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Reviewer: Queenrosalie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2017 11:15 PM Title: First day of the Trial

Hii i would like you to know thati am really adoring your story and how it is constructed of all these tiny pieces...it is just so impressive and wellwritten!!!! And thats why i sincerely hope you uptate this story soooon because i can't wait to know what happened to Rose and how her relationship with emmett progresses!!! Please uptate not just for me but for all reader and future reader who sit on the edge of their seats waiting what happens next.... 

i hope you read my review and that you uptate soon, please keep up your great work and finish this story!!!:):)

Queenrosalie

Reviewer: triplejjjones Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 4:30 PM Title: Fruitless Negotiations

Love this story couldn’t put it down. Please update soon! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:04 PM Title: Fruitless Negotiations

Thanks!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:58 PM Title: Sinfully Right

this story is very confusing , very , everybody have secrets, it brings cruisty of readers by reading this story ,

Reviewer: LCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:37 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations

I want next chapter now :(. Love it. 
And is Edward a vampire? The coldness in the apartment, the fact that he does not want to give information about his younger years, the fact that he does not want Bella to tell him about her conversation with his mom (as he already heard it?)... 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 12:14 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations

I am so ready to find out what the heck is the truth!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 3:23 AM Title: Fruitless Negotiations

OMGosh!!!! So glad that you updated this story. I can't wait to find out what really happened between Edward and Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 3:27 AM Title: Unexpected Circumstances

Ok Bella has mentioned that she needs to call her parents and tell them about the trip but in this chapter she is at their grave. I am a little confused on that. Thanks for the long chapter.  Sorry it took me so long to read and review. 



Author's Response:

When she mentioned she needed to call her parents it was during a flashback. In the present, they're currently deceased. The next chapter will show their deaths.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:57 PM Title: Unexpected Circumstances

hurry please

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 2:53 PM Title: All of the what ifs

Just go to the police and withdraw your statement tell them you fear for you life and you want away from this because they will never get him behind bars. Then leave Rose and Alice behind.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 1:42 PM Title: There's a First Time for Everything

I hope the delicate flower wises up and shuts up her best friend who will get her hurt.

Reviewer: ToAshes Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 8:49 PM Title: Unexpected Circumstances

Really excited for the upcoming chapters

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 5:44 AM Title: Two's company, Three's a Crowd

Alice is sooooooo annoying!  I just wanted to punch her!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:37 PM Title: Two's company, Three's a Crowd

I have a feeling that Alice just pissed Edward off. But he won't let it be known. I hope Edward's men do not hurt Alice.  I am assuming that Edward does not know that Jasper and Alice are seeing each other. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Chapter twelve is a flashback. I'm showing the events that led up to Edward's and Bella's 'dispute'. Alice and Jasper haven't met yet. Chapter eight shows how they meet. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 11:39 AM Title: Taking Chances

Wow all the twists & turns.....

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 3:47 PM Title: Taking Chances

Great story.  I love the mystery.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 1:59 AM Title: Taking Chances

You have left me with unanswered questions now. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: oh my Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 12:00 AM Title: Taking Chances

OMG! I need every chapter asap! Lol.  This is such a GOOD story. Wow. Cannot wait, for more!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:03 PM Title: The Proposal

This has so many twists & turns maybe Bella is trying to take him for all he is worth. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:11 AM Title: The Proposal

Ok!!!!!!!!! Did I miss something,  what kind of restaurant was it? I know private but what else? For some reason and thought went through my mind while reading this chapter. ......is Bella work for the FBI? is she trying to get close to Edward and find out more about his illegal dealings?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Bella isn't working for the FBI and if you want to know what kind of restaurant it was you have to keep reading. ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:27 AM Title: All of the what ifs

Edward is so bold. Can't believe he just finger Edward her and this is their 1st official date.  Wow. Rose and Alice both should feel quilty. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:57 AM Title: Sinfully Right

What have Bella and Alice done that they both have to live with.? Loving this story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks and I can't tell you. :P

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:30 AM Title: There's a First Time for Everything

Edward is very forward with Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:44 AM Title: Spying

Rose has been hurt and is afraid to let Emmett get close. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:30 AM Title: The Proposal

Part of me wants to hope that Edward isn't enough of a creep that he'd rape her.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:22 AM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy

IIs Bella really lying like Emmett said. Is Alice going behind Bella's back? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I can't tell you if Bella is lying or not. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I can't tell you if Bella is lying or not. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:51 AM Title: Sweet Dreams

I am thinking that Edward is a DOM or at least he has some of those qualities.  I am glad that was a dream because I was really shocked if Bella was letting him so that to her after just meeting him one time. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:33 AM Title: Doubt

It doesn't surprise me that Emmett is chasing Rose after their interaction at the courthouse.  Can't wait to find out what Alice is hiding.  Is Bella hiding anything? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:07 AM Title: Where's Alice?

