Date: 08 Jul 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, he asked her to marry him.
Date: 08 Jul 2020 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
I knew she was going to get in trouble.
Date: 07 Jul 2020 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
She is going to get in so much trouble for not telling Carlisle right away.
Date: 07 Jul 2020 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
I see both sides with Bella and Charlie.
Date: 28 Jun 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was so excited to see this update. Sorry about your hospital stay. Glad you are out. Hope you are doing better. Carlisle seems really stressed about Bella behavior. I hope we see more "Daddy" time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm doing much better and I am hoping the writing again will help.. Lets just say Bella was a little bit of a handful at the club during that week. I'm writing chapter 12 now, little plot twist but you will definetly get more daddy time ;)
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE Charlie throwing the water on her. Wonder how Charlie would feel about Carlisle being there..... or about Carlisle dating Bella at all. hmmm Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
oooh Not a good thing. Glad Charlie put a pit of the fear of god into her. Esp the serving minors part
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Louise apologized
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Alice and Jess are just awful. Glad B told them off.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow Louise isnt acting very much like a friends either. Nice that Carlisle is making her do research on her own
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love that Charlie is a cook in this one. Cool dad.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Alice and Jess are horrible friends
Date: 01 Jun 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm surprised that that was all Charlie did to the girls. I was wondering if Carlisle was going to spank her when he got there.
Date: 31 May 2019 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
They seem so happy together. I hope Charlie will understand. Carlisle gives Bella the guidance she needs.
Date: 31 May 2019 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
They are cute together. Big age difference, but they are both adults so everyone should let them be.
Date: 31 May 2019 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
nice to see her having good friends and finishing school. Sounds like a yummy daddy
Date: 31 May 2019 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Charlie is pissed. I wonder about Carlisle, how will he react.
Date: 31 May 2019 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 30 May 2019 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to read more about the lifestyle.
Author's Response:
I've messaged you privately.
Date: 30 May 2019 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
The more I read the more I think I would like this lifestyle. Working at a hospital is so stressful and this seems like it would be a great way to be less stressed when the work hours are over. I'm really enjoying the story.
Author's Response:
That’s so exciting to hear! If you want any advice on where to look or anyone to talk to about it, feel free to message me! It is definitely a great way to de-stress, haha! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story!!
Date: 11 May 2019 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder when Carlisle will question her about Alice and Jessica. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 May 2019 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
The scene at the end was hot. I'm glad she glad to have her say with Alice and Jessica.
Date: 10 May 2019 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
I happy that Bella is feeling better. Her friends should only want her to be happy.
Date: 29 Apr 2019 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can not believe Louise acted like she did. With Alice and Jessica they are young like Bella and are still kind of thinking of themselves. But Louise is older than Bella and is suppose to be more mature. I hope Jasper spanks her hen he got her home. Is having children something that Carlisle and Bella have talked about. Will we find out about what happened to Louise and why she can't have children? I am loving this story..
Date: 29 Apr 2019 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like reading about their past and their present.
Date: 29 Apr 2019 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella really got into little mold in this chapter. I'm sure she needed after studying for her finals. I feel bad for her at the end.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews!
Date: 29 Apr 2019 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
They have a very interesting relationship.
Date: 28 Apr 2019 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella definitely deserved her spanking.
Date: 14 Apr 2019 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think she is better off without them. They are bad influences. I hope that she can get past this and that she dont do anything else to get in trouble with her "daddy". keep up the good work.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good update. C pov on the story
Date: 31 Mar 2019 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Lemon writing successful. Congratulations on posting another chapter. It's very brave to put out stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate the time you took to review, especially to let me know that the lemon was ok.. was kinda worried about that, haha! But thank you!!
Date: 30 Mar 2019 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great update
Author's Response:
Thank you, your review means a lot!
Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting. I wish you would start back writing it. Hope you will.
Date: 04 May 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue would love to know what happens.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cant wait to read what's next :D
Date: 12 Jan 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good :)
Date: 15 Dec 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thus could be fun.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good :)
Date: 14 Dec 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Must know what's to come