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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Alice needs to get her head on straight.  Jacob is a tool. Bella needs to show off her love of Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 21

So Emmett is a total douche bag! Cheating on Rose for no reason like man the hell up and fix your relationship! Don't blame your wife for everything like damn! Jasper and Alice idk what to think about their relationship right now. I don't think it's going to go over well her whispering Jacob's name in her sex filled sleep. Super happy that Bella and Edward are good though! I'm a total purist with them and never want them to cheat or anything like that or break up so I'm glad to see that their relationship is still strong! Jacob is a total moron though like Bella isn't interested in you and she never will be! Stop trying to break her and Edward up! Plus Jessica is so stupid thinking that she can team up with Jacob to get Bella and Edward to divorce! Glad that Rose decided to do what was best for her and divorce Emmett's cheating ass! I actually really like this Tanya since she isn't trying to break up Edward and Bella for once and is actually a good person! I'm also super glad that Bella trusts her relationship with Edward to see that he wouldn't ever think to cheat on her, least of all with Tanya! Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

You're so right about Emmett. He regrets his actions, believe me.

Ah, the problem with Alice and Jasper it's more subtle... it's tedium. Jasper didn't hear Alice so it will be more of her shock than anything.

I'm also a purish and have to have Bella and Edward together always, without cheating, that's my number one rule. But , there are always bumps on the road. But I'm also a sucker for a happy ending, so the bad guys will get what they deserve.

I also like to move things a bit and change the characters personalities, so sometimes the evil cannon characters are good and the good ones are bad.  Except Bella and Edward, they're always good and together ;) and Jacob, there's something about him that irks me, he will never be the hero in my stories.

Thank you so much for reading and giving me your opinion, I really appreciate it.

May

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2016 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love the update. Bella should follow Rose's  advice & flaunt her marriage at the office



Author's Response:

She will ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)  Merry Christmas to you 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

Rosalie got a long battle ahead of her.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but she has not only her family support but her friends too :)

Thanks, hun

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad for the update. Can't wait for Jakes to follow  up with his photos



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up! I hope you'll like it :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you, hun! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 19

Carlisle is so funny. He has nothing to worry about. 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm surprised that Emmett was surprised. 

 

I hope Bella makes Edward grovel a little bit but just to be funny. I have an odd sense of humor, I know. 

 

Jasper and Carlisle are odd. I get Carlisle, but I can't get in Jasper's head at all. He just seems to be going through the motions.

 

I loved this chapter and I love this story! You're awesome.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Things are bad for Emmett.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

I can't  wait for Bella to laugh in Jacob's face when he tries to show her proof  of Edward's infidelity 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

What a chapter! Emmett was truly shocked at Rose wanting a divorse, the clueless dummy!  Poor Edward, he's been set up by Jacob, it looks like. That must have been who was taking pictures of Tanya stumbling into Edward's room and later at breakfast. The sad thing is , Edward has no clue what was going on! Jasper is going to have to dodge his old girlfriend, but that funeral was a real celebration of his uncle's life! Lastly, Carlisle better be careful he doesn'[t hurt himself, trying to prove he's not old!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved how Bella handled the Jacob fan club. Hoping Jake's emergency was taking his new friends out & moving on.

Please update soon . Don't leave us hanging 



Author's Response:

Sorry for taking so long :)

The new chapter is up, I hope you'll like though I don't think we will get rid of Jacob soon.

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Is someone trying to set Edward up? 



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Yep, someone is trying to get between Edward and Bella. I hope you liked the new chapter :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sounds to me as if someone is trying to frame Edward and make it seem he's fooling around with Tanya! Gee, I wonder who would want to do that? Good for Rosalie, listening to her mother and packing up all Emmett's stuff and kicking hing out the door! Poor Jasper, he has a very sad duty to perform , now his uncle has passed. I hope Esme listens to Bree about Carlisle's feelings of growing older! Finally, I had to smile whem Bella introduced all the snotty girls to Jake!

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Please update soon! The suspense is killer!



