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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2023 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2023 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love it 

Reviewer: roxychik06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wouldn't Faith call Edward grandpa not uncle? If I'm wrong sorry but that just confused me.

 

Amazing story btw I've literally read ever single one of your stories and I love them all.

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

Her parents are psychos! And terribly mean and non-supportive!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2018 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

Obviously, it's Edward's baby. She was a virgin...

Reviewer: rosemarieswan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

Absolutely enjoyed reading this story. Thank you so much for sharing! :)

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome story, keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Now I think Emmett likes Rose & told Bella about it. I'm more sure that this thing with Bella is a front for something. I just can't figure out what it is.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now I KNOW Bella likes Edward, she was probing for info. I'm not too sure about Tia. I think she's too much of a feminist. There is nothing wrong with Edward being a gentleman and she SHOULD appreciate it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Another theory... He (Em) wants to keep the football groupies away so he and Bella are pretending to be a couple. She obviously likes Edward and feels the "tingle" so something is up. Maybe she agreed so she wouldn't have to be alone so much. I also think Bella & Emmett are very good friends. There is an obvious affection there but I've noticed the Edward has not seen them kiss other than the forehead.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

I have a theory... Bella is not really Em's girlfriend. She is tutoring him and to cover that up they've agreed to say they are a couple. Maybe Em is embarrassed and don't want the kids at school or his dad to know. Maybe she's doing it because she is lonely cause her parents are always gone. He (Em) is very fond of her but not much more. After all she is the opposite of his type. Whatever they were doing in his room, it was NOT having sex. Either he was doing some kind of schoolwork or she was sitting on his back while he did push-ups She's small enough. When I was little (maybe 12) I used to do that for my dad's friend who couldn't afford a gym. he would have me get on his back like he was a horse and do push-ups and I would have to try to stay on. I'm pretty sure I squeaked a bit too, and he grunted, but there was NOTHING sexual about it. 

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for a very interesting and well written story.

Reviewer: Adelheity Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hi, I love your story👍🏻 but mine in Italian is mia for females and mio for males. For example my wife = mia moglie, my husband = mio marito. Therefore Edward would call her Mia, which is Italian for mine. Mina doesn' t exist, it would just be a name like Bella. However, I love this story 😃

Reviewer: yogis-girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

If Emmett had played football all four years of high school he would be ineligible to play.

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

<3 it!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love it

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

In my mind Newton gets caught, from recovering emails, screwing underage students

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 25

Beautiful story.  Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really liked it!

Reviewer: Bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

cute story!!

Reviewer: mr kitigato Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edwards a sicko. He's Givin the old pervert vibe with all the touchy, kissy, sweetheart callin. GROSS. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the great story!

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

I think Em it's not really with Bella but doesn't want to date anyone other then Rose so I'd using Bella as a fake girlfriend to keep Kate away from him. Bella is lonely and only too happy to help Em out if it means she can see Edward. I like Tia but she has to know it won't go anywhere with Edward. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved story.  Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

thanks for the story! alls well that ends well

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25

This was a great story as always I love reading your post. Looking forward to what's coming .

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great story.  Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks good chapter 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wrapped everything up nicely. So sweet. Loved it. Take care and see you all soon. 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

They got their happy ending. Where did they move to again?  Will they ever hear from Charlie and Renee again?  Will em and Rose have kids?  Loved it.  Another great story. Thanks!!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 25

well done

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh Wee as always I love to go on your journey's. I am trying to catch up after being off line so long (close to a month).

 

Good story.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I REALY LOVED THE ENDING.

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm going miss this story. I look forward to reading it on my rough days. Thank you for letting come along with you. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love it as always

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

They are happy that is what counts.  I will be looking forward to what you do next thanks so much

Reviewer: Kay2015 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25

Hi..great story!! Thank u for sharing it..😁c6;

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 25

What a beautiful ending to a long traveled road.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

A bit sad that Rose and Emmett's little girl has Downs, but I'm sure the whole family loves her and she loves them! Had to chuckle at Edward buying gas from Newton! Don't blame him one bit for rubbing it in his face, how happy and successful his family is! I really enjoyed this story and never thought for a minute it would be anyone but Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: beadgirl61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great little story, girls!  Keep them coming!

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

Enjoyed it. Looking forward to the new ones.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

Looking forward to Charlie's voice.

Totally adored this story as per usual with your stories.

Loved it and can't wait for your next story.

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow... Beautiful ending to a beautiful story!! I loved this story very much! :)

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great ending.  I look forward to readjng the next 2. I am a bit curious as to why his grandaughter calls him her un le though.  

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 25

Excellent, it was a pleasure to follow you through this lovely story. THank you so much for sharing your wonderful imagination with us.

Take care of youse girls, till next time with Nightmare and Charlie's Voice.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading your new ones 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great story...

