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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 8:07 PM Title: Epilogue

thanks for sharing this AWESOME!!! story with us on here ;D



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Thanks! This one is one of my favorites babies. I'm blushing right now :)

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh those people (Buffy's parents make my skin crawl)



Author's Response:

They are awful. You'll see.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

i gotta say I was not going to read this I just hate any thing happening to a child. I am trusting you. I know I am weak in this department.. sue me LOL



Author's Response:

Hi!

I want to warn you that something happens to Bree (Sorry for spoiling it), she doesn't suffer, it's quick, but if this triggers something I would feel so terrible.

But  it has a good end for the good guys.

If you read it, I really hope you like it.

May

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 8:38 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving this story a chance.

May :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 8:18 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story.  I hope you are feeling better 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I'm back :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 7:46 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm glad bella and edward got happy ending. As for esme while she will have to live with her choices for all entity.



Author's Response:

Hi! 

I'm all for HEA and B&E always have to end together and happy.

Thanks for alays being there for me :)

May

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well this may be too much for Bella.



Author's Response:

But first she has the chance to go to Costa Rica ;)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh no. Now I get why Bella would be envolved here. Bree, will she make it?



Author's Response:

Hi! Glad to see youback in one of my stories.

I think I won't be spoiling anything in telling you that sadly Bree won't make it.

I hope you enjoy this story.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 32

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I hope you enjoyed the ride.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 32

Esme landing in a bad place I guess that what happens when greed and grief mixed together, she should have left the spiritual world of the dead alone. Goes to show you what you should never mess with in the first place.

When you get this could I asked you something.



Author's Response:

HI!

Well, we knew after all she made she didn't deserve heaven.

I'm here for whatever you need hun.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 31

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella mom Renee save them from the evil spirited.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was there to save the day :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

Esme is really stupid that not your daughter wake-up.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Esme is lost in her obssesion to get her daughter back.

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

loving this



Author's Response:

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 29

Looks like the evil child is out number but will she kill Seth or will someone stop her.

Congratulations on both of your stories!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Don't worry, Seth will be fine.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

I guess esme will stop at nothing to keep her daughter bree. Then again knowing esme she doesn't know that not her daughter, what will happen when she see that not really her daughter?

I guess I'll have to wait and see.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, Esme is in denial. But the truth willcome out soon.

Thanks for listening and supporting me :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

They're going to have to drive fast



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, I'm hoping  Esme is a slow driver. :)

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 27

surely Esme is going to realise now.  Your new story sounds really good



Author's Response:

Hi!

Esme may have an inkling about Bree's real intentions, she had been in denial for so long.

Thanks for your support.

BTW, I forgot to mention that I found a beta for 'A mother's advice' and she's working on the next chapter and the first one. I'll post as soon as she gets it back to me :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 27

I guess the old woman wasn't wrong when she telled esme that her daughter isn't there. I think esme is now wondering who this person is? I think this going to come back and haunted esme for life. Esme take away bella life for noting.



Author's Response:

Esme has kind of lost her mind by now. Haunted is the least of her worries.  But don'tworry, I would never kill Bella, you know me. 

I'll mail you as soon as I get back from my monday meeting :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Mr. Black is more right then he knew.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yep. If only Rosalie believes him...

May

Reviewer: rockerchixk Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 26

He hit the nail on the head



Author's Response:

Hi!

You're right, now if only Rosalie believed him...

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 25

I don't think this is Bree



Author's Response:

No, and we'll find more in next chapters.

Thanks for your support.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 25

Now we knew that esme let the wrong person back Into the land of the living.

Having fun watching movies tonight.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, we have the confirmation, and a bit of what Buffy did ;)

I'm glad you're enjoying some fun times. Here I'm sending some virtual popcorn :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 24

I think sue has found esme,from that message sue sound angry. Then again it's sue own fault she lost her own family because her and Harry both were greedy,you know what they say money will do to you. Esme couldn't let her daughter rest in peace, I believe this isn't her daughter bree I think it someone else esme let out by mistake.



