Date: 06 May 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wouldn't Faith call Edward grandpa not uncle? If I'm wrong sorry but that just confused me.
Amazing story btw I've literally read ever single one of your stories and I love them all.
Date: 08 Apr 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Her parents are psychos! And terribly mean and non-supportive!
Date: 08 Apr 2018 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Obviously, it's Edward's baby. She was a virgin...
Date: 06 Feb 2017 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Absolutely enjoyed reading this story. Thank you so much for sharing! :)
Date: 22 Aug 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome story, keep up the great writing.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Now I think Emmett likes Rose & told Bella about it. I'm more sure that this thing with Bella is a front for something. I just can't figure out what it is.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now I KNOW Bella likes Edward, she was probing for info. I'm not too sure about Tia. I think she's too much of a feminist. There is nothing wrong with Edward being a gentleman and she SHOULD appreciate it.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another theory... He (Em) wants to keep the football groupies away so he and Bella are pretending to be a couple. She obviously likes Edward and feels the "tingle" so something is up. Maybe she agreed so she wouldn't have to be alone so much. I also think Bella & Emmett are very good friends. There is an obvious affection there but I've noticed the Edward has not seen them kiss other than the forehead.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have a theory... Bella is not really Em's girlfriend. She is tutoring him and to cover that up they've agreed to say they are a couple. Maybe Em is embarrassed and don't want the kids at school or his dad to know. Maybe she's doing it because she is lonely cause her parents are always gone. He (Em) is very fond of her but not much more. After all she is the opposite of his type. Whatever they were doing in his room, it was NOT having sex. Either he was doing some kind of schoolwork or she was sitting on his back while he did push-ups She's small enough. When I was little (maybe 12) I used to do that for my dad's friend who couldn't afford a gym. he would have me get on his back like he was a horse and do push-ups and I would have to try to stay on. I'm pretty sure I squeaked a bit too, and he grunted, but there was NOTHING sexual about it.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for a very interesting and well written story.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hi, I love your story👍🏻 but mine in Italian is mia for females and mio for males. For example my wife = mia moglie, my husband = mio marito. Therefore Edward would call her Mia, which is Italian for mine. Mina doesn' t exist, it would just be a name like Bella. However, I love this story 😃
Date: 19 Jun 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
If Emmett had played football all four years of high school he would be ineligible to play.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
In my mind Newton gets caught, from recovering emails, screwing underage students
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really liked it!
Date: 06 Nov 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edwards a sicko. He's Givin the old pervert vibe with all the touchy, kissy, sweetheart callin. GROSS.
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the great story!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Em it's not really with Bella but doesn't want to date anyone other then Rose so I'd using Bella as a fake girlfriend to keep Kate away from him. Bella is lonely and only too happy to help Em out if it means she can see Edward. I like Tia but she has to know it won't go anywhere with Edward.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
thanks for the story! alls well that ends well
Date: 07 Oct 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
This was a great story as always I love reading your post. Looking forward to what's coming .
Date: 06 Oct 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great story. Thanks for writing.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks good chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wrapped everything up nicely. So sweet. Loved it. Take care and see you all soon.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
They got their happy ending. Where did they move to again? Will they ever hear from Charlie and Renee again? Will em and Rose have kids? Loved it. Another great story. Thanks!!!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
well done
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh Wee as always I love to go on your journey's. I am trying to catch up after being off line so long (close to a month).
Good story.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I REALY LOVED THE ENDING.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm going miss this story. I look forward to reading it on my rough days. Thank you for letting come along with you.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love it as always
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
They are happy that is what counts. I will be looking forward to what you do next thanks so much
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hi..great story!! Thank u for sharing it..😁c6;
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a beautiful ending to a long traveled road.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
A bit sad that Rose and Emmett's little girl has Downs, but I'm sure the whole family loves her and she loves them! Had to chuckle at Edward buying gas from Newton! Don't blame him one bit for rubbing it in his face, how happy and successful his family is! I really enjoyed this story and never thought for a minute it would be anyone but Bella and Edward!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great little story, girls! Keep them coming!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Enjoyed it. Looking forward to the new ones.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Looking forward to Charlie's voice.
Totally adored this story as per usual with your stories.
Loved it and can't wait for your next story.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow... Beautiful ending to a beautiful story!! I loved this story very much! :)
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great ending. I look forward to readjng the next 2. I am a bit curious as to why his grandaughter calls him her un le though.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Excellent, it was a pleasure to follow you through this lovely story. THank you so much for sharing your wonderful imagination with us.
Take care of youse girls, till next time with Nightmare and Charlie's Voice.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading your new ones
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story...
Looking forward to your new one to!!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for another interesting journey through these characters.
I look forward to both of your new stories.
