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I loved the twilight version, did this ever get published?

More?

Congratulations! Your story has something that are new for me to read, a new setting. The storys convolutions are fascinating. I hope you continue writing this. I do not have or want a FB. Please post if you will continue. Also the information on how to obtain the publishment. Thank you. Sincerely....olive

Wow!!  If you publish this one I will be the first one in line to purchase it!!  I've read so many mediocre stories lately and it is SO refreshing to read something that is written well, and I look forward to more.  Honestly!!  Too bad there are just three chapters to be read.

loved the first shhh

this one sounds great looking forward to what comes next 

well done

I really love it! And I would love to read more! 

I love the story in both versions!

Have you published it yet?

Come On, next chapter please!!!!

I loved the original story and I look forward to seeing what you do here in the conversion.  I do hope you change the word geyser to geezer, since that is what you actually meant.

Is there more of this story? Please say there is! It's so well written! And so deliciously sexy~

I think I'm very interested!!   Is the Twilight version available anywhere?

I love it! Then again, I love everything you've written. I can't wait for you to publish.

Can't wait for more...!!

:) 

I'm glad to see you are back..at least a little..I lost both of my daughters (ages 26 & 30) within 6 months of each other in 2006 and I know the pain of that loss...I know yours was even more since it was a husband (who seemed to be much loved by you from your words alone).

I have read the original and loved it but this one seems just as interesting.  You are an extremely gifted writer. 

Oh yeah.. I would definitely buy.... Certainly have missed you.. You have my approval and support for printing this story!

I loved that she didnt back down with either Evan or Nicholas (boy it is hard to use these names), and her little act of defensive behavior in "redirecting" his art on the way out;)

But that wasnt your question to begin with.... so after reading all three new chapters I'd say, I'm still as fascinated as I was reading the twilight version for the first time. I'm not gonna lie here, I'm going to miss this story like crazy, and even being able to own a paperback version isn't going to be the same instead of reading on my tab....

I'll always prefer the "original" story over a published verson, even if I have read the original more times than once, it'll always be closer to my heart, I experienced that sadly with each published story I read. Mostly I felt disappointed with the changes starting from the characters names to their appearance, or the lack of change to the plot - worse if it's getting "all censored" as it happened with EP it was with almost no changes besides names as in MotU.

I think each woman more than deserved to get publish, and I think the same for you, but I hate to loose my favorites to a more covilized version that lacks he magic I first felt reading that same plot...

I think it is a no-brainer to him having Alyssa and Destiny removed from the club, I just doubt it'll really be that easy ;)

oh my.  he certainly has a powerful presence. it literally jumps off the page. while I am waiting for this to publish, I just might have to read the original FF again....I do have the pdf....hope that's ok....I give this a hearty and enthusiastic two thumbs up.

What name will you publish this under? Your own? Will you call it Shhhh....when it's finally published?  This is really exciting for me and I am so eager to read the finished product. I realize it will take a while....

You answered all my questions so far except the danger. I think you should publish it and soon. I was thinking about you and the original story about a week ago. Crazy huh?  Glad you are back if just for this this works too!  Take care. 

I want more. Love the last sentence!

good

hot damn!!! Loved it.

I think you should publish.

Stories either draw you in or they don't in my opinion. 

Yours have always pulled me into another world,where the phone gets ignored and the dinner burnt.

GO FOR IT!!!!!!

I would be happy to purchase them.xx

Love it can not wait for you get it out, I have read your stories on Fan faction  and your blog and I love all of then .glad you are back hope all is going well for you my prayers are with you ! Shhh is wonderfully written can't wait tell it's number one best seller out there! My other is officer and gentlemen can't wait for you to start that up again ! Hope you do that should be published also great storyline and I read it three times so far I loved it .Well I wish you the best and good luck with everything hope all your dreams and hard work comes true God Bless You.

Loved it

Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you still do!

I say go for it.  There are not enough people who have the balls to write with the power and point of view you do and I think it will do well.  But now I want to read this version too...as soon as possible.

Didnt this used to be a Twilight Edward and Bella fic??