Author's Response:

You're right, you'll see soon. :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh no now sue there I wonder what will happen next.

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:) Thanks

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter will be up this weekend.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

Esme sure has lost her dam mind,hopefully edward and the others find her.

1 If bella had listen to esme about how she was treating edward,what do you think she would have done differently?

2 Think bella telling jacob sorry over and over again wasn't going to help her in anyway?

I'll send you an email soon. 



Author's Response:

Hi! Again, I was sure I had answered this. I'm terrible.

Esme will get worst.

1 I hope so. She needed someone making her realize how Edward really felt, and she respected Esme enough to believe her.

2 No, it only gave him the wrong idea.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm at a lost for word's,but I love it. Hopefully esme will meet her maker.

1 Do you think Leah and Sam would have lasted if Sam never meet Emily?

2 Did you think Rosalie would have been happier as a human then a vampire?

Which couple did I think Don't belong together? It would have to be renesmee and jacob because I think jacob only imprint on her was because renesmee was half bella.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was why I decided towrit the story. To give it a happy ending. Just wait.

1 honestly, no. Leah has a strong personality and Sam seems as close minded as the rest of the tribe. She would had left.

2 No, she said that what she wanted was a kid, but if she stayed human and marrid Royce and had kids, then she would had wanted the love and patience she got from Emmett.

I'm writing you about my bad boys ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sound like bree want out of the dead world and want to be apart of the living again.

I'll email you when I got something figure out.



Author's Response:

Yes, Bree is acting weird ;)

You know I'm here whenever you need it :)

May

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

I have to agree with edward there only so much that bella could take.

1 Why do you think Charlie stay in forks and not moved away?

2 DiD you think that La Push has too much drama?

When you have free time could you email me. I really appreciate it thank you may!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

1 I think he's too scared to try something new. But he should had made the effort at least for Bella.

2 Well, they're a very closed community, so any little thing that happens it's bound tobecome drama. They needed to get out more. :)

I wrote you,but I'm sorry for answering so late. I came out of work late and then traffic was awful.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 18

Esme really need to move on with her life,let her past go. I'm glad bella said yes to edward proposal.

1 What is the best bad boy edward fanfiction you read?

2 Did you still hate it in fanfiction stories were bella keeps forgiving jacob for everything?

IT a little hard to decide which edward fanfiction one I like.



Author's Response:

Hi! Of course Bella said yes, you know how much I love them together.

1 Hmm, I'm thinking of various. The one from Quiet storm/ Sexylexicullen, The princess and the E/CLWN, then bad boy as in player, sideline collision/nolebucgrl and offside but I can't remember the author. and there are a couple I can't remember that were vampires. And yours?

2 Yeah, that and when she never thinks what Edward is feeling, She never puts herself in Edward's shoes to know how it feels.

Yeah, it's difficult to think of only one :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

I guess now we knew what happen at the lab,I think esme is getting to obsessive with the door bree was talking about.

1 Why did you think people make Renee a bad parent over Charlie?

2 What did you like about GOOD guy edward and bad edward?

If you want to email me I'm free at home I have a lot of time some idea that just came through my head.



Author's Response:

Hi! Yeah, Esme is acting crazy again.

1 I think we're more demanding to mothers than we are for fathers. We can't fathom a mother mistreating their child, but we are more used to see it on a father. Wrong, but I thinkthat's the way we think.

2 In general? Well, good Edward is always so cute and sweet, but I guess from time to time, we all love a charming bad boy Edward.

Which fanfic Edward is your favorite? Mine is 'The best I ever had' by WhatsMyNomdePlume.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Must be really funny if there cover in dirt.

1 What some of the things in each of the twilight saga you liked?

2 Should bella have noticed that spending time with jacob was hurting edward?

3 What do you think bella would feel like if she cut ties with Charlie?

 



Author's Response:

hi!

