I hate to see it end
Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:39 AM Title: Day 4 in Dune
Maybe they will finally catch a break
Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:29 AM Title: Day 1 in Dune
This story is really good
Date: 16 Sep 2016 2:37 PM Title: Nine Days in Dune
Good story.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 2:20 AM Title: The Drill
Excellent story, thanks for sharing it.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 8:12 PM Title: Nine Days in Dune
Thank you for the end note...It would make a great story if you get to it. This was interesting. I enjoyed it.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 8:00 PM Title: Nine Days in Dune
Great work.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Xx T
Date: 15 Sep 2016 7:34 PM Title: Nine Days in Dune
Short but great stroy. Thanks
Date: 13 Sep 2016 8:57 PM Title: Day 7 in Dune
Quel est ce qu'ils vont être sauvé?
Il est le chapitre qui me rend triste, ils sont de plus en plus faible (faible).
Baisers
Date: 13 Sep 2016 7:48 PM Title: Day 7 in Dune
When is help coming????
Date: 09 Sep 2016 4:20 PM Title: The Thief
Poor baby. How did he turn out so good with such crappie parents.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:17 AM Title: The Thief
Oh wow.. Great chapter :D
Date: 05 Sep 2016 6:46 AM Title: The Thief
Jasper avait aucune bonne enfance!
Bon chapitre, je vous remercie.
Date: 04 Sep 2016 4:19 PM Title: Day 5 in Dune
Great work.
Keep those chapter coming! T
Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:01 PM Title: Day 5 in Dune
Ils ont eu de la chance que cette fille ne les dénonce ...
Je vous remercie.
Date: 25 Aug 2016 7:29 PM Title: Day 1 in Dune
Oh my goodness. I am hooked after one chapter.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 21 Aug 2016 5:47 PM Title: The Desk Job
Qu'est ce que Emmett à des regrets?
Il est perdu dans les dunes, il commence à perdre l'espoir ...
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:47 PM Title: Day 4 in Dune
I like this fiction.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:37 PM Title: The Father
Edward voulait plaire à son père?
Je crois que, en réalité, qu'il n'a pas eu d'envie !
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:20 PM Title: Day 1 in Dune
The situation is bad,
What is that he(it) are like that going to roam 9 days?
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:05 PM Title: The Drill
Bouh! Quel début!
Date: 18 Aug 2016 10:13 PM Title: Day 4 in Dune
Hope it is a friendly village.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 6:20 PM Title: Day 4 in Dune
This is such a sad story.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 6:16 PM Title: The Father
What a jerk of a father.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 7:21 PM Title: Day 1 in Dune
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 6:04 PM Title: Day 1 in Dune
LIke it! Why Edward having flashback? Did he know Bella when he was younger?
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:30 PM Title: Day 1 in Dune
Awesome chapter!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 3:50 AM Title: The Drill
Awesome start!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 2:47 AM Title: The Drill
Good start.
Thanks