Date: 01 Mar 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 01 Mar 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Poor Leah. Sadly men get away with a lot of crap. hmm now who is the woman with Edward. Gotta say it looks bad but hopefully he'll have a good excuse.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Venice is amazing. I highly recommend it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Love your story can't wait to read more,great writing.
Date: 31 Jan 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Another great chapter. I live this story. Equal parts mob storyromance. I enjoy some asngst but like E & B to be united agasagasinst an outside angst and this is a great story for that formula. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Fantastic!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Excellent!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Amazing chapter!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Stupid Jacob!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob is an asshole!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Bella is awesome!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Go Bella!
Date: 24 Jan 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Bella is awesome!
Date: 24 Jan 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Loved it!
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Loved it!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Loved it!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Loved it!
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Dont mess with Edward and dont even think about messing with his wife what a man. So a botle of that Vodka would pay my house off interesting.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
This is one of the best Mafia stories I've read on Fanfiction. Awesome.
Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Absolutely loved this last chapter. I love every word of this story. One of the best mobwood stories so far. Please keep updating and make it a loooooooooooooooog story. Thank you, Pamela Hanley pamjhanley@gmail.com
Date: 11 Jan 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Edward has been a busy man.
Sherry
Date: 10 Jan 2017 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Don't think Alice is going to let Jasper leave quietly. Glad Bella had Claire to be with
Date: 10 Jan 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Really good
Date: 10 Jan 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Jasper sure put himself in a spot! That is a horrible thing for Carlisle to send him away to get killed. Poor Alice will be heartbroken. Maybe she should insist that she could go with him. That might change Carlisle's mind.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa....Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
I hope jasper doesn't have to go. Maybe alice can sweet talk her Carlisle.
Date: 10 Jan 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Another great chapter! Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
:)
Date: 10 Jan 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
You know what, I'm not feeling sorry for Jasper at all. He knew better then to keep that from the families. When are people gonna learn not to talk about Bella that way, no good ever comes from it.
Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
I LOVE IT!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Well Edward gave him many chances.:-)
Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Amazing chapter. I feel bad for jasper. I feel this will be his death sentence. I also am not sure billy black has been properly neutralized yet.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
So happy for them.
Date: 29 Dec 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
I like this chapter!
Thank you and good parties
Date: 24 Dec 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
LOVED IT!
Date: 23 Dec 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Glad Bella is so happy. Jasper def needs to watch his step for awhile.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
What a honeymoon and what a place to have it.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
Really good
Date: 22 Dec 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Loved it!
Date: 22 Dec 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Awesome chapter!
Date: 22 Dec 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
:) Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 15 Nov 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Jasper better watch his back.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Great chapter. Can't wait for the wedding.
Date: 30 Oct 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Great work
Date: 28 Oct 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loving this story. Glad you are feeling better and able to continue
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
It is a good chapter.
I like this fiction.
Thank you.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
please let Carlisle show Jasper some mercy
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
What idiots! Glad ur feeling up to writing...it's such a good plot! C u soon
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Good thing Edward was there to save Jaspers life lol. Victoria is not very smart and what a bitch not cool grandma but Edward showed her who was boss loved it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it! Thank you for writing!
Annie B
Date: 20 Oct 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
oh wow I think Jasper needs to watch his back.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Jacob got what he deserved!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I really hate Jacob!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved the chapter and so happyto see you are doing better!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it! Worth the wait, can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
- Great chapter !
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
THANK YOUUUU!!!!!
This chapter was full of situations and long, LOVE IT
Wish you get well soon...
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved the update. The Woods have to be mindless idiots. I kept waiting for Edward to shoot them or order their death. Jenks must have been looking for a death wish. Jasper and Alice have lost their minds too. Jasper is gonna be in some deep shit for a long time. I loved how Edward pointed out that Carlisle only agreed to the engagement and wedding, but mentioned nothing of supporting a marriage. I love Edward and Bella together, they make a fantastic couple.
Sherry
Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Get well and keep writing. Love the story
Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
I LOVE THIS! ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
The best story that I'm currently reading and better than the majority of what I have read in the past. Thanks so much.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
I wonder what Jasper could possibly offer Carlisle to make him forgive him? I has to be something really good.
What a day for Edward to deal with all of this stuff just before his wedding! I'm really surprised Edward didn't just kill Victoria. If she isn't careful, she might just have an accident. They don't know Edward killed her do they?
Thanks for writing. I am so glad you are feeling better!
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Glad you're doing well! Also glad your writing again Love your story can not wait to read the wedding chapter! 👍Great writing
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
:)
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
This was a great chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Knew the woods were shoddy and stupid Victoria seems spiteful and arrogant and omg jasper is in so much trouble with Carlisle but really hope he doesn't shoot jazz look forward to next update xx
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Wow a lot of things happened this chapter. I was so happy to see an email in my inbox telling me their was a new chapter. I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if it will be the rehearsals dinner with Jasper's proposal or just right onto the wedding and honeymoon. Can't wait.
Melissa
Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
I'm glad your doing better, so glad to see your writing again, I love this story and look forward to reading each chapter. Really Alice should of known better, hope Jasper survives, I really don't think we've heard the last of the Woods but glad the wedding is here. I wonder if Charlie is going to be stupid about something, he didn't look to happy during that meeting a while back.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Poor James having a scummy wife (very very rare I feel sympathy for James). Oooh Jasper, you really screwed this one up.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Love, love, love this story! Hope you are feeling better and you can finish it sometime soon.
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Loved it!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Great!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Loved it!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Loved it!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Loved it!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
Loved it!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it!
Date: 11 Sep 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
I sorry I didn't know I hope all is well and thank you
Date: 11 Sep 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I love this story I just wanted to know if you where going to update thank you for your time
Author's Response:
Hello
thx for your note. I am working on next update but it is slow going as I am in recovery from major surgery. I am doing well but tire easily so everything is slower than usual.
thx for supporting my story
cheers,
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
best mafia story ever. love strong/soft Edward and soft/strong Bella. Very original storyline and interesting characters. pls make this a looooooooooooon story and update as much as possible. thank you again for so much enjoyment in this reading. regards, Pameal Hanley pamjhanley@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I'm not expecting things to go as planned. Something is bond to happen.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
J'aime ce chapitre.
Merci. Bisous.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
It could go well or it could explode. I hope all these bad boys behave.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Can't wait for more. Keep it going great job
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Amazing
Date: 15 Aug 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Its a good thing Charlie showed up. I cant wait for more. I love love love this story
Date: 15 Aug 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I LOVE IT!!! :)
Date: 15 Aug 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Good chapter! I wish u updated more! This story is great ! Its hard waiting a month for one chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
j'ai adorateur mes tu tes peu de Mettre chapitre pluarapide stp merci