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Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 11.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 11.
oh tell the writers block to move on i got to know what happens
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 9.
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Date: 19 Mar 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 9.
love this ch but i wood love to know why she can't be vamp up?
Author's Response:
she is immune to it they tried to when she was 18, but found out her blood disinagrates it. im am working on chapter ten now
Reviewer: phoenices24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3.
Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3.
This chapter could use some work i.e. punctuation and grammar
Author's Response:
i am new at writing and i am working on my grammar and everything and ty for the feed back.
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