Date: 15 Feb 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like the idea of your story and you seem to have a very good grasp on your characters but i don't think i will be able to continue reading. You're writing is a little to rough around the edges for me. You really paint every scene of the story but all the detail is a little amarathine at times. I find myself skimming over the text and unable to distinguish between what is inconsequential and what is significant because there doesn't seem to be a shift in detail. The morning scene most likely wasn't as important as when they first bump into each other, but the writing style seems to be the same. I'm attempting to make this as constructive as possible and i hope you receive it that way.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
amazing story:)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
great sory I really enjoyed it and am really looking forward to the sequel many changes to come for these two. I am not a writer but even I can think of all the many ups and downs they can have
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
angst is coming I can tell
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
hopefully some lemony goodness too
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
busted!!! lol
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
he wuld gey all 10s from me even if he just stood there
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
I will be sticking
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
going great :)
Date: 05 May 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to get to nect chapter, one of the reasons I love reading finished stories
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow this looks like it will be great I love a cocky dancing Edward
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hectic schedules, but seeing him making her a priority is pure sweetness.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Perhaps a baseball contract offer?
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
I've been reading so much angst lately that this story is easy on my heart. But, of course a lil'bit of drama is welcomed, ha! I love the DWTS theme, you are wonderful with writing dance steps etc. You must be a dancer or your research is A+. Either way, I wouldn't know since I am clueless on each dance. Nonetheless, I love the show and love YOUR story. Thanks!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
My fav was Audrina.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Shake it babeward!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hooked on it this story line!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
beautiful story!!! thank you for sharing your talent to us!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved this story, I read it while watching the final DWTS. That just made this story all the more enjoyable. OH please do a sequel because I feel you still have unfinshed business with these two. Here's hoping you sequel soon
E/k
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yay, they finally kissed...blame it on the rumba! LOL! Enjoying.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
The red carpet was fun. Bella and Edward are both trying to figure out what they really are to each other...they need to talk!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
A little confusing with the flashbacks. But it was ok.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is getting into this! Enjoying.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yay! They got through their first dance. Looks like they will have to work a bit to take the lead...but third isn't bad. Enjoying your story!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am enjoying watching these two growing fonder of each other. Bella puts up a fuss, but she's liking handsome Edward.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looks like Edward's family is excited about him being on the show. Where are Bella's parents? Enjoying.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella and Edward really have a lot in common. Both committed themselves to their talent at an early age. At least Edward got to experience High School and school friends. Enjoying.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well their first meeting went off well. They are even teasing each other. Enjoying!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jessica cracked me up. I do hope that Bella keeps an open mind. Should be interesting.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this first chapter. I have just started watching Dancing With the Stars this year and I like it. (Yeah, I'm a little slow to catch up on stuff! LOL!) I can't wait to see what goes on behind the scenes.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying the dance lessons.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHA!!!don't we all know, famous last words.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, she is totally falling for him and I'd bet that he is not far behind.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
She asked him out? Love it! I love how it just 'slipped out'.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Alice and Bella are too funny the way they both are chop stick handicapped.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh, the Cullen family. How can anyone not love them?
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how he asked her to dance but reminded her not to pick on his frame. Too cute.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Their chemistry seems so natural. I am loving this E&B.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Their conversation over lunch was cute.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, he doesn't seem like a cocky womanizer. He seems like a guy who is kind of unsure of himself.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how he didn't want to know anything about Bella before meeting her.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
<3
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you have set up the beginning. I can tell Bella is not going to take any of Edward's shit. This should be fun.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
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Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
<3
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
<3
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
<3
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
<3
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
<3
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
awesome story yo
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
i am so waiting on your sequel and i am so ready for them to have a happily ever after i await the mention of the sequel vze13yama@verizon.net
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
These two are so adorable. I am loving this story!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
I truly loved your story and I'm looking forward to the sequel.
Love
Lizette
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
Thank you for sharign this story I look forward to reading the sequel. :) Hope it is Bella and Edward love filled friendly. I am a sucker for happy endings. LOL
Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Dang he's one hot moma!!
x x
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
:) Another smiley to add the list list then bb.
c c
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
That first dance move would have left stains on his trouser leg, just sayin'...
x x
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Goggle it... Ok and Us... lol
x x
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Me thinks I'm going to like this a bit too much...
x x
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
Love it!!! Nice to see someone else's pov.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake
Loved it awesome
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for the great story. Looking forward to the sequel.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it & I hope dere is a sequel
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
loved this story. Can't wait to read the sequal
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad you'll be writing a sequel because when I read what you said about this being the end I just about freaked out! There's so much left to happen with these caharacters and I'm so glad you decided to not leave us hanging! Can't wait to read the sequel and I will definitely be Author Alert'ing you.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you agree. To me, the story is finished given the original plot...I led them through the show, they won, they're together, but they're just starting out, you know? That's why we're getting a sequel...it's the second part of their story...and it is better as a separate sequel rather than 20+ chapters in this one...
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
omg you are a great writer that was awesome i can not wait till the sequel i really want them together her going to seattle opening her dance studio and clothes line him in his team marriage and children please
Date: 04 Jun 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved the chapter and story. I can't wait for the sequel.
Date: 21 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
soooo sweet loved it cant wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 21 May 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved it
Date: 11 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
This chapter was very good, as all the fiction is, and I'm sure that the next chapter will be great. Thank you for writing and sharing your imagination with us.
Date: 10 May 2010 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 29
nope I can see her point.. and I see his...
Date: 10 May 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
He is going to stay with her? lol I have no clue.. but that would be adorable..
Date: 10 May 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
LOL sad to see the story wind up but I did so enjoy the ride.. got to keep reading..
Date: 10 May 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
LOL that is cruel... thank god I don't have to wait.. snigger..
Date: 10 May 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
LOL I have been so busy I am now playing catch up.. love the story.. you are doing so well with it.. and now.. i can keep going.. LOL
Date: 10 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
'tis 2:07 a.m. at the moment , but I am in love with this fanfic, mainly because its twilight (obviously) But also because dance is my life. :D Unfortunately I have to depart and get SOME kind of sleep...
I have like 4 hours of it, but whatever, rreading fanfiction is worth less sleep- to me at least..
Date: 10 May 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
teehe, little does she know...
Not that I know much more than her anyway... but off to find out I go!
I LIKESSSSSSSSSS IT SO FARR.
Date: 09 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
well didnt expect that one !
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 29
omg what the fuck was her problem i can not believe she fucked him and left she better fix this in the next chapter she better tell him she loves him as well as tell him she will move with him and him tell her he loves her
Date: 09 May 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
i don't know who i'm angrier at, Edward for just assuming she will drop everything to follow him, or Bella cause she doesn't want to...
Date: 08 May 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love this story, and I really hope you make a sequel. You're a great writer! Looking forward to the next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter I dont hate Bella but I am a little confused can't wait to find out what happens.
Date: 08 May 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved the chapter, but what the hell with B.
Date: 08 May 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
I just don't understand that girl.
Date: 03 May 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter