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Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 8:53 AM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Goodness that was such a beautiful story. I loved reading every part of it, the ups and downs and the exciting beautiful moments especially when they added to their family that was just great. Thank you for putting this story out there and letting us all read your wonderful creation.

Melissa



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for reading my story and taking the time to stop in. I love it so much when someone who reads this as a complete fic, instead of a WIP, decides to chime in and let me know they truly enjoyed it. I think, at least for me, I always wander if it will read as well in one go as it did week by week so it is super extra special when someone takes the time to let me know they enjoyed it. It was definitely a roller coaster ride in many different ways, but as soon as our Bella and Edward realized that time and circumstance didn;t matter, they were able to come together and make the best family. Just what they needed to be before they faced Jake's hardest time. Thank you sooooo much for stopping in :)

Fyre

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 3:34 AM Title: Roundabout

Awe, he's finally getting it that he does Love Bella. A little slow on hte uptake but I'm sure he'll get there soon and hopefully so will Bella since she's the stubborn one who kept denying what they had all along, only took a little jealousy to get her there but thankfully she did get there now she just needs to realize she's In Love with him of course he needs to realize it also. On to the next chapter. By the way this is another awesome, beautiful and amazing story.

Melissa

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 1:08 PM Title: Changes Ahead

I like your story very much and I really sorry for not leaving a comment in the other chapters, the only thing that bothers me in this story is the way Edward's speaks and his talks with Jay, the swear words he or they use seems unnecessary, it looks very forced and very irritating, this is the only thing I would change in the story. I don't mean to offend you as the writer, just give you an insight, just because he's a man doesn't mean he has to say a swear word in every phrase.   



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I am good with your feelings on this matter, but it's not because he s a man that he spoke that way, it is simply who he is. I have many stories, including a Christian Rocker Edward, who do not use this language, but this Edward is that man. I made him that man becuase I love a swearing Edward honestly, and it fits who he is. I am very happy to hear that you enjoyed the story otherwise though, and even more happier that you chose to stop in and let me know your thoughts. Some people are so afraid of offending an author that they choose to say nothing. I'm not that author who gets offended. There are a few things I would change if I were going back and starting over, but that aspect isn't one of them. Thank you :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 1:17 AM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad that you enjoyed my little tale and even more happy that you stopped in to let me know! 

Fyre

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 12:30 PM Title: Steep Descent

I think she is pregnant

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:24 AM Title: STOP

Hahaha, Edward reminds me of Gordon Ramsey!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes! I jad to bring him full circle from where we met him. Back to interviewing for his new chef. Thank you so much for all of your reviews :)

fyre

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 4:36 AM Title: Changes Ahead

I LOVE how you wrote James for this story. It's such a refreshing character than the douche bag he's usually painted as!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I tried to make most of them the good guys, something different. of course there had to be a few bad ones, but not James, Victoria, or Tanya. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! See you one more time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 1:04 AM Title: Steep Ascent

Best. Chapter. Ending. Ever. 



Author's Response:

 Wow, thanks! Now i have to go back and see what it says specifically lol. thanks for reading and reviewing! i have a couple more from you to answer. see you then :)

fyre

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:59 PM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Absolutely wonderful.  



Author's Response:

thank you so much for going on this journey with me and all of your wonderul reviews! 

fyre

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:42 PM Title: Crossroads

ohhhh bella being jelouse

well what did she expect he isnt a monk and she doesnt want him like that   or so she says



Author's Response:

For some reason just looking at the reviews in a list doesn't tell me which chapter this is, but i know exactly ha! i think she was beginning to have a small epiphany right before she heard the gillges. of course she wants him lol, he's edward! thanks so much! 

fyre

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:20 AM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Oh just perfect! Thank you for this. Your Edward was beyond wonderful. Love it. Deserves to be fic of the month I will be voting for you.😉😉

Author's Response:

lol, thank you! i do think it has to be nominated before it will even be in the poll, but knowing someone will take the time to vote means everything to me. i'm so deleriously happy you enjoyed it so much! 

fyre

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 7:58 PM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

thank you for a wonderful story...well done...Bella & Edward got thier HEA and so did the boys...I really enjoyed reading your story... They ended up with more children than I expected but they are very happy



Author's Response:

they did end up with more kids, but they started with a pair right off the bat. i'm so glad you enjoyed it, it really means the world to hear that from readers. thank you so much!

fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:38 AM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Loved Love this Story

Author's Response:

thank you so much! i am sad to see it end but so happy that so many enjoyed it! you'll never know how that makes me feel! 

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 10:15 PM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Wonderful story. Have loved taking the ride with you. Ty fro writing and sharing.

ty



Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking this ride with me. i have loved and appreciated every single review you left. i should have something shorter, but new coming soon. 

fyre

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 9:34 PM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us. I enjoyed this last chapter very much with Autumn's POV.  Looking forward to your next story.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading! i truly can't express how much it means that you enjoyed my story. look for something shorter but new soon :)

fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 9:31 PM Title: Epi - Speed Limit 70

:) loved this story 



Author's Response:

thank you soooo much! it's amazing what a simple smile can make an author feel, especilly when it's two smiles per chapter. you are so much appreciated!! 

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2016 2:55 AM Title: STOP

Wonderful seeing them at different phases.  LOL for Edward channeling his inner Gordon Ramsey



Author's Response:

thank you! i felt it was important to bring edward full circle back to where we first met him. in the kitchen looking for a chef. see you one more time :)

fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:14 PM Title: STOP

Wow all Boys, they will have their hands full for a few years, No Tomato throwing here..

Author's Response:

thank you! yes, 4 boys, but let's see how that ends up. see you one more time :)

fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 5:33 PM Title: STOP

:) 



Author's Response:

thank yu so much for all you do :)

fyre

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 5:11 AM Title: Incident Ahead

Gotta love Seth!!



Author's Response:

lol, oh yes! boys will be boys. see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 3:05 AM Title: Incident Ahead

ROFL for the baby reveal.  Jared really needs a chill pill though



Author's Response:

he does, but i think this incident may help with that lol. of course the reveal would never go as planned! see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:59 PM Title: Incident Ahead

Love it



Author's Response:

thank you so much! see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:44 PM Title: Incident Ahead

I have to say You have made a James that can be loved in this story..Kodos to you.

Author's Response:

thank you! I tried to make most characters lovable except a few, but also realistic. see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:40 PM Title: Incident Ahead

:) 



Author's Response:

thank you sooooo much! 

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:20 PM Title: Incident Ahead

I love this big dynamic family!



Author's Response:

thank you so much! they are a handful at time lol. see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 6:17 PM Title: Incident Ahead

Oh snap. Love this story, post soon



Author's Response:

thank you so much! only two chapters left. see you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 6:29 PM Title: Construction Zone

So so so good!



Author's Response:

Awe, thank you so much! new chapter posting in just a sec. see you next time :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Ooh new twist. Interesting!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 9:22 AM Title: Rest Area

Usually my favorite relationship in a story is Edward and Bella but occasionally another one will steal that spot. In this story, it's definitely Jake and Seth!!



Author's Response:

aw, this makes me smile so big! i'm glad you're enjoying these boys so much :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 5:39 AM Title: Exit Only

Phew! I skipped the review on the last several chapters because it was so intense that I just couldn't help but go right for the "next" button! So good😀👍

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 12:12 AM Title: Steep Ascent

Yes! That was awesome!!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 12:01 AM Title: Crossroads

Ha ha! Gotcha Bella

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 11:48 PM Title: Caution

Again, poor Edward

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 10:04 PM Title: Potholes

Awe poor Edward. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 9:42 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

I can't stop laughing! Who hasn't that happened to? When your kids hear something they're not supposed to and then rat you out! Ah ha ha



Author's Response:

this one is hands down the most loved chapter i think. if no one sai anything, they usually stopped in here to leet me know it cracked them up. so glad you enjoyed it too! thhank you so much for all of your awesome reviews! see you one moe time for the epi :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 9:10 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

Good stuff!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 8:22 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

Ok, your Edward in this story is quite yummy! 😀

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 8:15 PM Title: Construction Zone

I'm going to really miss this little family.  You have done such a great job.  Looking forward to find out what the " one more" thing is. 



