Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hi! I just found this story and I think it's a cool story. I think it could benefit from having beta, but that being said the story is pretty fun and I'd like to see the cumulation of this tale. I hope you're still working on it.
Date: 11 Dec 2017 3:22 PM Title: Prologue
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Date: 03 Dec 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks!
Author's Response:
You're welcome :)
Date: 03 Dec 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Nov 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
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Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 27 Sep 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 26 Sep 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love your story can't wait to read more! Glad you and your family are doing well
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Sorry for taking so long :)
Date: 06 Jul 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
All these secrets and wasted years.
Date: 19 May 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is crazy how they could keep this hidden. They know Bella and Renee. Did they never meet Renee's husband or Bella's dad?
Date: 13 May 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to the next chapter. What a place to leave us!
Date: 11 May 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks!
Author's Response:
You're welcome :)
Date: 10 May 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 03 May 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad Bella has Edward.
Date: 26 Feb 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks!
Author's Response:
You're welcome :)
Date: 26 Feb 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 23 Feb 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks !
Author's Response:
Thanks to you :)
Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
The bodyguard mess everything up!!
Author's Response:
Damn him! But everything will turn out right ;)
Thanks hun
Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
The ball going to be interesting.
Author's Response:
It sure was ;)
Date: 19 Feb 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Omg ! Love your story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! You make me blush :)
Date: 19 Feb 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
Eewwww! So ho is the old man and the young lady?
Author's Response:
It will be revealed in the next chapter ;) You'll be surprised.
Thanks
Date: 19 Feb 2017 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 10 Feb 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks hun.
Date: 10 Feb 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Your story is wonderful ! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thank you so much :)
Date: 14 Jan 2017 11:12 PM Title: Prologue
I wonder how that's gonna work out.
Author's Response:
Hi!
You'll see ;)
Thank you.
Date: 12 Jan 2017 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a female dog!!! That was soooooooo mean.
Author's Response:
yes. And Charlie wants them to be friends, so foolish.
Thank you.
Date: 14 Dec 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't blame bella for not wanted to be friends with Angela.
Author's Response:
No, as a matter of fact, I think a line is forming to kick Angela's ass. And there's more still to come ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun :)
Date: 23 Aug 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 23 Aug 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm sure her mom will help her.
Author's Response:
Well, she has to. She's keeping a lot of information for Bella and Charlie's sake :)
Thanks
Date: 11 Aug 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward when through a lot at a young age.
Author's Response:
Yeah, fame wasn't gentle to him :)
Date: 08 Aug 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! I'm always thankful of your support :)
Date: 27 Jul 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella don't sound happy about edward being with a girl.
Author's Response:
she soon will learn she has nothing to worry about ;)
Thanks
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
:) Those furry caterpillars seem to be getting everywhere
Author's Response:
Yeah :) Those sneaky little things ;)
Thanks :)
Date: 16 Jul 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie made a big mistake.
Author's Response:
He's not the brightest parent :)
Thanks :)
Date: 15 Jul 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. Charlie is smothering her
Author's Response:
Yeah, not the best parenting decision.
Thanks hun :)
Date: 06 Jul 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 06 Jul 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is getting good so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent, but can I suggest you get a beta, or proof reader.....I love how the story is going, just needs to be tweaked a little
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm working on that (the beta), I really hope I'll have good news soon ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the flow so far
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Jul 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 01 Jul 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward really want to ask bella to be his girlfriend.
Author's Response:
We just have to hope he find the courage to do it soon ;)
Thanks my friend :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 11:56 PM Title: Prologue
Great Start, so 19yrs later we will see Edward
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yes, Edward will tell us his story; how his father's fame affects him and how he will struggle to get his girl ;)
I really hope you'll like this story :)
Thanks!
Date: 26 Jun 2016 11:31 PM Title: Prologue
OMG ! Love it already and can not wait for more to read ! I remember that band lol ! This is going to be great I just know it ! Good Luck with the writing you will do great !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for cheering me up!
I'm glad you remember them, I wasn't sure if they were really known outside latin America.
I really hope you'll like this story :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 5:09 PM Title: Prologue
Hey!!!! Menudo was big in th US too! (he he he) I'm not sure I like the idea that this will be a short story when it obviously has the potential to go further. (just a thought) READ YOU SOON : )
Author's Response:
Hi!
I wasn't sure if they were known in the US ( oh those memories!)
Well, let's see how talkative these characters get ;) They have a lot to say.
Thank you so much for your support and I really hope you'll like the story :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 2:49 PM Title: Prologue
Cant wait i love your work!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate your support :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 9:02 AM Title: Prologue
Looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! I really appreciate it :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 7:50 AM Title: Prologue
Great start
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you'll like the story :)
Date: 26 Jun 2016 5:05 AM Title: Prologue
Good start!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun :)