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Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 56

I'm glad they made up, but agree that they should see a counselor. I think Tanya will work on trying to work her way back into Edwards's life one way or another using a meeting through attorneys to her advantage anyway she can.  Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 56

She beast! Hahaha....more like nasty skank whore!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 56

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 56

Counceling they need it trust is hard to get once lost. So happy they are back together they will be strong. Nixon and Tanya are meant for each other they are both evil.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 56

I loved it well this is a start I thing going to see someone will help them both greatly but I think meeting with Tanya will be a big mistake

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 56

IDK. What he said to her was pretty horrendous. Kudos to her for forgiving him. I don't know if I could, knowing what I know now. People don't really change. I know, it's a story and not RL. I love happy endings so I trust you to give them one. Surely one of the kids could identify the woman who approached them, couldn't they?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 56

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 56

I would have thought he would have done something a little more....romantic maybe put a little more thought into asking WAIT!!!! cross that...beg her on hands and knees but.... It all worked out in the end...I suppose. I'm thinking the next chapter should be very interesting....to say the least. READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 56

Nothing good can come out of meeting with Tanya! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 56

Sure skankyya want money most likely. Hope they catch her before the kids get really hurt. Councilling sounds smart 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 56

Glad they are going to talk to someone about their trust issues.  Glad you did not drag out their separation.  Can't wait to hear from the She-beast. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 56

Does Edward know the name of Tanya's Sugar Daddy? That would be a better link to give Seth and Jenks.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 47

I think carlisle is ready to gravel!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 46

I have lived in florida my whole life & have never heard of the dry tortugas? 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 55

LOVE the kids giving him the silent treatment too.   As far as cops..... no video of her approaching the kids?  hmmm   Go Mama Esme!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 45

The white van needs to go far far away!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 44

That is a long drive for sure!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 43

Carlisle is not thinking about the future w/ visitation to his grandcgildren.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it can't wait for more ­č’Ľ 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 41

I love how kinky he gets her to be.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 40

Hopefully after their vacation she'll just move in. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 39

I love that charlie gave carlisle a beat down!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 38

Carlisle really screwed the pooch!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 37

He's telling her to be quiet & she just keeps talking. Haha

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

How is it going to go when tanya shows up???

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 35

Poor liam!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 34

Maybe if liam knows that bella's mom left her too liam could bond more with bella.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 33

She is just so nasty!! Aluce is getting on my nerves too!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

There are so many ways this could go.....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

I hope reynold kicks her to the curb and tanya gets at least 5 stds!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm actually tearing up. :(

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella to tampa!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

Goodbye vanilla at least for tonight.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad u don't describe everytime that might make us want it less.....yeah, no i don't think that will ever happen!! Haha

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

I think u did good!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 25

C blocked!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

Reunited & it feels so good!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

She probably had seth eat the crackers on purpose.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love out of darkness!! And i agree with edward about tanya.  She would only do more damage. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

Too funny!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hahaha, go Momma Esme!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 54

Dipshit! That's a man for ya! Lol! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 20

Maybe jealousy will get her to tampa sooner!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

I get to be the 1000 review on this site!! Whoo hoo!  ( i try to find joy in the small things) i'm glad he is going to call charlie about tanya.  She is not to be trusted!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hope she realizes soon she needs to be in tampa!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

She is such a skank!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

I love that song too!! It is pefect for them!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope she sees him before she leaves!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh no!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes yes yes!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

I bet sue & his mother read her books.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

They can't live apart forever.  She needs to move.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

All night long.  She is going to be walking a bit sideways .  Haha

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Now onto the edward's main attraction!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yes put up or shut up!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

Please yes!!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 55

I think she will forgive him. She has had enough time to get over it...but he better never do something like that again.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

good updates

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 55

Edward messed up but Bella does not need to run away from this. She and Edward need to talk and work things out. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 55

He really fucked up big time! At least she is ready now to hear from him! He had better find the right words to say to make this better, and mean them! Thanks for another great chapter!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 55

I would have an extremely hard time forgiving him if I were Bella. Those were really harsh words.  I may forgive him but Seay times will definitely bel on the waiting list.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 55

I hope she forgives him....but This issue with low self esteem is a little bit of a concern? If  she wants to be a parent then that has to be addressed.... cause we all know if mama is f*cked up you know the kids ain't got a chance in hell. READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 55

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh boy he really has his work cut out for him what will he try first

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 55

Way to go Esme, knock some sense into Edward.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 55

I'm glad Bella isn't brushing her own feelings aside.  Edward needs to grovel.  Yay for Esme telling Edward what for and yay for Bella's new friend Sarah.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 55

they have to kiss and make up.  Esme knows how to put him in his place.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 55

At least Bella was able to communicate with Esme to let Edward know she is ready to hear him out. Love momma bear Esme.
It was a bit surprising that Edward called Jasper. But, it also shows Bella that he is will to seek out her friends for answers.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 55

Ugh more, more. Love this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 54

I do not blame Edward for being upset but he took it way to far. Bella should have said something earlier.  I yelled at my husband when he lost our daughter.  I was scared. Yes I over reacted but that is one is my biggest fears if losing my children. Everthing turned out ok thank goodness.  Bella should not have run off. She should have stayed at talked after the kids went to bed. Even if her feelingswere hurt.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 54

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 54

I can see why he flipped out but he took it way too far poor Bella 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 54

That's a huge hole Edward dug for himself.
Tanya is getting exactly what she wants, putting a wedge between Edward and Bella, creating a lack of trust between Bella and the twins, and uncertainty in a future the little family of four was trying to build.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 54

That's a huge hole Edward dug for himself.
Tanya is getting exactly what she wants, putting a wedge between Edward and Bella, creating a lack of trust between Bella and the twins, and uncertainty in a future the little family of four was trying to build.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 54

OMG she screwed up big time.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 54

I think Bella should have told him about the first time to be honest. No one ever forget someone creepy, upsetting you or your children. Maybe if she had Edward wouldn't have blown up on her. And I'm sorry but I don't let my 7 year old go to the bathroom on his own. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 54

Yup...get some knee pads Edward...commence groveling 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 54

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 54

Edward getting out of that hole depends on you (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 54

He needs to grovel for this one.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 54

If he's going to treat Bella like that, then he's not ready to have her live with them. It's easy to say "I'm sorry" but the proof is in the pudding!  He needs to report this to the authorities. He needs to make this up to Bella, big time, if he expects her to trust him.  I'm not too fond of Edward right now. Like father, like son??

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 54

Yea  quite a bit of a temper tantrum.  Hope Bella got home ok.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 54

Edward is a douche canoe.... GAH!!!! Death to Tanya!!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 54

He deserves to stew a while and then grovel.   And why isn't anyone pressing charges against Tanya?  Shouldn't the police be called?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 53

ooh yumminess. Hope no one saw thier rain time. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 53

I thought it was sweet, sensual and passionate! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 53

You make my weekends worth looking forward to.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 53

Keep. Writing

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 53

That was pretty hot to me! but I get what your saying. Can't wait for the next update. READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 53

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 53

That was sexy and fun I loved it 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 53

Finally some one on one time for Dr. Superman and his Wonder Woman. Hehe.
Little Lucy is just excited to celebrate her daddy's award with him. Family time is equally important to this young family of four.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 53

Love the lemony goodness. I hope we get more information on Tanya and her plans. I feel that part of the story has gotten pushed to the back burner. Please don't get me wrong in have enjoyed reading about Edward and Bella and the kids but I am dying to know what is up with Tanya and if she is the mystery lady.

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