More like maybe something exploded ;)

1 Twilight/Midnight Sun made me fall in love with Edward.; New Moon despite everything, that's when we knew they were meant to be together forever, Eclipse, the chance to knew about the other's story and the chance to work together with the wolves, Breaking Dawn, The wedding, the posibility of having babies, oh and meeting so many kindsof vampires. This was an excellent question . What did you like?

2 She should had, but she was blinded by Jacob's tantrums and manipulations.

3 She would had felt bad, but maybe then -Charlie would had made the effort. That's my problem with him, he never made the effort, everybody had to  move to adjust tothe way he was.

What do you think iwould had happened if Bella had a backbone and she never let anyone push her around, like Alice, Jacob...

See ya.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was a very funny chapter,I hope edward ask bella to marry him soon.

1 Did you think Charlie and Jacob both emotionally blackmailed bella?

2 What did you think meant have happened if bella had stop seen jacob sooner ?

3 Did you hate how jacob got sympathy during the newborn fight?

Yes I got your email,but I was send a message back,but my mom mess up and deleted my message by mistake.

P.S. Happy Easter.



Author's Response:

Hi! I'm glad you liked it.

1 Yeah, they took advantage  of her lack of backbone.

2 I think then Charlie would be pressuring her more to see him. She needed to cut ties with both of them. Or to be clearer with Charlie

3 Kinda, I hated how she cried over him. He didn't deserved it.

Now I received oyur mails. Thanks. It's just I'm so good with my phone, my son gave it to me after I lost my phone :(

Happy easter to you too.

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I really appreciate it.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Seth looked breaking heart when he found out bella is no longer single.

1 Did you wish we could of heard more of edward pov?

2 Think jacob is a dumb ass for going after bella every time when all he got was a breaking heart every time?

3 What did you think Quil meant when he tell jacob he need to think about getting a life?

4 Should have been done about Jacob after he found out bella was pregnant with edward baby?

5 How do you think things would have want in New Moon if edward had never left?

I have my own email address if you want talk some more

Sailormoonatcj@Gmail.com

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Well, it wasn't like he asked Bella out... he needs to grow some confidence.

1 Yeah, my favorite book on the saga is Midnight Sun. It was what made me fall in love with him. What of Edward's actin made you like him more?

2 Yeah, but I think he never really loved her, he was just obssessed in getting her, like a prize.

3 He voiced the thoughts of lots of readers? ;) Well, his friends wanted him to move on, to grow up. Obviously Jacob never listened.

4 I think that part was kinda right. Edward felt so guilty... but honestly in that part Jacob did right, letting Bella think in Edward for once.

5 Yeah, but then We wouldn't have four books ;) Do you think he should had stayed?

I promise to write to you a mail.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm so ready to meet Carlisle.

I'm sorry about not review my two nephews are here with us this week.

Eclipse or Breaking Dawn

Why did I think she acted like that?Bella got it in her mind that she doesn't deserve to be happy that wrong but I think bella parents should have done something more with bella.

Hate these two because they think they have a say in bella live.

Their a long list but I'll name two,I hate how she always let jacob walk all over her and how she let him back in her life easily.

Like when edward and seth both bond when they destroy Victoria and Riley.

Sam is a better leader then jacob because he need to grow-up more.

Like edward to show more of his feeling and ask bella if she does really love him.

I would have love to seen edward pov on how he is feeling about fatherhood,I hate that jacob pov took that away.

1 Did think Charlie and Jacob have a bigger bond?

2 Angela could see how jacob look at bella,but why couldn't bella see that?

3 Did you think bella should have yell at Charlie for calling her immature?

4 Did you think jacob has a lot of grow-up to do?

5 Edward pov in breaking dawn was more need then jacob pov? 



Author's Response:

Hi! I hope your nephews' visit was awesome.

1 Yeah, he was the son Charlie always wanted.

2 Angela was very observant, and she really cared for Bella, so she gave always a honest opinion. Bella had so low self-steem that she never thought someone would like her

3 No, she would be proving his point. But she had other ways to prove her point.

4 Yeah, no arguing with that one.

5 Of course. I mean, the one who was present in all of Bella's changes was Edward, not Jacob. And i really don't like Jacob, so I think we all would had like it more in Edward's POV

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yeah we got hear bree voice,I hope esme find peace.

