[Report This]Date: 11 May 2019 11:55 AM Title: Futuretake
great story would love a sequel
Date: 17 Jun 2018 7:01 PM Title: Futuretake
OMG! That was hilarious!!! I have laughed until I cried and laughed some more. My sides hurt.
Author's Response:
That's wonderful! This is really one of my favorite stories.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 5:07 PM Title: Futuretake
Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Dec 2017 4:31 PM Title: Futuretake
That was too funny
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:52 AM Title: Futuretake
Brilliant! More futuretakes please!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2017 12:19 AM Title: Futuretake
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this one!!! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's one of my favorites!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 11:40 PM Title: Outtake
lol Horny E is too funny
Author's Response:
And he's always horny in this story! Lol
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2017 11:38 PM Title: Outtake
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Nov 2016 10:19 PM Title: Future Take
ROFL for the Riley part. TY for writing and sharing
Author's Response: Lol, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2016 3:59 PM Title: Future Take
More please
Author's Response: ;) Someone mentioned making it a series. Maybe, in the future.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2016 1:02 AM Title: Future Take
I'm not going to be able to forget them for a really long time!!
Author's Response: I appreciate that very much.
Author's Response: I appreciate that very much.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2016 5:47 PM Title: Future Take
:) loved this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Deb.
Date: 04 Nov 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the dialogue...esp Edward...this story was fun to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing him.
Date: 04 Nov 2016 11:58 AM Title: Future Take
Awww. Loved this fic. Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04 Nov 2016 11:45 AM Title: Future Take
Awwwwww
so sweet. love these two.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 8:36 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE the ending. Moron jumping E that way. Too funny
Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2016 4:40 AM Title: Epilogue
I can only smile bc i love thrm but then frown bc i don't want next chapter to be the end.
Author's Response: I know the feeling!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2016 3:44 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2016 2:03 PM Title: Epilogue
:) :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm sad we are losing him too! He is hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yey for living together. LOL for Riley losing his job
Author's Response: It's going to get worse for him/ better for us!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yea I wanr Riley to end himself. Ouch mountain climbers
Author's Response: Lol on the mountain climbers. Riley's going to get his, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 14 Oct 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
No don't stop the story!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) It's wrapped up pretty well in the last chapter and the epi.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story! I have needed these laughs!!
Author's Response: Aw, well, thank you!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
ROFL for the Scooby references.
Author's Response: Those are funny! My beta gets credit for that.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mangina is my new favorite word and i can already think of a few men i can use it with! Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: I love it too, I need to actually use it!
Author's Response: I love it too, I need to actually use it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well that was satisfying. FINLALY!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON : )
Author's Response: Yay!!!
Author's Response: Yay!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very satisfied!!!!!
Author's Response: Good! Thank you!
Date: 30 Sep 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Happy Lemony Time!!!
Author's Response: Lol, that is so cute!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2016 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Carlisle was a nice surprise!
Author's Response: :) I wanted him to be realistic!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Every chapter i think you can't make him funnier and you keep proving me wrong!
Author's Response: That, I really appreciate! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my goodness biggest cock block in fanfiction history! IT's just pitiful!
Author's Response: I know, the poor guy!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love this charlie too! I love how naughty edward is being also!
Author's Response: I think Charlie has his own fanbase, lol!
Date: 23 Sep 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
awww for romantic E. Wow Carlisle was a wenie at first.
Author's Response: Lol, he was, wasn't he?
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Gee you could have let poor Edward get a little sum sum! (he he he) I guess he like we will have to wait til next time. READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Well, he kind of did!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
thank you for the update... Poor Edward he tried.
Author's Response: I know, the poor guy. :)
Date: 16 Sep 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
bald bishop??? Thats a new one. LOL
Author's Response: There's a website, dicktionary.com, that helped me with alternate names. It just felt like something he'd do.
Date: 13 Sep 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor baby.
Author's Response: I know, right?
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
C'mon.....seriously would it have been so bad had his friends caught sight of the floor show...hmmmm!!! OK, I guess it would be 😞 (he he he) Poor Edward that sucks!!!! READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Lol, for a second I thought you were mad at me for not continuing the smut! Thank you!
Date: 09 Sep 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww for the cockbloocking. They will def be setting off the fire alarms. Yumminess.
Author's Response: Lol! It's getting hot for the two of them!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Naughty Bella.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Edward is going to have to wait.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was FUN : ) Just what they needed. I like this Charlie too. READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Priceless!!! Loved it! I think Vicky should give him some rare std..... I'm such a hater to those nasties! 💋
Author's Response: Lol, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story!! Glad to discover your work ! Can't wait till she dumps that bastard! I kind of wish she would let Edward do it..... LOL! 💋
Author's Response: It's coming up! I'm glad you like it so much!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
That!!!!! was the Bella that we ALL want her to be!!!! READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Oh, good!
Date: 26 Aug 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad she shut Riley down. Hope he comes now with Mono or something from Icky Vicky
Author's Response: Hahahaha! He would deserve it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Please!!!! Don't make us wait too long. It's not nice to leave us waiting.(lol) READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: I think you're going to feel that way the whole time about this one. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad she dumped Riley. What a douchecanoe
Author's Response: He really, really is.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Lol hyper E is too funny
Author's Response: He is, isn't he? Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Happy chapter !!! Just what we all needed. 😋😄🤗 READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12 Aug 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
<3 love this fic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05 Aug 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oooh the plot thickens. Riley really needs a swift kick in the ass
Author's Response: I know just the guy to give him that kick, too.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 29 Jul 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Will she finally open her eyes to the verbal abuse she is allowing?????
Author's Response: Yes, she will.
Date: 29 Jul 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yea Riley really needs a wake up call. What a douchenozzle
Author's Response: You're so right. It'll happen.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella
Author's Response: Yes, right now. Let's hope she can get it right.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm now you have me wondering about b's real relationships with Riley
Author's Response: :) She said he proposed, but nothing else, right? But she feels compelled to help her usually nice boyfriend through his car accident.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Right now this is what she deserves if she is allowing him to be abusive.
Author's Response: Yes. He's, um, not acting like himself? Or not acting like the guy he pretends to be.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
I just read the last 2 chapters and you say this is a Bella and Edward story and I'm glad but...just how long do we have to wait for the secrets and truths to be revealed. I'm not a patient person ( lol) Seriously I look forward to reading more...it sounds interesting but.... sad at the moment. I know! I know!!! happy thoughts😊 READ YOU SOON d84;a039;
Author's Response: Chapter 5!Thanks for sticking with it. :)
Date: 15 Jul 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well that is a good reason to miss picking him up. Why do I get the feeling that Riley proposed, but not to B???
Author's Response: We'll find out!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
ooh wonder why she didn't show up?
Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter!