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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Epilogue

thanks for sharing this amazing story with us ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks to you. I love to hear when someone likes my stories, it makes my day :)

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 Epilogue

Great story. Like the mystery. Thanks for sharing.



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Thanks to you for reading :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 18 Epilogue

You wrapped up everyone's story rather nicely,I thought! This was fun to read because of the mystery element I think! Have a great 2016!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

This story was nominated for 'Top ten completed fics of December 2015' in TwiFanfictionRecs. Honestly, this is the first time I'm nominated for anything! :) Please, consider go there and vote, there are a lot of stories and they are really good.

Thanks again :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Who said love is blind, kind of had it right! Tanya loved Carlisle, even though he was far from perfect! I'm just glad things turned out well for Edward and Bella, and Jacob got jail time! Even better that Aaron Brandon won't terrorize his daughters any more!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can't but feel sorry for Tanya. Though, we had a HEA, right?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

It had to be one of them, but I sure was surprised it turned out to be Carlisle! It was rather poetic justice that he ended up the same as Tanya! What a big fat mess!



Author's Response:

Clearly Carlisle and Esme deserved each other  :(

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Okay, now things are getting spooky! Not to mention Carlisle is lying his head off about Tanya! And why is Esme so angry?



Author's Response:

Oh, Esme isn't the sweet woman we think. You'll see.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm thinking somehow Esme got rid of Tanya and her unborn child, so she could have Carlisle all to herself! The word murder comes to mind, hence the vengeful ghost! This whole mess is coming to a head and soon!



Author's Response:

You're getting closer ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Two legs isn't bad, but his neck would still have been better! Something weird is going on with Uncle Carlisle and Aunt Esme, and I don't think it's anything good for Edward and Bella!



Author's Response:

Yeah, but then they would have to explain a murder. It will be better with just the legs ;)

And all the trouble will benefit him, because Edward is proving himself worthy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

That rotten little bastard doped Bella's drink and kidnaped her! It not for Tanya, he was about to do much worse! I'm thrilled she pushed him and I can only hope he broke his neck! I wonder if he drugged Edward as well as Bella, to keep him out of the way?



Author's Response:

Jacob will get what he deserves, trust me.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

You poor girl, no one should be deprived of pumpkin pie! As for Aaron Brandon, I hope something painful has happened to him, and maybe to the nasty cop, too!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It had been my trauma for a lot of years.

You'll like what I did with them ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

So, what's that supposed to mean? Is the jark insinuating that they did something to Brandon? I'm sure glad Bella told Edward her feelings about Carlisle. I never thought about him that way, but she's right!



Author's Response:

Jerk guys cover bwetween themselves :(

Someone with Edward's best interest at heart, had to tell him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

With any luck at all, the ghost will chase Jacob and Angela both right out of there!



Author's Response:

That was the wish everybody had :) You'll see.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

So, she used to be here, once upon a time! It's so weird to hear them talking about Carlisle being a player in his youth!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that one came from one of my uncles. Apparently he was a dog in his younger years, and now he's the most proper guy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

However it happened, I'm just glad Cynthia got the message that Edward has no romantic interest in her at all!. It doesn't hurt that Bella heard him declare his love for her, either! Now, back to tracking the ghost with the strawberry blonde hair!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she had to understand Edward is more than taken ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh goody, there is a ghost from the lighthouse, no doubt!



Author's Response:

(wink, wink) 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

More people, known and unknown. The two sisters need to stay here and stay away from that father of theirs. He sounds like a pretty bad guy, stealing their money and running them off like that!



Author's Response:

You may reconsider that opinion later :) You know I always get the bad guys paying for their wrongdoings.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

This should be an interesting couple of weeks! 



Author's Response:

indeed ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Of course you can get your girl, you big dork! Shy and retiring doesn't work well in the twenty-first century! Listen to her dad and get busy!



Author's Response:

He will. One feels like slapping some sense to Edward, right? :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

That actually worked out okay, especially if she says yes!