1 Did you find it worried that Sam change first,before jacob did?

2 Which two books do you think bella cause the most trouble in?

4 Would you have given edward bigger role in the eclipse book,if so what would you have done differently with him?

5 What we're some of the things you hate about breaking dawn?



Author's Response:

Esme was happy to hear it, let's see how long she stays like that ;)

1 No, because he was older. He was supposed to understand better.Do you think it would had been better if Jacob changd first?

2 Twilight, without a doubt. Maybe a bit in Eclipse. Her zombie state in New moon didn't bothered me as much as her parents reaction.

4 Yes. I would had made him be clear with Bella about how he felt whenshe was with Jacob. What would you have done?

5 Hmm, let me see... Jacob's POV. Sorry but to see things through his eyes, no no. Then there's the imprinting and Renesmee. Oh, and don't forget how she prepared us for a big fight and then nothing. Maybe a bit more of drama on the big confrontation... What would you had changed?

I hope you like the next chapter, when I re-read it I felt it dull, but it has some bits that will be important later.

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

Esme might when watch her back with Harry and Sue.

I read your new STORY it nice hearing something different.

1 Do you really think eclipse was not really a love triangle story,what did you think it was more about?

2 What did you think make the quileute tribe and the Cullen's family different from each other?

3 Did you think anyone could have made bella see that jacob was manipulating her the whole time?

4 What would you like to have seen done different to the twilight saga?

5 Did you think the eclipse book was more about jacob then edward?



Author's Response:

Hi again!

You are right! She might need a bodyguard ;)

Thanks, I hope you like the next chapter, this one is full of drama.

1 I think that book let us know the rest of the Cullens, and they really showed how they could work together. But that tent scene :(

2 The Quileuttes were pretty close minded, one would think that the Cullens being older would be the difficult ones but no. What do you think?

3 Hmm, maybe if Esme would had made her put in his shoes... really no one did it.

4 Renesmee and the imprint thing! what would have you made different?

5 Not Eclipse, but she really got madwith Edward and she give himless imortance in the books. What do you think?

May

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story...it's getting good.   I love the interaction of the characters together and separately.  Thanks for the updates.  Always ready to read another update!    



Author's Response:

Thanks to you for taking th time to read and leave a comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sue sure sound like a gold digger who love money more than her own daughter.

1 Who would I have kept as friends for bella and edward?Angela,Seth,and Ben.

2 What would I do with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,Lauren Mallory?Mike,Jessica,and Lauren would end up alone.Eric would grow-up sometime later in life,and Tyler did whatever he pleased with his life.

1 What are your thoughts on the elders?

2 Where you upset that bella tell the tribe about edward,Alice,and jasper power?

3 What did you think was going through edward head when bella asked jacob to kiss her?

4 Which Cullen family member would you have yell at bella for hurting edward feeling?

5 Are Charlie and Sue the worse parents ever?

6 What your thoughts on Rosalie,Emmett,and Esme?

7 What would you have done to fix bella and edward relationship?

8 Would have let bella yell at Charlie and Jacob after the force kiss?

9 Did think jacob tried to fight for bella because he don't want her to be a vampire?

10 Did you think Emily and Edward would have getting along too?

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

If get to go have fun.



Author's Response:

Hi! Yah, Sue it's a horrible woman.

1 I think they must had chang thir ways in order to survive. Too closed minded for my taste, but I'm glad they were forcd to accept Bella and the Cullens

2 A bit. It wasn't her secret to tell. What do you think?

3 I'm sure he flt lik dying. Poor Edward. That part and the tent scene made me want to slap Bella. Oh and the part when she cried a lot for saying goodbye to Jacob. I'm sure Edward should have parade Tanya around Bella to make things even.

