Date: 31 Dec 2017 11:15 PM Title: First day of the Trial
Hii i would like you to know thati am really adoring your story and how it is constructed of all these tiny pieces...it is just so impressive and wellwritten!!!! And thats why i sincerely hope you uptate this story soooon because i can't wait to know what happened to Rose and how her relationship with emmett progresses!!! Please uptate not just for me but for all reader and future reader who sit on the edge of their seats waiting what happens next....
i hope you read my review and that you uptate soon, please keep up your great work and finish this story!!!:):)
Queenrosalie
Date: 26 Oct 2017 4:30 PM Title: Fruitless Negotiations
Love this story couldn’t put it down. Please update soon!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:04 PM Title: Fruitless Negotiations
Thanks!
Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:58 PM Title: Sinfully Right
this story is very confusing , very , everybody have secrets, it brings cruisty of readers by reading this story ,
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:37 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations
I want next chapter now :(. Love it.
And is Edward a vampire? The coldness in the apartment, the fact that he does not want to give information about his younger years, the fact that he does not want Bella to tell him about her conversation with his mom (as he already heard it?)...
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:14 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations
I am so ready to find out what the heck is the truth!
Date: 15 Jun 2016 3:23 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations
OMGosh!!!! So glad that you updated this story. I can't wait to find out what really happened between Edward and Bella.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 3:27 AM Title: Unexpected Circumstances
Ok Bella has mentioned that she needs to call her parents and tell them about the trip but in this chapter she is at their grave. I am a little confused on that. Thanks for the long chapter. Sorry it took me so long to read and review.
Author's Response:
When she mentioned she needed to call her parents it was during a flashback. In the present, they're currently deceased. The next chapter will show their deaths.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:57 PM Title: Unexpected Circumstances
hurry please
Date: 27 Feb 2016 2:53 PM Title: All of the what ifs
Just go to the police and withdraw your statement tell them you fear for you life and you want away from this because they will never get him behind bars. Then leave Rose and Alice behind.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 1:42 PM Title: There's a First Time for Everything
I hope the delicate flower wises up and shuts up her best friend who will get her hurt.
Date: 26 Feb 2016 8:49 PM Title: Unexpected Circumstances
Really excited for the upcoming chapters
Date: 22 Jan 2016 5:44 AM Title: Two's company, Three's a Crowd
Alice is sooooooo annoying! I just wanted to punch her!
Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:37 PM Title: Two's company, Three's a Crowd
I have a feeling that Alice just pissed Edward off. But he won't let it be known. I hope Edward's men do not hurt Alice. I am assuming that Edward does not know that Jasper and Alice are seeing each other.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Chapter twelve is a flashback. I'm showing the events that led up to Edward's and Bella's 'dispute'. Alice and Jasper haven't met yet. Chapter eight shows how they meet.
Date: 08 Jan 2016 11:39 AM Title: Taking Chances
Wow all the twists & turns.....
Date: 06 Jan 2016 3:47 PM Title: Taking Chances
Great story. I love the mystery.
Date: 06 Jan 2016 1:59 AM Title: Taking Chances
You have left me with unanswered questions now. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jan 2016 12:00 AM Title: Taking Chances
OMG! I need every chapter asap! Lol. This is such a GOOD story. Wow. Cannot wait, for more!
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:03 PM Title: The Proposal
This has so many twists & turns maybe Bella is trying to take him for all he is worth.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:11 AM Title: The Proposal
Ok!!!!!!!!! Did I miss something, what kind of restaurant was it? I know private but what else? For some reason and thought went through my mind while reading this chapter. ......is Bella work for the FBI? is she trying to get close to Edward and find out more about his illegal dealings?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Bella isn't working for the FBI and if you want to know what kind of restaurant it was you have to keep reading. ;)
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:27 AM Title: All of the what ifs
Edward is so bold. Can't believe he just finger Edward her and this is their 1st official date. Wow. Rose and Alice both should feel quilty.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:57 AM Title: Sinfully Right
What have Bella and Alice done that they both have to live with.? Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks and I can't tell you. :P
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:30 AM Title: There's a First Time for Everything
Edward is very forward with Bella.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:44 AM Title: Spying
Rose has been hurt and is afraid to let Emmett get close.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:30 AM Title: The Proposal
Part of me wants to hope that Edward isn't enough of a creep that he'd rape her.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:22 AM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy
IIs Bella really lying like Emmett said. Is Alice going behind Bella's back?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I can't tell you if Bella is lying or not. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I can't tell you if Bella is lying or not. :)
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:51 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
I am thinking that Edward is a DOM or at least he has some of those qualities. I am glad that was a dream because I was really shocked if Bella was letting him so that to her after just meeting him one time.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:33 AM Title: Doubt
It doesn't surprise me that Emmett is chasing Rose after their interaction at the courthouse. Can't wait to find out what Alice is hiding. Is Bella hiding anything?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:07 AM Title: Where's Alice?
