Date: 07 May 2022 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
More please
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
great story love it hope you update soon
Date: 26 Feb 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
Ok. I was really getting into your story Wisdom,Justice and Love.You really are one hell
of a writer.I have been working my way through all your stories,you have a way of getting the readers attention and sucking them right in. I seriously wish you would get inspired and add more chapters to some of these stories of yours.Good luck..I will keep checking back to look for any new up dates..
Sincerely,l.jacox
Date: 27 Oct 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
ok, he does have a lot of work to do, and she needs to really talk to him...and please update soon.
Date: 27 Oct 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 When you Told That Lie
twisty turny, and bad ass Bella, love it
Date: 27 Oct 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Beating of a storm
another stellar chapter.....I adore the way you have re worked the story....
Date: 27 Oct 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3 Past the Black
oh what a clever web you are weaving....
Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 I’m Not A Born Leader
strong strong bella, perfect.
Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Weight of the World
oh my, oh my, I adore this......
Date: 29 Feb 2016 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
Awesome story. Cant wait til you update. You will update won't you.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
how is it that this story is supposedly finished here?
this appears to be just the beginning...
with several loose ends..
hope there are more updates, although it states this story is
finished.
Author's Response:
No this story is not complete. However, the Wisdom portion of it is. This has three sections, Wisdom, Justice and Love. I wrote Wisdom, and the person who updates for me probably didn't understand that part. And this story revolves around Points of Authority, so it is a must read for this story. Hope that helps, adn I corrected it from saying Completed.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Past the Black
Looks like Bella won't be a virgin for very much longer.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
Well that was a waste of my time.
Date: 09 May 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
Update soon!!
Date: 03 Feb 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Breath to Build a Glow
Glad Peter and Char are there to help them see through the words and B's actions
Date: 15 Jan 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 When you Told That Lie
lol for the boys all being in the doghouse. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 When you Told That Lie
So happy to read this new chapter to one of my new favorite stories. I was so glad you extended the O/S POA. Love how you're writing the brothers and Whitlocks. Anxiously await further chapters!!!
PS I also look forward to new chapters for What If and When I Pretend :) You rock!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Beating of a storm
Ok, so...your kings are so freaking hot...whereas the movie guys were... like, old, pre-pubescent and creepy. So thank you, thank you, thank you.
Loving your story!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Beating of a storm
Oh, yes! I am really enjoying this additional story to "Points of Authority", and can't wait to see what will happen when the Cullen's get involved again! Are you going to do any kind of POV about what is happening with them at this time in the storyline? Or will that be a part of the other two parts of this delightful story? I'd really LOVE to see what Jasper has been going through, and what that miserable excuse for a vampire Edward and his malicious little 'sister' Alice have been plotting-and I KKKNOW that they have been plotting, against Bella's life, and against Jasper, simply because neither one of them can STAND the idea of not having their own way about everything, and running everyone's life! I'll be watching for the next chapter, and for any updates on the other two Twilight stories of yours that I.m waiting for-"What If", and "When I Pretend", as they look like they will be great ones as well! Thank you, Lady Skyelite.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Past the Black
love the ch can't wait to read more keep up the great job
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 Past the Black
hmmm I like you morphing Caius with a little of Eric. Poor B. Hope she gets her shot soon.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 I’m Not A Born Leader
Thank goodness P&C showed up!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 Weight of the World
Sigh Silly girl going alone to town.