4 Esme. It's the only one Bella would have listened. Which one would you pick?

5 Yes, without a doubt. What do you think?

6 I like Rosalie, she was honest, what you see is what you get. No on said she had to nbe kind. Emmet needed more lines on the books. I also like him. Esme is the one forgotten

7 Put Jacob away sooner.

8 Yes, and Rnee too

9 No, he just wantd her as a possssion

10 Yes

:)

May

PS Have you read Cullenary Coupling?



Author's Response:

Hi! Yah, Sue it's a horrible woman.

1 I think they must had chang thir ways in order to survive. Too closed minded for my taste, but I'm glad they were forcd to accept Bella and the Cullens

2 A bit. It wasn't her secret to tell. What do you think?

3 I'm sure he flt lik dying. Poor Edward. That part and the tent scene made me want to slap Bella. Oh and the part when she cried a lot for saying goodbye to Jacob. I'm sure Edward should have parade Tanya around Bella to make things even.

4 Esme. It's the only one Bella would have listened. Which one would you pick?

5 Yes, without a doubt. What do you think?

6 I like Rosalie, she was honest, what you see is what you get. No on said she had to nbe kind. Emmet needed more lines on the books. I also like him. Esme is the one forgotten

7 Put Jacob away sooner.

8 Yes, and Rnee too

9 No, he just wantd her as a possssion

10 Yes

:)

May

PS Have you read Cullenary Coupling?

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

WoW sound like Buffy parents are more interested in money then there dead child.Esme going have put up a fight with them.Edward really love bella very much.

1 Why do I think bella stayed?She couldn't leave the place she meet edward,I think if bella leave that edward would never come back.

2 What would I have changed about bella room?Maybe a bigger room with a queen size bed,nightstand,a lamp,a laptop computer,a desk,a closet,a new paint job,and her own bathroom.

3 What do I think?I would have the wedding somewhere else and never let Alice planned it ever.

4 Have I seen it?Yes I have!!

5 What did I think?Felt like the movie want to fast when watching in movie theatre,but at home it feels slow.

6 Did I recommend it?Yes I would.

7 As for Dakota Johnson and Jamie Dorman? She did the part really good,as for him I need to see more the last two movie sequel before I make up my mind.

1 Do you think bella should have talking to Emily about imprinting, so bella could have decided what to do about Jacob?

2 Who would you keep as bella and edward as friends?

3 What would you have done with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,Lauren Mallory?

4 Did you think bella had to learn the hard way to all of her decision?

5 What did you think it is about bella and edward bond that couldn't be broken?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

When I was watching fifty shades of grey my dad said have fun you sinner.



Author's Response:

Buffy's parent are awful! Let me tell you that I named Buffy's mother after you gave me your opinion on Sue Clearwater ;) You were absolutely rigt and made me change my opinion on her.

I'm planning on watching the movie with a friend... if we could get early of work this wednesday ;)

1 Yeah, Emily had a better view but Bella diidn't seize the chance to talk to her.

2 Angela... and maybe with Eric. I think he wasn't a bad guy, just misunderstood. Who would you keep as a friend?

3 To Mike and Jessica, I would sent them postcards with greetings... and a reminder that Bella and Edward were absolutely happy ;) Eric wasn't a bad guy in my opinion, just got with the wrong crowd.  Lauren deserved something really bad, she was the worst in my opinion; maybe to have her hair burnt by accident or something truly embarrasing. What would you do with them?

4 No, but I don't think she really got the lesson right. Sometimes I wanted to slap some sense to her :)

5 Everything. The problem was that neither knew a thing about communication, if they relied their thoughts and doubts to the other... ok we wouldn't have four books, but still.

At least your fther took it with humour. My son find hilarious that I love twilight and fanfiction, but he never think of funny jokes.

Hope you liked this new chapter :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Edward is very worried for bella,esme must knew that bree is there.It going to be interesting to see what bree has to say to her mother.

Happy birthday!!!

1 Why do you think bella stay in forks after edward left?

2 If you had designed bella bedroom or Charlie house what would you did to it?

3 Did you think bella should have thought more of the situation she was in?

4 Should bella have left Charlie out of her life after her wedding?

5 Did you think Emily would understand bella and edward relationship and what think she would see?

P.S. have you seen fifty shades of grey yet or if you don't like it that ok too.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Well, Bree won't speak for a chapter or two. Soon you'll see.

