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Reviewer: jules3677 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 9:38 PM Title: One Time Thing

Where's the rest?  Just got to the interesting bit and I get a drink recipes.  What's with that?  Back to the story.  Things, good things, exciting things, were about to happen.  I banged on the monitor, nothing.  Turned the damn modem off and counted the to requisite ten.  Turned the modem on, nothing,  There's something wrong with your story.  It didn't load properly!  I used to work behind a bar.  What do I need drink recipes for?  Slow Screw Against The Wall, okay, fair enough, thats slightly funny in a weird way especially when its from a pimply male impressing his female companion and trying not to blush when ordering it.  So back to the story.  Just up to the good part and, and nothing!  Somethings wrong!  I did enjoy the quarter of the story that loaded though.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:54 AM Title: One Time Thing

ACK  Only a one time thing?!?!!

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