Did someone on Edward's payroll take Alice?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 11:52 PM Title: First day of the Trial

OOMGosh!  Did Edward really rape her? Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 7:38 AM Title: All of the what ifs

I am beginning to think he did do what she is accusing.  He has the perfect set up with his friends already having attachments with her two friends.  I hope he didn't but why would Bella be making up this elaborate lie.  Unless she is trying to get him in trouble for something since he easily has lots who will commit crimes for him.  I'm sure Nick will agree!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Jasper didn't know Alice before Edward and Bella met. Alice and Jasper met after the rape accusations. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:34 AM Title: All of the what ifs

OMG !   Love. Your story  can not wait for more .

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:58 PM Title: All of the what ifs

I can't wait to get more details about the events.  We know Edward is capable of bad things based on what he asked be done to Nick and then offering up his assistance.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2015 6:27 AM Title: Sinfully Right

You write suspense like no other!  This explains how Alice got away after court.  That's it, just that tiny qu scion answered but now 100 more are added. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 3:49 AM Title: There's a First Time for Everything

Well, Edward doesn't appear too like-able. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 12:22 PM Title: Spying

Nice job keeping us all guessing.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 8:48 AM Title: Spying

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:23 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy

OH my from what he states Bella is just that.. lying whore. :-(

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:12 PM Title: Sweet Dreams

I am glad you stated the flipping back and forth. Some I have tried to read did not do it well took long on updates and it is a nightmare trying to decide where you are past or present.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:05 PM Title: Doubt

I hope Bella is not lying.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 3:08 PM Title: Where's Alice?

so Alice was kidnapped?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 2:58 PM Title: First day of the Trial

I am in.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:42 AM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy

I can't get enough of this story!  The twists & turns are so riveting! 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 7:55 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy

I'm loving this story! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 6:43 PM Title: Breaking more than bread with the enemy

Is this story going to have a happy ever after ? I love this so far can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I can't ruin the surprise. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 10:27 AM Title: First day of the Trial

Intrigued. No clue what's real or true.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 2:10 PM Title: Sweet Dreams

The last part with Bella reminded me of little red riding hood.  Haha.  I was very surprised we were jumping in so quickly with yummy lemons but then sad that it was just a dream.  :(  Granted it did shed some light on Bella bc she likes to be dominated. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 6:48 AM Title: Doubt

So Alice & Bella are deceiving her......



Author's Response:

Maybe or maybe not, who knows? It's a secret. :P

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 6:04 AM Title: Doubt

I am not trying to be rude but this chapter is blank also.I don't understand what I'm doing wrong I have been a member since 2011. I have come across one other story and i I don't remember what it was called.I really want to read this but agai for me it's blank. I am very sorry. My best to you.



Author's Response:

Maybe it's your browser. My story can also be read on fanfiction.net. My author's name is the same on ff.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:17 AM Title: Where's Alice?

          WTF?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????



Author's Response:

The chapter isn't blank. I left the A/N section at the top blank which makes the chapter appear blank until you actually click on the chapter and see it. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:16 AM Title: First day of the Trial

UUUMMMM ITTSSS BLANK! IS THIS A JOKE?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, are you saying the chapter is blank? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:41 PM Title: Where's Alice?

Edward told her he would hurt her family....has Alice been kidnapped?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:27 PM Title: First day of the Trial

Wow!  I love when you write Edward to be evil but now we get Emmett too!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 4:55 PM Title: Where's Alice?

Oi

Eu me pergunto se era ordens de Edward para desaparecer com Alice ..... tudo é possível.

Você descreveu o gênero da história como drama e romance, você vai virar a história como você virou "Malevolent"? Curious ..... lol. X

PS: Eu tenho o login neste site e em FF, onde você também está postando essa história, mas eu prefiro ler e comentar este site, porque sua história é escuro e trata de estupro e outro site tem trolls que gostam de criticar histórias onde não violência, conteúdo sexual ou escuro. Mas estou amando essa história desde que eu coloquei meus olhos sobre ele e esperamos para ler mais sobre, em breve. XO.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. This story will be NOTHING like Malevolent. There is a lot more to the plot in this one. Everyone has a secret and there will be revelation after revelation in this story. Between that and the lemons, there will be no room for boredom. :)

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:59 PM Title: First day of the Trial

Hi

Very well-written history, has suspense, mystery, intrigue, tension and much more for sure and I'm loving reading. Congratulations XO



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: HappyEverAfter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:09 AM Title: First day of the Trial

I like it please continue!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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