1 I think she stayed because deep inside she knew he or one of the Cullens would come back one day. Why do you think she stayed?

2 I don't know, but if she always loved to read, maybe a little armoire with children books. And maybe a few of her favorite dolls. What would you have changed?

3 Of course, but it was like she just went with the flow.

4 No, but she made her life around Forks. In my opinion a very bad desicion. What do you think?

5 I always thought she was the only one who understood, being the only one who suffered the consequences of choosing  someone not human.

I haven't seen the film, but I read Masters Of The Universe not long ago. I discovered Twilight in 2010, after Eclipse film went out. Yeah I know, very late. I tried to read the most famous fics, but there's too many I haven't read. MOTU I read out of curiosity, because all the debate. I don't think it's  the best one, but it isn't that bad. I think I'll wait for the movie to come out on DVD, because we kinda go as a family and my mother and my son really dislike the story. Lately I didn't have so much time to go to the movies alone, so I'm waiting for Insurgent. About what I saw about the movie, I like what I heard on the soundtrack, and I think Dakota Johnson did a wonderful work. I don't know about Jamie Dorman. I think he looked better on a series called The Falling. In 50 shades, he doesn't look so handsome or have the air of a CEO. But I want to watch it. Have you seen it? What do you think? Do you recomend it?

Thanks for your good wishes, I spend a really good time.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

At less Carmen had talk with Esme about the way had been acting.Grief can did lot of thing to you,sometime even the worse way.I hope bella and edward get have a baby,but I'll have to wait and see.

James he love to haunt human,vampires,and animals just for fun.I will say he give me the creep,he just sound really scary.

Victoria she might have love James;but he don't love her.She was very good at keeping everyone guessing about the newborn in the book,at least bella figure it out.Thanks to jasper about the newborn army.

Laurent he was more of followed then a think for myself person.

Carmen she love her mate,Tanya,Kate,and Irina,and the Cullen's family too.

Eleazar he live with the volturi,so he knew everyone power's,but he loyalists laid with Carlisle and his family.

1 Who did you think would have been a better alpha for the quileute tribe?

2 What did you think of Tia and Benjamin?

What did you think about My Sweet Angel by Kiseger?

What did you hate about it?

I really like how she had bella think about the situation she was in really in,then having bella keep run back to jacob.

Retribution by Ivtwilight09

That was a good horror story for Halloween.What did you think was going through everyone head when they saw a different edward and bella?

 



Author's Response:

Hi! It took me a bit to asnwer you because I re-read My sweet angel.  I loved the way she made it clear the wolves could be the monsters but I hated that Bella was so forgiving to Jacob 'til the end.

I read Retribution long time ago, I remember liking it a lot, but I kinda like dark stories.

1 I liked Sam as alpha. Any of the others in the pack would be worst, and Seth, the only nice one, wouldn't get the respect of the others.

2 I really liked Benjamin. He had the coolest power but he still chose to help, maybe because he knew the Volturi would eventually come for him.

I love a story called 'Home' by Clarabella75. Have you read it?

See ya.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

I have a bad feeling about Esme,I she going to did what it took to see bree one more time.

1 How did you feel about James,Victoria,and Laurent?

2 Why do you think Seth was the only one,who saw good in the Cullen's,plus he was only wolf who understood bella and edward relationship?

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi! I can't tell you what will happen with Esme ;) But she will behave better... for a while.

1 I liked them, well the part they took in the story. The 'weird' vampires were the Cullens, so it was expected to find others who acted more like a vampire.

2 Because Seth was very aware of the complications the whole shapeshifting had. He had Leah's story and he had a kind heart.

What do you think about James, Laurent and Victoria? And about Carmen and Eleazar?

See ya

May

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

If Alice call edward to warning him it can't be good.

