Date: 18 Jun 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ty for writing and sharing with us all.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Woo hoo for bad ass B & A.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Woo hoo for bad ass B & A.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Lol. Kelly is my real name. Glad I get to play a little part. Lol.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow. B is not one to piss off. Glad they got her to figure it out before they really needed it. Emmett is just to funny.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
They Def need a little time together.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
So Glas Peter is there. Malice is just asking to have her head pulled off. Aww for Angela still being the awesome girl she is.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well at least Alice did something correct in the end. Gland Em is free of R. He Def deserves better.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wondered if it was Rose. Poor Em. Glad He is free of her though.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hmm wonder who the spy in the dungeon is. Not good. Skankya needed to be taken down
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad Charlie is still in her life. Jake will hopefully grow up a bit soon.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Sam and company came to help. The forks stunt was just pure evil. Jake just had to open his big mouth. Sigh.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love Pter and Char coming to help. Wonder what Malice and Fuckward are going to do? Guessing the end pov is the Romanians.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
AWW Glad B has some new girl friends. Well Gianna gets her wish to change. Oooh Maria showing up. Interesting.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ooh gonna love having Charlie around. Hmmm now who came in at the end? Maybe Renata or Giana? Hmmm
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow Malice has a lot to answer for too.
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aww Demetri and Angela. Cute. Wonder who Charlie will pick out. Hmmm
Date: 17 Jun 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad B got to tell them off a bit. Ooh Angry Jasper is sexy as hell you know.
Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad she gets to keep Charlie in her life. Oooh think Alec would be a good mate for Angela
Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lol for Bella the over trainer. At least not all the Cullens wanted to leave..... But they still did.
Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Alec isn't holding out Janes banishment on Bella.
Date: 16 Jun 2023 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad Aro didn't hide the escapes from her. Woo hoo for a new and improved Bella
Date: 16 Jun 2023 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ugh of course the midget and the psycho are out wandering. Wonder who else they'll rope into trying somethingbstupid.
Date: 16 Jun 2023 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm sounds like Jane is going to be a big issue in future.
Date: 15 Jun 2023 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Google translate is my friend too. Sounds like Jane is going to be a problem. Santiago is lucky to be alive after that comment.
Date: 15 Jun 2023 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad she got to say goodbye in a way to Charlie. I wonder if Renee will come back in a not so good way?
Date: 15 Jun 2023 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad she got to say goodbye in a way to Charlie. I wonder if Renee will come back in a not so good way?
Date: 02 Aug 2022 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
I take back what I said there was no reason for Angela to turn.I had hoped to see more of her, but she shows up once to get Bella to stop guilt tripping herself,then never again.
Date: 02 Aug 2022 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Nevermind, spoke to soon. Though she did show up late after she woke up. Angela could've been training with everyone else
Date: 02 Aug 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is a great story, but what was the point of Angela turning if she never shows up?? Her transformation is something I was really looking forward to, so it's really disappointing to see that she's not involved like I thought she would be.
Date: 16 Jul 2022 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Please do not apologize for your mistakes. You do your writing on your own with no compensation and it brings your readers pleasure. Oh how I enjoyed Bella telling Jane off!
I am looking forward to Bella meeting the Cullens as a vampire no less Aro's mate. You have really thickened the plot with the evil escapees. Much to look forward to.
I hope you are in better health. I have family members with epilepsy and know it's not an easy for to hoe.
Date: 22 Feb 2018 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
dying to read the next chapter
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
nudge nudge next chappy please i know you might have alot going on but it is a really goood start and i wanna see where it goes.
Date: 26 Jul 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think the story is great and the pov shifts are great and flow really well. I'm looking forward to whatever happens next. Have and awesome day!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Kinda suck that she got to leave her dad that quickly but guess it has to be done. Wow a physical shield manifesting already. Nice.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
While I don't mind the idea of Bella with someone else, seems a little fast with her kissing him.....but of course she's probably feeling the mating bond as well perhaps. No wolves guarding her house?