 

Looking forward to your new one to!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for another interesting journey through these characters.
I look forward to both of your new stories.
I chuckled a bit at Edward's need to razz Mike Newton after all theses years.
Triplets afterca setvof twins, oh my giddy aunt. I would never wish that on anyone.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 25

Fantastic story! Can't wait for the new ones!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved this one. Looking forward to new ones. Especially excited for "Charlie's Voice".

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome job. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved the story!!! Can't wait for the new ones either!!!

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 25

This story was fabulous, I absolutely loved it and I'm sorry to see it come to an end.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awwww five kids that is awesome. Edward has some power sperm creating all those cute babies.  I bet Emmett is a great dad. Alice having little terror's are great.  I love what you did to Newton making him look older then he is. It would have been funny to make him evil spawn have a couple babies with different guys and her be a single mom lol. Wonderful story.  

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read the next two.

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

Sent From Hell!!!! Yessss!!!!

Wow, way to come full circle. Emmett graduating...perfect. I can't wait to read more of your stories. I love them!!! You girls write good angst and drama. It's crazy sometimes but not too crazy. I feel like they could be turned into soap operas...you would make so much money!! 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

I loved loved loved it thank you so much for writing this it was a great read I always look forward to updates I can't wait for the next ones 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25

sweet end.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

I have truly enjoyed reading this story.  I am sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing with us. Love the enter action with Newton.  Newton deserves it. Lol.

Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

I enjoyed this very much. One of the best fan fiction I have every read.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, the twins are here.
Another exciting read is coming to a close.
I look forward to all the new stories in the cue.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 24

Bella's parents are 2 shitty people. Finally, it's better they were not present at the wedding, they would have rotten it with some drama. Great chapter, as always. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wonderful chapter. Glad he told off the old biddie at the ceremony. Yey babies

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am just now catching up Wee. I hope your daughter is going to be fine. I am one month out from my Knee Replacement Surgery. I did great the doctor's were shocked. I was up walking in the hall next day and all the way down in two days. I have done really well. I pray your daughter did not get a diagnosis that scares you and its manageable. Just pray. God works those miracles today!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

It is a beautiful story, a marriage, two beautiful babies!

I adore.

Thank you for it, I had some good times to read this fiction.

Kisses

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Im so excited to see everything you do next.  I love how this story is ending .

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love it

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

So glad that everything worked out for them. Curious to see how the future concludes, hope that everyone is happy and healthy.

So very sorry to hear about your daughter being ill, but at least you now know what you're up against and I hope that she's well soon!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

:( So sad to see this coming to an end,

This sounds like a nice little bundle of joy.

I wish you and your family well.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 24

So beautiful 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad your daughter is doing better.  So happy they babies got here healthy.  Why does it not surprise me that Bella's parents did not show up.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

GGGGGRRRRRRRR!!! I hate Renee and Charlie what ass's!

 

Loving this and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks good chapter 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 24

Yay to everything!!  This story, the new stories, Kasi's daughter doing better, everything. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter.  Hope someone deals with Nurse Mary and her attitude.  Glad they figured out what was going on with your daughter  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

good :)

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. All good things must come to an end I know, but I too wish for more. :o)~

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh I loved it this was perfect they are so happy 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 24

So glad to hear about your daughter! This was a really good chapter and I very much enjoyed reading about their happiness. Of course, her asshole parents wouldn't show up to their wedding! It's okay, they had all the people there who love them and matter!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm really sad that this story is ending! I so want more Edward and Mina. Though I don't think I could've handled them apart any longer lol

 

 

Tori S.

 

P.S. every time I read DrScott I heard Rocky horror picture show. DR. Scott! Janet. Rocky! Dr Scott

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sad to see this end. Beautiful story!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am glad edward told that old bitch off.  Love that Bella wanted to get married before she moved in with edward. Bella was right one boy and one girl.  Always love your Halloween stories and Charlie 's voice that was my favorite in the compilations 

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved the ending.  Babies are the best.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella's parents are dicks

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks good chapters 

Reviewer: BettyVonDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi!

Love your may to december stories. I need more!

Have a good week and Keep on the great work!!!

Greetings from Panama

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm just happy there's a lemon!  Thank you

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

Nice date. Her parents are arseholes.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well the reveal went well.  Her parents are so pathetic.  They dont deserve her as a daughter.  LOVE LOVE LOVE what happened to kate and newton

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bow chicka bow wow! :-) hehe.....Man, Bella's parents are @ssholes!  I'd say good riddance but I know she's not ready to sever all ties.  As always, I love Tia! :-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella needs to write off her parents.  They are very selfish people.  Bella and Edward need to hurry up and get married.  Then they need to move , so they can be done with the drama.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loving your story!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awww they are growing as a couple...loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

I think it is a good thing Edward could not reach through that phone and rip there heads off so not cool  Bella is much more understanding than they deserve

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

You leave us with this cliffie & you ask us about what we think of the phone call? I could care less about the phone call ;D

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