Author's Response:

i'm going to miss them too. i've had such a great time writing this and the love it has received is beyond my grasp. thank you so much! the reveal is next week, see you then :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 10:33 AM Title: Green Light

Ahhh! I'm both excited and scared to click the "next" button. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 8:12 AM Title: No U Turn

Wow! So good!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 7:57 AM Title: Yield

Oh I think I know where this is heading and I'm sure it will be an agonizingly slow process but I think it's going to be awesome!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 4:54 AM Title: Detour

Wow ok that was definitely an unexpected turn. So exciting even though it's heart wrenching. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 8:45 PM Title: Road Work Ahead

Oh I can already tell that this is going to be good 😀



Author's Response:

Omg! I just realized I have all these reviews for old chapters! Tomorrow I'll read through them and give you an awesome reply. So sorry I didn't see them before!! Welcome aboard :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 8:39 PM Title: Construction Zone

Seth and Jake are so cute I want to steal them.  



Author's Response:

Aww, they are little cuties! Time to tell the family, see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 7:43 PM Title: Construction Zone

:) 



Author's Response:

thank you so much! see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 6:31 PM Title: Construction Zone

Glad Jessica will be punished.  While things worked out in the end for B&E, J should not be allowed near kids anymore especially.

Woo hoo on new house near family.



Author's Response:

yes, and we will hear more about her punishment next chapter, along with the reveal to the family! see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Wow  Mike is a real piece of work. He should have at least told Bella that Jessica had the wrong impression.  I do blame him for it some

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Finally we learn who pulls the switch. Looking forward to the confrontation with Jessica. Happy New Year🍾🎉🎉

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Now we know who and why. She will loose her nursing liscense and be sued by the hospital and perhaps jail time. All for jealousy. Wow she is stupid.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Great update.  I agree with Bella.  They would have never met. Loved it. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Jessica sounds crazy!!!!  Happy New Year to you too

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Jessica is going away for awhile and she will lose her licenses, and Mike will probably get probation. Great Chapter

Reviewer: im your density Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 4:42 AM Title: Changes Ahead

Your main  characters use the phrases man and bro quite often, you may think about using them less because they really don't add to the dialogue, it almost reduces it to sounding like 2 teenaged boys talking. I like the way the story is coming along besides that. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 3:06 AM Title: Changes Ahead

Love that it is all working out for you.  

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:30 PM Title: Changes Ahead

We are so glued to our technology...we don't care about the shift key. Now if you start talking to everyone in capital letters, we'll wonder what's wrong! Liked that he wants Jay and Vic with him...family IS everything.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:36 PM Title: Changes Ahead

HAPPY HOLIDAY AND GREAT CHAPTER

Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:30 PM Title: Changes Ahead

Wednesday is a long time to post again.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 4:10 PM Title: Changes Ahead

Everything is going so good for this family.  They deserve it.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:58 PM Title: Changes Ahead

:)  Happy holidays to you 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:34 PM Title: Changes Ahead

Sounds like Bella came up the start of a great plan for E.   Happy Holidays!!!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:26 PM Title: Changes Ahead

I love the idea of the family moving closer. Great chapter, can't wait for more. Merry Christmas to you and yours, I hope you have a fantastic holiday season.

XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 9:39 PM Title: OUTTAKE: Baby on Board

Loved Jakes POV. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much, i'm super glad you enjoyed it! see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 8:42 PM Title: OUTTAKE: Baby on Board

:) 



Author's Response:

i hope you realize how you make authors smile every time you do this! seriously, thank you :)

fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 7:03 PM Title: OUTTAKE: Baby on Board

Cute insight into the lovely boys.



Author's Response:

thank you so much! sorry i've been lax on replies, but i think i'm back now. see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:45 AM Title: Rest Area

He is so sure it is a girl. I love little Seth and Jake.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 3:44 PM Title: Rest Area

Seth is such a sweet kid.  lol for Edward and his jealous monster in his head.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 5:38 AM Title: Rest Area

Loved it. What a great story. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 3:09 PM Title: Rest Area

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:55 PM Title: Bump

A happy day for this family.  

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 1:52 PM Title: Bump

Love it, what an excellent story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 7:02 PM Title: Bump

Woo hoo Glad the boys are going home and Bella checks out ok too

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 6:42 PM Title: Bump

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 2:10 PM Title: Exit Only

Omg love your story can not wait for more .thank you for writing it.



Author's Response:

Woot woot! Thank you soooo much!!! Jake comes home next chapter, see you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 5:01 AM Title: Exit Only

Oh my what a nasty woman.  Thank god Bella got her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella kicked butt this chapter. Maria thought she was the easy target, but she thought wrong! Jake comes home next chapter! See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 4:43 AM Title: Exit Only

Glad they got the Queen B.  I think Bella might be pregnant......



Author's Response:

They so got her. She will definitely not mess with this family again! As for Bella, we'll see what's up with her next chapter. See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 2:20 AM Title: Exit Only

A week, no no no please no, this was an excellent chapter. Throwing up on her was icing on the cake.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, I need to get my but in gear and finish it off so I can post more often, but as it is now, I had to slow down. Thank you, a good smak and some vomit was a nice way for her to make her exit! See you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:49 PM Title: Exit Only

thank you for the update...The ex wife is CRAZY!!! did she really think Bella would leave her children and husband...thank god Ed sr and Charile knew she would come back...what made her think the children would go with her?  I like the interview with Robin Roberts she ask the right questions..you gave your son up..now she wants to use post pardum..not going to work..I can't wait for the next update..please make sure they go back to Good Morning America...lol



Author's Response:

She is plum crazy. I think she thought Bella was the weak link and that if she caught her unawares, she might get the cash and try to wreak a little havoc. Apparently she doesn't know Edward as well as she thinks if she thought he would just let Bella walk away from him without a fight. I watch GMA so I tried to make it more realisttic, not just a rag mag sympothy interview. I'm sure Bella and Edward will handle it in their wn way, but I'm slao sure all og the news outlets will get ahold of the info soon enough. We'll catch up with what's going on with Bella and Jake comes home next chapter! See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 6:23 PM Title: Exit Only

Preggers?



Author's Response:

*zips lips* We'll see what's up next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 5:53 PM Title: Exit Only

Nice way of getting rid of Maria. I'm guessing Bella is pregnant



Author's Response:

LOL, she definitely went out in style! *zips lips* see you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 5:28 PM Title: Exit Only

"Which  old  witch ,  the vomit  covered witch,"   Yay!  Couldn't  happen  to a more deserving person !   Now they should play that recording on Good Morning  America ! 



Author's Response:

She definitely went out in style lol. We'll see how things unfold next chapter! see you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:44 PM Title: Exit Only

Maria is a selfish bitch!!!!   I hope she gets all she deserves



Author's Response:

Oh, she's definitely getting it, no doubt. See you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:34 PM Title: Exit Only

wow Maria has some balls.   I'd be talking to that reporter she conned and fast as well as Garrett.



Author's Response:

I can see Garrett making another appearance soon enough ;) Jake goes home next chapter! See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:05 PM Title: Exit Only

Is she pregnant

Author's Response:

*zips lips* We'll see what's up next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: pjr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 9:40 PM Title: Keep Out

I did laugh.... can't wait to find out what happens.



