Date: 05 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
God, this is so beautiful, why have I not found this gem before?! So moving and insightful, I'm just in awe! I've always been a reader, learning to read from a newspaper at the kitchen table while my older siblings did their homework. They made fun of me, telling me I couldn't learn that way. I proved them wrong. I've been obsessed with the written word ever since. Thank you for sharing your work.
Date: 05 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
God, this is so beautiful, why have I not found this gem before?! So moving and insightful, I'm just in awe! I've always been a reader, learning to read from a newspaper at the kitchen table while my older siblings did their homework. They made fun of me, telling me I couldn't learn that way. I proved them wrong. I've been obsessed with the written word ever since. Thank you for sharing your work.
Date: 05 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
God, this is so beautiful, why have I not found this gem before?! So moving and insightful, I'm just in awe! I've always been a reader, learning to read from a newspaper at the kitchen table while my older siblings did their homework. They made fun of me, telling me I couldn't learn that way. I proved them wrong. I've been obsessed with the written word ever since. Thank you for sharing your work.
Date: 05 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
God, this is so beautiful, why have I not found this gem before?! So moving and insightful, I'm just in awe! I've always been a reader, learning to read from a newspaper at the kitchen table while my older siblings did their homework. They made fun of me, telling me I couldn't learn that way. I proved them wrong. I've been obsessed with the written word ever since. Thank you for sharing your work.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
That's one of the most beautiful--and beautifully written--stories I've read in all my 53 years. Thank you.
Date: 01 May 2015 12:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
a wonderful journey
Date: 01 May 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Devil in Disguise
:(
Date: 01 May 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Boom Clap
sad
Date: 01 May 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Come Hither
oh no
Date: 01 May 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Because You're Mine
this deserves more reviews
Date: 01 May 2015 11:56 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Just Smut
wow again
Date: 01 May 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: En Pointe
wow
Date: 01 May 2015 11:51 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: All the Pretty Faces
all aboard
Date: 01 May 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Steampunk
ok
Date: 01 May 2015 11:29 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: Where Sparrows Fall
awwww
Date: 01 May 2015 11:25 AM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Aforementioned Loves
sweet
Date: 01 May 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter Ten: Golightly, Moon River, Golightly
yay
Date: 01 May 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter Nine: Breathe Deep, Don't Choke
apologize first
Date: 01 May 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter Eight: When the Stars Aligned
brat
Date: 01 May 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter Seven: Both Ends of the Candle
she should be mad at herself not them
Date: 01 May 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter Three: Falling Apart and Together
very good
Date: 01 May 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter Two: Fucking Stories and Stuff
we know who
Date: 01 May 2015 10:17 AM Title: Prologue
interesting start
Date: 13 Apr 2015 12:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Follow Me Down - Evolved
Holy cow! That was beautiful! Amazing.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter Seven: Both Ends of the Candle
Snap
Date: 25 Jan 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Five: The In-between
So that's how we meet Jacob nice
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Three: Falling Apart and Together
Like how we got to meet Edward just wish you wrote more of there interaction at the gala and back at his place
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter Two: Fucking Stories and Stuff
Oh, this will be good. Nice start!!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Two: Fucking Stories and Stuff
😍
Date: 22 Jan 2015 12:40 PM Title: Prologue
Good writing. Feeling a bit down now, though....
Date: 22 Jan 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter One: Memory-shaped Cumulonimbi
Can't wait to see how Edward and Jacob will fit into the story
Date: 22 Jan 2015 10:56 AM Title: Prologue
Love it, can't wait to read more
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:55 AM Title: Prologue
I'm In....can not wait to read