Do I think you need to wait another five chapter post your other STORY? I'm sure you'll decide what best.

What do I think would be the better end for jacob?I think he should have stayed away from bella.I knew bella hurt jacob,but he also made his own choice so he will have live with the pain of his actions.

What would I have done with jacob?I guess I could see jacob betrayal everyone,some other things there is lot anyone could did with him.

1 Why did you think Charlie and Renee married don't workout?

2 Who are some of the characters you would have wanted to see more of?

3 What some of the things hated about Charlie house and bella bedroom?

4 What are some of the things you like and hated about the Cullen's family?

5 If you could change anything about the wedding what would it be?

6 Why did you think jacob couldn't imprint on bella?

7 Who do you think would have made a better soulmate for bella and edward daughter?

8 If bella and edward had a son what would you have name him?

9 Did you think jacob shouldn't have telled bella about Sam,Emily and Leah STORY?

10 Which female characters would you have chosen to yell at Charlie,Billy,and Jacob?

Have you read my sweet angel by kiseger,retribution by Ivtwilight 09,and the stench wars by BookishQua?

If so what did you like and hated about each of the stories?

I have read two stories  by 2Brown-eyes on fanfiction.net, if you haven't read yet Written in the stars and Will things change?

While can't wait for the last chapter and for your new STORY.



Author's Response:

Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer, my computer crashed and it was difficult to get time at work to answer. Now I'm on my mother's old computer :)

1 I think both let the marriage die. Charlie didn't made the effort and I think Renee got bored. But I'm glad she took Bella with her, it gave Bella a different perspective on life.

2 Esme. She had so much to say being with Edward and Carlisle almost from the beginning but somehow she never got the chance. And maybe Eleazar and Carmen, he left the Volturi after all and met her. It must be interesting.

3 The fact that he never changed it a bit. He was supposed to be happy to welcome her, but he only cleaned and bought her sheets and a duvet. :(

4 I hated the way everybody was on everybody's business. I liked the  way they were so united, but I was a bit too much for me.

5 When Jacob came into the wedding. I felt so bad for Edward.And maybe I would have do something more with Mike and Jessica

6 Because she wasn't his soulmate. It was only in his mind.

7 A new character. If imprinting was made to guarantee to pass the wolf genes to the next generation, what was the point to make him imprint in Renesmee?

8 Any name non related to their fathers. Maybe Matthew, Ethan or Jason.

9 I thinkit was one of the few things he did right.

10 Esme and Renee.

I read The stench wars. I like BookishQua style. The toher twoa re going to my list :) I'm not sosure about the ones of 2Browneyes, because I read some of her stories.

I decided to begin to post the next story when this one reaches chapter 10. It gives me time to get more detailed the other  one.

Thanks hun.

May

 

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Look like esme going to meet bella soon.

Love edward as both good and bad,I mean you get see different side of edward you don't get to see in the books,plus it fun to read about edward being different.

My favorite stories are darkest desire by britchick69,beautiful savage by vampiremama,Irrevocable by miss king at your service,and Reluctant Devotion by JESSANDTAT.

1 Did you think Sam,Emily and Leah love triangle was a warning to bella,when jacob telled her what about them,think that should have been a clue?

2 What some of the things you wouldn't forgive jacob for?

3 Did you think bella regret asking jacob to kiss her on top of the mountain?

4 Should bella have telled jacob about her engagement to edward sooner then later?

5 Think Billy knew that a future between jacob and bella wasn't going to happen and what think was going through his mind?

Your doing a great job!!!



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, they will meet soon, but first Edward has to take her to a beach ;)

From your favorites, I think I read Irrevocable and the JESSANDTAT ones. Seems like I have new fics to read, thanks :) Mine from this site are 'Femme Docs and Kevlar knights by A cullen wannabe and A hard's day night by Sexilexicullen, but I have a gigantic list of pulled fics that I love :)

1 I never thought about it, but you're absolutely right. I guess I was as blind as Jacob on this one :(

2 For existing ;) LOL Not really. I think the way he ignored and dismissed Bella's love to Edward and her friendship to the Cullens. He only saw her as a possesion.