Author's Response:

Me too, I still laugh! We'll see everything unfold next chapter! See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 8:01 AM Title: Keep Out

I'm with Sr.on this one! 



Author's Response:

LOL, yes he is offering a very permanent solution! See you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: pjr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:55 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

I actually laughed out loud at the end.  Gotta love kids and their honesty!  I am truly enjoying this story, can't wait to see how it continues.  

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:32 AM Title: Keep Out

What?? That is it?? NOOO please post again soon.



Author's Response:

Oops, sorry! This wasn't even a real cliffy lol. Next post will be early Monday, promise! See you then :) PS you can take a look as Fyregirl Fics ... a page on FB, if you want to see a teaser Friday! 

Fyre

Reviewer: nat40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 12:32 AM Title: Merge Ahead

This is really a great story I had been hoping someone would write a story like this where there was a switch at birth then edward and bella end up together and in love also have another child together I can't wait to see the completion of it.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 10:22 PM Title: Keep Out

I love littel Seth and Jake.  Maria is a queen B who needs to be promptly dealth with. 



Author's Response:

I agree and hopefully Charlie'splan will work! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:56 PM Title: Keep Out

As if they don't have enough on their plate.  She just wants attention. Bitch!



Author's Response:

I agree, I think she does want attention ... or money! I'm sure BxE will keep this well away from their boys though. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 4:48 PM Title: Keep Out

It did make me laugh (Ed,anyway)



Author's Response:

I still laugh every time I read that part lol. Thanks so much for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:56 PM Title: Keep Out

She gave up her child but it was the wrong child but a child none the less she should have no rights to him

Author's Response:

No she shouldn't, but sadly, I do think that the courts would hear her out simply because the switch. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:36 PM Title: Keep Out

Been wondering how long till she showed up.  Probably thinking she'll get some $$ from a lawsuit against the hospital or something.  

Poor Seth and Jake.  So hard for kids so young to be patient. Go Charlie for getting a TRO.  What a witch. My thought is  E needs to call Garrett and get the story out there.   oooh Protective Ed coming out.  Love it.  




Author's Response:

Yes, she was always out there waiting in the wings. I think BxE will make sure this never touches the boys. With the dads on the case we can expect a plant to be followed. Hopefully a permanent solution. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:26 PM Title: Keep Out

What a bitch!!!!!



Author's Response:

YES! She is a bitch, but I'm sire we can dispose of her in a creative way lol. See you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:06 PM Title: Wrong Way

This doesn't sound good



Author's Response:

Hey! I missed you and wondered if everything was okay? I'm posting the next chapter here now! See you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 2:29 PM Title: Wrong Way

Very emotional chapter.... Loved it.  But who is the woman?



Author's Response:

Yes, it was nice to see where Edward is with his thoughts. As for the woman, well, I guess we'll see next chapter ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 5:22 PM Title: Wrong Way

Gotta love Amazon and Ebay.  Sadly the media rarely has boundries or sense of privacy anymore.  

the phone videos are a good idea. 

ACK Ducks indeed. Lemme guess Maria lied her way into the room?



Author's Response:

Yes, Ebay is definitely my sight and I checked for the ChapStick lol. Amazon's good too. The boys finally got to interact and then even better get a visit. As for the who, well, I guess we'll see next time ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 7:10 AM Title: Wrong Way

I bet it is Edwards Ex



Author's Response:

Guess we'll see next chapter ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 4:54 AM Title: Wrong Way

That's just mean plain and simple. Lol I'm taking my guess who this woman just might be. Can't wait for monday. I love this story 



Author's Response:

Sorry! Guess we'll see who it is next chapter ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 3:56 AM Title: Wrong Way

Ex-wifey is on the scene!



Author's Response:

Hmmm, guess we'll see next chapter ;)

fyre

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