Author's Response:

Sorry. Real life sometimes messes with my plans. The new chapter is up and I hope you'll like it. I also almost finished the next one.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 



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Thanks! :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

I feel for Rose, but am glad her family is supporting her. It was quite sweet, the way Esme gave Joham reassurance. Too cute, how Bella got everyone squared away and saved them all a lot of extra work!



Author's Response:

Yep, going through a divorce is so painful, but that's what family is for, to be with you in goo times and bad times :)

The same goes to Esme, Joham is just not used to have that kind of support.

Bella showed them  :)

Thanks

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! I'm surprised Edward's work load doesn't seem to ease up. 



Author's Response:

It's just this big case. As soon as he finishes it, he will have a rest ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

Rose is being strong.



Author's Response:

And she will get better :)

Thanks !

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it. I hope Rose's plan works for Jake



Author's Response:

Hi!

We'll see, he's kind of blind. Wait for next chapter tomorrow ;)

Thank you :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

I guess Emmett is learning the lessons of too little, too late! Rose's idea of pushing the young girls on Jacob, to distract him from Bella is a good. Too bad he's just egotistic enough to not realize the truth

Author's Response:

You're right about Emmett, and he still has a couple of lessons coming onto him ;)

Ah Jacob... he only sees what he wants, clearly deluded. Not sure if Rose's plan is going to work on him :(

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 16

Too little, too late, Emmett.



Author's Response:

Yeah, and he's really clueless of what is about to happen :)

Thanks 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2016 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

Too little too late Emmett!!!! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, and he's really clueless of what is about to happen :)

Thanks 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Liked this chapter a lot, because it caught us up on everyone. Sounds to me as if Emmett is about to learn the facts of life, and Edward may notice what a jerk Jacob really is!



Author's Response:

Emmett will have a hard lesson to learn ;) but it will take a bit more for Edward to notice Jacob's true nature

Thank you :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

Emmett getting what coming to him.



Author's Response:

And we're only starting ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

This has become one of my favorite first. Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words :)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it :-)

 

Yay, Rose. Yay everyone. I like it when people are happy. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's all part of life :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

Rose is falling apart.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, she's going through her grieving.

Thank you hun, you're always there for me :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love in his eyes, my foot! If he loved Rose, Emmett wouldn't be doing this to her, period! What a mess!



Author's Response:

Now, you made me smile. Don't worry, he will pay ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Rose 



Author's Response:

Thank you hun :)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

Sorry things were so tough :-( 

 

Still loving the story, though! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your well wishes. I'm so glad last month is over.

I hope you'll like what's next.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

Rosalie is going to get even.



Author's Response:

Yes, well, at least she will recover her freedom :)

Thanks

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

Even with Rose determined on divorcing Emmet, all the friends seem to be in a pretty good place this tome around!. I'm glad Edward doesn't like Jacob's sttitude, since Bella still feels uncomfortable around him at the gym. Can't wait to see what Esme has in store for Carlisle!



Author's Response:

You'll like Esme's talk with Carlisle ;)

Thanks 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

Ha ha. I'm weird about this story. When I get the notification email, I drop whatever I'm doing and read. 

 

I really hope Rose gets everything! I'm ready for some revenge. 



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! I promise to not let so muchs time pass between postings.

Rose will get her revenge, but there's still a long road to go.

Really thanks for your support, you made my day.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Rosalie marriage is over with for good.



Author's Response:

Sad but true :(

Thanks

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bless Carlisle for really trying to make this weekend special for Esme. She almost appreciated the effort, but he still has hurt feelings! As for Rose, I think she's doing this the right way, getting support from family and friends. Only Jacob is being delusional, hoping he has a shot with Bella!



Author's Response:

Yes, Esme will learn a lesson in 'tact' ;)

Rose still has a lot to come, but she'll have the support of her friends all the way :)

Well, Jacob has someone also pushing the right buttons to help him believe this nonsense ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Esme's in trouble. So is Emmet. The video of him cheating will be perfect to show the judge in court. I wouldn't even let him know about it until then. Perfect surprise for the asshole. 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Esme will talk with Carlisle eventually ;)

About the video... There'll be something like that soon ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope Esme and Carlisle can work through their problems but good riddance to Emmett 



Author's Response:

They will :) And I hope you'll like the way Rose will deal with Emmett.

