[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2017 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great story.i never thought it was jasper.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
AMAZING!!! story ;) the eyes threw me at it being jasper!!! thanks for sharing this with us ;D
Date: 31 Oct 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
bella called edward cullen when it's masen? ;D
Date: 27 Oct 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, I would have never thought it was Jasper, you definitely got me but that what makes this a great read!!! This story definitely kept me on my toes.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
great story plot , i thought it was edward who i was suspecting i didnt know it would be jasper , great story thank you for writting it .
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Fuck Rose
Date: 21 Apr 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
I always love reading your stories, but this is my absolute favorite!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think the prof is the serial killer! He is not right in the head!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great story. Love the suspence. Thanks for the journey & the story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Your background on Rose's behavior makes sense. In most cases, these actions cause more harm and hurt feelings than the intended protection of the owners reputation.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jasper's Aunt and Uncle were actually upset with Bella for being at the funeral? Why?
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good twist using Dr. McAvoy as a decoy accomplish.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the ending.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
This story was great! So many dynamics!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I was shocked at how his family reacted. They blame her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Them being related was out of the blue for me. It makes sense why Jasper hated him so much.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ok so Edward is def. not sent from hell or I'm still hoping he isn't. This chapter was wicked!
Date: 27 Jan 2016 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for a wonderful whodunnits it and a marvelous romance! It truly was an amazing piece to read and try to figure out o e chapter to the next! Thank you also for taking such care with your plot line and characters. You turned this into a true pleasure!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aww wow I loved reading this story !!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
I respect Rose's decision to a point, but to invite Kelly and Mike just seems wrong to me. Rose was there when Kelly insulted Bella and Charlie by talking about Bella's sister, and she wasn't even with Jasper that long. I also didn't think she knew Mike. Not inviting Bella is one thing, but inviting people who insulted Bella and made her uncomfortable is another. It feels like she was inviting people who would push Bella away.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved it I am sad to see it over but I hope you have more please and most importantly thank you
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks for the happy ending.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yeah crap happens are some can except it and move on others let it weigh them down and burden them forever. I love that they ended up married and with a baby.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so happy they got there happy ending so happy for them. Thanks so much for another great story
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another great one. Thanks. My yougest brother and his best buds(twins) were not able to maintain their friendship after their father killed our uncle. It happens
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Indeed, guilt does weird things to people and we all react differently. Hope you are feeling okay and dealing with everything well. I really appreciate the way you orked your way through this story, despite what life threw at you! Looking forward to Charlie's Voice!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
I enjoyed it very much!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can understand her mixed feeling. Jasper was her friend she never saw crazy jasper. He killed her sister he nearly killed her and Edward so I think I would have a hard time dealing with that as well
Date: 25 Jan 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
How can people treat them like they did sometime wrong. So happy they are going to be alright
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2016 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow I can see why Bella has trouble I would have been confused too I don't know if I could have gone to Jaspers funeral
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think it's normal, especially under circumstances like these, to have mixed feelings here. Bella both is angry and sad. Normal. Thanks for the story.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it! Pulling everyone's emotions into place is the perfect near completion. So many emotions and so much felt by so many people! I can't help. It love it!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderfully complex and catchy! The ins and outs you've added are excellent! Thank you for giving the fiction a sense of true reality!!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
I thought Kelly had a nerve, glaring at Bella like that! This came to the best end it could have, I suppose. Now maybe life will settle a bit all around!
Date: 24 Jan 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow didn't see that one coming after the last one. Can't wait to read the next one and hoping Bella and Edward are fine.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh shit Jasper was wereing contacts. Jasper is crazy and now I hope he is dead.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy shit I never guessed that out was Jasper that was sent from hell!!! Like holy plot twist! ! Can't wait for Monday to get here I'm desperate for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow. I thought for sure it was the Professor.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
You shocked me I thought it was the creepy professor and his even creepier sister. I never thought of jasper cause I did not think he was a virgin and really in love with Maria. Why was he with Maria if he loved Bella. I guess he was just pure crazy. The master was in his head the whole time. You sure did write a good story had me guessing the whole time.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy snap Jasper was beyond crazy now will Edward and Bella make it update fast please
Date: 24 Jan 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
was I one of the ones who guessed Jasper? I don't remember. I hope they got there in time....
Date: 24 Jan 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter
Date: 23 Jan 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
What a sad and pathetic little bastard Jasper is! Murderous, too! I hope whoever fired those shots killed him and saved Bella and Edward! This has been an edge of your seat story all the way through!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope it's Charlie
Date: 23 Jan 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm actually shocked that I guessed right! You guys always leave me guessing till the end. It's one of the things I love about your stories! ;)
Date: 23 Jan 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Gah!!!! Finally!! What a sicko! Now to see how it all ends.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
You better be after saving Bella, who hasn't done anything wrong, except in this monster's mind!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Is sent from hell Jasper? Him being a virgin would explain why Maria felt the need to keep being a prostitute.. Wanting to feel wanted by someone. Especially if she knew he was lusting after Bella. Maybe the professor is his master? It would explain the sister lying for him... or maybe I'm just overthinking everything! lol
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Still think it is the profesor and he is out of his mind
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella went willingly into his hands. What a dumb cop!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is being stupid. She needs to stay home or get another cop.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG he is a quack!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Was Edward the ultimate prize in this sick twisted game of death?