I chuckled a bit at Edward's need to razz Mike Newton after all theses years.
Triplets afterca setvof twins, oh my giddy aunt. I would never wish that on anyone.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Fantastic story! Can't wait for the new ones!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this one. Looking forward to new ones. Especially excited for "Charlie's Voice".
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome job. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the story!!! Can't wait for the new ones either!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
This story was fabulous, I absolutely loved it and I'm sorry to see it come to an end.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awwww five kids that is awesome. Edward has some power sperm creating all those cute babies. I bet Emmett is a great dad. Alice having little terror's are great. I love what you did to Newton making him look older then he is. It would have been funny to make him evil spawn have a couple babies with different guys and her be a single mom lol. Wonderful story.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read the next two.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sent From Hell!!!! Yessss!!!!
Wow, way to come full circle. Emmett graduating...perfect. I can't wait to read more of your stories. I love them!!! You girls write good angst and drama. It's crazy sometimes but not too crazy. I feel like they could be turned into soap operas...you would make so much money!!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved loved loved it thank you so much for writing this it was a great read I always look forward to updates I can't wait for the next ones
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
sweet end. Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. I am sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing with us. Love the enter action with Newton. Newton deserves it. Lol.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
I enjoyed this very much. One of the best fan fiction I have every read.
Date: 04 Oct 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, the twins are here.
Another exciting read is coming to a close.
I look forward to all the new stories in the cue.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's parents are 2 shitty people. Finally, it's better they were not present at the wedding, they would have rotten it with some drama. Great chapter, as always. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wonderful chapter. Glad he told off the old biddie at the ceremony. Yey babies
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am just now catching up Wee. I hope your daughter is going to be fine. I am one month out from my Knee Replacement Surgery. I did great the doctor's were shocked. I was up walking in the hall next day and all the way down in two days. I have done really well. I pray your daughter did not get a diagnosis that scares you and its manageable. Just pray. God works those miracles today!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
It is a beautiful story, a marriage, two beautiful babies!
I adore.
Thank you for it, I had some good times to read this fiction.
Kisses
Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
Im so excited to see everything you do next. I love how this story is ending .
Date: 02 Oct 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
So glad that everything worked out for them. Curious to see how the future concludes, hope that everyone is happy and healthy.
So very sorry to hear about your daughter being ill, but at least you now know what you're up against and I hope that she's well soon!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
:( So sad to see this coming to an end,
This sounds like a nice little bundle of joy.
I wish you and your family well.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad your daughter is doing better. So happy they babies got here healthy. Why does it not surprise me that Bella's parents did not show up.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
GGGGGRRRRRRRR!!! I hate Renee and Charlie what ass's!
Loving this and looking forward to more :D
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yay to everything!! This story, the new stories, Kasi's daughter doing better, everything.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. Hope someone deals with Nurse Mary and her attitude. Glad they figured out what was going on with your daughter
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. All good things must come to an end I know, but I too wish for more. :o)~
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh I loved it this was perfect they are so happy
Date: 01 Oct 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
So glad to hear about your daughter! This was a really good chapter and I very much enjoyed reading about their happiness. Of course, her asshole parents wouldn't show up to their wedding! It's okay, they had all the people there who love them and matter!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm really sad that this story is ending! I so want more Edward and Mina. Though I don't think I could've handled them apart any longer lol
Tori S.
P.S. every time I read DrScott I heard Rocky horror picture show. DR. Scott! Janet. Rocky! Dr Scott
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sad to see this end. Beautiful story!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad edward told that old bitch off. Love that Bella wanted to get married before she moved in with edward. Bella was right one boy and one girl. Always love your Halloween stories and Charlie 's voice that was my favorite in the compilations
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved the ending. Babies are the best.
Date: 27 Sep 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella's parents are dicks
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapters
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hi!
Love your may to december stories. I need more!
Have a good week and Keep on the great work!!!
Greetings from Panama
Date: 23 Sep 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm just happy there's a lemon! Thank you
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Nice date. Her parents are arseholes.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
Well the reveal went well. Her parents are so pathetic. They dont deserve her as a daughter. LOVE LOVE LOVE what happened to kate and newton
Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bow chicka bow wow! :-) hehe.....Man, Bella's parents are @ssholes! I'd say good riddance but I know she's not ready to sever all ties. As always, I love Tia! :-)
Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella needs to write off her parents. They are very selfish people. Bella and Edward need to hurry up and get married. Then they need to move , so they can be done with the drama.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving your story!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww they are growing as a couple...loved it
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
I think it is a good thing Edward could not reach through that phone and rip there heads off so not cool Bella is much more understanding than they deserve
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
You leave us with this cliffie & you ask us about what we think of the phone call? I could care less about the phone call ;D