Thanks

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope Emmett gets destroyed in the divorce! 

 

So it was Jessica spying on Edward and Tanya. Either way, Edward needs to balance work and home life better. I don't blame people for thinking something is going on. 

 

Poor Carlisle. Hopefully he and Esme get another honeymoon stage of their relationship. 



Author's Response:

He will, just for Rose to recover her strength ;)

About Edward, well, at least, they also have Leah on their side. She will help a lot ;)

Esme will talk to him, they will make up.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah Rose. Kick him to the curb.



Author's Response:

She will, in the best way ;)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hate Emmett. 

 

I feel really bad for Bella. I have a bad feeling about Edward. 



Author's Response:

Emmett is weak, and he will pay :(

but don't worry about Edward :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Rose.  I don't blame her



Author's Response:

You shouldn't ;) Emmett will get what he deserves.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

Unintended consequences, I guess! Poor Rose, like she doesn't have enough on her plate right now, this falls into her lap! I suppose when something hurts that much, your first thought might be divorce, I just don't know what I would do.



Author's Response:

she will have to think, but her decision is taken :(

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett your in big trouble.



Author's Response:

and Rose will get her revenge ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

Emmett is really stupid for cheating,jasper has felling out love with Alice,Carlisle has to face reality you will grow old no matter what,Edward I feel bad for him lost of a child can hurt in a lot of ways.

I hope you make Jessica and Jacob both feel very bad for hurting two people.



Author's Response:

You know me, the bad guys always will pay in the end ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Edward 



Author's Response:

Poor indeed  :(

Thanks

 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ooh, the office grapevine is going to be on fire! I feel awful forBella :-(  Losing a child is devastating and then to have your spouse shut you out... A world of hurt. 



Author's Response:

Let's hope it doesn't get too bad. Please, don't be too hard on Edward, he was there for her, he will explain how he tried to be strong while she recovered but now it's time for him to grieve :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Before I continue moving forward.  I need to know about the infidelity. Will there really be infidelity? And what couple (s)? Still ify about that subject. .lol

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi! There will be one couple dealing with infidelity, Rosalie and Emmett. The others will face doubts, maybe people making them believe their better half is cheating, but the only couple with real infidelity, not rumors, will be Rose & Emmett.

(I hope I'm not giving too much away as it's already posted when we found about Emmett).

I know it's a difficult subject, and if you have more questions you can ask, I'm here to answer :)

Thanks to you :)

May

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'm really hoping that Edward and Carlisle are good guys. We kind of knew Emmett  wasn't. Jasper seems nice. I think he's just over the way Alice handles the kids. As for Peter, I don't think it's fair to chalk what he said up to emotional blackmail. Was it? Yeah, but Alice is a crap mother to him. She is. 

 

Can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Hmm, they are. Really. Almost everybody wants to strangle Emmett ;)

And Jasper... you'll see.

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Rose.  She needs to kick Emmett to the kerb 



Author's Response:

She probably will :(

Thanks

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

I see all sorts of clouds on everyone's horizon! Jacob is clueless, Alice is guilt-ridden, Rosalie will be so hurt by what Alice saw and Esme may well have a fit when she finds out what car Carlisle has got himself!



Author's Response:

Yes, the drama has officially started. I hope the guys POV helps to understand what's going on their minds.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

The big drama has arrived.



Author's Response:

So true ;)

Reviewer: purplerose75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

Run Rose...put all your money in that new account and send Emmett packing. No more mooching off your money and doing whatever he pleases with it.



Author's Response:

Just 'til she finds out ;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't blame Rose for her breaking heart, it's pretty discouraging  when Emmett wouldn't even stay awake to hear her out! I look forward to the men's point of view!



Author's Response:

Yes, poor woman can't get a rest.

Thanks! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

Trouble not over with yet.



Author's Response:

No, they are really starting now ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

There more trouble to come.



Author's Response:

Yes, we're just starting. Wait and see ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

These women are usually strong.  In this story they are so weak. 



Author's Response:

Hi!

I'd like to think they're just human, but we're begining with the drama. Well, it already started for Rose.

I hope you like what follows next.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really hope Emmett gets over this running to his buddies every time he has a fight with Rose! She may not be blameless in this but they both need to sit down and talk over things, instead of sweeping it under the rug! Alice and Jasper are working on their problems and Bella and Edward are pretty good, for now!



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett has to face her, not make her pay by leaving. Like he's throwing a tantrum. On the other hand, Alice and Jasper still have a lot to work, but hey, they started.

Thnaks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

Alice and Rosalie have lot of problems with there marriages. I don't think one man is going to leave bella alone.



Author's Response:

Yes, they need to have a good talk with their husbands :)

You'll see when the name of the man comes what are his intentions :)

Thank you

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh dear! Rose has a problem she wasn't aware of, and I'm afraid maybe more than one. Emmett is hiding something, that's for sure! The bicep guy is worrying me, since he hasn't taken the hint about Bella being happily married. Too bad Jane told him Bella's name! Alice better get on the ball making things right with Jasper and Peter, too.



Author's Response:

Rose and Emmett have a lot more problems they need to deal with.

We will soon find out who's the bicep guy and what's his deal, I promise.

Alice and Jasper are others that need to talk ASAP

Thank you :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

Let us all hope that Bella's unease won't turn out to be an omen of danger! I felt bad that Jasper and Alice are at odds over their children and money. I also wonder if Esme is going to find out Carlisle's problem at work, or if she needs further detecting?



Author's Response:

Hmm, it will cause a few problems, but nothing Bella can't handle.

Alice and Jasper have to talk, a lot.

Carlisle problem not only comes from work, it all began for another thing that bothered him :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Rose.  Emmett should have spoken to her first 



Author's Response:

:) Thanks :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

What a creeper



Author's Response:

Yeah, and when she really finds out who he is... she will deal with him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Sorry for taking my time to answer. I'm recovering from a cold :(

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

Esme trying figure out what going on with Carlisle. Alice need start doing something different with her children. Bella I feel for her I feel uncomfortable too if someone was watching me through the mirrors.



Author's Response:

And Esme will be shocked when she really finds out what really made Carlisle behave like that.

Alice will face some hard truths.

Yeah, poor Bella. But she will find who is the stalker soon.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Something worried is going on with Carlisle.



Author's Response:

We can only hope Esme finds out quickly so she can help him :)

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yes, Esme and what's wrong with your husband is called "middle-aged crazy"!  Maybe even a mid-life crisis, depending on what else he worries about! So far, so good with Tanya and Bella, I think they may become friends.



Author's Response:

No, you nailed it. Now if only Esme manages to find out and helps him :)

As you said, so far so good ;) Let's see what happens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

That old cliche, "wham, bam, thank you maam", and not even the thank you! Poor Rose! I'm sure between them Jasper and Alice will help Cynthia, they both care so much for her. I'm hoping Edward and Bella don't regret making friends with Tanya!



Author's Response:

you're right poor Rose :(

Don't worry for Cynthia, she will be fine :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Rosalie 



Author's Response:

And it's only beginning :( but she has her friends.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

More drama is on the way for these women.



Author's Response:

Yes, we're only beginning :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

All the couple's in the story are going have bigger and worse problems then they think.



Author's Response:

Absolutely true. One won't be so 'difficult' as the other though.

thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Something is going on with Carlisle, for sure! Looks like Alice and Jasper are about to have problems with their daughter, too!



Author's Response:

Yes, but next chapter we will find out about Alice's daughter first :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: isobel Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

is edward going to cheat?

 



Author's Response:

No. Don't worry, I'm a B&E fan, they always end up happy together. But I didn't say it would be an easy road ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Life's never easy for everyone all at the same time, I guess. It looks as if Rose and Emmett are having a rough time, maybe due to Rose making more money than he does. Bella and Edward have suffered a devestating loss and Jessica Stanley is a bitch!



Author's Response:

Yes, and in the next chapter you'll be introduced to Alice and Esme ;), though their problems will unfold slowlier.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more of this



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Sorry for answering late, I spent five days without internet so mail was about to explode when I finally had the chance to tackle it. I hope you know how much I appreciate your support.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's good so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like what will come next.

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