Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Absolutely loved this last chapter. I love every word of this story. One of the best mobwood stories so far. Please keep updating and make it a loooooooooooooooog story. Thank you, Pamela Hanley email@example.com
Date: 10 Jan 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Jasper sure put himself in a spot! That is a horrible thing for Carlisle to send him away to get killed. Poor Alice will be heartbroken. Maybe she should insist that she could go with him. That might change Carlisle's mind.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Loved the update. The Woods have to be mindless idiots. I kept waiting for Edward to shoot them or order their death. Jenks must have been looking for a death wish. Jasper and Alice have lost their minds too. Jasper is gonna be in some deep shit for a long time. I loved how Edward pointed out that Carlisle only agreed to the engagement and wedding, but mentioned nothing of supporting a marriage. I love Edward and Bella together, they make a fantastic couple.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
I wonder what Jasper could possibly offer Carlisle to make him forgive him? I has to be something really good.
What a day for Edward to deal with all of this stuff just before his wedding! I'm really surprised Edward didn't just kill Victoria. If she isn't careful, she might just have an accident. They don't know Edward killed her do they?
Thanks for writing. I am so glad you are feeling better!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Knew the woods were shoddy and stupid Victoria seems spiteful and arrogant and omg jasper is in so much trouble with Carlisle but really hope he doesn't shoot jazz look forward to next update xx
Date: 18 Oct 2016 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Wow a lot of things happened this chapter. I was so happy to see an email in my inbox telling me their was a new chapter. I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if it will be the rehearsals dinner with Jasper's proposal or just right onto the wedding and honeymoon. Can't wait.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
I'm glad your doing better, so glad to see your writing again, I love this story and look forward to reading each chapter. Really Alice should of known better, hope Jasper survives, I really don't think we've heard the last of the Woods but glad the wedding is here. I wonder if Charlie is going to be stupid about something, he didn't look to happy during that meeting a while back.
Date: 11 Sep 2016 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I love this story I just wanted to know if you where going to update thank you for your time
thx for your note. I am working on next update but it is slow going as I am in recovery from major surgery. I am doing well but tire easily so everything is slower than usual.
thx for supporting my story
Date: 23 Aug 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
best mafia story ever. love strong/soft Edward and soft/strong Bella. Very original storyline and interesting characters. pls make this a looooooooooooon story and update as much as possible. thank you again for so much enjoyment in this reading. regards, Pameal Hanley firstname.lastname@example.org
Date: 13 Aug 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow. Tense. Jacob seems to have wrapped himself in a stench that, I think, won't easily go away. Edward and Isabella will need to teach him a lesson in part II of discipline. Such a good chapter. Thank you.