Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
Congratulations! Your story has something that are new for me to read, a new setting. The storys convolutions are fascinating. I hope you continue writing this. I do not have or want a FB. Please post if you will continue. Also the information on how to obtain the publishment. Thank you. Sincerely....olive
Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 Is that virgin blood?
Wow!! If you publish this one I will be the first one in line to purchase it!! I've read so many mediocre stories lately and it is SO refreshing to read something that is written well, and I look forward to more. Honestly!! Too bad there are just three chapters to be read.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
I love what you wrote and the changes you made!!!!!!! Everything that you post is extraordinary!!!!!! Hope to read more soon..........
it is really hard not to share the next chapters with anyone cause i feel like i am holding out...but i really want to see if i can sell a book versus just giving it away! lol
Date: 02 Mar 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
Have you published it yet?
no...i am still working on it. i promise the moment i do i will let the world know via my blog or my facebook which is andrea bunting aka robshandmonkey
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
Ok I read your first story and loved it . I am starting to get into this one and really like what you have so far and look forward to reading more . I like that your female is strong and hope that you are willing to post more. Let me also say how happy I am that you are back
this version of Shhh will have a much stronger female and the male will still be who he is...cause i love him that way!
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
I'm glad to see you are back..at least a little..I lost both of my daughters (ages 26 & 30) within 6 months of each other in 2006 and I know the pain of that loss...I know yours was even more since it was a husband (who seemed to be much loved by you from your words alone).
I have read the original and loved it but this one seems just as interesting. You are an extremely gifted writer.
i believe losing what we have lost is the most devastating of all losses. my heart breaks for you...that is way too young to lose your children....
i think i am finally bouncing back...it has taken a very long two years but i want to write again genuinely...i just wasnt there yet...but i am finally feeling it and the characters are talking to me again...its wonderful u have no idea...lol..Thank you so much!!! this review has warmed my heart!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
I loved that she didnt back down with either Evan or Nicholas (boy it is hard to use these names), and her little act of defensive behavior in "redirecting" his art on the way out;)
But that wasnt your question to begin with.... so after reading all three new chapters I'd say, I'm still as fascinated as I was reading the twilight version for the first time. I'm not gonna lie here, I'm going to miss this story like crazy, and even being able to own a paperback version isn't going to be the same instead of reading on my tab....
I'll always prefer the "original" story over a published verson, even if I have read the original more times than once, it'll always be closer to my heart, I experienced that sadly with each published story I read. Mostly I felt disappointed with the changes starting from the characters names to their appearance, or the lack of change to the plot - worse if it's getting "all censored" as it happened with EP it was with almost no changes besides names as in MotU.
I think each woman more than deserved to get publish, and I think the same for you, but I hate to loose my favorites to a more covilized version that lacks he magic I first felt reading that same plot...
I couldn't agree with you more. I really battled with changing any of it and leaving it alone...
I also feel the same way about the published versions of famous fanfics....never felt the same way about the characters...especially EP...
I can promise you that there is no way Nicholas is not going to show you just how much he loves Alyssa. That I promise...because I felt the love loss in Sempre it just wasnt the same..
I am hoping that I have learned from other authors and their pull to publish versions. I am hoping my story comes out a little better but I cant say that Shhhh.....wont always be my favorite.
Purrward will never be topped.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
oh my. he certainly has a powerful presence. it literally jumps off the page. while I am waiting for this to publish, I just might have to read the original FF again....I do have the pdf....hope that's ok....I give this a hearty and enthusiastic two thumbs up.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
It's says complete? It isn't is it? I would love to read this again.
It is for now. This was just a sample so that I could get input on it. The original story is on my blogspot for Robshandmonkey...you can read the fanfic version there. I will be posting a couple of photos for this and a teaser for the reveal of when Alyssa learns he is a vampire but that is it...
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 Is that virgin blood?
What name will you publish this under? Your own? Will you call it Shhhh....when it's finally published? This is really exciting for me and I am so eager to read the finished product. I realize it will take a while....
My own name....
I am not sure yet I was thinking of changing it but I don't want my readers to lose track of it with a different title...
I hope it don't take much longer a few months. I am well into this story already...farther than you would think...Thanks for your support! love u!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
You answered all my questions so far except the danger. I think you should publish it and soon. I was thinking about you and the original story about a week ago. Crazy huh? Glad you are back if just for this this works too! Take care.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 Is that virgin blood?
You did make reference to the qualities of vampires but if I wasn't into twilight I may not made the connection yet. Is that intentional? Not liking the long hair not my thing. Reminds of Aro. I like my men with short hair.
yes it was intentional...until Edward says it in chapter 3
And I have a thing for guys with long hair I always have...loved robs when it was the longest he ever wore it...
I plan to post a few photos of the characters so you all can see why i picked them...Nicholas looks very much like a biker/vampire
and the hair is going to play an important role in a few scenes with Alyssa...i hope you still love him !
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
I like the intrigue. Doing something illegal and taboo, in a skyscraper of glass without the business world knowing. I am afraid I don't know if they are vampires? How did Alyssa find and get involved in this club? What is Nicholas doing to piss of the wrong people? I need my questions answered. So I am in.
Lol.... Thank you and yes they are vamps...as for Nicholas.... Trouble tends to follow him because of the business dealings he gets involved in...he didn't necessarily make all that money on the up andand up...hes not as perfect as he thinks his life around him is or the way alyssa sees him... Hes far from it... Glad it intrigued u! Hearts and hugs!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
I really liked the beginning of this version, even if I did enjoy your former ff version. I would say to go for it. Lease let us know. This is a story I would buy.
Awww...I will as soon as I find a publisher and thank you so much!!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
I think you should publish.
Stories either draw you in or they don't in my opinion.
Yours have always pulled me into another world,where the phone gets ignored and the dinner burnt.
GO FOR IT!!!!!!
I would be happy to purchase them.xx
Omg thank you! I was so worried my readers are going to hate it! You are awesome! Hugs!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
You know, I really loved your original version of Shh.... missed it dearly as well as I hoped for a new update of "Dom and Gent"
But I can tell you made quite some changes to this already from the beginning! It is as well written as anything I know of your work!
The decision about it being published is a tough one... the egoistic part of my advices to tell you not to publish it, in hope you'll upload "my version" again;) But I'm pretty sure that won't happen either way:(
So I think it's more depending on the storyline, will you stay with the Vampire theme, because I think that's what would be the most difficult part to accept a change in....
Thank you so much for your review... Yes he is still our Dominant vampire purrward...the story line will be the only differences...
Date: 13 Feb 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?
Love it can not wait for you get it out, I have read your stories on Fan faction and your blog and I love all of then .glad you are back hope all is going well for you my prayers are with you ! Shhh is wonderfully written can't wait tell it's number one best seller out there! My other is officer and gentlemen can't wait for you to start that up again ! Hope you do that should be published also great storyline and I read it three times so far I loved it .Well I wish you the best and good luck with everything hope all your dreams and hard work comes true God Bless You.
i have started to finish adag there are a few chapters left! it is posting again! and thank you truly!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
i love every thing you write and of course i think you should publish!!!!!!!!!!!! i would love to read the next 2 chapters.........
Awww thank you hunni! The next two are up... Enjoy! ♥
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
I say go for it. There are not enough people who have the balls to write with the power and point of view you do and I think it will do well. But now I want to read this version too...as soon as possible.
Thank you! I was starting to question my ability to still write. I appreciate your review truly!