Did someone on Edward's payroll take Alice?
Date: 01 Jan 2016 11:52 PM Title: First day of the Trial
OOMGosh! Did Edward really rape her? Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 7:38 AM Title: All of the what ifs
I am beginning to think he did do what she is accusing. He has the perfect set up with his friends already having attachments with her two friends. I hope he didn't but why would Bella be making up this elaborate lie. Unless she is trying to get him in trouble for something since he easily has lots who will commit crimes for him. I'm sure Nick will agree!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Jasper didn't know Alice before Edward and Bella met. Alice and Jasper met after the rape accusations.
Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:34 AM Title: All of the what ifs
OMG ! Love. Your story can not wait for more .
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:58 PM Title: All of the what ifs
I can't wait to get more details about the events. We know Edward is capable of bad things based on what he asked be done to Nick and then offering up his assistance.
Date: 28 Oct 2015 6:27 AM Title: Sinfully Right
You write suspense like no other! This explains how Alice got away after court. That's it, just that tiny qu scion answered but now 100 more are added. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 26 Oct 2015 3:49 AM Title: There's a First Time for Everything
Well, Edward doesn't appear too like-able.
Date: 24 Oct 2015 12:22 PM Title: Spying
Nice job keeping us all guessing.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:23 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy
OH my from what he states Bella is just that.. lying whore. :-(
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:12 PM Title: Sweet Dreams
I am glad you stated the flipping back and forth. Some I have tried to read did not do it well took long on updates and it is a nightmare trying to decide where you are past or present.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:05 PM Title: Doubt
I hope Bella is not lying.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 3:08 PM Title: Where's Alice?
so Alice was kidnapped?
Date: 28 Aug 2015 2:58 PM Title: First day of the Trial
I am in.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:42 AM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy
I can't get enough of this story! The twists & turns are so riveting!
Date: 27 Aug 2015 7:55 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy
I'm loving this story! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 27 Aug 2015 6:43 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy
Is this story going to have a happy ever after ? I love this so far can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I can't ruin the surprise. :)
Date: 17 Aug 2015 10:27 AM Title: First day of the Trial
Intrigued. No clue what's real or true.
Date: 16 Aug 2015 2:10 PM Title: Sweet Dreams
The last part with Bella reminded me of little red riding hood. Haha. I was very surprised we were jumping in so quickly with yummy lemons but then sad that it was just a dream. :( Granted it did shed some light on Bella bc she likes to be dominated.
Date: 14 Aug 2015 6:48 AM Title: Doubt
So Alice & Bella are deceiving her......
Author's Response:
Maybe or maybe not, who knows? It's a secret. :P
Date: 12 Aug 2015 6:04 AM Title: Doubt
I am not trying to be rude but this chapter is blank also.I don't understand what I'm doing wrong I have been a member since 2011. I have come across one other story and i I don't remember what it was called.I really want to read this but agai for me it's blank. I am very sorry. My best to you.
Author's Response:
Maybe it's your browser. My story can also be read on fanfiction.net. My author's name is the same on ff.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:17 AM Title: Where's Alice?
WTF?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Author's Response:
The chapter isn't blank. I left the A/N section at the top blank which makes the chapter appear blank until you actually click on the chapter and see it.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:16 AM Title: First day of the Trial
UUUMMMM ITTSSS BLANK! IS THIS A JOKE?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, are you saying the chapter is blank?
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:41 PM Title: Where's Alice?
Edward told her he would hurt her family....has Alice been kidnapped?
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:27 PM Title: First day of the Trial
Wow! I love when you write Edward to be evil but now we get Emmett too!
Date: 07 Aug 2015 4:55 PM Title: Where's Alice?
Oi
Eu me pergunto se era ordens de Edward para desaparecer com Alice ..... tudo é possível.
Você descreveu o gênero da história como drama e romance, você vai virar a história como você virou "Malevolent"? Curious ..... lol. X
PS: Eu tenho o login neste site e em FF, onde você também está postando essa história, mas eu prefiro ler e comentar este site, porque sua história é escuro e trata de estupro e outro site tem trolls que gostam de criticar histórias onde não violência, conteúdo sexual ou escuro. Mas estou amando essa história desde que eu coloquei meus olhos sobre ele e esperamos para ler mais sobre, em breve. XO.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. This story will be NOTHING like Malevolent. There is a lot more to the plot in this one. Everyone has a secret and there will be revelation after revelation in this story. Between that and the lemons, there will be no room for boredom. :)
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:59 PM Title: First day of the Trial
Hi
Very well-written history, has suspense, mystery, intrigue, tension and much more for sure and I'm loving reading. Congratulations XO
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:09 AM Title: First day of the Trial
I like it please continue!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!