Author's Response:

Then you'll like her answer ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds to me as if Edward has nearly left it too late to say anything to Bella. The girl can't read his mind, so if he doesn't get busy and tell her how he feels, he may lose her!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he had his reasons but now he's almost running out of time ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 18 Epilogue

:) loved this story.  Both stories sound really good.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

I really appreciate it

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 18 Epilogue

Carlisle ghost, would hate to be next person alone in the lighthouse with him.



Author's Response:

Not really; he's just making amends. He's protecting them... alone, just the way he had to end.

Thanks 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I feel bad for edward founding out about his uncle Carlisle and aunt Esme were both evil people. I hope bella and edward never see jacob again after what he did.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but otherwise he would never had found about his grandmother and Tanya.

Oh, I got more for Jacob ;)

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

:)



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks for always reading and supporting me :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

Tanya get her revenge against Carlisle and Esme. I think it was justice server. Carlisle and Esme both where heartless.



Author's Response:

You're right. I'm always for bad guys getting what they deserved :)

Thanks for always being there and listening to me :) XOXO

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Holy shit, you stop it here? That is so not fair.

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Sorry, I forgot to explain that next chapter will be up tomorrow. I'll try to post early :)

Thanks

 

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

Now this time Tanya get to face Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Yes! This is the moment we were waiting for :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

Tanya was pregnant that most not be only reason she got killed. Carlisle you have a lot of explaining to do.



Author's Response:

;) ;) I'm sure you read my mind.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love it and want Jacob to rot



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will ;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

What is Carlisle up to?



Author's Response:

That's the crux of the matter. Please be patient everything will be revealed really soon, because this was Thursday night and they planned to leave Saturday in the morning :)



Author's Response:

That's the crux of the matter. Please be patient everything will be revealed really soon, because this was Thursday night and they planned to leave Saturday in the morning :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward going to confront Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Yeah! It's going to get interesting.



Author's Response:

Yeah! It's going to get interesting.

Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

dang, you stopped here??? NOOOOO. Please post again so. Enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

You convinced me. I posted the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

poor Bella.....



Author's Response:

We can thank Tanya it all ended. It was only a scare.



Author's Response:

We can thank Tanya it all ended. It was only a scare.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Tanya isn't afraid to help Bella out. I like ghost Tanya, I think Tanya has some unfinished business with Carlisle and Esme.



Author's Response:

Hmm, yes, she has something...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Angela is a mess. She is delusional. 



Author's Response:

She will learn her lesson, you'll see ;)

Thanks

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

That one cop acted like a jerk. Jacob i wouldn't trusts him as far as I can tosses someone.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, you'll like they way I'll deal with them :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Carlisle past hide a lot of dark secrets.



Author's Response:

You'll be surprised ;)

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hope ghost scared Jacob and Angela away.



Author's Response:

The ghost will make a bit more than that ;)



Author's Response:

The ghost will make a bit more than that ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

Now we get to found out are mystery ghost.



Author's Response:

At least a bit more, soon they'll find out the whole story.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Cynthia is crazy.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Just a bit ;)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

Alice sister need help she doesn't understand the different between someone wanted to help her and thinking she in love. I think there is a ghost spirit's living there.



Author's Response:

Oh, and Alice will have a few words with her. 

For the ghost part... it's kind of living there.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Creepy



Author's Response:

Thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Jacob sure can be a pain in the ass.



Author's Response:

Yeah, you know I don't like him :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

We got to meet Alice and her sister.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think by now I introduced all the characters. now let's the scares begin ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry for taking so long to answer. I had a project to finish before the first of november :( I'll try to answer the next day after I post the chapter.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad they talked about everything both need to say something about why they weren't in each other live's.



Author's Response:

Hi! They have more to talk, Edward has to woo her, and then they have the lighthouse ;)

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward finally asked bella out. Jacob and Irina were dating I guess not anymore, jacob sure has some angry problems.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but it will take a few chapters for them to be together-together ;)

Oh, you'll see what's the deal with Irina, I promise she's a good girl.

Thanks for always being here for me :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Your smiley always cheers me up

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Edward really want ask bella out on a date.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I'm sure you'll like what Bella has to say and how it will turn out :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intersect first start.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) looking forward to reading more of this



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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