Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:29 AM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
More please.
Date: 28 Dec 2015 1:41 AM Title: 1 First Sight
update soon please!!! xx
Date: 17 Nov 2015 4:36 AM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE!?!?!?!?!??!?!!??
Date: 09 Sep 2015 2:53 AM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
This story is getting interesting
Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:22 PM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
really enjoying your story so far, got me hooked :)
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:21 AM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
Great chapter! I've gotta say Edward is a coward. He gives Bella a night of great passion and then leaves a note telling her that he's leaving. At least in the book he had the guts to tell her to her face.
So she meets both Jane and Alec. I like how you gave Bella some bravey here; how she gets angry at the vampires other than running scared. She also beginning to realise how she she is starting to feel something for Alec. I like how you described his power coming through his fingers; Stephanie Meyer just makes it seem that it floats on the air out of nowhere.
"She's mine." That's how you let Alec claim Bella. I wonder if Jane is going to become Bella's Alice in Voltera, or if she is still going to resent Bella. Well Edward and the rest will be in for a surprise when they meet again1 Please keep going!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:08 AM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
Oh I'm so excited to see where this goes!
looking forward to the next update.
Date: 30 Jul 2015 11:22 PM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
let the fun begain
Date: 30 Jul 2015 10:07 PM Title: 2 Distractions are a Bitch
Great story. Really enjoying it. Thanks for sharing.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:36 AM Title: 1 First Sight
Good start. Yuo set the scens and the characters beautifully. i like how you are making jane and Alec more well-rounded characters; you actually desribe how past experiences shape their personalities, they are not creul for the fun of it, their past and they're job makes them that way.
Interesting take on Carlisle and Aro's past together. I wonder why Aro was so lenient to Carlise in the past books. You may have explained the reason. SHould be interesting if they meet again.
So Alec and Bella. It has been done before, but your great imagination you show on your other stories should make this an interesting Journey! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the beginning. I have always been intrigued with the twins. I thought SM could've given them more depth, expecially considering they are the cornerstone of the Volturi stronghold/guard. I've never shipped Alec/Bella before, but my friend begged me to write her a short story, so I will gladly accept the challenge. I have to say, I'm actually enjoying the thought of Bella being a part of the Volturi. She'll be one powerful immortal, but not in the canon sense. (Hell, when have I ever followed canon? lol) For this story, I plan to draw some character elements from the supernatural world of SVM/True Blood, but not enough to change canon, significantly. So, it won't be a crossover—she'll still have a shielded mind, but in all actuality she isn't a mental or physical shield. I can't give away any more info than that. Sorry. :(
(The Aro/Carlisle relationship will be explained later when they are summoned to Volterra for questioning. Let's just say, Carlisle didn't actually leave the coven due to his disalusionment with the brother's feeding habits/lifestyle—that's just what he feeds the family as an excuse. Oh, and it'll definitely be a different Volterra!)
I have another chapter ready to be edited, so keep your eyes open~Jamie
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:05 AM Title: 1 First Sight
I love your story so far. The words you use are a breathe of fresh air from most of the fanfiction us read. I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to review. It's very kind of you. I take quite a lot of time planning out each chapter (usually in the neighborhood of ten hours) because I like to paint a comprehensive picture for the reader. Like a mini movie. When I'm personally reading fanfiction, I'm curious what's happening in the background, outside of the dialogue. What are other characters doing? I don't write in third person om. because, frankly, it's not my strong suit, but I'd love to try someday. Have a good day. I'm off to read what you've uploaded, now! :)
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:39 AM Title: 1 First Sight
look forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review! -Jamie
Date: 12 Jul 2015 8:59 AM Title: 1 First Sight
Intriguing start. Can't wait for more.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad I caught you're attention! Hope to hear from you again! -Jamie