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
I need to know who the people are. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
So he is Sent Fron Hell and there is no "master", only the voice in his head, this McAvoy man? Who is coming for her? Edward?
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my is his sister messing with his head is she the master. Is he going to set Edward up and make it look like he did it ?
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
He's insane!!!!!
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
I need the next chapter!!!! Gah!!! Who is it? Is it one person or two?? I need to know!
Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Outstanding... And scary as hell! I love it! If they don't get to Bella soon, she'll bleed out. Hopefully, Jasper got the message as well as the police and Edward. The question in my mind is " Wouldn't the Professor's sister see or get some hint of his insanity?" I keep going back and forth on that one! Some serial killers are amazingly brilliant, yet get caught (like Son of Sam) by a parking ticket! Thank you for such an amazingly intense and well written whodunnit! Getting Edward's POV should be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow that guy is beyond crazy now will they make it out alive
Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
It has to be jasper it can't be Edward please update soon
Date: 18 Jan 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 18 Jan 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
This story keeps getting better and better...................Love it.......
Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Still think that is the profesor and the sister she is a wack job. I am so excited for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, Kelly is the final piece to the wacked out puzzle.
The McAvoy siblings are twisted together in this sorid tale.
She has been feeding information to her brother and he acts as the judge, jury, and executioner.
Who will make it to her in time?
Surely not Jasper.
Edward wants time so he won't checkvhis phone for a while.
Marcus and Caius will be sent on a wild goose chase until they decide to check in at the station.
Does Charlie have any idea where she went?
Date: 16 Jan 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
could it be that Kelly or her brother, Damon, is the killer? she certainly has the attitude. maybe he does the deeds when she tells him who to kill....gripping story!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
She didn't tell her dad?!?
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Whoa she is professor crazy's sister. No wonder I did not like her she is crazy as well. Yep makes me think it is him even more. Poor Edward he want Bella he just want to be a better man for her he is so sweet. I wish he would have answered the phone. He will be hard on himself for not being there for her.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm getting such a bad vibe from this, the hairs are standing up on my arms!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
seems like b should have been more worried about the crazy kelly was spouting off at her in the bathroom.
kind of shitty how rose and e treated b
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is surrounded by crazy people! Rose drags her to the bathroom and was the one bringing up sex. Rose didn't stick up for Bella when Kelly was upset...like it was Bella's fault! Edward wasn't any better. What is wrong with him anyway? He is kind of acting like a sucky boyfriend at this point. I just hope at least one person shows up to help her before it is too late.
I bet Bella received a letter from Sent From Hell that she was just starting to read when she was interrupted.
I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh snap what is going on and that Kelly chick is crazy will she even tell Jasper Bella called update soon I this its about to go down
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
This is not good Bella 666. Now I'm thinking Kelly might be in on it too. Hopefully she realizes this clue before she gets there. I'm guessing Edward is going to be feeling guilty bc he shut off his phone.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
So why does she not wake her Dad and take hime with? Or maybe call the station land line and get an officer to go with? I am thinking that if it was that important that he could have called the police himself so that should be her cloe. Please don't make her a stupid chick after all this time building up her intelligence.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think the professor and his nutty sister are behind it. Can't wait to read more
Date: 15 Jan 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella should wait for someone to go with her
Date: 15 Jan 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
I totally think the killer, or the one in charge at least, is Kelly and Bella just told her everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Would it be horrible to wish that it's Kelly? Her dad never taught her manners.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm going to guess it's The young girl that had mental issues that was Edward's friend.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh wow creepy Jasper. I still think its him. Is the newest victim Kelly?
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
possibly kelly . . . but not sure she fits
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think it is Kelly?? and if not she just needs a good bitch slap lol
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
If it is Kelly, that would mean that the killer is Jasper and she is dead because she insulted the true love of his life. But that wouldn't fly with the history of Jasper and his reactions to things. I also want to know why someone didn't just tell her to leave the restaurant. How dare she come to Bella's birthday dinner and insult her whole family carelessly. Yeah, something was seriously wrong with her, but also Jasper is acting aweful strange himself.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Is it Kelly? Still think it is the professor.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow Kelly was a crazy one for sure telling a girls sister and father that you just met your daughter is a whore and would still be alive if she kept her legs closed. I would have slapped her across the face if I was bella, good this Charlie did not take his gun.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
I would've had to throw my drink at Kelly....then the glass!