3 Probably not. I think she never realized how manipulative he really was with her. I think she always had a bit of patience for him when he didn't deserved it.

4 Sooner. But the way it played... I loved it. Though then it gave him the chance for the kiss. I'm finding that I can't stand Jacob's character.

5 He knew, but he was so obssessed with keeping Bella away from the Cullens that it never mattered for him.

Now my question for you. What do you think would be the better end for Jacob? (As in if you wrote Twilight, what would you have done with him?

BTW, do you think I should wait another five chapters to post the other story? I'm going to loose the idea and that's why I really want to write that story .

Thanks, it's always so nice to talk with you

May

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

So sad esme lose her daughter.Edward and Bella relationship seem be moving a long nicely,but I think Alice knew bella will be in great danger.

1 What did I think?Think the relationship work both ways there wasn't much communication and them not showing there true feelings for each other that one area think bella and edward need the most help.Plus think this two need help or at least a step in the right direction,don't think bella running off to go see jacob helped out any either.I understand that jacob was there for her;but if someone says their a friend then be a friend,not a jealous boyfriend.

2 Did I believe jacob would have getting over bella easily?Believe once he imprinted,that yes thing between him and bella would be over with in a heartbeat.But jacob should have known better himself;he tell bella all about imprinting between Sam and Emily in the first place,should have been his first clue to just forget about bella and move on with his life.

3 Think esme would have made a good mom,even if she an adopt mother to all the Cullen's children.

1 Why did you think bella wanted edward children more then anyone else?

2 What would you have name the baby?

3 Did you think it was none of jacob businesses,why bella and edward came back from there honeymoon?



Author's Response:

Hi!

yEah, it's sad,but it had to happen.

1 I think deep inside she wanted children, but she was too worried about what everybody would think. Edward's baby gave her the chance, and it also was almost a miracle.

2 I liked more Carlie (the union of Charlie and Carlisle), maybe Elizabeth like Edward's mom.

3 Certainly it wasn't his business, but he even made an scene at the wedding. I really dislike Jacob.

I wanted to ask, what do you think about Rosalie? i think it's another misunderstood character.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bella sure love to help people to find closer.Esme,I have a bad feeling that something has happen to her daughter.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Happy Valentine Day!!!

Did you think bella and edward would had a stronger bond,if they communicate more?

Did you think jacob would have getting over bella so easily?

Who did you think make a way better father edward or Charlie?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Esme story is sad.

I think the bond was there, but they were so bad at trying to convey their feelings to each other that they complicated everything. What do you think?

Yes, because he was only infatuated with her. The moment he 'imprinted' or met another girl, he would had fogotten about her. And you?

Edward was the better father, you know my opinion on Charlie. Now if we talk about mothers... Bella isn't my number one ;) I think Esme and Rosalie were better taking care of Renesmee. What do you think?

See you soon (maybe tomorrow)

May

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

GOOD start can't wait to see the next chapter.

Glad see you start a new STORY!

Did you think it was a bad decision to make a treaty with the quileute tribe,when wolves were too prejudiced and trying to find an excuse to broke it?

What did you hate about imprint part?

Feel bad that Emily will have live with scars on her face,sure she put on a brave face for Sam,must hurt have people looking at her face.IT too bad that sue and the elders don't take her to a hospital.



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Yeah, I was ready since yesterday, but got home late and cranky, so decided to wait for today.

I think the treaty was a good idea, but the Quileuttes that made the treaty were more 'open minded' that the ones in the present. 

The imprint part is...so sad. I mean, look at poor Leah. She had a life until Sam imprinted on Emily, and she had to stay and see them happy. 

Oh yeah, Emily's scars are proof that wolves weren't so perfect as they like to think. Sam must had lived with so much regret.

Thanks for writing to me.  Now I want to ask you, what do you think about the Volturi? Is it possible to find redemption for them? 

i think Marcus is the one who gets the respect, the others gain the fear. What do you think?

May

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